ANOTHER CHANCE TO HAPPINESS:UPD P12-Pg 61 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
loved the update...
so maan finally saw his angel...
waiting for the long updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
lovely update dear
Hi guys i know this is a bit short and having updated after such a long time, you all must have expected a long update but i can only do this bit at the moment. i promise to update two more parts this weekend and this time much longer.


Hope you like the update and don't forget to press the like button and to leave some lovely comments

its ok ppl are busy at times
and take ur time we'll wait πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maan looking 4 geet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
nice update.. very cute.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Part 3

Cradling a glass of whisky in his hands, Maan was in his study staring into space thinking about the day events. He was still intoxicated in the beauty of Geet. "Geet, what a beautiful name"' he thought. At least now he knows the name of the girl who has had him completely besotted. The icing on the cake was that she was Rishab uncle's daughter. Maan could not believe that he has actually found a fairy, like the one that his grandmother always wanted to bring into his life. He always thought that fairies looked best in story books but now he wanted that fairy in his life to turn around his life into a fairy tail.

"Love at first sight," he actually laughed at his own thought. If ever his staffs and business colleagues ever heard of Maan Singh Khurana falling in love, they would have a heart attack and maybe the Sanjeevani hospital of Delhi would not be able to hold so many emergencies. "The arrogant, short tempered, tough looking Maan Singh Khurana falling in love"- quite a sensational news for the press. He can imagine that papers selling like hot cake.

"I need to talk to Rishab uncle as soon as possible. I don't want to miss the best thing that has happen in my life since the death of Dadima," Maan said to himself. "I still can't believe that I'm in love" chuckled Maan. "Let me phone Rishab uncle right now". Maan was in the process of calling Rishab when his eyes fell on the clock, it was 2 o'clock in the morning. "Maan you are getting crazy man, I heard that love makes people do crazy things and you are confirming that theory. See you have been talking to yourself ever since you came home from the party. Thank god, Geet is Rishab uncle's daughter or else you would have been looking for her in every hook and nook like a Devdas" Maan said aloud.

He climbed up the stairs, leaving the study and entered his room, tossing himself onto the bed. He clutched his pillow tight and went to sleep with a huge smile onto his face.




Edited by manisha03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Part 4

Maan woke up to the first rays of the sun streaming from his window. He groaned and hid his face further into the pillow as he was having a wonderful dream concerning Geet. As much as he wanted he could not sleep any further as the dream was already broken. He stifled a yawn and sat on the bed. He them stretched his hand to grab the watch kept on the bedside table. He was astonished to see the time as it was already past eight. Normally he would wake up at 5 everyday in the morning for his exercises but then today was an exception for everything in his life. He had never been so happy. As soon as he remembered Geet, he dashed to the bathroom to take his shower.

He quickly took one and got himself ready in bare minutes to go and visit the Malhotra's. He was combing his hair and stood admiring himself in the mirror for a few minutes. "I am not so bad myself, in fact there are thousands of girls who would die to be Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. So my dear Geet you should consider yourself very lucky that I have selected you for that tile" he said arrogantly to his image in the mirror.

He rushed the down the stairs and halted in his steps when he heard his servant calling him. "Sir, your breakfast". "I'm not hungry john, I'll have something later", Maan responded to his query before going out of the house to the garage where his fleet of cars were kept. He selected his favourite red sports car and climbed in. he put the gear in the car and exited the gates of Khurana mansion to go towards the Malhotra bungalow. He had already called Rishab to tell him that he was coming round his house to talk about something important.


Maan was driving in full speed to reach at the Malhotra's as he was really excited and wish that today turn out to be the best day in his life. He could only hope that Rishab and his family have no objection to this alliance. He entered the driveway of the Malhotra's and stopped the car at the entrance. He climbed and as soon as he entered he was greeted by a smiling but overtired Rishab.

Rishab: Hi beta, how are you?

Maan: Fine uncle

Rishab: Come, let's have breakfast together.

Maan: No, it's ok. Actually I wanted to talk to you about something important.

Rishab: Yes

Maan was about to tell Rishab about what was in his heart and for what he had come when he saw Renuka rushing towards Rishab crying.

Renuka: Rishab'''.Rishab'''.woh

Rishab: Renu, what happened? Why are you crying?-he asked worryingly

Renuka: Rishab'''..woh Geet''''.she pointed to Geet's room unable to say anything more


Hi guys, as promised i delivered two updates on the weekend. if i have time later on there will be one more coming up or else you will have to be satisfied with these two only.


Hope you like it and as usual do leave your comments and please press the like button.

Edited by manisha03 - 14 years ago
mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
loved it .hey u stopped at a wrong place yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
hey dear y did u stop at this??? whtz wrong with geet????

awesome updates... wow itz luv at first sight for maan.. how cute..
cant wait for the next one.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: mrk_1

loved it .hey u stopped at a wrong place yaar...



I think it is becoming my habit to leave the readers at a hangercliffπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...!

please continue soon dear...!
oh god really wanna know what happened next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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