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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: rubal223
interesting ff please update next part

thanks rubal for your comment....

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: stary_kajal

thanks yar you are such a sweetheart... and u know i always wait for your comment...bec i know no one read my ff except u sometime others do, this makes me really sad, but i cant stop writting just because of you........thank u so much dear..

aww sweetheart i think they do read it but hav been put off with the whole MR leaving issue thats been goin on 4 a while...hardly any1 comes online ukno

aww ur soo sweet hun

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

aww sweetheart i think they do read it but hav been put off with the whole MR leaving issue thats been goin on 4 a while...hardly any1 comes online ukno

aww ur soo sweet hun

ya i agree totally with that but it was like that before MR was leaving the show...

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Next part-49

Baazi picks up the call and listen something and he smiles and nodes his head….

Baazi smiles and hand down phone… he sees AS and comes to her…

Baazi: aayi woh meera aatya ka phone tha…woh milney aa rahi hai….

AS: theek hai…lakin kya baat hai baazi…

Baazi: pata nahi koi khush kabhri deni hai….

AS: acha theek hai…

Meera and suraj comes with shalini to Patil niwas…AS, dutta, baazi and swarali

is there… nakku is in kitchen with babi…

Suraj: aayi sahib namskar jaldi sey mithai khilaiyee….

AS: ha ha khilatey hai batayi toh kyu?

Suraj: hum aapki roop ke liye bahut acha rishta laaye hai…

AS: kya aayi jagdambey…kaun hai….yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai…

Meera: aayi sahib ladka sena mey officer hai naam hai pratyush dash {iqbal

khan}…bahut acha pariwaar hai aur aaj sham ko milney aa rahey hai…

AS: yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai…

Dutta: mey nakku ko bata hu…

Nakku chai {tea} ki tray laatey huey: hmm mujhe bataney ki zarurat nahi hai

mujhe pata chal chuka hai….

Swarali {neha bomb}: arey vahini aapney mujhe bula liya hota…

Nakku: hmm hum kya nayi naveli dulhan sey ghar ka kaam aata hai…

Meera: nakku beta kaun sa mahina chal raha hai…

Nakku feels shy: ji 4 mahina…

Meera: toh kya hoga dutta ladka ya ladhki

Dutta: jo bi ho bas bappa ki marzi hai…

Suraj: acha aayi sahib ek aur baat kehni thi uska ladke ka ek dost hai jo humari

beti shalini {ziveedha} ko dekhney aa rahey hai..woh bi sena mey hai….

AS: yeh toh bahut achi baat hai… kyu na dono ladhkiyo yahi par who dono pariwaar dekh le…aakhir shalini humari beti hai…. Kyu kala?

Kala: ji aayi sahib, aap bilkul sahi bol rahi hai…

AS: nakku ko hum koi kaam karney nahi de saktey, isliye aaj ki sari tayaari ki

zimedari tumari hai… hum madhu {rucha gujrati} ko phone karti hu….

Scene shift:

Madhu is sitting on bed silently and she is imaging shabd {aditya redji} with her…

she puts her head on his chest… she closes her eyes.. shabd uske seer pey kiss

karta hai..lakin achank phone ki ganti sunayi padti hai… madhu ki neend khul

jaati hai…

madhu: aayi kaisi hai aap?

AS:hum theek hai meri bacchi tum kaisi ho?

madhu: mey theek hu aayi, bhau kaisa hai aur nakku?

AS: woh sab theek hai...acha ab humari baat suno roop aur shalini ko dekhney

ke liye ladhkey waaley aa rahey hai... hum chahtey hai ki is maukey pe tum

yaha humarey sath raho..

madhu: aayi aap jaanti hai mey waha kaisey aa sakti hu... ab mey vidwaah hu is

khushi ke awsaar pey ek vidwaah ka aana theek nahi hoga...

AS😭😭😭... dutta takes phone: madhu tum theek ho na ghar aa rahi ho na..

madhu: bhau mey nahi aa sakti...

dutta: kyu...

madhu: bhau....

dutta:acha theek hai jaisey tujhe sahi lagey....theek hai tera bhau hamesha tere

sath hai...

madhu: jee bhau... {she cuts the phone}

Dutta: aayi woh nayi aayegi...

AS: humari bacchi na jaaney kya hoga uska...

baazi: kaisey nahi aayegi woh.. mey lekar aaungi...

AS: baazi tu lekar aayega humari bachi ko...

baazi: jee aayi sahib.......

kala claps: waah baazi waah meri behan ko mandap ke bich mey chodhkar ek toh

tumney kisi aur sey shaadi kkar li aur ab usey leney ka naya natak...

baazi: taayi yeh aap kya keh rahi hu....

kala:jo bi keh rahi hu sahi keh rahi hu...

baazi sees AS, dutta and goes from there........

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Part-50

Hey frnds this is my last update in this ff as things are really going worse..so i have decides to finish this ff...

kishore comes and slaps kalavati... kalavati sees kishore with shocked eyes.. leela and suresh is also there...AS, bhau and nakku sees in shocking mode... kala stands up...

kala: tumney mujhe thapad maara, himat kaisey hui tumari...

kishore slaps her again....

kishore: tum jitni baar himat ki baat karogi utni baar hi mey tumhey yeh thapad maarunga...

kala: kishore....

kishore: bas kala bas....mainey kaha tha na ki jis din mey bolunga us din sirf aur sirf tum sunogi... sharam aati hai mujhe tumhey apni patni kehtey huey...

AS: kishore beta yeh tum kya bol rahey ho........

kishore: maag kijye aayi sahib lakin aaj mey jo kehna chahta hu...woh aap sabko sun na hoga... aakhir aapko bi us is kalavati ki sachai pata chalega...

Dutta:kishore yeh tum kya keh rahey ho...

kishore: bahut naazi hai na apko apni kala tayi pe bhau, arey jis din is nich aurat ki hakikat pata chalegi na us din aapka bhai aur behan ke rishtey sey barosa uth jaayega......

flashback: {kishore tells dutta about kala, sounds mute...camera rotates}

{dutta shaadi scene comes, letter scene comes, nakku white face, attack on dutta everythigs......dutta becomes shocked😲}

dutta with teary eyes😭😭😭: taayi aisa kyu kiya tumney...

kala sees dutta😭😭😭: bhau....

dutta😡😡😡: bas kala bas bhau nahi mar gayi tu aaj sey merey liye...kya kami tujhe is ghar mey..yeh sab toh tera hi tha...ek baar tuney kaha toh hota tera bhau tujh pe sab kuch kurbaan kar deta...lakin tuney bhai-behan ke rishtey ko hi khatam kar diya...kyu kala kyu aisa kiya...

kala:bas dutta bas.....mujhe itna kuch sunaney ki zarurat nahi hai tumhey.. kya kaha tune hastey hastey sab nichawar kar deta.....arey bikh mey nahi chahiye tera ehsaan....kala ney aaj tak sab kuch apney aap hasil kiya hai..

AS comes and gives her a tight slap...

kala sees AS eith teary eyes😭😭😭

AS: chiiii sharam aati hai humhey kala ki tum humari beti ho.....nahi humari kala aisi nahi ho sakti.....kaun ho tum ha kaun ho tum..itni nafrat woh bi us bhai sey jo tum behano pe apni jaan chidhkata hai...Galti tumari nahi hai humari galti hai...humari parwarish mey khot hai...arey naag bi apney bachey ko dassney sey pehaley sau baar sochta hai aur tum kala ...chi isey acha toh tum humari kok mey hi mar jaati humhey kya pata tha ki hum beti ko nahi is ghar ke dushman...

kala goes in big shock...😲.. she runs to her room and lock the door from inside... Dutta runs behind him...he kocks the door...

dutta: kala kala darwaaza khol kala...

kala takes out the gun from drawz... she opens the door... she hides gun in her saree pallu.....she comes out...she comes in a centre of a hall...she turns to everyone...

kala: nafart kartey hai mujse aap log kijiye jitni kar saktey hai... lakin mey bhauu sey nafrat karti hu...baba gaye unki maut ka zimedar bi yahi tha ab mey ja rahi hu toh meri maut ka bi yahi zimedar hai...she takes out gun and puts on her chin...

dutta trys to come to her...AS, nakku all of them shocked, leela and roops are crying...

kala: wahi khadey ho jao bhau....warna mey goli chala dungi.... merey marney ke baad meri laashi ko koi hath nahi lagayega na hi yeh bhau.. leela aur roopmati meri laash ko kahi dafna dena...

AS: kala yeh tu kya keh rahi hai...

kala: kyu bahut rona aa raha hai aayi sahib, jab mujhe kos rahi thi tab kyu nahi yaad aayi meri...

baazi trys to stop her....but in vain... she smiles {last evil smile} aur goli ki awaazzzzzzzz............sound beeeeeeeeep........background is blank..... grey shades of colour on every faces... AS shouts "kala......"

leela: tayyyyiiiiiiii

roops: kala tayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyi

baazi and swarali are shocked....... naku is crying.......dutta sits down kala deadbody.....he trys to touch but he remembers her words..... babi takes naaku in she is pregnant....Screen becomes blank....

After 5 year...

AS is standing in front of kala pic and crying...dutta comes to AS holds her from behind... roop is now married to pratyush dash {iqbal khan} having one daughter {aashi}, shalini {zeevdha} is married to shourya {karan tacker} having one son {abhay} and madhu is married to viren dash {aamir ali pratyush bigger bro} she is expecting...leela is having two daughters {panchi} and {prachi}.. here comes nakku with two sons one is 3 yrs old and one 1 yrs old... name is {aarav} close to her mom nakku and second is {sanskaar} very close to dutta...

baazi and swarali {neha bomb} is having one son his name is {daksh} he is very close to dutta...anay went to america with kishore...

all of them are happy.....

camera man: chaliye ek family pic ke ho jaaye....

all of them stands up... and says "cheese......" everyone smiles.... click

here comes below pic...

with love to viewers and readers of ff

dutta shri ram and patil family.......

the end.....

bye frnds..........miss u......