CID Story: The Missing Rani

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Gamayun

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

A very nice and fresh story Shreya .... I liked it quite a lot !!! Nice to see a new writer here with a very very nice story. Simple and in flow ... I liked the way you handled the whole plot !!!! Will try post a detailed review later but in short great job buddy 👏 hoping to read more from you soon !!!

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anonymous7

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice one ................. shreya..............👏👏👏

will do the review later..........

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

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Posted: 14 years ago

👏fantastic story!! i liked it!!👏

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Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago

WOW!! very nice story shreya.

gr8 work..

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Nandini

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Posted: 14 years ago

Shreya just finished reading it. Its fabulous. The treatment of the plot is very smooth. Entirely iin flow. Well done👏

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visrom

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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely story Shreya....do keep writing more. I feel like believing that this is the 'Kolhapur ke palace ka raaz' which most of us missed due to the match. 😆

Just a few things....some of the spellings are a bit confusing - like 'woh chiki hogi, cheli hogi'....it should have been 'chillayi...'. I know it's tough writing Hindi in English scipt. Otherwise it was a nice refreshing change to see a purely investigative story here.👍🏼

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Gamayun

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom
Lovely story Shreya....do keep writing more. I feel like believing that this is the 'Kolhapur ke palace ka raaz' which most of us missed due to the match. 😆

Just a few things....some of the spellings are a bit confusing - like 'woh chiki hogi, cheli hogi'....it should have been 'chillayi...'. I know it's tough writing Hindi in English scipt. Otherwise it was a nice refreshing chance to see a purely investigative story here.👍🏼

Thanks for your great comments. 😃

I noticed the same spelling error when I was proofreading my work this morning. I'll be fixing the spelling errors by tomorrow. It's a problem with me. When I have a really good idea, I like to get it on paper before I forget and that's when I make spelling errors. 😆