Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#501

Whoever named you Devi forgot a letter on the end. lol just kidding. ugh!!! who is this mysterious CUP? Crushing them to death?! there's a new one. Poor Gaurav...and Vidya. What is going on? I'm so greedy to be wanting another update all ready.. (sigh) i guess i'll have to wait

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#502

OH god... hours again eh? last time you put us through 'hours' (Shiv and Gauri) it was amazingly unbearable! this time i feel it will be even more crazy!!!

I am slightly scared yet slightly excited... but as much as i am can hope for this to be a good thing for them... it wont be? i feel like after all is said and done Vidya will change.

i am nervous! Update SOON PLEASE!

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#503

OMG... Wow.. Devi you write too good.. 👏

So the person is behind SSP.. I still don't understand what is the point of torturing Gaurav and Vidya in order for Gaurav to feel attracted to Vidya.. Is it bcos CUP knows that SSP wants Vidya and wants Gaurav to have Vidya fully before SSP can make an attempt to touch her?? Ok.. I am going mad thinking abt all this.. eagerly waiting for an update.. :)

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Khushi

@blueangel1308

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

Wow the question, "who is it?" keeps on running around in my head. Kitty, is it Salome's mom by any chance? I think she was mentioned as a narcissistic person.

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

Hello
A lot seems to have happened while I was away.

I've 30 pages to catch up but I couldn't resist cheating so read last 2 parts.

How do u come up wid such torture methods? Looks like GV r going to have a very hot death though they r not going to actually die.

Update soon
P.S. Thanks for sending pms even though I wasn't commenting.

Edited by wilddevil2010 - 14 years ago

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mou107

@mou107

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

Dear Devi, you are killing me here. I have a final exam tomorrow but I couldn't stop myself from checking if you updated or not and you did…YAY..😛... Now that I delighted myself with your precious 'update', I cannot think about anything but "what going to happen next." I wish, I would hack into your brain and know who is this mysterious CUP.😉

Awesome update dear👏… counting hours...😍

P.S. I'm coming out of my shell...😳

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BheegiBasanti

@BheegiBasanti

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#507

Who is CUP...🤓...hmmm...Deviii...😳 😆!

Edited by darlunia - 14 years ago

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Black_beauty

@Black_beauty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#508

How do you manage to come up with such amazing stuff??
This is one torture method I have never heard of before..
Who is CUP??
Could it be Trojan?

Edited by Black_beauty - 14 years ago

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Binge

@Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

#509

So Salome is a prostitue and that could be the reason why Gaurav's family didn't let him marry her.

Nice update, Devi! Looking forward to the next part! 😊

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#510

OK ... Sri ... I read 2 parts together ...

and ...

Now I think I have an explanation as to why only a few readers comment after your updates !!!!!

... it's becos ... like me ...

your readers are rendered SPEECHLESS ...

Your writing is so damn brilliant ... ( forgive the language )... that I just dont know what to say .!!!!

So ... am going to content myself by saying ...

you have me by the scruff of my neck now ... there's no escape ... all I can do is wait for another master-piece of an update, hoping it'll put me out of my agony !!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Take a bow, lady ... ! You deserve all this and more !!!