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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohh god suhana is back with good health ...
now let us discuss about the future track...
ohhh go we cannot guess b'coz it is always a mystery which cv's can only chase but gusses can be made by viewers

let me introduce new char into the show.she is non other than sanvika kashyap(sanu).
do u have any guess who she???? d/o. ishwar kashyap and late janaki(the person whom our badepapa married in us).
i mentioned late b'coz she lost her life while giving birth to our sanu...

u may think ohh god the story is similar to suhana
she completed her education in us. she want to meet her family which her dad had kept secret ( came to know about family through dairy) by an excuse of job in delhi (how she got job in is left to readers choice). and she is going to stay at hostel

bg for sanu is completed

let us start with the sanu entry into kashyap house
she introduces her self as pothi of sr.kashyap...
😲
the above is the exp of the family...
every family member rejects her,,,,,,, she pleads for the mistake done buy her mom and dad but finally bm agrees to allow her. all other are forced to accept ...
bm ask meena to put sanu luggage in ishika room but sanu denies saying " i have no right to stay in the room. i am rejected by all of u. i can occupy the room if i have place in ur heart"
all gets confused
inder in anger says " so why cant u leave "..

she says i came to gain place in ur heart and mentions that she is going to stay in da hall and use sofa as bed... all are😡

the days went on know one liked her but she kept smile on her face...

no lie can be hidden for a longer time

one fine when she is having her bath badepapa called and bm picked up...
they recognizes each other...
bp is angry on sanu and scolds her for telling lies and they have a fight,,,,,,,,,
sanu tries to control her tears and keep smiling

one fine day she is sitting on terrace and crying which bm observes and try to que her but covered with a fake smile but this goes on for 4 times...

as bm is soft hearted she ask sanu with full of affections says that bp is avoiding her phone calls with fake reasons and mentions that no one is there to look after him...
bm que about her mother... sanu reveals that her mother has dead and explains about how her dad use to look after as a frnd...
bm😭 😭sanu had affectionate hug...
now sanu becomes ladla of bm...
slowly every one realizes their bonding and become closer...
sanu room pravesh...



dont think the story is over it is still left

sanu goes to panna one day...
she saw raunak pics and recognizes himmm
she call her dad ask him to visit india immidiatly so that she can show his sil...
and also mentions that he should not come alone some one should accompany him who knows present delhi well. cuts the telephone line and jumps in excitment

bp arrives delhi with his employee...
sanu arranges meeting in panna new house(shiftd from big to small due to lack of money)...panna recognises the employee... non other than our rounak...
sanu introduces rounak as panna'hubi and panna as her sis

ishwar is left shock...

sanu lectures him for family values...

entir k family arrives their and have emotional moments with rouna...

bp realises what he missed...

he was first rejected by the family but for the happy ending k parivar accepts him again

*****the end*******



sorry for the errors and if i have hurtes any one feelings
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Shidev.Soniak thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I dont agree. I dont want bp to come in kashyap's life again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What is dr. in ur name? Are u a doctor?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good thoughts...very well written...😊

for me...yes there shud be a BP track...bt not a long one...and i dont want him or his family t be a part of the family again...so just a small track either him coming back...or flashbacks of the family willl do...

bt its ur creativity...and i liked it a lot...keep writing more...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bajju

What is dr. in ur name? Are u a doctor?


sorry to create confusion
not but have passion

Edited by dr.cb - 14 years ago

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