fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28

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nikhita

@nikki_k

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Posted: 19 years ago

#71

i was trying to do something special but couldnt so for the time bieng all cont after some time.i am a little unwell today so ill cont tommorow.sorry

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#72

its ok Nikki

plz get well soon 😳

Divya

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nikhita

@nikki_k

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Posted: 19 years ago

#73

ok i'll cont with a small part.ill post a bigger part tommorow.

Yuvi:i think ab hume vapas chalna chaiya
Varun:ha kafi late ho gaya hai
Yuvi:to chala bana
Ashi:unless Tia and ranveer want to spend time alone is beach par .what could be more romantic. 😉
Ranveer:(fast)nahi Ashi hum saath chalega. 😳
Ashi:ok as u wish

At night tia room
tias lost in her own surreal world
http://www.badongo.com/vid/101078
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that is the video mix i made.i'll cont tommorow with a longer part.

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 8

Posted: 19 years ago

#74

pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap with longer part.

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nikhita

@nikki_k

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Posted: 19 years ago

#75

Due work comitments everyone has to return back to Mumbai.
In Mumbai:
Ranveer recieves a call from sumeet ajuja asking me to join his company where Tia is also working as a fashion designer.
Ranveer:par sir...
Sumeet:par kuch nahi Ranveer u may not be needing me par mujhe tum jaisa hardworking workers ki bahut zaarorat hai
Ranveer:ok sir jaisa aap kaha.

After 1 month
The door bell of ranveers house rings.
Ranveer:(opening the door):aap..

this part is really short but the next part is going to be long i can promise u that.there are no comments for the last part too it seems u guys did not like it.truthfully it was too short to comment upon but i had added the video mix.

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#76

nice one Nikki

n plz continue soon atleast for those who r reading...

plz its a sincere request frm my side 😊

Divya

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nikhita

@nikki_k

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Posted: 19 years ago

#77

hey guys this is the longest part i hve ever written with frequent put ins from my great friend angelgirl16 who has not only given frequent put ins but has typed the whole thing.... hope u like our teamwork.
ok so here is the next part:

Ranveer opens the door

Ranveer: aap.....
Antara(ranveers cousin sister): haan main(hugging ranveer) kaisa laga suprise.
Ranveer : bahut acha. aaye(inviting her inside n making her sit)aaj aapne hume kaise yaad kiya?
Antara: yaad to main bahut dino se kar rahi thi par tumse milne ka mauka hi nahi mila. bua aur chutki nahi dikh rahe.
Ranveer: Ma toh sanganeer gayi hai, data ki barsi ke liye aur Vasu mauraya mein hai.
Antara: oh!!! lekin main toh soch rahi thi ki Muskaan ko kuch din ke liye aap logon ke pas hi chod jaon kyunki main aur rahul(her husband) toh aksar buisness trips ke liye bahar jaate rehte hain. ab....
Ranveer: koi baat nahi Antara hum manage kar lenge.
Antara: par tumhe koi problem....
Ranveer: kaisi baat kar rahi Antara, aap toh janti hain ki Muskaan aur humare beech bahut banti hain.
Antara: acha ranveer mujhe late ho raha hai...main chalti hoon.
Ranveer(getting up): theek hai. bye Antara...take care.
Antara: Ya,i will. tum bhi apna khayal rakhna.(speaking to Muskaan)Bye sweety...Ranveer mamu ko tang mat karna and no masti.
Muskaan: okayy...bye mama!!!

Antara goes away.

Ranveer(turning towards Muskaan): toh kaisi hain aap?
Muskaan(putting her hands on her waist): hum toh theek hain, aap kaise hain?
Rnveer(smiling): hum bhi theek hain.
Muskaan: Hmmmm....
Ranveer: acha aapko bhuk lagi hain?
Muskaan: Nahii mamu.
Ranveer: acha, humein office jana hain,(thinking aloud)par aap(suddenly) office chalengi?
Muskaan: Yesss!!!
Ranveer(smiling): chaliye hum tayar ho jate hain.
Muskaan: okay!

In Ranveers room...he is getting ready while Muskaan is playing with his wallet.Suddenly,she sees Tias photo.

Muskaan:yeh kaun hai mamu?
Ranveer: yeh....(looking lost) yeh, yeh tia hain, hamari dost.
Muskaan:dost,(sweetly...acting innocent and being naughty) sirf dost.
Ranveer(lost, suddenly realising Muskaans presence): haan, sirf dost(smiling cheekily and taking her in his arms) badmaash!! chalein?
Muskaan: chalo,par mamudost ki photo koi wallet mein lagata hain, i mean wallet mein toh sirf girlfriend ki photo lagti hain na...

Ranveers phone starts ringing so the topic is diverted.

In the office. Sumeet is walking down the corridor when Ranveer enters with Muskaan.

Ranveer: Good Morning, Sir.
Sumeet(suprised): Good Morning, Good Morning Ranveer. yeh kaun hain?(looking at Muskaan)
Ranveer: sir, yeh humari behen ki beti hain. woh inne humare pas chod gayi hain. Sorry Sir, humare ghar par koi nahi hain isliye humein innhe apne saath office lana pada.
Sumeet: No problem Ranveer(speaking to Muskaan) toh aapka naam kya hain?
Muskaan: humara naam Muskaan hain. aap ka naam kya hain?
Sumeet: mera naam Sumeet hain.(to Ranveer) kafi friendly ladki hain. acha Tia conference room mein hain India-International Fashion Week ke logon ke saath, tum dono Campaign ke main points discuss kar lo.

Conference Room...

Ranveer: Hi! Tia.
Tia: Oh! Hi! Ranveer.(Looking at Muskaan) yeh young lady kaun hai?
Before Ranveer could say anything, Muskaan spoke up.

Muskaan: aap mamu se kyun poochti hain... Hum Muskaan hai.
Tia(smiling): Hi! Muskaan, main.....
Muskaan: aap....aap Tia hain.
Putting her hands on her waist she goes towards Tia to analyze her from every angle, while Tia stands stll...smiling and Ranveers embaressed.

Muskaan(nodding her head): mami bane ke liye achi hain.
Tias smile gets wider and she lowers her eyes while Ranveer gets more embaressed.

Ranveer: acha dadima!
Tia(suspiciously): aapko kaise pata ki main Tia hoon?
Muskaan(before Ranveer could stop her): voh maine aapki photo mamu ke wallet mein dekhi hain na.

Tia and Ranveer get more embaressed while suddenly Ranveers phone rings.

Ranveer(on the phone): Hello......Oh! hum aate hain.

Hanging up on the phone, addressing Tia.

Ranveer: Tia hume factory jaana hoga, vahan production mein kuch problem hogayi hai....lekin Tia Muskaan....
Tia: you dont worry Ranveer, Muskaan mere saath rehe jaaygi.(addressing Muskaan) kyun Muskaan?
Muskaan: haan mamu, main Tia aunty ke saath rehe jaaongi.
Tia(smiling): Ranveer shes really cute.
Ranveer(smiling): acha Tia to hum chalte hain.Bye!
Tia:Bye! Ranveer.

Tia(turning towards Muskaan); aap chocolate khaogi?
Muskaan: haan!!
Tia(holding out her hand): come!!

They spend the rest of their time talking,laughing and playing...forgetting Ranveer and that they were in office. In these few hours they spent together, Muskaan became as fond of Tia as much as she was fond of Ranveer.

guys just wanted to ask a question how do u write on the subject that u have updated the fanfic on?

Edited by nikki_k - 19 years ago

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#78

soo sweet Nikki.. and thanx to angelgirl16 also...

wonderful part...

n for changing the topic, go to the first page, the first post tht YOU hv posted.. c there will b an icon called 'edit' click on tht .. n change the topic name....

plz post the next part soon...

n Muskaan is so cute.. n loved the way Ranveer said badmaash! 😉

continue soon

Divya

Edited by divya_92 - 19 years ago