Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the updates, Devi!!⭐️ They are always enlightening and makes the readers think. Keep up the fantastic work. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
The pieces are falling in place for me now - wow! I am sooo slow hehehe Gaurav let us peak into his Salome's life without really letting us in (if that makes sense :s)

Grt update as usual :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Calliope

Dear Devi,

I know I could have reached out to you over PM, but I thought posting here would also help me to reach out to other writers/readers here giving me a wider diaspora to address to.

I just saw a post (this one: Let the swashing and buckling begin) in this fan fiction forum where a group of three are talking about fan fiction, writing and... I don't know. By the looks of the topic which has been introduced they are calling out for readers who have something to say on fiction in general.

I have no problems or qualms about this topic but there is this nagging feeling which is making me a tad bit edgy. Is this going to be some sort of moral policing on what is "good" and what is "bad" for the readers? Or is it going to be an open debate/discussion on the trends of fan fiction on this site in general?

I like the fact that they are reaching out those readers who feel that by saying something, anything, they might be offending a larger group.

Your thoughts on this?

I apologize in advance for writing this here and spamming your thread unnecessarily.

Regards,
Calliope.


This seems interesting Calliope. I will definitely check it out, especially as they seem to be interested in giving voice to minority views. But moral policing? Hmm... I will have to read more... Lord knows my FFs can be naughty (yes yes, I am aware that you are not in favor of those... and will certainly skip over any parts if poor Gaurav and Vidya ever makes it to being *ahem ahem*) ...

what exactly are they saying about the content? I will have to see...


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Posted: 14 years ago
I was curious so I decided to watch Maryada last night and I was amazed ar the difference between the real Vidya-Gaurav and yours. I like yours a lot better. Waiting for the update!! :)
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Chapter 25: Salome - 3

"Salome…"

Her voice had floated to him in its usual lilt and he had looked up at her from where he had been seated at the table going through her investment portfolio. She had been standing by the window looking out for a while and he had noticed that she had been subdued throughout the day.

"Hmm...?" He had prompted her to continue.

"Salome. My name. Do you know that I don't know anyone else with that name?" She had finally said.

"It is an unusual name." He had agreed.

"My mother named me, you know. She chose that name after I was baptized in the church; ironic, don't you think? Maybe even sacrilegious. She had never really been the religious sort, but we still occasionally went to church and I took some Catechism classes growing up. I had always been a voracious reader and Bible was my first set of grand stories. Eventually I came across Salome and John the Baptist and I asked my mother why she had named me after this dubious character. Why not Mary or Elizabeth, good solid Christian names."

He had turned away from the laptop to give her his complete attention, but she had still remained in place, looking out the window.

"She told me that everyone wanted to be virtuous Mary's and Elizabeth's. That everyone wanted to be "good." She had decided that her daughter would not be like everybody. Her daughter would be beautiful and unique, a set apart from the rest, fawned over by kings and beggars alike. Entirely different from all the Mary's and Elizabeth's of the world."

She had been quiet for some time afterwards, but he had not spoken at all to break the silence for fear that she would stop talking. She had never talked of her childhood or her past before that day.

"Given what I have become, she should have named me Mary. Not all Mary's in the Bible are known to be virtuous, you know." She had turned around them to face him, leaning back against the ledge with a smile.

He had gone home that night and had researched the Mary's of the Bible. There were several that came up, but only two were of prominence. Mary the Mother of Jesus was obviously the virtuous choice to whom Salome had referred. There was a second woman, Mary of Magdalene, who was a more controversial figure. She had been first identified in the Bible when she had washed Jesus' feet with precious oils and wiped them with her hair. There was also some reference to Jesus freeing her from 'the seven demons.' The point of contention in her history came in sixth century AD when Pope Gregory the Great noted in one of his sermons that Mary Magdalene was in fact the penitent woman with a past of prostitution, 'the seven demons' representing her vices. For many hundreds of years after that, this idea spread in the church and Mary Magdalene went on to become identified as the woman who turned from her wicked ways and became a follower of Jesus. However, in more recent history, the work of many scholars had found that Mary Magdalene was in fact not a prostitute and had deemed the whole thing to be one of the great misidentifications in history. In fact, some theories – if the popular novel Da Vinci Code was anything to go by – even posited that Mary Magdalene had in fact been the wife of Jesus.

The part of the story that had struck him had been the misidentification. Mary Magdalene had been cleared of the charges raised against her and had been officiated to a much more prominent status in the church. So, why then would Salome say that she should have been named after this particular figure from the Bible? He hardly thought that it was because she did not know of this bit of controversial history herself. In fact, if he could gather as much from 30 minutes of research, then someone like Salome would be much more knowledgeable. There had been something about the whole thing that had stuck with him and he had had this nagging feeling that he had been missing something that should have been obvious to him.

"But, alas, I am Salome. And sometimes our names – or our namesakes – determine our fates. Don't you think, Gaurav?"

She had laughed at the end and he had been determined to look up the history of Salome as well, which eventually led to him buying a copy of the Luini that now hung up in his parlor.

He had asked her whether she thought his name matched him; whether she thought he had a great deal of pride. Even though his tone had been teasing, she had turned quiet for some time.

"You are nothing like I expected, Gaurav. Nothing about you matches your name, your sire, or your family. You alone defy your fate." She had eventually said.

He had been taken aback by her proclamation and had chuckled without humor before he told her, "If I defied fate, Salome, you would be my wife now and I would have taken you and my mother far away from this place."

"Destiny is still yours to make, Gaurav, even if your first plans didn't work out." She had told him in answer.

"Have you eaten dinner?" Vidya's voice called him back from his musings.

He looked at her, holding his copy of Animal Farm in her hands, a Gaon Waali who was nothing like what he had expected.

He shook his head. "Let's go out to dinner today."

She smiled, a surprised relief evident there, and he smiled back.

He waited for her to go ahead of him and when he followed her out of the room, he asked, "So, what puzzle do you have for me today?"

She laughed at his question, "You better hope dinner is long, because this will take a while."

With the return of this routine, the mystery that was Salome receded back into its venerable glassed shelf in his mind…

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Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay! Me first!! I've been waiting and reading Love and Despair. Loved the update! Both Marys are unique, so is Salome. I've never actually spent a lot of time reading about Salome other than that one incident, it makes me curious what kind of life did she live? Sorry, got distacted... back to the update. Ooh, dinner! Wonder what's gonna happen? Can't wait to know more about Gaurav-Salome. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hullooo...I know I am way behind...I just finished reading part 1. Devi, I hope you dont mind the out of turn comments. I was trying hard to stay away from acquiring a new obsession...now that the crazy work month is over...I am back in the market for new obsessions 😆

I loved the beginning- A marriage not of the bride's choosing! I wonder if the groom had given his consent or was he also arm twisted into marrying her!

EDIT 1: Finished reading part 2. So it is a marriage of inconvenience...and there is another woman in the picture. Hmmm...I doubt Vidya has anyone in her past, her reluctance is more the fear of the unknown and unwillingness to leave behind everything that is familiar and she loves dearly. I wonder whether this marriage will ever take wings or will he continue to long for the other woman? Its really interesting...(I have a feeling before tonight- this comment will turn into the longest comment, you have ever received).

ps: Is it alright if I have absolutely no context of the show? or should I stalk the Maryada forum to get some sense of what the show is about?

pps: I see everyone is here already.😆 Guess I was stalking you in the wrong places, Devi.

ppps: How are the other mice? Its been a looong time!

ppps: Does Gayatri Joshi actually play Vidya in the show?

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Hullooo...I know I am way behind...I just finished reading part 1. Devi, I hope you dont mind the out of turn comments. I was trying hard to stay away from acquiring a new obsession...now that the crazy work month is over...I am back in the market for new obsessions 😆


I loved the beginning- A marriage not of the bride's choosing! I wonder if the groom had given his consent or was he also arm twisted into marrying her!

EDIT 1: Finished reading part 2. So it is a marriage of inconvenience...and there is another woman in the picture. Hmmm...I doubt Vidya has anyone in her past, her reluctance is more the fear of the unknown and unwillingness to leave behind everything that is familiar and she loves dearly. I wonder whether this marriage will ever take wings or will he continue to long for the other woman? Its really interesting...(I have a feeling before tonight- this comment will turn into the longest comment, you have ever received).

ps: Is it alright if I have absolutely no context of the show? or should I stalk the Maryada forum to get some sense of what the show is about?

pps: I see everyone is here already.😆 Guess I was stalking you in the wrong places, Devi.

ppps: How are the other mice? Its been a looong time!

ppps: Does Gayatri Joshi actually play Vidya in the show?


Well well... Look who the cat dragged in 😉 The other mice have been missing you lady... (And of course, the cat too :)

You do have quite a bit to go to catch up, but take your time and obviously comment up a storm :)

We have awesome readers here (but you know that I have the best readers ever ;)

To answer your questions,
No, you don't need to watch the show to be able to follow this FF - the show starts with the Vidya-Gaurav wedding, just the same as this FF. I am on my own path now while incorporating some story-lines from the show.

And no, Gayatri Joshi does not play Vidya on the show ;) The male lead is also different. The guy I have picked is the lead of the telugu movie, "the Leader".

Welcome back again Pixie.

And thanks to all my other dear readers for following this story with me. I know I have only been updating and not really commenting much. But life is crazy busy and this FF has me in a strangle-hold (it reminds me a bit of my obsession from the Love & Despair days), so alas, it leaves me just time enough to write the updates in the little free time that I have have nowadays.

You know, as I always say, you are all the coal that runs the choo-choo of my writing train :)

Love,

Devi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab update, absolutely loving how your incorporating biblical stories in this fiction, makes it it all the more interesting and gripping!

PS: I read the Da Vinci Code a while back, I can proudly say that I read the book in ONE DAY 😎😆 that's how gripping it was and even when I sit down to read the book again and again , it never fails to give me the chills!

Now I have to return back to organising my cousins mehndi night, all the aunts are planning on dancing *sad sigh*

Damn not looking forward to seeing them expose their flabs 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im glad that I finally got to meet Salome in perso- even if it was in a flashback...I was wondering about the choice of name too...but knowing you, something was bound to come up.
Shes such a enigma... I wonder if she is so intelligent, what is she doing in such a profession.
Would love to read more about her...
No other woman except Vidya could have ever stood a chance against Salome.
thanks for the pm
Sur

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