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Posted: 14 years ago

I love Ekta's analysis--she really brought out the essence of this episode that belongs to Radhika--
You did great in bringing out the complexity of Radhika's mind set--her relationship with Sushma made it possible for the "dam to finally burst".....
Loved Radhika's "monologue"----yes, she did not connect with her baby--as in her mind she was trying to disconnect with everything----something both of them had dreamed of together...
"Sorry" is such a small word--and at times not enough to really tell the other person your guilt and your remorse--sometimes actions speak louder and it is nice to see Radhika showing her feelings towards Dev--

And Dev---you really bring out his love and anguish and his caring------


Now waiting to see how Dev helps Radhika to return to her former self--what decisions he makes about their future--will he be happy with the decisions he makes in terms of his own dream and goals?....


thanks fo liking my analysis but i also want to say that you said"You weave a beautiful story and through it you have unknowingly or knowingly taught us so much about the complexity of the human mind--and relationship"that is the main feature of this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice update.... things are sorting out bet them👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
a very beautiful heart touching update di ,its feel good after reading ur update,its very emotional and takes us to another world and gives tips to face our life calmly peacefully
SO radhika told to sushma buva and dev also listened to that hope dev will be able to bring his radhika back soon and live their life like before

thanks for this beautiful update di
keep it up and waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update di👏👏,loved the conversation between radhika and sushma and also the way radhika thinks..do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi everyone.. thank you for your great response...
abhilasha_dream

First of all thank u for fulfilling my reQUEST.This is my thanks It was really a TREAT to read this part..

good to see that our Radhika is coming back little by little and our Dev also has heard a bit part of her mind which will be useful for him to make his DECISIONS now and waiting for Radhika to share her complete thoughts wid Dev.

my pleasure Abhi. I am so glad to know that you liked it.. Yes Radhika was able to open up with Sushma little bit, maybe because of their relationship is at that level, Suchi was trying to realize it thru Dev's action and Rahdika's response, her understanding level is different. He is analyzing it thru how she met Radhika dn how she Rahdika back in Delhi and then thinking how her son might have behaved , all those, so she is kind of trying to understand this girl, her silence in a different way. But for Sushma, she wants to hear it directly from Radhika, because she can't imagine Radhika running away from all of them, her dev whom she dreamed and shared all her thoughts with. So, yes sushma needs that words from Radhika and Radhika was able to say it out , and I am also feeling little relief after Radhika saying it out atleast to someone. And yes, it will definitely help dev to take his next decision. thank you .

anu17

wow di gr8....she is hiding her feeling.....normally we are like that na...hiding feelings na......she loves Dev a lot..wow ..........Sushma buava is cool I like today part...di you are near to 100 part wow part time near.............waiting for the next part...when you got time update it...love it.........

yes she was hiding her feelings, will she continue with that, I don't know. I want her to speak out too, to let him know what she really likes, or wants, and I hope Dev will listen this time. She did tell him, but that time he got busy with something else, but I hope and wish she will open up and he will listen.. or I want their silence to communicate the feelings what they are going thru, time can bring it out.. I am sure.. so let see. Next part coming up soon, a break from the meetings and Radev fun time with faily.. so get ready for that.. thanks

chalhov

A lovely and emotional update liked the Sushma and Radhika talk and Dev listening to it without them knowing .

Yes chalhov.. all these meetings went little emotional, so planning to bring some fun with next update , their chandenpur trip to meet Dadima, and spend some time there. I also need that break from that heavy dialogues.. ha ha' so let see.. thanks..

DAIRY25

SEARCH A BEAUTIFUL HEART INSTEAD OF A BEAUTIFUL FACE, BEACAUSE....'BEAUTIFUL THINGS ARE NOT ALWAYS GOOD BUT GOOD THINGS ARE ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL ' this is what our loving dreamy Radhika and our realistic Dev learn from their experience till now..they will never let this happen again as they not only love each other but other person lives in their soul . THANK U FOR THIS EMOTIONAL PART .

WOW! What a wordings.. yes, good things are always beautiful but their appearance won't be pleasant. They gone thru this once and like you, I also don't want them to repeat it. They were lucky to have that beautiful face and mind , but somewhere in this journey they lost that connectivity , I want them to get back there, to their place, where her heart beats next his and she see the dream of her life again, for her husband, for her family, and for herself..a s you said they not only love each other but other person lives in their soul.. what a concept yaar. So good.. Thanks,..

vijayarjun

nice update,it reminds me of my time when i came 2 Sweden leaving ,behind my fam n my lovely country Sri Lanka.I had gone through rough prases 2.My name is Masuma n living here past 20yrs,but still sometime i long 4 my country.Yeah spring is here2

you from sri lanka.. wow.. after world cup, I was hearing everyone praising SL for their attitude, their fight, their acceptance of things. WOW! You belong there, so we are neighbors!.. really dear, the SL team was really champions.. and they showed the world how to face it in a positive way. Actually they won the minds of millions of people' hats off to them.. sorry to talk about cricket.but their performance was really impressive, it was not an easy game.. hope the spring will bloom faster this time.. Thanks masuma..

suwin

thanks devika for this emotional and beautiful update waiting for radhika to share her feelings with dev... update soon

thanks chechy.. so you want Radhika to share her feelings with Dev. Um.. let me think. Think think.. me too. Let see will she? Or not/ or when will she!!! But a light episode to bring a smile on your face, coming up soon'

radha_bilahari

Devika,

You had great sensitivity when you narrated that a mere sorry will not suffice for having caused great anguish for Dev and Radhika is still guilty for it. It is important to have a great sense of remorse for your mistakes than just uttering sorry. Beautifully said.

Thanks you radha. Maybe that is why the words are failing to come out from her throat, because she can't just say sorry and feel the relief from it, it helps to some extend, and she expressed that when he talked to her about it, but she wants to say more to him, but somewhere she is feeling that block to get back into their past, she may because it is a fiction,

but in real life, how many of us will take that time, few just go along with the new day as if nothing happened in past, few still keep that in mind and then slip back easily into that silence mode , and come out self in two or three days as the days demand that from her. The reason for that silence will be the face of that cute little eyes looking at her, or the old lashes looking at her happily, seeing her happy life. So only they say "nari is sakthi and she has the power to tolerate everything, like bhoomi devi, she can take anything in, still she will stand stern on her feet for her children" few are lucky to overcome all this and get all the cares and love..but few are still there who likes to keep that silence and crawl in that personal space of theirs'

ekta_bajaj

THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU for a seet ,lovely,emotional,heart touching update.actually i don't know myself what should i say about this update.
i can understand radhika's situation who is feeling guilty very guilty and this satement is compltely true"hardly I tried to read the real meaning for his words, I just took those words as it came to me".problems only occur between good relations only due to this.so dev heard those private talks but its good for their relation although.he tried to listen a story to open up radhika but sad that idea didn't work.its ok she will open up AAKHIR PATNI KISKI HAI DEV KI NA THEN HOW IS IT POSSIBLE YAAR.
keep it up di and one thing i want to say actually have to say thanks for -
-this ff story gives me some peaceful moments in life (more after this separation and union of radev)for which i wait
-and u have put ur experience of life and u give us something to learn and face this life problems

i don't know actually what i am feeling now .its like i am learning a lot and these all words are coming in mind to say to u
thanks from bottom of my heart
i have always said directly as order to post but really i am requesting u today to continue ur life experience
waiting for next

You welcome and thank you so much dear.Ye, these are only fractional thoughts that comes to my mind while I sit down to type, so nothing is planned or nothing is conscious. Even I never thought Radhika is going to open up her mind to sushma, I just was knowing that she is going to give that pinch to her as Radhika was needing one for long, seven if you ask me what is next, I will say it is daadi and Radhika meet.. but what will really happen , only comes with that time. Yes it has reflected my experience and my surroundings because , I don't have any other base to build it on, and have nothing to hold onto continue. I with first FF yes, I know what I am holding onto, but with this it is building up itself, without my conscious try, and I am really happy for it, especially when I hear it from you guys like this. So if you are finding anything useful from this FF, that is not a conscious attempt dear, and I am lucky to reach to your mind. I thank God for giving that power to reach to you.. thanks for your kind words'

radhika5


I love Ekta's analysis--she really brought out the essence of this episode that belongs to Radhika--
You did great in bringing out the complexity of Radhika's mind set--her relationship with Sushma made it possible for the "dam to finally burst".....
Loved Radhika's "monologue"----yes, she did not connect with her baby--as in her mind she was trying to disconnect with everything----something both of them had dreamed of together...
"Sorry" is such a small word--and at times not enough to really tell the other person your guilt and your remorse--sometimes actions speak louder and it is nice to see Radhika showing her feelings towards Dev--

And Dev---you really bring out his love and anguish and his caring------

You weave a beautiful story and through it you have unknowingly or knowingly taught us so much about the complexity of the human mind--and relationship

Now waiting to see how Dev helps Radhika to return to her former self--what decisions he makes about their future--will he be happy with the decisions he makes in terms of his own dream and goals?....

Thank you radhika5. Yes I want the sorry to be shown in her action, because her words failed , but I want her to come out and break her silence thru her actions. I hope she will soon, and I want her actions to bring that smile on Dev's face, oh that will be awesome.. the complexity of human relationship came with all your support, and I hope with the same support I will be able to complete it too, the way I dreamed it off, I wish and I hope I can make it to that point. And I want him to be happy and stern with his next decisions and can't wait to tell how he will say it out to his family' so let see.. thanks'

imarti_rubi

really nice update.... things are sorting out bet them

are you really back.. thaaanks.. I am happy to hear that applaud sound around me' yes things are sorting out.. and I need you for that' thank you

radhev

a very beautiful heart touching update di ,its feel good after reading ur update,its very emotional and takes us to another world and gives tips to face our life calmly peacefully

SO radhika told to sushma buva and dev also listened to that hope dev will be able to bring his radhika back soon and live their life like before

thanks for this beautiful update di

keep it up and waiting for next

thank you dear.. I am so glad that you feel good to read it, then it is my duty to bring that smile out too, hopefully the next update, just to relax myself, hope you will like it too.. just some fun moments before Raadhika meets her daadi' let me know 'thanks..

sweetfamily

lovely update di,loved the conversation between radhika and sushma and also the way radhika thinks..do cont soon

Thank you sweetfamily' I am glad to know you loved sushma and Radhika talk' I did that in a hurry, why did I hurry with it, don't know, that is me, I can't wait sometime to move onto next part.. ha ha.. I am very impatient.. so' glad to know and next part coming up soon.. read it, I want to see the smile on your face..

nycsweetie

very nice update

Thank you.. thanks for the support dear..

Thank you for the PM and

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Next will be Daadi Radhika meet, but before that I am taking a break.. from all these meetings and taking you for another trip with Bhatt family to chandenpur, yes for those who missed the greenery for long, where she grow up with her dreams.' let's have some fun(hopefully) on the way that leave our Dev in desperation'. I don't know whether this will bring her back to her old self.. but I don't want this to be heavy, so I want Radhika also to approach it light heartedly..but tell you frankly , I have no clue what in store for to tell ..but for now let's have a tender coconut and travel with them..

did you all like that pinch that sushma gave Rahdika, it came out with a PM request... so only i said, i was knowing she is going to pinch her, nothing more than that....
Catch you all soon

Devika.

Also I got the chatterbox award of this forum' no wonder , right?, see my lengthy talk with this post'... ha ha ha ha'.... but they made it beutiful by addressing it as "parrot award" I am glad for that.. so now i have beautiful green wings and the red chain around my neck and i can talk like a parrot and fly away flapping them against the wind...😛

Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"Yes I want the sorry to be shown in her action, because her words failed , but I want her to come out and break her silence thru her actions. I hope she will soon, and I want her actions to bring that smile on Dev's face, "

yes, Devika---you are right Radhika does need to at some point to break her silence and open up completely with Dev. Actions are helpful to overcome the situation--but ultimately the words are necessary---

And like you--I am waiting to read about "A smile on Dev's face".....will that be today?? just checking--

Edited by radhika5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 97

The outside was kind of looking little cloudy as the sun was not shining that bright even though it was nearing midday......

Surrender: I am glad it is cloudy outside

Suchi: But I don't want it to rain either, then that may delay our reach...

Surender: I know. I don't think it will rain, looking up thru the rolled down window glasses. This is the best weather, otherwise it would have been difficult for Radhika to sit inside within these closed space.

Radhika: I am Ok papa..

She felt Dev's hand tightening on her right upper shoulder as she speak that out.

Suddenly the vehicle pass thru an unexpected gutter and the safari just shook all the travelers inside little hard. Dev held on to Radhika's shoulder tight in an attempt to keep her still and brought her shoulder more closer under his right armpit... and his left arm slide forward to support her arm which was resting on her lower abdomen; in an attempt to protect the baby inside. His eyes gone wild and slightly turning to her side "you ok"

Radhika just nodded her head.

Suchi held Radhika's legs. too, in concern

Surrender: Chander, let's go little slow, I think this road is little bumpy and there is gutters too, so let's be careful..

Chander: ha sir, that one was in a blind spot with that turn..

Surender: I know and he turned to look at Radhika and she tried to give him a smile back to comfort him

Dev maintained his position and tried to take her weight in his arms as much possible.

Once the road got cleared, Radhika wanted to Dev to take his arm away as she was feeling little uneasy with Suchi being sitting so close and then papa in front , her eyes noted chander bhayya and then the face of Lechu, who was sitting totally quiet enjoying the scenery that is passing by., but he was looking very anxious and his eyes were still glued onto the front road, with any unexpected gutters.

Radhika looked sideways and tried to smile at Suchi..

Suchi didn't notice the uneasiness on Radhika's face and returning the smile she asked: you ok beta

Radhika: um and she nodded her head

Suchi smiled again and looked to the side as Lehcu was pointing something outside.

Radhika tried to move her hand away, to signal Dev. But he seems to be more concentrating on the road. Finally her left hand slide down and rested naturally on his right thigh above the jeans material and looked at dev with a hope, but failed to grab his attention.

" Let me cut some apple ok, you want to have one"...'Radhika jerked as she heard suchi's voice..

Rahdika: no I am ok

Suchi: Oh, no Radhika, I asked your papa, for you no option left, I am cutting it for you, and for others it is their choice. Suchi clarified her statement

Radhika kept quiet. And soon she pulled her left hand out to take that piece of apple from suchi's hand.

Suchi: dev., you want one beta

She didn't get any reply

Suchi: DEV

Dev jerked and looked at his mom: um?

Suchi: what are you thinking, you want a piece of apple..

Dev: no no, I am fine. actually I was looking at the road...And then he looked at Radhika and made sure she is biting on it

surender: don't worry beta, chander is driving the car and he knows, Ok.
Dev: I know dad, But still. he tried to clarify again...
Lechu: mom, give me that, I love it.

Suchi: I know, one second, giving two pieces in surender's hand :give to chander too

As Dev's eyes fell on Radhika, she tried to shake her right hand that was supporting the stomach and tried to signal him to move his away.

Dev : kya huva Radhika? Is everything ok

Radhika looked stunned as he asked it loud and everyone checked back on her

Radhika: ha, I am ok
Dev: you tried to say something to me
Radhika gulped on that chewed piece

Suchi: um, I know, she may be saying that' she doesn't want that apple piece, how many times we need to tell you Radhika, as long as you are not feeling any disomfort with any food, just have it think of your baby, and it is a long journey and I don't want you to starv, I am not asking you to eat the whole apple, just one or two pieces, or you want me to give you any thing else, I have packed few eating goddies..

"what is it mom, let me see" lechu's curious words followed

Suchi: not for you, for Rahdika

Lechu: but I will be the buava , right?, so I need a portion of everything too..

Suchi: Ok baba, here, turn around and check in that blue bag, full of stuff

Suchi: tell me what you want?

Radhika: no mom, I am fine, Apple is good

Dev: Radhika, tell it na, mom is asking you, if you don't want apple, there is so many other things.

Hearing dev's voice surrender tried to hide his shy smile , so did chander. Radhika saw it with her corner eyes, she felt unesy too. She looked sideways and found Suchi checking on lechu, as lechu's head was digging inside that blue bag...

Radhika took the large last piece of apple in her mouth and freeing her left hand, she gave a nice pinch on Dev's left hand which was resting over hers, in a very quick move and broght her hand back in resting position.

'Ouchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........" what was that, it hurts!! .. Dev said with pulling his hand out and lifting it up in air , shaking it and then looking over his skin and cornering his eyes on Radhika.

Suchi loudly: kya huva?

Dev did blow on his skin and found the arched nail mark and looked at Radhika in question, but along with heard Suchi's voice and everyone's eyes on him and even chander slowed down and pulled the car on to the curbside.

Dev got embarrassed.

Surrender: kya huva Dev?

Dev: ji, kuch nahi, moving his eyes to look at his dad

Suchi moving to the front: show me, let me see, I never heard you shouting like that in pain. What happened?

Dev trying to rest his hand down: no nothing I am ok. Looking at the calm face of Radhika, who was trying to gulp on that last big piece

Dev: mom, I think Rahdika is ready for next piece, give her that

Radhika looked at him with widening her eyes

Dev looked back and said: you need full apple, mom, give her a full apple, don't cut that into pieces.

Suchi: Dev

Surender: anyway, chander stopped the vehicle already and then looking up at front: see they are selling nariyals, I love tender coconut water, let's get some. Come on.

Suchi: ha That's good, come on

They all got down and Radhika was about to move down Suchi's side, Dev held her hand tight in his.

Radhika: chodona..

Dev: ek minute

Others got down and Rahdika tried to slide more towards the open door

Dev: kyum kiya aisa?

Radhika: how many times I need to tell you.

Dev: tell me what?

Radhika: vo....

Dev: vo...

Radhika: vo

Dev: vo! what

Radhika: vo kuch nahi...

Dev: vo kuch nahi !... , kuch tho hei, tell me, its really hurting, or I will tell everyone

Radhika: ha, then tell everyone, ok

"beta, ajavona" Suchi's voice came in

Radhika: ha Mom, coming

Soon Suchi's hand appered to support her, Radhika looked at Dev and then looked at suchi's hands. without any other option he released her hand and then sat one more minute thinking :vo vo kuch nahi" what is that?

Radhika felt better walking outside with Suchi and Lechu. She adjusted her duppatta very well. Covering her tummy.They had the drink and small laugh.

Dev coming near Radhika, very secretly : tell me na, what was it?

Radhika: think yourself. And then moved near to Lechu

Dev sat quiet on a nearby stone thinking and looking back at his wrist

Surender coming near and sitting quietly next to dev, mumbled looking straight at his family: did that hurt really bad

Dev jerked his head and looked at his dad: ji and then seeing his dad's tease face : ji, no , no, nothing..

Surender: I know nothing. Don't show your hand to anyone ok, the mark is very clear..

Dev suddenly trying to hide his hand away, lost the balance on the big nariyal in his hold, surrender trying to support it: don't know how to hold a nariyal properly. Hold it in your both arms ok. Um, finish quick and come, we need to move on.

Dev looked at his dad as he walked away and saw him joining his family.

Dev looked at them puzzled and saw them laughing. But he was trying hard to think what it is that she pinched hard on his skin. But then his forehead straighten up and the lines of confusion got cleared and he remembered him supporting his little one unknowingly. A shy smile appeared on his lips, and he turned his face away to hide from his family. But then suddenly the lines reappeared thinking: did anyone saw it? did dad '. Ye, no , how can he see, did he turned back, did he, no chance. But then the lines disappeared with next thought: even if someone see also, what is there to hide, it is my baby, why should I feel shy on it, or should I? did she? But then why should she, it is me, then.

"Bhayya, come on, let's go" Lechu's voice came near

Dev jerking back: ha Lechu, one minute.

He thro the empty part away and walked near to the vehicle..

Surnder joined Suchi at the back,and that left Dev no other option than sitting at the front seat. Surrender moving his upper body to the front reaching near Dev: otherwise we may hear more of this hurt calls, so better we get there on time, I don't want Chander to get scared and stop the car all thru the way, so sit there calmly ok.
Dev' mouth felt dry and he tried to look back, but then the words of his dad forced him to look straight. The vehicle moved to the front and in between his eyes fell on the rear view mirror and found Radhika's eyes looking at him. A shiver passed thru him and he turned quickly to look at her with so much expectation, but she suddenly moved her gaze to look out and then started listening to lechu and suchi's talk. Dev turned his face to the front with a happy resting smile.
He looked out thru the side window and was feeling the bubbling inside, the bubbling of a new feelings, as if he saw a spark of his Radhika, his old Radhika. So will this journey bring her back to me?. He looked at that fading nail mark and thought it was never painful for him... whenever she dig those nails on my skin, in fact it gave me that pleasure to love her more. But today it did hurt me, her unexpected move, but somewhere I am feeling so happy, he brought that hand up and resting his elbow near that window panel, he rubbed the back of that palm under his chin to his lips. And made it to rest there near his chin. It took him those days back, back to their lovely days where he called her out loud

"Radhikaaaaa"

He didn't get any reply. He called again

'Radhikaaaa"

But the silence made him to walk back to their bedroom. He heard the showering water from near the closet

Moving near to the closed shower room, Dev knocked on that glass door" Radhikaaa'

"Ha"

"open it up, I want to show you something"

"what"

'I told you to open it up'

"what is it'

Dev impatiently: Radhika

Soon the glass door slide little and her wet head showed up little: what?

Dev: I want to show you something, come out

Radhika: Dev, I am taking a shower, wait for two minutes , I will be out

Dev: No, come out now

Radhika: Dev

Dev: um

Radhika: didn't you hear me, two minute

Dev: no

Radhika tried to slide back the door but then dev held it forcefully. Radhika trying to force it back, pulled down the towel from the rack and then covering her body with it

"what is it?"

Dev: Ha better ask it that way, come out I will show you.

Radhika without any option wrapped that towel around her wet body and came out :um, show me

Dev: what is it?

Radhika: what is what?

Dev: this

Radhika looked at his upper arm and one of the nail mark was so prominent that even it left a blue tinge bruice over.

Radhika: vo, but then she refused to say it out and she pulled back her voice

Dev: um um, tell me what is it

Radhika giving a relief sigh: vo tho, you know it na

Dev: oh, I know it, why did you hurt me this bad Radhika, if some one see this , what they may think?

Radhika: what?

Dev; how will I go out with these marks..

Radhika: so you want to blame me, you want to see the marks you left on me, then am I asking anything about it?

Dev: show me , let me see.

Radhika: what?

Dev: ha, you only told me na, that I left mark on you, let me see which one is bad

Radhika: no

Dev: why

Radhika: no, I need to finish my shower and get ready

Dev: get ready for what?

Radhika: for the party

Dev: I know , so only I asked , what did you do to me? Now how I will go?

Radhika: wear a nice shirt, it will cover it up, ok

She said that in a very simple way and got back into the shower

Dev comprehending back: um, that's right. very good idea Radhika, very good idea, but it hurts little bit, and it turned all blue, hope it is not poisonous.. He smiled wide and then looked back at the closed shower door.a nd he saw the towel coming up to rest on the rack

Dev pulled it down the glass door and "Radhika, I have something else to show too"

Radhika: now what?

Dev: you come out na

Radhika: please

Dev: please bundling the towel in his hand

Radhika: no, you wait

Dev: ha, I will, but come out quick Ok

Radhika: um

Dev waited out with a teasing smile on his face

"why are you smiling so shyly" ......the voice of Lechu near his ears brought him back to reality

Dev: what?

Lechu sitting back to her seat , burst out into laugh: Bro, you got lost somewhere, something happened to you, what you were thinking

Dev shrugging his shoulder: nothing

Lechu: how many times mom called you, but you never even heard it, what was that you were thinking so deeply and smiling on.

Dev felt his mouth went dry. His blushed skin suddenly went pale. He felt sweaty and hot at the same time. He was unable to turn and face everyone's eyes, he regained his strength back..

"nothing Radhika, I was thinking about chandenpur"

Lechu tightening her forehead: nothing Radhika!!!!!, hello, Bro, it is me who asked about it, not deedi, I mean Bhabhi is sitting comfortably'

Suchi: Bhabhi!!!!, wow, that is nice...

Lechu: vo , when Buava came, she only asked me to try to call Bhabhi, ....bhabhi not deedi. So I am trying from my side.

Dev felt some relief seeing the topic getting changed and thought of taking advantage of that: I told her that first , but then she didn't listen to me, see now buava also told you the same, right?

Lechu: ummmm, ummmmm Bro, don't try to change the subject now, ok, I can see that easily, after all I am your sister..

Forcefull air escaped thru his corner lips, he tried to relax but then his eyes fell on the mirror to see Radhika's eyes and found her smiling listening to Lechu's talk. He pulled his eye back and looked outside. His eyes fell on that nail mark and found it almost faded away. He smiled again looking at it.

"see he is smiling again, I told you".... Lechu's voice came out loud and quick..

Suchi: what is this Lechu, leave him alone.

Lechu: why he is sitting so silent, otherwise he is the one who used to tell "lechu see that, lechu see this, Lechu windmill" now nothing, he is sitting so quiet and smiling self, and I am wide awake and its so boring, Deedi also not talking much..

Suchi: so changed to deedi again

Lechu with a complining tone: no, Babhi also not talking much...

Suchi: that's because your bhabhi is going back to Chandenpur after two years, and going to see her daadi, then naturally what all might be going thru her mind, so don't disturb deedi for now , ok.

Lechu: ok, I am not going to disturb anyone, you all take rest , then "chander bhayya, can you teach me how to drive?'

Chander: me!!!!

Lechu: um, why not? here all are busy and I want to do something, so if I know how to drive,then I can drive it na..

Dev: ha, it is so easy, Chander bhayya give the steering to her, let her drive the rest of the way , but we wall will drop down here and catch next taxi... ok

Lechu: BRO, I said I want to learn it OK..

Dev: oh ya, chander bhayya, let her learn in two minutes, then you take rest and Lechu will drive the rest..

Lechu got annoyed: BRO

Dev: why you were pulling my leg all this time, and now

Lechu: I won't talk to you any more

Dev: um, good decision... so sit silently ok

Lechu moving her head towards Dev and bringing her hand out: BRO, why did you come now, to fight with me....

Suchi's warning tone: Lechuuu

Dev: ha, did you hear mom

Suchi : Devvv

Lechu showed her childish face to dev and signaled him asking 'did you hear that warning?'

Suchi looking at Dev : going to be a dad soon, and see how he is behaving, still fighting like a kid..

Lechu: ha, see I told you

Dev tried to turn his face to bite back with Lechu, but
Suchi: LECHUuuuuuu
suddenly Lechu sat back quietly

Suchi got surprised seeing the silence from surender's side and looked at him surprisingly and her eyes gone wild seeing his closed eyes, and her jaw dropped seeing it. Her husband was comfortably taking a nap in between all this noise. Nothing reached his ears...

Suchi sighing it out: no wonder your dad came back to sit here. He doesn't like to sleep when chander is driving. See...

Everyone looked at Surender

Chander: ha Maji, sir never sleep when sitting in front , always try to talk something with me to give me company.

Suchi: I know, I was also thinking why he is so silent , especially after seeing their fight, he should have also joined easily with them.

"what? What you were saying?" surender's voice came out

S

uchi: so, the nap is over, you are awake then?

Surrender: who , who is taking nap?

Suchi surpringly: who is taking nap !! you , who else?

Surrender with a smile: Me!!!, what a joke

Suchi: Oh really, so what you were doing just now..

Surrender: I was thinking

Suchi: oh, what?

Surender : nothing psecifically, about business, then I heard you guys saying something , so thought of asking, I didn't hear it properly..

Suchi: nothing, we were saying only an hour to reach chandenpur

Surender: oh, that's quick!

Suchi mumbled: ha that was quick because you had a nice nap all this time.

Surender: what?

Suchi: Nothing

Surender: um, Chander, let's go to haweli first ok. Then we will come to Moahn 's house. They will be back only in the evening. So let's get there , freshen up and by the time they will scme.

Chander: ji Sir

Dev flashed his eyes on Radhika, who became more quiet looking outside.

But the pain was still bubbling inside him thinking of her pinch, he want that to be hurt more, he felt like holding her in his arms and look into her eyes deep to see them sparkling with his love, maybe this chandenpur will bring her back to me, into my arms forever. He smiled and then got conscious of Lechu's eyes and suddenly controlled and looked at Lechu's face..

She looked at him and raised his brows asking?

He just shrugged his shoulder saying nothing..

They reached haweli as expected. Radhika got down as lechu helped her to stand on her feet. Sushma came and hugged both girls holding onto her sides.

Suchi: did Rohini call?

Sushma: just now; asking whether you reached here not?Dadi is getting impatient and I think she is pushing hard to let her free quick. But she is doing really great, now climb down the stairs good. Mohan bhayya will return with babuji.

Sushma looking at Radhika: um, I can see some difference, the color came back to her face. It was looking all dull the other day

Suchi: what dull, she was looking all pale when she came, now she is much much better.

Radhika tried to smile and walk in

Suchi: if you just want to walk little bit its ok Radhika

Radhika: no Mom, I am fine

Suchma: may be lay down for sometime, that will help

Radhika: no Buava, I am fine

Suchi: that maybe a good idea, go freshen up and take rest for sometime, then they all be here too.

Radhika was about to protest , he saw Dev's warning eyes on her and the words came out automatically : ji

Hearing that he went to take the stuff out from the dickey.

Lechu: Buava, no sweet to welcome us

Suhma with a smile: ha, heina, come inside

They all walked in. sushma made tea for all , and along with that she brought some snack and all.

Dev got up from the sofa , keeping his empty cup on the table

Suchi: where are you going Beta?

Dev: let me check on Radhika, I will be back mom

Suchi: ha, make sure she is taking rest Ok

Dev: ji

He climbed the stars fast and closed the door quickly as he entered into their room.

He looked at the empty bed, where her duppatta was laying in a wavy manner and tightening his forehead he scanned the area , and it got stuck as he saw her figure standing near the window with the towel in her hand, which was drying her neck down to her arms, with the gaze fixed on outside.

Dev took his soft steps near to her, and then reaching behind, he wrapped his arms around her waist line and resting his chin over her shoulder he asked: what are you looking at?

Radhika jerked with his action , but then comprehending back she just said: nothing

Dev: no, you were looking at something

Radhika holding onto his arms that was resting her waist line: Nothing

Dev: then tell me what you were thinking about?

Radhika: nothing

Dev: no, you were thinking about something, or some one!

She didn't say anything. Suddenly he remembered the pinch. He thought to break her silence, ...suddenly pulling his arms back he moaned softly "ouchhhh"

Radhika throw the towel on her shoulder and turned and looked at his posture and held his hand in concern, asking: kya huva?

His eyes went wide along with hissmile , looking at her concerned face and the struggle of her eyes to catch the reason......
😉
😎 will catch you with next with the rest...
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p.s: try to travel with me if possible, give me your feedback if you are reading it and if you have something to tell me., please.... so that i can reach the destination with fulfilling it all... within my limited time...
.. thank you for reading my post.... have a good day..

part 98


Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika5

"Yes I want the sorry to be shown in her action, because her words failed , but I want her to come out and break her silence thru her actions. I hope she will soon, and I want her actions to bring that smile on Dev's face, "

yes, Devika---you are right Radhika does need to at some point to break her silence and open up completely with Dev. Actions are helpful to overcome the situation--but ultimately the words are necessary---

And like you--I am waiting to read about "A smile on Dev's face".....will that be today?? just checking--

I agree wih you.. the words are necessary, but i don't know whether she is ready to say it out for now.. it may take time, because so much going on inside her, she won't speak it out completely., she knows she made a mistake by taking his words as it is and not giving a second thought on it, and that is just one thing.
she needs to belive that he is listening to her. i mean, that also contributed to her action, she was talking to him , about everything around her , about the day, about rema, about dadi, about heena, but he failed to give those ears to her and the silence took its head up from that ,moments.. and it went bad along with his words.. so he is talking to her now, that he did when he was free over there to, he tried to show his love thru that physical intimacy too.. when he done with his work, but she failed to give it back becaue she travelled a lot behind in her thoughts by then...
now dev is free, it is his vacation, what if he still go back to his old self, and want her to be silent again.. so that will and should come with time, and i am sure she will open up her words... for that he should show that caring and listening and she should really feel he is with her.
now she knows her actions hurt him and she won't repeat the same, but it is his actions that should bring her back, to that conscious status in her that he is with her.. and i hope he will... he needs to win her heart once again..... now both knows each of their actions did hurt the other persona dn it was painful for both of them... but I want them to over come it with their own actions and small talks... i hope..
and then my radhika will say everything out, maynot be with weepy eyes, so we need to wait to get there, to see how she will react.. i am dreaming that to be different.. hopefully i will be able to get there to bring it as I dreamed with all your support...
so only i said, i need support, otherwise it won't be beautiful , not for me for sure..and may not be for few of guys either.. so...
😃
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
didi, sorry for not comenting for soo long, but i was reading. i read all and loved them. old radhika is coming back, and dev will get back his radhika. loved all the parts and please update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow mind-blowing updates! Love the latest one and I feel so bad for radhika, dev please cheer her up! (:

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