neww ff Der na ho jaye kahi...

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HI FRIENDS...........


hey frnds i am fan of mishal raheja akka dutta bhau and since kafi dino baad i am on lagi tujse lagan forums... So i want to start new ff Hope u will enjoy..... As we knw that kaala, roops and leela, sudesh is planning to take over baji position... so ab aagey kya......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting new ff and welcome to the forum you will enjoy it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-1

Naku aur bhau ke bich mey kuch bi theek nahi chal raha hai.... kaala apni chaalo sey ek baad ek naku ko kamzor banaey ki koshish kar rahi hai... Naku bhau ke liye khaana bana rahi hai kitchen mey madhu ke sath....😊.... Madhu naku sey kehti hai "vahini, aap itna bardshat kaisey kar leti hai...., jab ki aap achey sey janti hai aap ki koi galti nahi hai...." Naku kehti hai "madhu mey janti ki mey sahi hu lakin mey yeh bi janti hai ki sahib mujse bahut pyar kartey hai..."..... Madhu says "aap bi na vahini, bhau ke liye paagal hai..."

Kaala pichey khadi baateey sun rahi hoti hai "nakusha, naku vahini, vahini sunna kitna acha lagta hai... haina..... lakin tumara yeh sapna kaala ki hotey huey kabhi sach nahi hoga...., kyunki bhau toh sirf meri sunta hai aur aagey bi meri hi sunega..... samaj gayi.... ab chal jaldi khaana bana"... Naku ki aankho mey aansu😭 aa jatey hai ur woh wapas khaana bananey lagti hai.....

Bhau wapas aata hai aur khaana khaney beith jaata hai.... Aayi saheb bi aa jati hai kaala, leela, roops, baji aur madhu ke sath.... Naku sabko khaana parso ti hai... Bhau jaisey hi ek niwla muh mey daalta hai.... usey samaj mey aa jaata hai aur naku ki tarf dekhta hai.... aur uth jaata hai.. Aayi sahib "kaey jaala dutta tu khaana kyu nahi kha raha hai"... Dutta says "kuch nahi aayi sahib mujhe bukh nahi hai..."

Naku bhau ko jaata dekhti hai............

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊Next Part-2

Naku room mey jaati hai bhau ke pass jaati hai aur kehti hai "sahib mey jaanti hai ki aap mujse bahut naraz hai lakin mera gussa khaaney pe kyu nikaal rahey hai sahib, kuch kha lijiye........" Dutta naku ki taraf dekhta aur kehta hai "aey naku mey tujse itni nafrat karta hu, din raat tujse tang karta hu......., lakin tu phir bi merey sey itna pyar karti hai..... kyu naku?.... Akhir kyu?.....😊......

Naku bhau sey kehti hai "sahib aayi kehti hai ki nafrat ko pyar sey jeeta ja sakta hai, dushmani ko sirf dosti sey hi jeeta ja sakta hai... mey bi aapki nafarat ko apney pyar se jeetna chahti hu......" Dutta naku ki taraf dekhta hai..... both have a eye lock...... dutta apna hath naku ki taraf badta hai ki tabhi kaala aaa jaati hai.........

Dutta kaala ki taraf dekhta hai aur kehta hai "arey kaala tayi aap mujhe bula liya hota...." Kaala 😈 says "apney bhau se milney ke liye mujhe kisi ko kehney ke zarurat nahi hai.... kyu vahini mainey sahi kaha na...... naku sees kaala........ Kaala dutta sey kehti hai "bhau mujhe tuse kuch baat karni hai......."

She takes bhau with her..........

if u like my post plz do comment......

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next part-3

Dutta kaala sey kehta hai "nahi tayi nahi yeh nahi ho sakta aap yeh soch bi kaisey sakti hai........" kaala dutta sey "lakin bhau ismey haraz hi kya hai agar roop aur baazi ka lagan ho jaaye......." Dutta kehta hai "tayi baazi mere dost hai mey usey achey sey jaanta hu woh kabhi bi is shaadi ke liye tariyar nahi hoga......." Kaala says to dutta " dekh dutta ek na ek din toh roops ki shaadi honi hi hai toh kyu na abhi aur roops tumari nazro ke saamney rahegi toh ek tasli bi rahegi aayi sahib ko, mujhe aur tujhe bhau... maanza bhau..... Dutta says to kaala "theek hai tayi mey bazi sey baat karta hu......."

Madhu Bazi sey kehti hai baazi "mujhe shopping karni hai tu mujhe le chalega shopping pey........" Baazi bolta hai "ha na rey mey le kar chalta terko lakin pehaley apun ko thoda kaam hai mey woh niptakar aata uske baad apan chaltey..... theek hai.....".. Madhu bolti hai "theek hai baazi"...
Roops kaala sey kehti hai "kaala tayi yeh aap kya bol rhi hai mey aur baazi sey shaadi........ leela is shocked😲.... Nahi tayi nahi mey yeh shaadi nahi kar sakti".... Leela says "aakhir kyu tayi humari roops ke liye baazo hi kyu".......

Kaala thoda rukar bolti hai "mey janti hu ki tum logo ke maan mey bahut sawaal uth rahey hai ki mainey bhau ko aisa kyu bola.... lakin tum yeh nahi janti ho ki bhau aur baazi ke bich mey deewar khadi karney ka yehi ek raasta hai........"... Leela says "lakin kaisey tayi.........." Kaala says "tum bas dekhtey jao ki mey kya karti hu........"

Everyone sees kaala and kaala gives a big smile😃...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of welcome to the forum:) u will love it.. second wonderful FF... I loved both parts.. and this kala.. she just seems to pop up anytime tasha r having close romantic moment uff.. I think she has like sixth sense that tasha are alone or something.. ha ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much for ur comments and love friends......... i need ur support frnds............so do comments......


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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserved😊

SOrry for the late reply, busy with exams.. i am loving this FF so far. it is really nice.. and what is this kala wants roops-baaji marriage?? W*F??? pls add me to ur PM list thanx

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved all the 3 parts dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next Part-4

Baazi apna kaam pura karke wapas aata hai aur madhu sey kehta hai ki "chal madhu abhi mey fool to free hai abhi mey terey ko shopping pe le kar chalta.........." Madhu kehti hai "theek hai bas mey abhi tayar hokar aati hu... tu eithey mazi partiksha kara....." Baazi says "ho bar bar par aeey lokar ha......" Madhu says "ho"....

Naku madhu ko jhumtey huey jaatey dekhti hai aur kehti hai "madhu aaj badi khush lag rahi ho, kaha ja rahi ho....." Madhu says "nako vahini, mey baazi ke sath shopping pe ja rahi hu, aapko aaney ka kya..." Naku says " nahi tu ja, lakin ha sambhal kar jaana..."Madhu says " maaji chinta nako karney ka, mey apana dhyan rakh sakti vahini aur phir baazi bi toh ja raha hai na merey sath, toh kaisa dar........." Naku says "itna vishwas hai baazi par...." Madhu says "vahini aap bi.... aur woh sharma ā˜ŗļø jaati hai..... Naku says "acha sun apney bhau ko batakar jaana....." Madhu says "ho vahini...."

Baazi awaz dekar kehta hai "madhu aaj hi jaana hai terko shopping pe ya mey kal aata terko leney ko..........." Madhu says "aey baazi chila kyu raha hai....,mey aa rahi hu na......." Baazi says "aey itna time lagati tu...." kala sees madhu and baazi.... Kala thinks in her and says "baazi-madhu, madhu-baazi, baazi-roops ya phir madhu-baazi-roops and smiles😊.....

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