Entwined: Part16A : Yere Yere Pausa : 31Aug11

Entwined : Part 01: Jeev guntala ( Jan 2010 )

Entwined : Part 02: Oththancha Mohor ( Feb 2010 )

Entwined : Part 03: Shwaas ( Mar 2010 )

Entwined : Part 04: Aabhaas ( 16 April 2011 ) Pg 02

Entwined : Part 05: Smriti ( 27 April 2011 ) Pg 03

Entwined : Part 06: Ushakkal ( 18 May 2011 ) Pg 06

Entwined : Part 07A: Gappa Bas ( 20 May 2011 ) Pg 08

Entwined : Part 07B: Spandan ( 03 Jun 2011 ) Pg 10

Entwined : Part 08: Sawli ( 12 Jun 2011 ) Pg 11

Entwined : *Poster 01 : Tarit-Dharini* ( 17 Jun 2011 ) Pg 14

Entwined: Part 09: Swaadhin ( 18 Jun 2011 ) Pg 15

Entwined : Part 10: Haa Khel Sawalyancha ( 25 Jun 2011 ) Pg 18

Entwined : Da Making Of *Bedroom Scene* ( 28 Jun 11 ) Pg 20

Entwined : Part 11: Dhoom Dhadaka ( 01 Jul 11 ) Pg 22

Entwined : Part 12: Arre Deva ( 12 Jul 11 ) Pg 23

Entwined : Part 13: Promo Siggy : Color me Orange ( 15 Jul 11 ) Pg 25

Entwined : Part 13 : Kevha Tari Pahate : ( 30 Jul 2011 ) Pg 27

Entwined : Prelude : Da Untold Chapter : PriDa story

Entwined : Part 14: Soon Maajhi Laadaki : ( 14 Aug 11 ) Pg 30

Entwined *Poster 02 : Sharan-Goldie* ( 16 AUG 11 )

Entwined : Part 15 : Jhoonj Tujya Manachi : ( 19 Aug 2011 ) Pg 32

Entwined *Poster 03 : Tarit-Dharini* (23 Aug 11 ) Pg 33

Entwined : Part 16A : Yere Yere Pausa : ( 31 Aug 11 ) Pg 35



Entwined : Part 16B : Coming Soon


Its not about getting sumone to click on LIKE icon.
mah satisfaction lie in da knowledge
dat u cud relate to da fictional characters i weave
as i pen down mah imagination.

JIIP'
skorpion.


NOTE:
A long long long time ago... i had made an attempt to write a Short Story of a couple named PriDa. I did update it 3 times... Time does fly fast.

Today after loging in here i noticed a STICKY !!
A sticky dat screamed RED ALERT on mah attention radar !!
*List of PriDa FF SS OS* , i cudna help but peep in.
ooo and to mah horror der stood mah name under INCOMPLETE ss for PriDa, Entwined.
Sighhh.

Long story short- sincere thanxxX to Kwhaish
for compiling wot u have under dat Sticky thread !!
for giving a gentle reminder to all writers dat sum of der works are pending !!

In an attempt to redeem mah miserable guilt of leaving finks incomplete,
i wud like to renew *Entwined* wid an update soon.

Since da last update was an year old, da thread is locked down.
so here is da RECAP of da earlier 3 updates below.

Da ambulance moved through traffic smoothly like a snake on desert sand. Multimillion dollars worth of cars parted faster den da Red sea partition all those yrs back as de heard da blaring alarm, indicating a critical case on da way to da local hospital. It was da weekend. Chaos everywer.
Loud music cud be heard from da neighbouring cars.

Inside da ambulance all one cud hear was da beepings of a black monitor.
Beep --- Beep --- Beep.
But in such a case dat is all dat counted.
the constant beepings must go on !!

Every single member of the 3 team unit dispatched on hearing da 911 call was on alert.
De cud not afford to loose this case wotsoever.
De all watched HIM as he held onto her frail stark white pale hands
perhars giving away HIS life in da hope dat she lived tru

Her eyes wer closed .
He remembered, she only closed her eyes so peacefully, wen he applied sindoor
Her face had a blank SERENE xpression like she was peacefully n happily resting or thinking of him in a DREAMY trance.

He silently whispered, U cant do dis to me
U cant leave me now
His grip on her hand increased almost crushing her palm

The nurse immediately touched his arm, Sir, please. let us do our job.

But, Nurse, cant u see. she promised me, she will never leave me alone. never.
vaada kia hai hmmmne ek dusre se.
hardam saath rahenge.
kya zidd hai iski ab ye.
He turned his face n closed his eyes

White light.
All she cud see was stark harsh white light at da end of da lonesome path
A little alarm going off in da far distance
She cud hear him. HIM, her prince. her knight. her lover. her protector. her husband. her life.
She heard his sobs.
She felt his strong hold on her hands.
why was he crying now. How disturbed he felt.
All she wanted to do was console him
She wanted to let him know, she was alwaz der for him.
She wanted to cradle his head in her arms, jus like a mother wud - her baby
All da pain dat he had suffered wid da loss of his father
she wanted to make it vanish
She wanted to tell him she loved him
She wud if only da white light dimmed a little
It wud jus not let her open her eyes.
She was feeling drowsy now.
Maybe if she slept it off a little
Maybe if she relaxed a little n
let da harsh white light pass her by
den she wud xplain all dat to him
yes she made up her mind
she started relaxing---

The Beep beep beep on da monitor slowed down
The nurse looked up in alarm
Doctor- we are loosing her ------------------------

to be continued--

Precap-

Damnini, i swear i will join u n pull u back from werever u are
we will alwaz be together. ALWAZ. u hear me !! Dont u dare leave me !!
Doctor !! Nurse !! do something
Sameer !! Varun !! help her help me god !!
dats wen he knew da meaning of *A chest pain*
He was seeing blurry
Da beeps sounded low in volume
Da pain increased closing in on his sobs
last he heard Varun screaming near his right ear
*Sameer bhaiyya !! Prithvi bhaiyya ko bhi hum khone wale hai* 😲




*Ghum ka sagar jo chaahe, to Hmmm muskurate rahe
apni aankhon me ashaaonke deep jalate rahe...*

Ambulance---
The Beep beep beep on da monitor slowed down
The nurse looked up in alarm
Doctor- we are loosing her ------------------------

2 hr later

she does not seem to be responding positively to da medication Mr Saxena.
perharps if u cud hold her hand
we know how close you two are
da doctor interrupted HIS thots

He had stood still for da last 2 hrs jus watching her face.
All those needles piercing her arm
n all he cud do was watch helplessly
In a trance he walked up to her bed.
sitting on da chair, he held her frail right hand in his grasp

Tears wer now freely flowing down his cheeks
Daaminiii. why. cant u hear me
cant u feel anything
dun u remember our vows
holding her hand between both his, he touched it to his forehead
sliding down he brushed his lips against dem
da tears streamed down washing da 3 joined hands
*It looked like sumone from up der was cleasing dem wid holy water...*

Daaminiii...she stirred. it was not HIS voice. who was calling out to her??
she cud now see a blurry entity calling her tru da white lite
but, she wanted to sleep. relax. she had so many things to tell Prithvi
she cud feel PrithviS presence in da far distant
he was still disturbed
he was panicking for sum reason
Go away - she screamed at dat blurry entity.
i cant talk now
she felt herself pulled towards da white lite
wot are you doing. wer are you taking me
i cant come now. Prithvi needs me
we have jus got together. we have a long way to go
a long lasting lifetime to share together

Daminiii, I am not taking you anywer dear--
she interrupted da voice. cant u hear Prithvi crying
Cant u see his pain, she shouted in anguish. he needs me

Daminiii, Listen.
Dis is not about you my dear.
This call is not for you
You want to go back...go
watch...da voice pointed out

Damini saxena frowned at her confusion

Real men do not cry. but dat nite he defied dat logic
he cried for her. he cried for dem

*Prithvi !! Mr. Saxena U R Fired* His cell rang.
It was a common joke between da two
long time ago, wen he had first started his job as her personal bodyguard, his first day of work, he had reported late n she had gifted him his walking papers,
saying da now famous words *Mr Saxena, U R Fired*
De had made it his ringtone.

Hello? haa Avni. nahi she is not responding
tum wahi rehna. u r xpecting anytime in dis week
nahii, mujhe kuch sujh nahi raha hai
I need her.
Avniiiiiiiiii....he cud not continue... usse kuch nahi hona chahiye Avni
i... i cant go on widout her.
She has to come back to me
Haan me theek hu. Sameer Varun yahi hai.
He cut da line--

da white lite intensified.
Damini slowly turned away from da lite
she cud now see Prithvi looking at her still form
she felt his pain in her chest
was that wot de called soulmates??
wen one hurt, da other felt it
wen one cried, da other had da unxplained urge to wipe away da tears
she cud not see him like dis
she wanted to stop his pain...
maybe if she pleaded wid da upper gods... jus maybe

Her beepings slowed down
more doctors rushed in around her
Doctor, we r loosing her again...da nurse piped in

Prithvi felt his spine stiffen.
Damnini, i swear i will join u n pull u back from werever u are
we will alwaz be together. ALWAZ. u hear me !! Dont u dare leave me !!
Doctor !! Nurse !! do something
Sameer !! Varun !! help her!! help me god !!
dats wen he knew da meaning of *A chest pain*
He held onto her hand n tried to control his chest ache
He was seeing blurry.
He cud not see her features clearly inspite of the blaring lights in da room
Da beeps sounded low in volume
Da pain increased closing in on his sobs
last he heard Varun screaming near his right ear
*Sameer bhaiyya !! Prithvi bhaiyya ko bhi hum khone wale hai*

Damini saw him collaspe on da floor as he let her hand fall down on da bed
she watched his breathing slow down
she heard his rasp voice whisper da one word he lived for
Daaammmiiinnniii----------------
she watched as his eyes focused on her

Eye-Lock. dats all dat counted in dat one moment.

For da first time in 2 hrs, he smiled.
she smiled back.
For de both had crossed da white lite together.
Forever Entwined.

Da room hummed in silence.
Sameer Varun stood in shock
Doctors Helplessly looked around...

sumwer sumone was playing da old song on der ipod
in da hospital room nearby
* Hum bane tum bane ek duje ke liye,
Hmmmko kasam lage, Hmmmko kasam lage...
jo tere bin ek PAL bhi jiye*
while a Pheonix flew over da hospital...

to be continued----------------------

Precap

Ye kyaa kar rahi ho tum?
tum yaha kaise
Tum mere Toofaan se durr hi rehna
waise bhi wo tumhe mujhse jyaada pasand nahi karta
U R Fired !!

Raising one eyebrow she smirked at his attitude
sir, apke *GK* errr... i mean General Knowledge ke liye bata du
Mujhe yaha aapke papa, Mr Saxena ne appoint kia hai
to uss logic se..
Technically U cant fire me !!
mujhe aapka saaya banke rehna hai,
aap chaahe...
yaa naa chahe !!
He stormed outta his own room
muttering ye papa bhi na...

*skorpion*

Oththancha mohor:
another word from the Marathi dictionary
it means a treasure from da mouth.




Scene 01:
sau saal pehle mujhe tumse pyaar tha mujhe tumse pyaar tha
aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahegaa
sadiyon se tujhse milne jia bekaraar tha
aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahegaaaa

He stared at da ceiling,
rolled his eyes n scratched his forehead wid his right hand
un-knowingly mirroring his elder Chachus mannerismn
NOT again Maa, he frowned.
Wot was up wid his maa n old hindi songs on B4U channel early in da morn
every time da *awaaz de kaha ho* programme started
she upped da vol n listened to nostalgic songs
bringing on da waterworks.
Hmmmhare ghar me Glycerine bottle ki zarurat hi nahi hai
nodding his head he muttered n woke up.

Avniii, sone bhi do yaara. aaj to Sunday hai
sameer screamed tru his pillow, pulling da comforter over his head
Sameer, its 6am already. n u know how i listen to old songs.
Di ko kitne pasand the ye, tum jaante ho.
Jeej aur Di ki yaad me kho jaati hu me, ye dekhte.
Avni replied in hurt tone

oka baba. vol to low kariyo na. Avni
warna tera chota shaitaan uthke wapas yaha aa jayegaa
fir to Hamhariii shaitaaani ko mauka nahi milega...
Sameer ne nautanki se keh diya

Sameer !! sharam kario !! aur tum to ab uth hi lo...
Yaad hai na aaj shraadh hai unn donon ke naam
aur shaam ko Tarit ki 13th bday party bhi...
bete ki party ki tayyari kon karegaa eh
Varun Roshni aur Sharan kal raat hi aa gaye the
de wud be ready by now.

HAHA. ready n Roshni. bhai tumhari behen hogi...
par tumse to thoda jyada hi jaanta hu me usse.
Varun apna paper padh raha hoga.
10 saal ka bachcha Sharan, papa ko economic times ke phatte seekha raha hoga
aur Roshni dear apne palang pe kharrate maar rahi hogi.
Smirked in Sameer as he woke up to get ready...
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scene 02

He waited wid abated breath watchin outta da window
5 more minutes n touchdown.
He was back home after 12 long yrs.
25 now, he jus wanted to feel his motherland embracing him in her arms

Sharan stood outside, in da airport lobby wid searching eyes.
How wud it be to see ur elder brother after such a long time.
Though de wer cousins by relation,
Sharan idolised da ground his brother walked on.
He grinned. Der he was back from London school of Bizness Administration
Tarit bhaiyya was back. Now for good.

Bhaiyya, Sharan Waved wid both hands
Chotte. oi kaisa hai tu. Tarit shouted thru all da passengers
unaware of all da female glances he got, as he brushed passed dem.
to an onlooker, it was a double treat.
Tarit, tall handsome n a body to die for
in Blue jeans full sleeve black shirt folded upto elbows n a darker vest unbuttoned
Sharan, in semi formals. jus like his dad, sporting spectacles.
and a grin to die for
Handsome Hunks Alert at da airport.
it was da best kinda *Bird-A* watching ever.

Bhaiyya Chotte mat bolona. ab me bhi badaa ho gaya hu, Sharan pouted.
Tarit grinned.
Tu nahi sudhregaa. Mama Papa kaise hai Chote chachu aur Chachi??
ab bhi teddy ko chupaate hai tum log?? hahahahaha.
De got into da awaiting car zooming past traffic.
It felt gud to be back --- Tarit thot as he looked outside...

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Scene 03

Kya papa. 2 din huye nahi aur aap mujhe kaam pe lagana chahte hai
kya yahi dekhne ke liye aapne mammane mujhe bahar bheja tha.
mama. pl aap hi bolo kuch

Sameer, tum bhi na... before Avni cud complete her pleading...
Sameer interrupte-- Nahi Avni tum isme kuch naa bolio.
*Muftkhor* kahikaa. 2 din se dekh raha hu isse me
paani laao. khana laao. kapde iron karo jhoote saaf karo
bas order pe order diye jaa raha hai
Mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai
Sharan ko dekho kaise papa ka haath bataa raha hai.
Mene iske liye nayi secretary chunn li hai...
chupchaap kalse office aa jaana.
Sameer left da maa-beta open-mouthed as he left da dining room.

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Scene 04

*sadiyon se tujhse milne jia bekaraar tha, aaj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahegaaaa*

was da last he heard as he sat in da car to goto work.
Ye maa bhi naa itne saalon baad bhi
wahi gramophone ki tooti record baja rahi hai
Maa please channel change kariooooooooooooo------
he shouted outta da open window as da car glided smoothly
thru da Saxena Mansion gates

The first day of office is alwaz exciting.
errr unless u are in NO mood to work.
Being forced to do anything was HIS pet peeve.
upar se na jaane konsi bala aane wali thi uski secretary banne
Ufff papa. He muttered dis-approvingly
standing in his newly decorated office which was once his Bade ChachuS
He stared at da small golden decorative metal box used as a paper-weight.
1-2-3...seconds passed, den he didna know wot happened.
One second da box was on da table
da next second in his hand
n 3rd, wid a grin a mile wide, he flung it wid all his might at da office door

She did not know wot hit her on her forehead
as she opened da office door on her first day of job
but da next second she lay horizontal staring at da newly painted ceiling.
Sumthing flashed at da back of her mind.
Sumone touching sumones forehead wid his hand...applying sumthing
It was da tiniest flash.
She felt light headed.
As blood started oozing down da center of her forehead wer her hair parted
she heard...sumone say *aap theek to hai na*
she tried to touch da wet liquid
Rukiye !! mera matlab, aap....aap iss chott ko haath mat lagayiye
aapko infection ho sakta hai
she felt him blowing soothing air on her wound or was he breathing life for her, into her, as things went completely blank n she passed out...

Jinhe milna hai, wo to mil hi jaate hai
Hmmm yuhi bahane dhundte hai chupne ke.
Embrace da one who loves u, kya pata, Kal ho na ho.
skorpion

Swhaas, another word from da Marathi dictionary
It means Breath
Sumone sumwer may be happy in da thot dat you are still breathing.
Maybe un-knowingly, u r breathing for dem.

Originally posted by: skorpion

A long long long time ago... i had made an attempt to write a Short Story of a couple named PriDa. I did update it 3 times... Time does fly fast.


In an attempt to redeem mah miserable guilt of leaving finks incomplete,
i wud like to renew *Entwined* wid an update soon.

Since da last update was an year old, da thread is locked down.
so here is da RECAP of da earlier 3 updates.


Its not about getting sumone to click on LIKE icon.
mah satisfaction lie in da knowledge
dat u cud relate to da fictional characters i weave
as i pen down mah imagination.

JIIP'
skorpion.

ooooooo.. so u can be emotionally blackmailed... nice 😆

I remember this ff of urs very well.. u killed PriDa in the first two updates and got a whole load of unhappy people complaining.. esp Achkann 😛

Would absolutely love to read the next updates..

-- Mru

@panna yayyyy !!...u r back ....me bhery bhery happy ...w8ng fr part 4 ...i loooved all the three previous parts...bt cud nt comment as d thread was closed ...sooo glad ur taking up d story again as it was verrry interesting 😃..

@ mru kahan gayab thi aap madamji ??...missed u here !!

luv
khwahish😊

OMG PANNA.....😃

Pannnnaaaa !!

@Panna- Glad u decided to continue......Loved dis SS sply titles....dey hve really deep meaning......Wondering which Marathi word ur gonna use as Title of nxt part 😳......!!!

Waiting for it.....!!!

@ Khwaish-

See ur Mehnat is paying off 😉....really wish it vill bring some more writers out of hibernation 😛😳......!!!

Originally posted by: khwaish.e.arsh

..

@ mru kahan gayab thi aap madamji ??...missed u here !!

luv
khwahish😊

kahan gayab??? main yehiii thi .. sachiiii 😛 ...

-- Mru

Has it ever happened to you?? Wen sumone starts listing ur BAD qualities and are almost 99.99 % right, you tend to tune outta dat scene and ur mind starts playing songs u have heard in da last 24 hrs.
BUT have u ever wondered... outta da many songs u have heard, why ur mind chooses to settle on da one song dat loops in ur mind. Fink about it.
-Pannalogy101.

Kwhabon ki lifaafon me, Kisso ki kitaabon me,
Fursaton ki baaton me, Arson se khayaalon me
Thodi khoyi huyi, Kabse soyi huyi
Woh... Aadat hai wo...

dis was airing on LoopAirways.com/tarit-mind as Hitlerish Sameer Saxena was displaying his *DAD* personality.
It was jus a feeling of floating slightly above da room in an almost humanely impossible way. and as da song lyrics registered in Tarit's mind... he wondered wot wer da upper gods Hinting about.
Papa ne to sadde huye tamatar maarne the n he was trancing to sum unexplained SERENE n DREAMY feelings in his mind !!
Ye kaunsa tareeka tha unka !! He looked up at da ceiling n den turned his attention to his fav Chachu, Varun Saxena.

"Varun chachu, HELP" He whispered sideways outta da corner of his mouth widout moving his lips. Clearly Varun chachu was his last hope now. His ONLY hope !!
Hitler Dad, Sameer Saxena was hearing no more !!
2 din huye nahi the laut ke and he was already in dads bad books.
upar se he had sent his new secratary straight to Emergency Room on her first day of work. well dat wasna his fault. It was jus abt HER being in da wrong place at da wrong time. but da world saw sum finks der own way !!

"Arre, aise karte hai...Our farmhouse needs maintanance people and we are short staffed here to send one of our team members. so why dun we send Tarit n Dharini. I have seen her resume, she has sum farmhouse xperience and is not such a novice as Tarit. meanwhile we will wind up here. Its only a question of 1 week. go today n be bak by next sunday". Varun tried pushing da case to Sameer.

wot !! noway !! wer was Chachu getting dis !! SHE wid him?? well SHE can work here n i will take care of da property n who names der kid DHARINI. jeez wot a name. -Tarit murmured under his breath. He started to refute da offer, "DAD----"

But Sameer's expression stopped his refusal on his lips.
"Mr Tarit Saxena" !! Sameer paused. Tarit knew, dat tone was not gonna dwell well on his already panicked nerves.
"Since u r so responsible for her condition n docs have asked her to take it easy for a few days. ... OHH and she being new here... AND in need of a job !! Hmmm, BETAJI, get urself n her on da job.... she can rest a lil AND help you out wid da farm operations wen needed. Now u can use ur biz accumen for a better function"

Den Sameer smiled. Proud of his decision. sure in his heart dat sumwer above his Big Bro wud be proud of how he was dealing wid his irresponsible son. He had seen his bro use dis same tactic on him countless time and how dat had helped in shaping his character to wot he was today.

Tarit faked his trademark smile as he watched his HITLER dad walk outta da office followed by Varun chachu

Groaning loudly, Tarit ran a hand on his frustrated features as he took da stairwell to climb down da 7 floors from his dad's penthouse office.
OOOO He knew he was doomed. 1 week?? wid her tagging along?? Ms Prim and Proper?? Ms I can be a pain in ur pichwada secretary??

He stopped suddenly. His left hand went to his waistband pausing der and his right hand lifted to skratch his forehead. Pressing his lips together, he nodded his head to left n den to right. He tried remembering HER. as he continued down da stairs.

He remembered how she looked wen da door to his office had opened !!
He remembered how she felt craddled in his arms after he had tried to scoop da life outta her wid da box shaped paper weight last Monday!!
He also remembered how she had looked sleeping, wen he had visited her at da hospital in off-visiting hours.
All pale and... SERENE and DREAMY ... even in an overwashed overbleached old white hospital gown !!
da one dat had ridden upto her mid thigh from one side and accidently exposed a gud expanse of white baby soft skin...

Jeez !! dis had DISASTER written wid a capital *D* all over it.
ooo and didna *D** also stand for Dangerous ??
and how about...
D for... *D*harini?? yaa Dangerous Dharini !!
D for... *D*oom?? * yuP ! his life was deffo doomed da moment she
opened dat door
D for... *D*rastic?? drastically altering his choices for da next one
week
D for... *D*umb?? and why had he throw dat paper weight at dat
moment against dat dumb door.
D for... *D*estiny??... OKA wait a min... he didna like his train of thots... starting wid Dharini ----------- ending in Destiny....

By da time he climbed down da last step n reached da lobby,
He wished to ELIMINATE da alphabeth *D* from da English Language permanently !!


She lay on da white bed as it started again.
her mind was hurting as if sumone had casted a bad spell on her
her eyes wer shut tight. she tried opening dem to break da spell
Da echoing words wer playing again.
So many questions and no answers to calm dem.
she had heard dem countless time before. especially in da last 2 years
Da recurring occurance now worried her. If only der was sumone around to reply bak and stop dis loop. she tried to cheat her thots by being still. maybe if she pretended to be calm n silent de wud fink it didna bother her... she heard dem start again...

~~ Kaun hai jo ek saaye ki tarah
mere dil ko choota hua guzar jata hai
kabhi paas se kabhi dur se.
ek awaaz ek naghma
ek geet bankar rag rag me utar jata hai
kabhi paas se kabhi durr se.
kaun hai jo mujhe apne tanhayi ka ehsaas
dena chahta hai
ek khalipan soonapan chorr jata hai.
Me usse dekhna chahti hu jaan-na chahti hu
ungliyon se uske chehre ko choona chahti hu.
Kaun hai jo paas rehkar bhi mujhse durr hai
kadmon ki aahat sunti hu palat-ti hu usse dekhti hu
tasveer ban jaati hu
khudko bhool jaati hu bekhud ho jaati hu
kaun hai wo... ~~

She woke up wid a gasp. Da doctors had agreed to discharge her tomorrow. The bandages wrapped around her head wud be replaced by a band-aid on her forehead.
Her boss Mr Sameer Saxena had smiled gently and told her, she cud keep her job. She didna know wer her life wud twistedly take her. But she was ready to welcome it wid open arms. and NO one in da world was gonna stop her from working as Mr Tarit Saxena's secratary.
She lay her head slowly back on da pillow staring up at da ceiling fan.
Counting da hrs... to a bright new sparkling morning...

hey panna!!

nyc update ...

Dharini ...i like this name... i had a frnd who had dis name...means earth right !!...
u know i had thought of this name fr PriDa daughter ..cuz it means "Prithvi" and sounds like " Damini"

waise Tarit seems kinda bratty / naughty...nd Dharini luks lyk a no nonsense kinda girl ...lets see how d story shapes up ..punarjanam nd all...

Is dharini trying to remember those things in the hospital??.. is she gonna be the first to remember the past.. very intriguing !! ....bt u r known fr ur surprises so i'm not guessing anythng right now ...
par i like d idea of them in a farmhouse fr 1 wk together😉

And i also liked d hospital wala thought of Tarit ..😉😛

w8ng fr next part

luv
khwahish😊