Ajeeb rishthey-(hu-ju-KSBKBT)Chap-5 pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiii...friends here's CHAPTER--1 of Ajeeb Rishthey...

Viraani Family.. One of the renowned family in town.. Rich and famous.. Well usually rich people are proud n moody.. But Virani Family.. Virani Family is totally different n unique.. Gr8 examples of love, care n sacrifice can be seen among d members of dis family.. N the one 4 whom dis family is united wid lots of luv r MIHIR n TULSI.- the pillars of virani parivaar. 1 day in da morning while Tulsi is vry busy cleaning up a room, Mihir comes to her...

Mihir- Tulsi iss kamre ki saaf-safaai kyun kar rahi hain...'koi aa raha hai kya?

Tulsi- raha..nahi'...rahi'..

Mihir confused

Tulsi- NAMRATHA aa rahi hain'.

Mihir- kya??? He's happy!!! Barso baad namratha vapas aa rahi hai'.par...

Tulsi-par kya?

Mihir- sahil'.

Tulsi breaks d convo

Tulsi- mihir..sahil bhi khush honge'mein jaantha hoon usse..

Mihir-hmm'..chalo neeche chalthe hain'

They both come down. All except sahil n trupti are present there..

Tulsi- nandini,damini'tum log mere saath rasoi mein aao..

Damini- theek hai maa..hum theeno milke namratha ke favourite dishes banayenge.

Baa- mein bhi aathi hoon'.(all smile)

Tulsi- nakul,laksh..tum log station ke liye niklo

Just then a voice is heard-

Uski koi zaroorat nahi hain...'all turn' n they see NAMRATHA'..

Nam- mujhe apni ghar ki address pata hai

😊😊

All are amazed n happy to see namratha' laksh n nakul hugs their sis'..Nams then takes badon ki aashirwaad..

Gautum- namratha'.tumhe address kaise pata tha???

Nams- chaachu...woh daadu mujhe diya tha kuch saal pehle'.aur haan'aap logon haan photographs bhi hai mere saath'.

All are very happy

Namratha is delighted to see her family members'but then her smile vanishes when she see her dad n trupti

Her eyes are filled with tears'

Sahil doesn't speak a word to her😑'.he tells mihir that he need to attend an important meeting n so he need to go'.saying this he goes

Trupti smiles at namratha😑'.n then goes back to her room

Tears are rolling down 4m namratha's cheeks..😭😭

Karan- namratha,tum jaake aaram karo'..

Namratha- chaachu, dad mujhse itni naraaz kyun hai'.meri kya galti hai'..batao chaachu'n she cries lyk anything

Karan- namratha'..beta..tumhari koi galthi nahi hain'dheere dheere sab kuch theek ho jaayega'.hum sab haina tumhare saath'..

Baa comes n say- namratha beta'rona bandh karo..aur haan'thakur ji hamesha tumhare saath hai'(she turns to bhoomi n says) bhoomi beta'.namratha ko uski kamre mein leke jao'.

Namratha wipes her tears and ask ' bhoomi dii..meri kamra'.woh upar jaake left waala kamra haina????

Bhoomi ' haan tujhe kaise pata???

Nam- dii'daadu ne mujhse ek baar kaha thi ki jab mein ghar aungi toh'mujhe woh kamra degi'.kyunki woh khaali padha tha'..

Mihir- tumhe woh sab yaad hain???

Nam- kyun nahi daadu'koi apna ghar bhooltha hain kya??

Architha- acha'..toh mr.virani's aap sab log office jaayiyein..aur Mrs.viranis aap log..rasoi mein jaayiyein..woh kya haina hum ladkiyon(points to nam,bhoomi n herself) ko na'kuch baat karni thi'..

Eklavya- oho'.tum logon kya baat karni hai'pehle mujhe ..(laksh n nakul stares)'.i mean hume hamari behen se baat karni hai'..

Bhoomi- tum log..baad mein baat karna'

They get into an argument'right then'.

Namratha says- Bas!!!!!!...

Arrey yaar..tum log bhi na'..pehle mujhe fresh hone toh do'.she then turns to her 3 bros n says- waise architha sahi keh rahi hai..aap log..office jao..hum shaam ko baat karenge'ok???

Laksh- ok then'

Then namratha hugs her 3 bros' n waves bye to all Mr.Viranis

Precap-

Namratha telling nakul n laksh- agar dad mujhse nafrath karte hai..toh main bhi unhe nafrath karoongi'.dikha dungi ki woh apni beti ko kitna dukh pahunchaaya hai'.

Edited by awesumsonia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Great start dii... πŸ˜ƒ

Looking forward to the story... πŸ˜‰

I know it will be awesome... πŸ˜ƒ

Loved the 'love n care' b/w da siblings... 😳

Loved their argument too... πŸ˜†

Loved how evry1 adores n cares 4 namz... 😳

Precap sounds cool... Liked when Namz said dat she'll hate her dad too... πŸ‘

Great Job... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Update soon... 😊

Love... Bidz 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bidz- thnx a lot darling!! u knw tht ur comments...means a lot to me...<3 u...
n i will try my level best to meet ur expectations :) :)
Posted: 14 years ago
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EXCELENT START OF THIS FF.NAMRITA-SAHIL'S RELATION ARE PASSING BAD TIME.GR8 WORK FROM YOU.PLEAS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mijanur

EXCELENT START OF THIS FF.NAMRITA-SAHIL'S RELATION ARE PASSING BAD TIME.GR8 WORK FROM YOU.PLEAS CONTINUE SOON.

heyy thnx for liking it dear...it really means a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...nice start sonu... all the best ...sorry for late comments dear actually my net wasn't working properly... but better late then nothing...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@monu dii- thnk u soo much!!! glad to knw tht u lyked it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oyeee hoyeee...kya likha hai Madammm...!!!!

IMPRESSSEEDDD...!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita2804

Oyeee hoyeee...kya likha hai Madammm...!!!!

IMPRESSSEEDDD...!!!!!!!!

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oye thnk u jiii...<3 u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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EXCELENT START OF THIS FF.Juhi As NAMRITA-SAHIL'S RELATION ARE PASSING BAD TIME.GR8 WORK FROM YOU.PLEAS CONTINUE SOON. 😍 Thnx for pm
Edited by zaryaabJuhi1b8 - 14 years ago

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