OS:dedicated to all Maaneet fans, please read - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply wow. your writing skills and everything that u wrote was simply awesome:)
its true maan understands his misty better then anyone . lovely POV presented there:)

He took a deep breath, "but instead of cherishing her most precious act of love, I threw it back at her in contempt! I let my anger cloud my mind and branded her unworthy, accused her of falling into Dev's charm again. I ripped opened her barely healed wounds and made her bleed! Bleed from the wounds of betrayal and humiliation that Dev inflicted, bleed again for her baby. In a span of seconds I made her relive her dreadful past, not just Dev's betrayal, but also that of her family and left her all alone again without any support, without hope, without a cause to live. Coz this time it was I who slashed her with my thoughtless words, her saviour, her protector who had vowed to shield her from all pain"


simply wow:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bindu,

Thanks for the PM. Nice effort.

I wish the CV's had made some effort in tying up open ends instead of just characterising her as ziddi before starting on the new track. I would have been more satisfied I guess.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
this was incredible!!!!!!!!!
wow you portrayed their emotions so well
this was really nice to read
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
great OS..
you explained it so well

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