MY OS/SS gall -The wedding night [MN] pg 39 *new*

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so here it goes...
hey...frenz...my name is sanika...and i am die-hard fan of arjun rati and mayur ! this is my first attempt of writing a OS!
i have pouuredd alll my feeelings into it...😆😆
agar bekaaarrr lage... tooo pm karke boldo...i m ready to read pm's...
par puh-lease...yaha pe mat karo...
one more imp thing- itzz just my imagination!!!
i guess m gonnna recieve lottt of pm's😆😆
but do commment if u like it!!...it will surely encourage me!😳
thnx...😛
1.ARTI OS: WE DEFINE PERFECTION
"will he be there?"
this was the thought dominating rati's mind since morning

her mind raced through the happenings of morining...

"hello...rati?

yeah whos this..."?

it was a call from the star one head...

it was a success party for star one as it was getting popular day by day..

"so...plzz come

yeah ok...i will try ...thnx!"

the first thought that had come to her mind was of arjun!

she had not met him since almost 3 months...

so only the thought of meeting him made her blush like hell

she returned back to her senses...

"will he be there?"
she was eager to meet him...to see him ...to hear his voice...to see his SMILE!...to hear him taking her name!
"mein aisi kaisi ho gayi?"
she was tooo surprised...rati was a reserved girl ...and she herself knew that...she had never thought her frienship with arjun would change into..lo...

with this sentence her thoughts went back to the wrap up party of MJHT!

she remembered the sadness she had felt...she remembered the feeling she had.. like she was leaving something behind...the emptyness ...

now she understood the meaning of this feeeling...

she had never thought she would fall in love with her best friend ...her collouge...arjun!

it was a heavenly feeling...

she understood it when she didnt meet him for 3 months...

she felt low , never enjoyed with her friends fully...alwayzz associated evrrything with arjun...she had falllen in love with the word ARTI !

and now when she had a call for the party...she was immmensly happy...it was like ..she couldn't explan the happiness even to herslf...

but then another thought came to her mind like a atom bomb...

"what ...what if he is bussy with shooots..." "vo teri tarah free nahi he rati" she reminded herself...

she typed a message...

" are you coming at the party...?

- rati "

then she erased it...it wouldn't seem normal!...

she had just decided not to go the the party...when her cell phone beeped...

what she read made her blush likkke hell...

" hey rati...looking forward for meeting you at the party...missing me??

- ur jun "

"abhi tak flirt karne ki adat gayi nahi iski" she said to herself...

but she loved the way he alwayzz said -ur jun!...it made her feel special...

"kaise bolu me tumhe arjun..i am missing you tooo much...kaise bolu me tumhe ye feeling jo mein har pal mehssos karti hu..."

she replied-

" looking forward for meeting you too...c u den

- rati"

she checked her watch-

" hey bhagwaan...sirf 3 ghante bache he..."

she chose a white dress and decided to leave her hair open... ... jus like arjun liked

she was waiting and waiting for the moment when she would talk to arjun...

"shant reh rati..itna kyu ghabra rahi he...sirf apne dil ki baat bina ghabraye usko bata deni he..."

she was just near the party hall but couldn't get herself ready to face arjun...

she wondered what he would say after seeing her...

she wondered what she would say after meeting him...

finally she entered the hall...

it was dimly lighted and there was a huge huge crowd already...suddelt she heard someone call out to her...

"ratii...hieee"

"sanaya...kaisi ho...after long time ha.."

"ya...u looking gr8 ..."

"u too..like alwayss..."

they both shared a laugh..

rati met her mannny frends der...sanaya , mohit , jas, drashti , navina, gurmeet , sukriti , vivian ...

but where was he????

although she smiled and talked to evryone warmly ...she was upset...she was verry upset...

"shayad urgently shooting ko jaana pada hoga"

"tum whote mein bohot acchi lag rahi ho...like alwayz..."

her heartbeats stoppped for a second

she knew this voice...she knew it verry well...it was the voice she had waited to hear from 3 months...it was arjun's voice..!!!!

she turned around...and saw the most handsome man standing before her and smiling...

"arjun!"

"kya hua aise kyu dekh rahi ho...i know min aaj handsome dikh raha hu"

"arjun...tum kab aaye?"

usuallly she would have replied back to his statement...but today she just couldn't control her happiness...

"bas abhi...vo actually shoot tha...par mein jaldi nikal gaya...ye party kaise miss kar sakta tha"

"kyu..."

"kyu kya...mere sare purane dost he yaha pe...sanaya, mohit , jas, navina, abhishek, , aur..."

"aur ?? "

" aur tum..."

"rati...kay hua...kaha kho gayi"??

"ha??...oh sorry"

she was happpy that he had remebered her...

"kya bewakuf hu mein...apne aap ko sambhal rati...arjun ne bas tera naam liya he..koi propose nahi kiya he aur bhala karega bhi kyu...vo thodi na tujhse pyaarr..."

suddenly their was darkness everywhere...

it was time for a dance...

rati was just going to go and sit somewhere ( she just wanted to see arjun dance)

suddenly sombdy held her hand..."kaha ja rahi ho...mere saath dance nahi karogi"

his voice was soft than usual...it sounded like heaven to rati...

he pulled her close to himself...slided his hand on her waist...

her thoughtss raced back to the days of MJHT shooting...

the dance sequences ...the pehli baar mohobbat song...the sajda song...the jaage jaage ,khuda jaane...

these thoughts made her blush ...

she never wanted this moment to end...

she wanted to be this close to arjun forever...she looked up..and was surprised...

arjun was lookig straight into her eyes...he had a veery different kind of expresssion...a mayankish expression...she didnt know what happened suddenly...she was sooo absorbed into his eyes...his expressions...when suddenly she tripped over something and was about to fall...

...when a strong pair of hands held her...

she had no need to look who was her saviour...she knew the touch vey well...

she jus said "thank you arjun..."

he didnt say anything...he was jus staring at her...his eyes made her feel soo special...she loved his eyes...they conveyed a looot of things...she loved his touch...she was absorbed into his eyes again...when he pulled her up and again started dancing...

"sorry arjun...vo mera dhyaan nahi tha issilye gir gayi"

"koi baat nahi ...mein hoona na...alwayzz der...for u "

she didnt knew how to react to this...she didnt knew what suuddely happened to her...she forgot everything...she just knew that she wass close to arjun...sh loved him and that she wanted to be with him forever and alwayz...

"i love you arjun"

she didnt knew how she said those words...it was like magic...she had never thought it would come soo easily...she was embarassed...she didnt knew what to do...she wa about to run wany from the party...from everyone else...fromm arjun...when suddenly she heard what she had alwayzz dreamt of...which was her dream...

"i love you too rati"

she just didnt knew what was goin on...was she in a deam?...no ...this was reality...arjun said he lo...OMG!

she cudnt believe what he said...she just kept staring into his eyes...

suddenly she cudn't control herself anymore...

tearss flew through her eyes...

"kitni der lagai tumne ye kehan me arjun" she said...

"he didnt say anything ...he just kissed her on her cheek"

he pulled her more close...

rati had never felt such happiness in her life...she knew this was it...this was perfect...she loved arjun n he loved her...arjun n rati...such perfect we both sound... she thought to herslf...itss right what our fans say...

ARTI define perfection!

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Index
1. ARTI OS:WE DEFINE PERFECTION - pg 1
2. MAYUR OS: BIRTHDAY SURPRISE - pg 8
3. ARTI OS: MERE HAATH MEIN..(PRT 1)- pg 13
4. ARTI OS : MERE HATH MEIN ..(PRT 2) - PG
5. MAYUR FF - YOU ARE THE ONE FOR ME- PG 20.
(INDEX OF FF-PG 20)
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AWonderfulChaos thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sanu!!
RES!
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aww sanu that was a really cute attempt! i really liked it....gud imagination!!...... keep writin hun..:)
luv ya...:)
ARTI<3
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awsome Imagination ... I means AwsomeOS ... Beautiful.. Write more Sanika 😃
kirti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 imagination
lovely os😊
VasuKaShlicious thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really cute sanika..
good attempt.. i m sure u wont get even a single PM.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sanu,............it was shoooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
do write more..... n dont forget to pm me dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz do write OS on mayur tooo!!!!!!!!!! missin dem nowadays 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Heyyyyyyyyyy
Sanuuuuuuuuuuu
beautiful OS dear
totally Articulious
hayeeeeee Arti- loved them a lot
i hope our dream abt arti come true soon
u wrote rat's feeling beautifully
do write more
-Samira- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sanika beautiful OS dear love ARTI n missed them
Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely os sanika...
Definitely arti define perfection and ur OS proved that again...
Write more...
DhanakZ thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wao thats superb
Great imagination
Do write more
and Pm me

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