Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 50

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Devi

I don't think it can be Rishab if he is like the actual show as he is not clever enough to do all this and it doesn't make sense. But i have no clue who it is 😆

well now Vidya knows her name and they have plenty of time to talk
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehe...itslike watching a movie...
good work
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Posted: 14 years ago
as someone said, it really is like watching a movie ...

comeon devi, you connected dots very well regarding salome - but why all this torture ? am totally in the dark...

show us some light 😃

but lovely update, all of them 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
please add me to ur PM list, i love how you write. and i have loved all the updates, please update more. and i just wanted to say great choice of picking gurav, this dude is so HOT, AND HE FITS THE CHaracter better then the orginal
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aha Vidya girl.. there u go...! Lovely update...!! 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
i suddenly think salome is behind all this... the part where gaurav thinks he had heard some line spoken by CUP before, but coudn't put his finger on it ..i think salome had written it in one of her SMSs to him
n shes purposely pushing him to check his resistance.. the reason from where all this started, she actually wants to see if gaurav is still faithful to her
but i dont know what can she have against SSP...ooh he maybe one her customers she can't say no to
no, wait ...now that i've written my mind, i see too many loopholes ..i don't think its her 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow wow...damn its 3:30 am n i just finished reading fully...one hell of FF...gone is my office...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 40: Moving Walls – Part 2

"Her name is Salome… yes. So, you know about your husband's old lover then? But do you know what she does for a living, my lovely Andromeda?" the voice asked, just as the picture of the painting hanging up in Gaurav's parlor surfaced clearly in her memory.

She heard her husband growl and look up, pulling at the shackles that bound him with force.

"Perseus…. Tsk, tsk, tsk… You have not been forthcoming with your wife, have you now?" There was a laugh that came through at the end and Gaurav tugged even harder on the steel around his wrists.

"She is a jezebel…a prostitute… a wh**e. A woman who sleeps with men for money. The oldest profession in the world. Your village is not so remote that you don't know of such women?"

Gaurav's entire body was now violently struggling against its restraints.

"You have to admire your husband for it, don't you think, my little virgin? Not many men go and willingly fall in love with a woman who most citizens of polite society would consider essentially untouchable, except of course those who pay her good money to enjoy her pleasures." There was a derisive laugh at the end of this statement.

Her husband howled with rage now and she could see trails of blood starting to run down his forearms and feet as the metal cut into his skin with the force of his struggle.

"Stop. Don't say anymore. Please…" She called out to the voice, unable to watch him hurt himself this way.

She was surprised when the voice ceded to her request, saying no more to incense her husband; it took still more time for Gaurav to finally quiet down and drop his head back against the wall.

"You were lying before. You do know my husband. You know him well." She said finally, looking up, knowing that the voice was still listening.

"Yes."

She looked at Gaurav to see his reaction, but his eyes were closed and he gave no indication that he had heard the response.

When she waited and heard no more from the voice, she got to the heart of the matter. "Why have you brought us here?"

This time, no answer came… She waited several minutes and just when she was about to repeat her question, Gaurav opened his eyes.

And then she did not have to repeat, because the answer came readily.

"Your husband is my bait. He is going to draw his father out for me. SSP Brahmanand Jhakar's favorite son, shackled to a wall in steel in an underground cave. It sounds like a B-grade Bollywood plot, doesn't it? J'adore! The part where he is forced to watch his beautiful and wet wife for eight hours continuously is solely to titillate me. I want to see how long he will resist you. There is a little timer that will start on both of your walls in about… thirteen minutes. Your wall will start moving again, Andromeda, but I won't scare you anymore. It will move so slowly that you will hardly feel it. And before you know it, say in about five hours, you would be at hand's reach of each of other. But of course, you won't be able to touch; the shackles are sort of a bummer that way… but it heightens the anticipation, you will see…" there was a brief laugh again at something that only the voice found humorous while she merely waited for it to continue.

"But not to fret… in two more hours after that, you would be able to touch… the walls will be so close to each other that your bodies will have to be in direct contact, everywhere…"

The voice stopped there and did not continue… and so she asked, even though she already knew the answer.

"It is going to crush us to death, isn't it?"

"Yes, that it will… this is not just about titillation after all. My reputation is not what it is for nothing, you know. Business is business. But, don't worry… You won't die for at least another eight hours… Unless…." The voice paused dramatically now.

She looked at Gaurav and saw that he was no longer pretending disinterest; he was fully alert, holding her gaze and listening intently.

"Unless your father gets here in time to rescue you both, of course."

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Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Where do you come up with this?! So we've ruled out SSP. Who could this CUP be? Hmmm. Can you give us just a wee bit of a hint? Is it someone that has been referenced before or a totally new character?

You're killing me. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Goosebumps!!!😲
How can the villain say "J'adore" ! I always say that..now every time I use it I'm gonna think of him... :(
When he said "SSP Brahmanand Jhakar's favorite son.." was that sarcasm.. because how can Gaurav be his father's favourite son? 😕


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