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Binal Damania

@binudamania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

loved all ur os...
sply
beyond reach and alternatives they were heart touchin
beyond reach was wonderful...it said every thing it happnd wid me also
and the sayank os was jus wonderful...
thanx for sharin...
luv u..😉

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

I just read Slipped Away today...and honestly i dont have comments...you made me cry Angel...it was sooo heart touching...

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

hello sweets!! back with a MN OS!! 😳
I wrote this some time ago, but never got a chance to post. i always longed for such scenes for MN, but our CVs were interested in comedy!!, but anyways .. hope u all enjoy. 😳

MayUr OS
Mr & Mrs Sharma

Dressed in her pink PJs, nupur returned from her nightly shower and stood in front of the mirror, drying her hair. She could see the reflection of her husband in the mirror, who was so deeply engrossed in a thick book. Sighing, she got back to dry her hair. Once she was done with her moisturizers and creams, she went to the bed and quietly slipped in the covers.

She so wanted him to lift his eyes from the book and see her, but this was just not happening. She was feeling low suddenly and was not able to understand the reason even. All she wanted was to curl up near mayank and enjoy his caress in her hair. This wasn't an impossible demand, but again she was feeling odd to ask him to leave all his work and cater her tantrums.

She realized how hard life had been recently for him. This sudden marriage, then work and academics side by side was a strenuous job. She couldn't help but take care of the fact that she may not convert herself a burden on him. Not that she doubted his love, but these fears were unintentionally surfacing withing her.

Ignoring the hard impulse to snatch the book, and place her head in his lap, she tightly hugged the pillow and closed her eyes.

Mayank finally finished his revisions and closed his book. As he glanced on his side, he saw nupur with a scared kitten look, lying hugging the pillow, all cuddled up to herself. His heart contracted with affection and he moved close and blew air on her forehead.

Nupur on sensing this act from mayank, opened her eyes and seeing mayank so close, her eyes brimmed with tears

"kia hua nupur?", he caressed her hair and she increased her grip over the pillow and closed her eyes to allow the stream of tears to flow.

"kia baat hai nupur?", he asked again and nupur opened her eyes , 'pata nahi mayank, i just want to hug you and stay close to you", she helplessly stated her point and mayank's heart melted at her innocence.

"tu is main kia problem hai?', he kissed her forehead and slowly took the pillow from her grip and placed his arms around her. Feeling the warm protective shield around her, she closed her eyes again.

"how are you now?', mayank asked after a while, as nupur was quietly lying in his arms and he was ruffling her hair.

"how can Mrs Sharma be in Mr Sharma's arms?', she said plainly and mayank giggled and pulled her close, "ik dum perfect", he said and entwined his fingers in hers'.

"nupur"

"hmmm"

"you are done with your term papers?", he asked in a concerned tone and nupur opened her eyes , "yes, but i am nervous, i don't think they are up to the mark"

"you used the books i gave you?'

"not all of them, only the modern study and in depth analysis." she said slowly , fearing his scolding but he smiled, "koi baat nahi, you bring your term papers, i'll give them a reading", he said, lovingly ruffling her hair.

'abhi nahi mayank please",s he closed her eyes again, cuddling more close to him.

"try to understand nupur, we have submission day after tomorrow, you can make amendments if needed, come on be a good girl and bring your work", he lifted her chin and she pouted, "but i don't want to leave your arms",s he said as her eyes became wide with imploring and mayank leaned on to kiss her.

She was surprised by this sudden kiss, but returned back the passion. They broke from the seal and mayank removed strands of hair from her face, "neither do i want you to leave my arms, but this is important Mrs Shrama", he said and kissed her cheek which was flushing with red color and she glared at him, "sadu!", she hit him on hi chest and blushing she got of from the bed to bring her files, as mayank smiled and sighed at her beauty, innocence and love.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

res! omg wow..i hope m able to unres!

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omg this was just perfect!! ur just d best angel...simply d best...!! such a cute n simple yet lovely os!! loved it! as always! i love MN!!❤️

keep writin n pming! thnxies!!🤗

tc!❤️

n love ya!🤗

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Oh dear ... Di, was just too cute and filled with innocence ... I really loved the "scared-kitten" expression ... And the conversation was too cute and so much filled with love ... This was a really good OS ... The understanding that you showed between the two of them was the highlight ...

Great job Di,

God bless you,

Jaee D. Rathore🤗

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

awww... dat was so cute😳

Mrs. Sharma looks just perfect in Mr. Sharma's arms😳😳

Thnx for de pm Kinzu😳🤗

~jiya~

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

first thing's first!!

are u sure kinzu u didnt write it recently? ;)

as for the os...it was yet another of ur beautiful creations which left me wondering whether i am actually watching MJHT!!!!!!!!! :)

love u bestie!!!!!!!!!

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

oh ho!!!!
mr & mrs sharma ful on ha...
kp writin...
vry cute 1...

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

thanks for the os kinza..its cute one
missing mr&mrs sharma badly ...imagining them through your os
thanks for the pm

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Dear Kinza,

I dun remember reading much from you, but I knew you write as well. I happened to receive your PM and popped up instantly, good, I read. This was more like a chunk of an OS rather than one itself, definitely a scene I would have liked to watch in the show as well. Well, your writing is finely crisp and amusing, your use of Hindi dialogue made this project itself like some real MN thing and well, you did write well otherwise also.

Thanks for the PM.

Kankshita