Can We Be Together? [Mayur] :: Promo : Page 52 - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Nupsi was so small
just 16 and got married
She trusted wrong person
par isme uski bhi kya galti thi
RV made her to do that
he played with her emotions so badly ,he didnt even understand her .her wishes
and just one thing lust

I so hate him ,feeling like killing
and nupur i hope she takes a stronger step and go out from his life


GM ,I hope next update will be soon before we forget what was the story
hai na

But loved this part too
so tc,

SA

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update Mahak!
poor Nupz 😭
i hate RV 😔
waiting for the next part
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderfully writen mahak..thoroughly enjoyed it..looking forward to the next update..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Mahak...apna next update kab dogi??..well, i just read d last previous part now..i so hate rv...i hated him in d show n now i'm hatin him in all d ffs i read...n nupur was married at 18!!😲..poor girl...she was taken away by his sweet talks!!...Update soon😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
when r u updating Mahak?
plzzzzzz update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS


Hey Guys, Long time i know....

Please forgive me for not replying to your beautiful and encouraging compliments.

They surely do matter to me a LOT.

I just didn't had time....net is very slow and my time limit rivals it....

I am extremely happy that you guys are still with me, despite my slow speed.

Please shower your comments to me always. They are the only encouraging source i have.

The only reason for my updating are your beautiful words. So keep them going.

I am truly sorry for not being able to reply, i have a very tight schedule.

But, this doesn't means at all that i am not reading them! I read them and cherish them, so please keep commenting.

With loads of love,

-Mahi
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Posted: 14 years ago


Promo-

As he came near me, I could feel myself shivering. He must be so sad! I thought that he was coming to hug me for comforting me, but what he did, just shocked me to no ends. He slapped me. My cheeks were stinging with that effect. When did RV changed into this?

I muttered, "RV…aapne?"

He grabbed my hands and pulled me to his chest by a strong force. He forcefully kissed me on my lips. I could taste alcohol in his mouth. I was so shock that I couldn't even kiss him back. Before I could protest, he threw me back on the bed. And he started to remove his shirt.

I gathered all my courage and asked, "RV yeh aap kya kar rahe hain?"

I tried to get up from the bed, but he tied me down with my hands. He said, "Tumhe kya lag raha hai? Tumhe samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki main kya kar raha hoon? I want you right now."

What? Here, I was devastated, and he wanted to do that with me? As I felt him tugging on my clothes, I said, "RV please, aaj nahi. Main is condition mein nahi hoon. Please RV. Chod dijiye mujhe. Please."

He looked at me with fire in his eyes. He said, "Nupur, I don't care what you want or what you don't. You are my wife and I can have you whenever and wherever I want. You have to comply with my wishes."

I tried saying, "Please Rv. Aaj nahi. Please chod dijiye mujhe." But my please felt deaf to his ears. Each time I tried to get off the bed, he tied me down more fiercely. There was so much roughness that I could feel myself getting bruises.

Although we had done this many times, being married and all, but for the first time, this was happening against my wish. I felt like I was being raped. Was my protector, my husband, seriously violating me? Had my protector become my predator?

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To be continued...

Hope that you don't wanna kill me after this promo.

I am sorry that even after so much wait, i just had time to post a promo. But i would post the part soon.

Only i know how much tears i had when i wrote up this promo. This is the promo which marks the beginning of a torturous life for her.

I am not confident about the mature stuffs and i am nervous too. So, please comment for boosting up my confidence.

Please comment and leave me a review :) Remember, that i am waiting for them <3

-Mahi

Edited by ...Mahak... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i dnt know, wat to write!!!!
that need lots of courage to write like dis stuff....really feel bad fr nupur n dat b**tard rv...jst want to kill him
HATS OFF TO U MAHI
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Posted: 14 years ago
it is ahhhh.. ieven cant say wht i am feeling after reading it.....feels like killing him....poor nupur
pls ur the bst n plsih update soon
lovly even too c a promo
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWW!!! long tym..mahi...u noe 2day i was just checking wen i saw PROMO...i jumped out finally u did it..pplzz continue...soon...feeling really bad 4 poor nupzi...😭..were is mayyu..hop he saves her..by dis RV.........😔

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