Guzarta hua saal...Poem

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

hiiii Friends

i m back here again...Today i want to share with u all my poem which i wrote on the eve of new year..

i hope u ll like it😳

Guzarta hua saal

Is guzarte saal main

main ne kya paya,main ne kya khoya..

kuch khoya bhi,

kuch paya bhi,

kuch haqeeqat thi,kuch maya bhi

kuch mere toot te sapne bhi

kuch bikhre hue woh saz bhi

kuch yaadoon ke woh aangan bhi

kuch rim jhim si barsaat bhi

kuch meethe meethe lamhe bhi

kuch dard bhare woh Raz bhi

kuch baaton pe mujhe naz bhi

kuch baaton se inkaar bhi

phir main sochti hoon...khote hue

is guzarte saal main

main ne kya paya

main ne kya khoya

kuch khoya bhi,kuch paya bhi

kuch haqeeqat thi

kuch maya bhi

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

You're loaded with talent, Maria. Urdu poetry is your thing, and I am honored reading your poems. I dun really read poetry, that too when it's Urdu but anyway, I really like yours. Deep classics, thanks for the PM!

-Kankshita

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jiya

@--jiya--

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely poem Maria👏

thnx for the pm dear

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
You're loaded with talent, Maria. Urdu poetry is your thing, and I am honored reading your poems. I dun really read poetry, that too when it's Urdu but anyway, I really like yours. Deep classics, thanks for the PM!

-Kankshita

@Kanky

Thank u soooooo much sis for liking my poems🤗its my pleasure u likes my poems as u r too very talented writer..😳

ur compliment means a lot to me...🤗

Thanksss again for ur beautiful comment..🤗

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey maria🤗
you know you made me realise..ki maine kya khoya aur kya paya😳
i was lost in it...in this whole IF ..you are the one...for whose poems i wait for the most..just loved it..!! so so beautiful...loved it❤️
pls do write more😳

love
tasfia

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful poem Maria!

thnx for the pm 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Maria, sorry for not reading your earlier poems but i had read the butterfly one..you wrote that rightt? it was beautiful and this is too. And i love the fact you right it in urdu makes it much more pleasurable to read. The emotions that sweep through your words touched my heart.

keep writing more.