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Posted: 14 years ago
seems Maan has accepted her the way she is, and even ready to share some part of him
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no! no update? 😭 was so looking forward to it, par chalo koi gal nahi, next update laamba sa dena aur jaldi bhi! 😆
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Fabulous update...Loved it! Geet was awesome. Hate Kavya...please update soon n thanks 4 da pm😛
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wow amazing FF.. jus went thru all th parts.. itz lovely.. plzz add me onto ur pm list...
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waiting for tomorrow eagerly!
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Waiting for ur next update
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Can we get update today??????????
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😭

Originally posted by: sanjeevani09

WILL UPDATE ON MONDAY.

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omg..
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PART 36
It was late night they were deep in sleep when geet felt a tug on the blanket. She tried to pull it but she wasn't able to do it much. Finally she was again without blanket.

She got up switched on the light and poked maan on the shoulder. He got up suddenly.

Kya hua?

Mein bhi so rahi u. aap akele nahi ho ki saara blanket aap le lenge. Hum do log hai. two. mein kaise soungi?

Hum do nahi, teen hai geet.

Teen? She made three fingers and showed it to him.

Mujhe counting aati hai geet. Hum dono aur tumhara ye darling Bandar.

Mere sweetie ko kuch mat bolna.

Geet tum itni bacho wali harqat kaise kar sakti ho?

Mein bachi?

He picked up the ears of the bunny on the blue night dress top. She was wearing a blue pajama and t-shirt. The t-shirt had bunny made on it and its ears were drooping.

Ye bacho jaisa hi hai geet' fir ye monkey le k sona.u r the biggest child I have ever seen.

She made a pout. Oh so the girls who wear sexy night wear are the only mature heads on Earth.

He moved his hand thru his hair. He tried to explain but

Geet screamed mein bachi hu na dekho mera bachpana.

She picked up the pillow and gave him one blow on his head. Maan was shocked. And she laughed. Then it was pillow fight for her she kept slamming the pillow. He stopped her by moving his hands. Caught the pillow, snatched it. Finally one movement and maan toppled over geet and she was below him. She was still giggling. He lay over her and she was giggling. He was surprised by the girl once again. He got spell bound in her giggles.

Geet slowly became sober. She looked into his deep brown eyes. They were still, lying there in eyelock. Breathing together.

Their trance was broken by her phone buzzing. He saw her face loose color, it became pale. The bright sparkle in her eyes suddenly became dull and hollow. Maan immediately gained his composure and got up. He rubbed his temple in anguish. Geet got up and received her phone. She talked in monosyllables. Maan looked at the time it was 2.00am. He ignored asking. He turned and lied down when she was still on the phone. He thought his action had made her so sad.

~.~.~.

Maan arrived late from office.

Daadi ' maan aap aa gae?

Hhhmmm.

Sab bahar gae hai. Geet bhi. Aapka khana lagvau?

Sab dinner k liye gae hai?

Disc gae hai.

He stopped, thought for a moment. Geet bhi gayi hai?

Haan vo jaana to nahi chahti thi par sab use le gae ki aapke sath to kabhi jaegi nahi.

Maan glanced at daadi

Bte aap to disc jaate nahi. Isiliye meine bhi geet ko bhej diya.

~.~.~

Geet sat in a corner in the disc. The sound was deafening. She loved dancing but not this way where everyone is rubbing into each other. If she had friends she wud have opted to be there. She had excused herself from NT to sit and watch them. She had been to disc with her friends but at early hours not so late and that too never on a weekend night. She was sitting in a smoking zone which was making it more troublesome for her. She was getting bored. So she sat there texting her friends.

Some random guy approached geet and offered her to dance. She refused politely but he was not ready to leave. He kept flirting. Slowly it started becoming nuisance. It was becoming difficult to avoid him. He was crossing his limits. Ultimately geet got up to leave. The man followed her. She scurried thru the crowd. He followed. She was searching for Dev and NT.

Hey it just one dance sweetie. He held her hand. She snapped and pushed. This time she was quick in her movement. She moved thru the crowd which was in dance frenzy. She was getting nervous with each step.

Someone caught her hand and pulled her behind in force. She hooked her elbow with full force on the man's stomach. Aahh. He yelped in pain. She struggled to free her hand with her free hand all her attention focused there. Then she heard the same voice from back right then. Hey y r u running? All I said was a dance.

She looked back at the voice. The man flirting was behind her. She looked up to the man she had hit and was still holding her. Maan was all she cud utter.

Maan held the man's hand with one hand and twisted it. By that time geet circled both her hands around Maan's neck. She held close to him. Maan left the boys hand. Geet was still hanging on him. She was breathing very fast. She hugged him tighter. He cud hear her heart pounding. Maan didn't hug back initially. His fingers were trembling. He moved his hand to hug back then withdrew. Geet still hugged him catching up her breath. Her fingers clutched his shirt. Maan cudnt resist any longer. He hugged her back. Held her tight in his embrace.

 

She didn't resist but was calmed by his hold. The sudden force the man had applied on her had made her real nervous and being in maan's arm she knew she was safe. She didn't think just remained in his arms trying to ease herself. Maan's fingers combed thru her hair trying to soothe her fear. He closed his eyes and they remained that way for few minutes. They were oblivious of the crowd around them they were at peace in each other's arm until someone hit on geet by mistake. She moved closer to Maan arching her body. As if she cud.
PLZZZ do comment.
i tried to search for the pic in which they were fighting for the blanket or the outhouse one where maan is lying over geet. but cudnt find. it is just delaying the update. if u find it plzz post it in ur comment or send me the link i will edit and put it.
PRECAP
who r they? y r they looking at us?
my body gaurd.
then dnt touch me.
Edited by sanjeevani09 - 14 years ago

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