let's play Chinese whispers

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Posted: 14 years ago
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let's play something, the episode today didn't makes us happy...........let's play a game....

We need to give each other a task related to the Saathiya show or not, up to you, but should be something funny, once you complete a task asked you then suggest a task someone else to perform.

I will start..............I want the first person to write a phone conversation between Kinjal and her ex Umang when he finally decides to call her, remember it needs to be funny.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ill play it but, the funny convo of kinjal/ umang I cannot write it, I want something with aehem bicceps ave love it, am jumping around already, ill know something funny of his biccep convo with gopi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's only fair since i suggested this awkward task, i should start...lol, then you go Ayesha.

Ring, ring...

Umang - Kinjal did you change your phone number.

Kinjal - No, who is this?

Umang - Don't play coy Kinjal, who else rings you at this time of day normally, it's your boyfriend.

Kinjal - I have no boyfriend.

Umang - What.

Kinjal - If I had a boyfriend, he wouldn't have gone away on the night me and my family were coming to exchange gifts with your family and put a huge lock on the door.

Umang - Kinjal love you misunderstood, I said I was going to the US, to inform my family personally of my proposal to your family and our future marriage. I didn't say you must come with Shagun.

Kinjal - What, where are you?

Umang - I'm outside your house, let me in through the back door..........go downstairs and switch of the fuse, so there should be a power cut in your house, and open the back door for me, I'll sneak in like before....I really need to see, I've missed you so much. 😆

Kinjal - (huge blush on her cheeks) Quiet that's old news....You haven't asked how I've been or how my family took the news that you disappeared.

Umang - (woof woof, sniff) ouch, my trousers my leg bachau bachau a dog is attacking me......it's got huge teeth.....a doberman.

Kinjal - Umang are you in our yard.....Aham has got two dobermans as house keeps getting broken into by Urmila Aunty at night 😉, our guards are lax 😆, so the dogs provide further security....Are you okay?

Umang - Don't ask stupid question..........of course I'm not okay, ouch, my trousers are in tatters, I had to run and jump the fence...😛

Kinjal - Umang, Umang...

Umang - I'm so embarrased your rajkot neighbours are looking...😆😆 I need to get out of hear...(phone goes silent).
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Okay my turn-
Aehem was in the room naked he still got his trousers on. Gopi saw his 6packs his bicceps and his whole body. Gopi went near and suddenly aehem was ignoring her. Her biicceps speaks up(inner voice) eh gopi, itna sharma kyun rahi ho, tumhara pati to samne hai, koi na laik mard, stranger nahi stop blushing. Gopi looked up in a state of shock she just heard aehem talking to her. Aehem looks down smilling as he knew his inner self was talking to her about bicceps. She bumps into him and manages to hold his bicceps tightly and spoke in a awkward manner, hai hai, intni badi cholai doliye (bicceps) tough, strong, bachna parega aehem modi sai thapar mar dala to mar jaonge na bhi na, mujko nahi chahiye aisa. Pati who is strong and will hit you for nothing. She comes back to the reality and sees aehem looking at her in a shock and burst out laughing. She just there got embarrassed, made 5 minute eye contact with him and ran out of the room full of shyness and embarrassment.

Next person think of something how jigar manages to find out rahi-urmi kalakarni and aehem finds out gopi sachai, and exposes it to everyone and right there, gohem romantic scene at night with closed door, while jigar and rashi sorting out their problems (hint this should be a short oneshot either post it here or a new thread named - bada tamasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'll write that one-shot for you ayesha, but I won't be able to post it untill tomorrow. Is that fine?

Next person - this is a humerous piece. I wanna read a funny conversation between Kinjal and Jigar, when they are both talking about how much of a mama's boy their Ahem bhai is.

Yuks
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alright yuks, ill wait till tomorrow
can't wait for os-bada tamasha
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Short Story One Shot.

Jigar is at the office, thinking about what happened overnight how his wife disappeared from their bed and did not return only find her outside at 5 in the morning, with the door locked from the inside............Jigar is thinking how did she get outside.......yes she said through the back door, but why, if the milk man comes in through the front, why did she go through the back way......something is not right. I need to go home, something must be worrying my poor wife, that's why she is unable to sleep at night...he packs up and goes into Aham's office to inform him that he is leaving early.

In Aham's office

Jigar knocks and calls out before he enters "Aham", no-one is in there, Aham's secretary informs Jigar that Aham has gone home for a short while. Jigar frowns, something must be definitely wrong at home, I must rush home immediately. He tries to get Aham on the phone.

Ring ring.
Aham - Hello

Jigar - bhai, what's the matter?

Aham - You called me what do you mean what's the matter (purses his lips) 😆

Jigar - bhai, I just spoke to your secretary she said you rushed home, what's happened bhai, is Rashi okay?

Aham - Rashi? She was prancing around with fumigators and her mother when I left the house, we have cockroach invasion upstairs in Naani's room, come to think about it, I saw a cockroach in our room too.

Aham is thinking Naani is right the MM is a bhootkhana house if he ever saw one 😆

Jigar - Ok bhai, see you later.

Aham - hold on a minute, why are you so worried about Rashi.

Jigar explains about Rashi being restless the night before and her standing outside early in the morning, with a locked door behind her...

Aham - they you go we have our bhoot your wife...........😆 (she went through a locked door)

Jigar - What?

Aham - Never mind, what's on your mind Jigar?

Jigar - I haven't a clue she made up some excuse about retrieving water in the dark, like we don't have running taps in the house, I don't believe her bhai, what sort of eyes she's got to see in the dark...😛

Aham - 🤣, rofl (bhoot, bhoot) ....stutters whilst laughing, this is intriguing, I will just wait for you, I'm just about to enter the car. See you soon.

Jigar rushes home, finds Aham on the phone with a business contact and they enter the house together....before the enter, they decide to tackle the sisters separately, each to their spouse.

Jigar goes looking for Rashi. He hears Khaki (Kokila) shouting what are you doing with my mothers chest...he follows her voice and finds Rashi there. He watches the interaction and when Khaki leaves he approaches Rashi and asks to see her in their room, he goes towards the room, halfway there he realises after Rashi's untruth this morning, she would probably confide in her mother as they were extremely close, so he retraces his steps back to where they were, and hides behind a pillar.

Urmila is smiling and telling Rashi - It's done our plan worked, we have swapped chests and the real chest belongings are ours.

Rashi - Yes Mummy, I cannot wait, i've been dreaming what is in that chest for such a long time, I bet it's some huge gems.

Jigar is frowning listening to all this.

Whilst the other brother Aham, is finding it difficult to approach Gopi, as he never usually speaks to her unless she approaches him first, especially in the kitchen where Gopi was, he never goes in there normally. He decides to cancel his meetings for today, and just observe his wife and see if anything is up at home and if Gopi was involved.

Meanwhile Rashi lures Gopi outside of the MM on the premise that Naani was leaving soon and they were to buy gifts for her leave taking. She makes an excuse about being thirsty and they leave the rickshaw and walk towards the well, Aham meanwhile follows the two of them in his car, at a respected distance, so as not to be noticed by them...he parks the car by the turn-off (tarmac and dust road) and follows on foot, he can see Rashi carrying a huge parcel covered with a gold cloth, his thinking what have these two stolen from the house and where are they taking it, shall he ring the police, no he can't do that, it will be in all the papers, business man catches his wife and sister's theft on the outskirts of town 😆 (police were notorious for tipping off the press), he decided to follow and instead rings Jigar.

Ring ring.

Aham - Jigar, something is definitely up, you should get over here immediately, i'm following them in the busy 😆, i've parked the car at the turn-off (he describes the place) you can't miss it, get over here sharpish.

Jigar - sitting in Khaki's room, where he had been explaining the conversation he overheard is shocked, hangs up and explains all to Khaki and Naani.

Kokila decides immediately, I'm coming with you, Naani said, it's my chest, I'll tag along too.

Jigar drives to the right place, parks his car next to Aham and follows, but there is no-one in site, Naani starts complaining Jiten you have got us lost now, No Naani (Jigar says), takes his cell out and rings Aham.

Aham - Are you here?

Jigar - Yes, but we can't see you.

Aham - We?

Jigar - Yes, Khaki and Naani are with me.

Aham - (curses under his breath) Jigar why did you do that.

Jigar - bhai they insisted what could i do...😆

Aham - Okay, Okay, follow the dust path, and I have opened my fountain pen and left ink spots on leaves/branches and tree trunks as we turned off the path. You can't miss it, as it's hundred yards from the dust path.

Jigar - Okay bhai, i've found your first ink stained branch, i'm behind you. 😉

Meanwhile at the well, all is playing out as we saw in todays' episode. Gopi is about to go down the well.

Aham observes with a beating heart as Gopi goes into the well, she starts making sounds of distress, the clenches his teeth, he felt it was about time to alert them of his presence.

As he was about to step out, he sees a flash of his Mum's and Naani's bright saree's. He turns to wait for them to plan they approach of the trio by the well.

Kokila asseses the situation and stops Aham speaking, she doesn't want to risk Gopi getting hurt going into the well, as her screams could be heard of spiders and possible snakes in the well.

She marches over there and challenges the trio, the guy a passer-by quickly announces he doesn't know the ladies and leaves, Rashi and Urmila quickly make up a lie about Gopi having stolen the chest and dropped it into the well.

Kokila says - is that so, Gopi Vau are you okay.

Gopi - Yes mother i'm fine.

Kokila urges Aham to pull her up, meanwhile she confronts Urmila and Rashi.

Jigar's face is also stone faced (resembling thunderous facial expression).

When the UrShi duo continue to lie, Naani takes her slipper and starts wacking Urmila over the head and shoulders. 😆 😆 Saying all the while, she's your daughter what example are you stating that it's okay to steal from your elders and lie about it. On seeing this Kokila instead of stopping her mother, takes her own slipper out and starts hitting Rashi😛

By this time Gopi is out of the well but she has scratches on her arms where the branches in the well have punched her arms slightly. Aham grabs her and is looking for serious bites on her from scorpions/snakes etc and keeps asking her if she is okay, as he heard her terrified screaming.☺️

The UrShi duo seeing Aham attending Gopi requested Jigar to help them, Jigar said on one condition you admit you stole this chest, as I overheard to speaking about earlier today in the hallway, I heard everything (he explained their conversation) The UrShi duo looked at each other realising the Jig was up and accepted they were the ones that stole the chest.

The all turned away from the scene and returned to the MM, Rashi and Urmila looking like ragamuffins, with tattered sarees dust all over them, Gopi shaken after her ordeal in the well, Aham carried her to the car, once in the car he left her in the backseat with his mother and drove the car home. Jigar put the chest in the trunk of his car, guided the rugamuffins into the back seat and Naani also sat in that car, Jigar locked the doors in the back, from the drivers side incase of any escapee attempts...😆

Aham arrived at the MM first and carried Gopi upstairs, his interest in the chest minimal, he was more concerned with his wife and needed to tend her wounds before infection set in. On entering their room he set her down on the bed and went into the bathroom for a basin of water a washcloth, savloy etc. He tended her himself, with some minimal protest from Gopi, who was hearing lalala in her ears and was very happy to see Aham showing so much concern for her wellbeing.

Jigar arrived in the hall and explained all that happened to his mother, Hetal, they had a long discussion as what should be done, Naani made the final decision as the belongings stolen were hers, she felt the lure dangled in front of Rashi was very strong by herself and she understood what the driving force behind the theft, she decided that Urmila was a bad influence on Rashi and this plan came from her, it was her decision that the police should not be called as long as Urmila was to no enter the MM again and Rashi was to be watched closely by all family members as she had an itchy fingers syndrome 😆, Jigar was unhappy with Naani's decision and he went up to their room, Urmila left the house, looking down and ashamed. Rashi also ashamed having been caught, followed Jigar up to the room.

Jigar said to Rashi, get yourself cleaned up, I can't stand to look at your devious face, in the future I would like you to wear a pallu and hide your face from me, when you see me. Now go away from here. Rashi took a change of clothes, and went into the bathroom, she had a wash and changed clothes (it was evening now), she walked into the room, Jigar said, without looking at her, I'm going to the kitchen for a glass of milk, don't expect me to get you a glass, don't do anything for me and I won't for you, remember Rashi you are on a trial period, if I see you step out of line you will be banished like your mother........by the way take some new bed linen and lay it on the floor, I don't care to share my bed with a thief.😆













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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is my small attempt at short OS, Hope you like it.


Ahem Takes Care of Gopi


Rashi and Gopi return to MM without the sandook, Gopi was unabel to retrive the sandook from the well, it was too heavy, She has numerous scratches on her arms and back from the loolse twigs in the well, she feels her arms and back burning from all the scratches, she must hide those so the family does not see them. Rashi sneaks them in the house, everyone is in the dinning hall having afterenoon tea.


They think they have gotten away, unaware that Ahem was watching them from behind the pillar, he had come back home early, he had felt restless even after coming home ealier in the day with and excuse to see Gopi. As soon as he saw her walking in the house, he knew something was wrong, these days he was so in tune with her he immediately notices when something is wrong with her, like the other day when he turned and saw that she was crying he had felt her pain, god knows what was happening to him ever since holi.


He waited for her to go in their room and followed her, when he got to the room he could hear the water running, he closed and locked the door, he was going to find out what was going on.


Gopi came our of the bathroom patting her arms dry, she had washed all the grime from her arms, but could not reach her back, when she saw Ahem standing there watching her she froze in her place and started shaking.


Ahem was shocked to see her reaction, why is she scared? He slowly walked towards watching her with narrowed eyes, he stopped in front of her and took her chin in her hand and made her look at him and said what's wrong? Are you hurt?


Gopi starts stammering, which surprises him even more, because she hadn't done that in a while, he looked at her strenly, Gopi don't lie to me I can tell something is wrong, now tell me or I will call mom in here.


When she still stands there silently he takes her arms and looks at the scratches and inhales sharply after seening all the scratches and immediately gets angry and shouts what have you done to yourself? Seeing the immediated tears in her eyes and her flinch, he immediately calms down takes her to the bed and sit her down and go and gets the first aid box.


He cleans the scratches with, when she flinches away with pain he blows air on it to soothe her after he applies ointment on them he asked her if she is hurt anywhere else, she says her back, he immediately sets her side ways and move her hair out of the way and takes care of the scratches in the back the same way.


After he puts everything away, he kneels in front of her and takes her hands in his and says, now suppose you tell me how you got scratched all over.


Gopi sits there silently so he goes on and says on holi you told me you would do anything to keep me happy, now tell me just to make me happy.

Gopi could not deny him that so she told him the whole sordid story, Ahem was angry 😡and scared on her behalf, how could Urmi and Rashi do this to his sweet wife, she could have been bitten by a poisonous snake or spider, and realized she could have died and that scared him more, he sat beside her and took her in his arms, he was so scared of loosing her, he was shaking all over.


😲Gopi shocked says Ahemji, are you Ok?


He says no I am not ok, I could have lost you today, and you would have never known how much I care for you, Promise me you will never do this again, swear on me that you will never do what Rashi tell you.


Gopi says, but Ahemji...


Ahem stops her no promise me and swear on me, if you love me you will do this for me.


Gopi finally promised and sweared on him that she will never do anything to upset him like this again.


He held her even tighter and said from now on no one is going to use you like this and that's my promise to you.❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow this game shows how desperate we all are too get some action in SNS lolz




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Shilpa,

I like this paragraph the best..".They think they have gotten away, unaware that Ahem was watching them from behind the pillar, he had come back home early, he had felt restless even after coming home ealier in the day with and excuse to see Gopi. As soon as he saw her walking in the house, he knew something was wrong, these days he was so in tune with her he immediately notices when something is wrong with her, like the other day when he turned and saw that she was crying he had felt her pain, god knows what was happening to him ever since holi."

wowee, the lovebirds are in tune.........oh i'm so happy that I can read this on a Saturday, you've made my day friend.

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