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Posted: 14 years ago
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me N mY BST fRND

green =nature
brown= narration

Walking in the middle of nowhere'steping on these dry leaves'..giggling'.hmm'.. I love this sound'.sound of crashing the old'n welcoming'' new'.. mmhmm'.no'.sound of hard too hard'.tht r broken in pieces'still when crash under feet'.thy don't kick u back'soothing ur ears they just slightly maon'a slight moan'.a .complain'. it hurts'.it hurts'.its difficulty to fall from ur own roots.,'where u have been attached to long times'.n thn losing ur beauty'.ur color..ur softeness'turning to dark'..brown'hard'.

Hmm 'But out there' there are few people like u''who wait whole year to look me like ths'..GOD y u always find me beautiful'its spring or autum ..ur eyes always gave the same love''

But thn I fall down'.n came under ur feet's'u softly put it on me'n I enjoy ur giggles'as u enjoy me'.no matter im fresh or torn

This no nowhere'.its the same autumn'it the same place'..we where walking together'.i being adamant to walk n leaves..u being adamant nt to'I took my way u took ur way'n here we r'..far away'.

Far away'wht a joke'.still I close my eyes ..feel my ear tickled at ur whispere'tht I never felt in real'.

Far way he mayb ..far away u mayb'but I am dry n light'can travel to him n back to u'.touching him'n transferring a kiss from him to u ''


Still there are same rain in wch I use to walk n enjoy'.closing my eyes '. feeling the drops kissing me'.n u where to buzy enjoying the sight'..

Mmhmm'ur wrong dear..he isn't just enjoying the beautiful sight there for him'.but he wished to touch u'.so im doing the honors for him to u '..

It's the same rain'same me n u'..same me'.maybe'sumthing is still there me insight ths left'.still I feel the same joy'.feeling those cold winds embracing me in u'.still I cuddle myself in an urge to feel u'.still' I open my eyes'to look my hand guarding me soo'

Heyyy'.nt fair dear'..u have always been ..natures bst frnd'...thn how could u don't understand wht we convey to u''he opens his arms to take u in''I filll in for u'.embracing 'u'. for him so near so true''..

It's the same shop'hey it's the same shopkeeper'..hmm but there is no tht girl whom u flirt 'betted n she sweetly lose'n u enjoyed ur mofta'.offering me to join u..i said no'.i was still adamant on my way n u on urs'u want to enjoy ur life at fullest '.i just want to feel'u '.enjoying it '

It's the same old stupid breeze'.playing n irritating me as ever'blowing away my dupata'.n spreading my hairs on myface'wht to grip..my hairs or my guard'..n u there'.shyly lowering ur eyes'.making me feel blushed to'.i lowered my eyes'n raise thm up'..n lower thm agin...me being adamant on day dreaming '.n me nt even in ur nightmares'..

Hmm so now u called me stupid'really ..im hurt'.stop giggle'n touching ur ears'...as I now ..u always love to see him doing these little gestures for u'..n I just play a little more..to make two stupids'..convey there love more'n sooo


Its still me'lost'.lost completely '.u made me like this..ALL UR FAULT'haan'.u taught me how to forget urslf at sum1 sight'.but u forget to told me how it cum back whn u lost the sight''.

Its still me'.n still u '.lost words'no words at all'.v taught each other to read beyond words'.but u forget me to tell'how to read'.when n there r no eyes to watch ''to read '..

Its still me..n still its ur gaze'tht taught my heart'.to get palpitated'but u being u forget again'.how to get these beats back to normal'.whn its fatigued to beat more even'..


Its still me ..still my friends'but the one that is lost is u'..u..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhh hooooo.......

tht was really inspiring one and reality itself for sum 1..........šŸ‘šŸ¼

i never thought tht u can tht mch gud in writing.........šŸ‘

really inspird........

gud luck...😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am second🄳
api tum na writers ki chutti kar dogi
itna acha likhogi to wk din govt tumhe international writer bana degi😃
that was too awesome
loved it
do write more😳

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa

it was wowest and awesomest OS
a beautiful piece of writing
loved it veryyyyyyyyyyyy much
u r superb

Do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: drmaha

ohhh hooooo.......

tht was really inspiring one and reality itself for sum 1..........šŸ‘šŸ¼

i never thought tht u can tht mch gud in writing.........šŸ‘

really inspird........

gud luck...😃


whos reality šŸ˜•
anyways thnks
awa bhi khbi hota hai...bekar pm k ab read kerk coment kerday wah wah
thnks for such sweet coments dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire_girl

i am second🄳
api tum na writers ki chutti kar dogi
itna acha likhogi to wk din govt tumhe international writer bana degi😃
that was too awesome
loved it
do write more😳

love
tasfia

yupii
after so long dear i found u so quick here
lovly
hay Allah😲....asay ho hi na jay ....mein internationl writer..ufffšŸ˜...wapas ajao zameen per
thnku sooooooo much mera bacha for such lovly coments šŸ¤—
lov ya
api
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa

it was wowest and awesomest OS
a beautiful piece of writing
loved it veryyyyyyyyyyyy much
u r superb

Do write more

thnku sooo much dear
lov ya
shukar aj daata nhi apny ...asa kuch likhnay per
warna ankhein tu mein ny band kerli thi ...soch ker hišŸ˜†
lov yaaa...
n surly im gonna write more
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*Edited*

@FizašŸ¤—
Sorry for late comment
sis Beautiful OS
u write beautifully...
keep it up
do write more
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing fiza
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely a great piece of writing
thanks for pm
write more

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