~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 3 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
part 19
nice part...
Maan is so missing Geet...
what happened before?
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 20
awesome...
Maan couldnt stay away from Geet...
the flashback was so funny...
lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 21
OMG what is Maan doing?
is he making fun of his Dodo or saving her?
showing the stalker the marks he has...
oh my...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di love u sorry i cant reply u ontime sorrryyy
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my dodo is such acute baby...how innocently she intruded Maan with his Kissing scenes...

I love her... good that Parul left him... I would like Genie kissing anyone other than DODO...
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Posted: 14 years ago

~maitri~
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Maan..wondered from which angel...u don't believe me.. he removed his t-shirt. & showed her nail marks on his neck & arms.. yeh dehko.. ussi ne kiya hain
the guy looked at him.. & then slowly peeped out to look at dodo.. she was standing there scared wondering where is her savior genie!! wat is he doing with that stalker. Then she got little worried for her machar phelwan..oh babaji.. kanhi pit na jayen!!! uff veerji hoten tho..abhi taak usski tang thode dethen. She put all her wit together.. & tried to scream Genie r u all right!!! but it came out more like a whisper.. she cleared her throat & tried again.. by then Maan came out applying some ketch up near his lips & straightening his t-shirt.. like he had to put up a big fihgt

She rushed to him ..
baag gaya sala.. he said in style..
us ku***..ka***...ki.. tho main.. uff.. dehko khoon aa raha hain. She put her hand in his right pocket..
dosre pocket main hain dodo
kitni bar kaha hain keep it in ur left pocket...uff sunten hi nahi ho.. humesha mujhe pareshani hoti hain
he rolled his eyes.. mera pocket.. mera hanky.. I will keep it where ever I want..
nahi.. she snapped back.. use tho main karti hoon na
she pulled the hanky from his pocket & wiped his lips. He tried pretending like he was bit hurt but this was dodo.. aisen choten moten ..chot tho lagten rahten hain.. she patted his back.. tum bhi na..genie..bilkul chui mui type ho..
chui- mui.. 😲😡
by then parul came running to check his bleeding lips.. Oh.maan kya huwa..
wow.. he was so excited.. challo .. kanhi tho asar huwa ketchup ka., his dodo was not even bothered.. here he was to be showered with another round of passionate kisses from parul. This time he didn't want his dodo any where near to spoil it. He slipped his arm around parul & took her to the room.

He pinned her to the door & began kissing her.. she returned even more passionately. Her hand slipped under his t-shirt tossing it off his head. He felt a jolt in his body as she carnally admired & kissed his chest. She turned briskly & laid on the bed.. she gestured with her finger ..calling him to join her. He smiled a lopsided smile, with wild thoughts rushing through his mind.. he inched towards her... thud thud thud...thud...thud...thud...thud... .thud...thud...thud... thud...thud...thud..
dodo.. he screamed in frustration.. parul threw his t-shirt on his face, walked pass him to open the door
she gave a disgusted look to Geet..
issen kya huwa..she looked at Maan.. who now looked flushed & all lips stick mark on his lips & actually fuming!!! he may just kill her right now!! before he could say anything she looked at him suspiciously.. & very reluctantly.. genie r u gay???
perfect question especially at this moment.. it was like adding fuel to his already tempered mood.
DODO he screamed
she made a baby face... nahi u r wearing lipstick .. thats why I asked
he clinched his fist in frustration & banged his head on the wall
nahi ..main kisi se nahi kahoon gi.. parul ko bhi pata chal gaya shayad thats why she was angry, when she left.
He pulled his hair & screamed dodo if u say a word more .. I am going to kill u
lekin
chup
main tho
chup bilkul chup
she made a puppy face & slipped to the door
he closed his eyes & calmed himself
why did u come here..he asked patiently as she was sneaking out feeling scared
mujhe shooting star dehkna tha
perfect!!! wat more she could think of to ruin his special moment.. he wondered if she did it purposely.. but even his thinking like this was utterly stupid..proving self a dodo!!! she was too much a dodo to think like that.. if she didn't approve anything... she will just say it bluntly.. that would be even more difficult to face.
Din main shooting star dodo.. he asked painfully
she looked blankly at him.. confused..
oh!! shooting star tho..star hain na... so it will be seen only at night..
yah..
he nodded..wow something she realized for once.. at wat cost..GRRR.. oh !! parul.. he stuffed the pillow on his face...
she came close to him & whispered in his ears.. I will not tell any one.. & she ran out screaming ..that u r a gay!!!!

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Maan teasingly, traced his finger on her arm.. u still think I am gay!!! her heart slammed her chest & she glanced down at the spot where his fingers had made contact. For a long moment she couldn't think of a single thing to say. He slid his had around her waist & tucked her closer.. whispering in her ears.. u still think..her breath caught in her throat, her pulse race & her head was spinning. He turned her around in a jerk after placing the coffee mug on the granite slab in the kitchen. Her spine stiffened, a tremor rocked her body as he slowly lifted her chin.. to meet her gaze...umm? he repeated his question with a nod
Their eyes met.. she looked into those deep eyes... who else would know u better he chuckled looking into those eyes.. her words were not merely spoken ..it meant something deeper.. deeper than he could understand.


Precap
🤣dhal gaya dhin ho gaye shaam jaane do jaana hai🤣

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYOuvkW0Xo0[/YOUTUBE]
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thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
YaY I am FIRST for the first time ever... I loved the updateee.. DODO is truly very naive and innocent.. she does things without knowing the outcome... and Genie what can I say about him.. altho i love the fact he is besotted by DODO and her beauty right now, i kinda want him to stop being all over PARUL.. yuck..

Haha but besides that when he comes close to Dodo and questions her about things and makes her feel all mushy.. i love it ... Cant wait for the next update..

Please update soon Muski..!

<3 ya.. you ROCK!


nikky!

Edited by niharika_87 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
m second.lolzzz n awesome
Edited by mona1992 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Hilarious!!!
wonderful part
loved it!!!

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