NEW MG FF Woh lamhe,Woh Baatein-Part 2 Pg 5

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Ok,This FF is very different.The concept is hard to explain.Usually,I think of the concept and write but this time,I wrote and am now trying to think of a concept.😕
So,I think its gunna be like how Geet re-discovers herself,the old Geet she was(read the prologue and you'll get it) ,How with Maan's help,she forgets her past nd moves on.😕
This FF Is cuming to Indiaforums In August.
Part 1
As i looked out of the window,a tear rolled down my cheek,betraying me,revealing my emotions,something i never did.All these years,Id acted as if i was a stone,not living,no feelings,nothing affected me.But today,that act shattered into pieces and the real me came out.Someone who was full of emotions,someone who was trapped admist pain,hurt and betrayal.Too bad no-one would ever find out!!! How easy it had been for them to decide my future?For them to send me away and never bother to call again?They had cut me off completely and at that time,I longed for them,For the day they would ring.I was young.Time passed.Seconds,Minutes,Years but...Nothing.Then THEY started ringing but i cut them off.I rejected their calls and stayed in the world i'd made for myself,Ignoring them.The longing never went but it was hidden deep down,Where no-one could see it.I couldnt cope with their rejection and i wouldnt be able to bear it if they cut me off again so i avoided them,anything that reminded me of them,of the life i lived.More years passed,I turned 21,Graduated,Lived a fun life but nothing really changed.I still woke in the night,Crying,Remembering them.I still thought of them.Some marks are made but some are imprinted forever on your heart and no matter how hard you try,How many times you say you've forgotten them,How much you lie to yourself,They never go.They stay with you.Forever.
Part 1:Above
Part 2-Pg 5
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NICE CONCEPT YAAR ...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice prologue...!
plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u continue ...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting!!!
continue soon!
i'll go with option 2!=)
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice
i love the concept
plz cont
and ithink i like the name
2)Woh lamhe,Woh baatein
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice!!
Loveee the concept!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice prologue...
well u can name it whatever you like but the first word came to my mind is she is "bonded" with her past
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting...

continue soon... I'll go with option 1...
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Another FF , wow !!!
'Woh lamhe , woh yaadein' is good
Since ur FF is on finding oneself u could use ' Astitva ' or ' Mera Wajood '...


dear , looking forward to it & thanks for pm ...
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I LOVE D CONCEPT...I'L THINK ABT NAME ND LET U KNOW LATER...

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