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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saomom

Me again...


I just reread the chapter. Another thing I find interesting is the signature of Trojan. (Jaya, pay attention here so you can recap what I'm saying using less letters...😆 )

This Trojan, who is probably Guarav, could also represent Vidya herself.

1. Trojan horse - Isn't she like the trojan horse? More than what she appears... and ready to battle for Guarav's heart.
2. Trojan malware - I think she's going to mess with Guarav's brain like the malware does a computer...
3. Trojan contraceptive - do I really need to spell this one out? 😳

I'm waaayyy over-thinking this, aren't I? Just useless mind-wandering thoughts... (Okay. Fine. I'll go back to my corner.)



🤣 Tammie...that was awesome!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hand under the chin...😲 😍

Very interesting...enjoyed reading that Devi!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27


I did, in the pages from 48 to 52.

Here and in some other posts as well... (I think ;)

-Devi


Thanks Devi, i went back to the pages and read them out...
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Posted: 14 years ago
While I understand Gaurav and Vidya are the protagonists...I feel for Salome.Some people have real difficult lives...its tough to strangle your love yourself...I admire her restraint and perseverence at pushing Gaurav away...

As for this update, it was terrific as always. Gaurav feeling proud about Vidya's reply to his father, conversation on silent treatment, answer to Vidya's qn about his taking Salome back and totally refusing a separation speak volumes of the deep emotions that he feels for Vidya - though it might not border anything on the romantic side.

Vidya in her bitterness has thought a lot about separation it seems - but her revelations on misinterpreting Gaurav's behavior and her request to him to not touch her - i guess these are the roots on which you'll develop the next few chapters 😳

There conversations are so enjoyable...i love reading them...

Thanks for the update Devi, loved it. I dont know why but your writing soothes my senses...even when there is war going on between the characters...my mind is at peace with your story and somehow I feel everything will be alright😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 33: Monsters and Men in Capes

He loosened his tie and walked to the bed. Just as he was about to take his glasses off, he noticed the newspaper that had been haphazardly stuffed underneath the pillow. He looked back towards the door through which she had just exited and then turned back to the pillow to pull out the newspaper. It was one of those trashy mid-day ones that he was surprised his wife would read. The surprise lasted only until he found what she had been looking at. "A Fox in the Chicken Coop" - the title read, before the letter started.

He wasn't surprised to see his own writing staring back up at him; he had been wondering when it would show up like this. But the pseudonym – what had made his wife so curious – Trojan, that was … amusing. His father must be in a proper rage by now. He wondered where Vidya had found this paper. His wife was certainly full of surprises.

That night at dinner, there was a distinct tension around the table. Everyone was walking on eggshells around his father. Aditya was still out, which was just as well. It was always taxing for his mother to take on her faux cheerfulness in front of her younger son when her husband was determined to be a beast. His father similarly thought it necessary to keep aside his temper in front of Aditya, which made him even worse with everyone else.

"There was a fox in our chicken coop last night." Bauji announced suddenly towards the end of dinner.

He felt as if everything happened in slow motion after that. The only sound to be heard in the silence that followed was the clatter of his mother's knife to the floor. Bauji looked entirely unrepentant at his proclamation and innocently reached for a cluster of grapes. Sweety was intently looking down at her plate. Imli and Jaggi were standing to the side as if someone had yelled out statue. His mother – this was always painful for him to watch – looked as if she wanted to disappear. Just as he turned to his father, Brahmanand stood up from his seat, pushing his chair back with force. He gave a withering look to Bauji before walking away from the table. His mother turned to give Bauji a look, which his grandfather acknowledged only with a wink.

Later that night, he walked into the bedroom later than usual, hoping that Vidya would already be there. He saw that she was… she was standing by the window looking out and did not turn when he opened and shut the door.

Just as he thought of a way of start a conversation, she spoke. "I have many feathers to help me fly. I have a body and head, but I'm not alive. It is your strength which determines how far I go. You can hold me in your hand, but I'm never thrown. What am I?"

His relief at the return of her puzzles was so deep that he wanted to fall back on the bed and into a long dreamless sleep.

But he remained standing and leaned against one of the bedposts before answering, "An Arrow."

She turned towards him, sitting back against the windowsill.

"Someone took aim today." She said when she finally looked up at him.

He was surprised that she brought up the matter thus.

"You think it was me?" Even as he asked, he was amazed at how quickly she had arrived at that inference.

She merely tilted her head without answering.

"You think I am plotting to overthrow my own father while living in his house?" He asked again, walking over to the sofa to pull out his bed.

"There are many things about this house that I don't know… that I am only starting to find out… to understand…" she said in return, once again turning to look out the window.

He kept himself busy with putting the sheet on the bed so that he could listen to her without calling attention to his own reactions.

"I know the monster of the night and the wily fox of the day. Now, I only need to know who wears the cape."

"No one wears the cape. Everyone is selfish; it only matters to what extent the actions are self-serving." He said without thinking.

"How can you be sure?" she asked.

He looked up, realizing what he had said, and when he found her still looking out the window, he amended what he had just said, "Human nature. It is what it is…"

"Hmm…" she leaned her elbows on the edge of the sliding pane of the window.

"Shall I tell you a story, Gaurav? Then you tell me whether the cape is real or not. A few days ago, a girl at my coaching place missed her bus. It was just starting to get dark and she did not want to wait longer so she asked one of the other students for earlier bus times and she was told of another bus stop nearby. She got lost walking there and ended up in an abandoned alleyway. In a somewhat surreal turn of events that you see in the news or in movies, there was someone loitering there that she did not see until she had walked quite a bit through. It was too far to walk back then and so she continued on her way. He followed her. She walked faster and so did he, now making no efforts to hide that he was indeed after her…"

He had stopped messing with the bed; in fact, he had stopped doing anything by then and had started walking towards her.

"He managed to reach her quickly enough and just when she turned around with her bag to give him her purse, he reached for the sleeve of her blouse instead." She continued as if narrating the story of a new release at the multiplex, taking her time in drawing out the anticipation.

She continued after a beat. "He got a hold of it, but it startled her and she jerked back, thus ripping her blouse. She turned around to run, but he was faster and now grabbed onto the pallu of her sari…"

"What happened then?"

"It was the strangest thing. Someone actually appeared. She imagined that it was a man in a cape. She is a bit fanciful like that… but someone or something did come."

"Someone came and did what?" he asked when she paused.

"He pulled the man back from her and told her to run. She did, but just before she rounded the corner, she looked back."

She paused again, but he knew what was coming, although he still asked,

"What did she see?"

"The Man in the Cape cut off the offender's hand."

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Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am nervous reading!! oh man loved it!! love them! seriously it just keeps getting better!

i love what you wrote "No one wears the cape. Everyone is selfish; it only matters to what extent the actions are self-serving."

It is very very true...
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was beautiful !!!

Great job Sri ...

Loved how Bauji took a dig at Brahmanand ...

Loved that V & G are talking again ...

Loved that V is smart and quick to grasp ...

Loved the 'caped crusader' tale ... it was dramatic !!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi, I heart your writing. :) Thanks for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
I know I don't say this enough, but thank you all. I have the best readers ever (seriously!) Thank you for all your analyses and comments... I really enjoy them, not to mention, they totally stimulate my narrating brain ;)

Love,

Devi

P.S> Thanks Calliope!! We were starting to miss you here :)
Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
So you know how I said the last chapter- Guzaarish will be on my favorite list.. actually I'm gonna replace it with this chapter! I loved this update! First..the whole newspaper thing and then the man in the cape..how do you come up with such a fabulous scenarios and story lines!?!?
Thanks for another amazing update!

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