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Posted: 14 years ago
i knw my sis was shouting on dad y did u cm nw
bcoz u came only gambhir is out
n muskan diiiiiiiiiii waitingggggggggggggg
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Akshay Kumar requesting Trisha (89518) size:1280x1024

Akshay Kumar requesting Trisha.

same here Muskanp please update

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Posted: 14 years ago
Pls Pls Pls update..... i have sacrificed world cup match for tm.......😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

Gambhir bold out by Prera on 97


i felt so sad for him, only 3 runs to go
but he was awesome


hope india wins, the chances are very good for India
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Quit this blog and do you have to do, hurry up !!!
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-truly magical-
part 162

She dragged her self to her flat & collapsed into the couch. She was supposed to get back to office & wait for the good news, but she just couldn't. She felt so calm & waited for watever would happen to happen.

Her apartments door was kicked open by 3 armed men at 8am next morning. One of the men came next to her & turned her roughly to face him. Her head was still spinning. She tried her to lift & focus her pupils failed to co-operate & her head fell back on the couch. One of the person squeezed her cheeks & lifted her up holding by her cheeks. She looked at the person, that was Viraat second in command after Davis. She extended her hand to help her stand still. She didn't pretend. The night had been hell on her. She puked several times & been through sharp pains in her stomach. Even though her dose was lethal she thought but the effect was killing. But now the pain seemed abating.

Viraat swore & ordered his men to take her. Before she could react a blanket came over her head. They lifted her like a sack on the shoulder & carried her out of her apartment to the car. They dumped her in the dicky & slammed the door. Her head lolled against the walls of the car & the severe pain once again daggered through her stomach. She didn't have the strength to follow wat was happening. She tried really hard to concentrate on wat they said before she finally collapsed cuddled up in a ball.


KHURANA MANSION
the whole night Maan was awake trying to reach her. He drove to her house couple of times. Mk woke up & looked for Maan. She was delighted to see him beside her. She immediately kissed him, like she was surprised. A tear escaped his eyes seeing that fear that was in her eyes, that she may wake up & her daddy won't be around. He promised himself that would never happen again. He would go to any extend to make her believe that he will always be there for her. He still didn't know wat exactly Geet had told her about his absence from their life, least did he know he was never absent, at least not from mk's life.

Daadi came with a glass of milk. She touched her forehead & sighed in relief.
Mk - good morning Daadi
Daadi kissed her - good morning beta
mk looked at the time made a baby face.
Maan got really worried - kya huwa sweet heart?
Mk - main school ke liyen late ho javoongee
Maan - u r not going to school today, he was clear about it.
Daadi smiled inwardly, seeing his fatherly indulgence.
Mk made a face - mujhe school jana hain
he hugged her close to his heart - baby u had fever yesterday na, so rest today.
Mk - I want go
she looked at Daadi
Daadi - she fine Maan
he rolled his eyes.
She made a cute puppy pleading face - da da da ...da da da ...da da da ' mk school jana hain
how could he refuse her after that, he instantly melted. He carried her to the wash room. Gave her a bath & got her ready. While getting ready her non stop questions followed. She looked at his wash room & asked him why is his belongings here.
Maan - I live here na sweety thats why.
She didn't quiet understand that, she gave him a confused look & bit taken a back - u st...ay...u st...ay...u st...ay...u st...ay...wi...th us.
He realized she got really sensitive about something thats why she was stuttering. He wanted to be careful of wat he told her now. He called nanny to translate him wat ever she said. When nanny repeated, his heart pounced to his mouth. He kind of understood that maansi believed that he lived them. Yes!!! thats why his type perfumes, aftershave, shampoo razer were there in the washroom, his t-shirts were there in the wardrobe. Oh lord wat has Geet done!! wasn't he guilty enough !! every time his heart was beating the pain only seemed to increase now. He only had her in his thoughts every minute & his heart ached, bleed. but She had mk, who was their love, who wanted him, who needed him, every sec & milli second, but he was not there, he was not there to comfort them, not there to shower his love & care. With the throbbing aches of pain, he only stood against the bare mattress to dreams. Why does this have to happen to him only, it seems that he is the only one having all his dreams in reality... does he even deserve them after ruining every single dream of hers. He snapped out when mk dragged him to the car challo late ho rahi hain. He smiled & dropped her, anjali & devash to school.

His restlessness increased drasticly. He rushed to the Police head quarters. He stormed into Ayur's cabin & roared - where is Geet?


Ayur was taken a back with his tone. He looked a him blankly. khan rushed in hearing him.
ayur - is there anything that needs her attention
Maan - where is my wife damit!!
khan was confused whom is he looking for his wife or Gk
ayur - ur wife??
Maan - where is Geet?? I need to meet her now? Uska phone kyun unreachable aa raha hain.
They didn't have much of an answer, Geet has not reported to duty since yesterday & they were themselves trying to reach her since then. moreover is was nun of his business to know about an IPS officer
Ayur - if u could give us the detail, we could ask Khan to look into ur wife's case
Maan was irritated to the core .. with the misunderstanding. The confusion was only increasing.
He pushed his hair behind - where the hell is my wife damit!!!
u r wife has is been taking the case bit too personally Mr. Khurana
a firm voice echoed. Ayur & khan straighten themselves saluting to the officer senior in rank. Maan turned to meet the owner of the voice, who seemed to know his wife is Gk..Geet .. the thought!! Geet Khurana was over whelming.

He removed his glasses & extended his hand - I am Gautam Kumar
man nodded & shook his hand.
Gautam Kumar to ayur & khan - could u excuse us for please.
Ayur & khan left them alone
the moment they left Maan pounced with his questions - where is Geet? Uska phone kyun nahi lag raha? She has not come home since last night. Where is she?
Gautam - we don't know
Maan - wat rubbish!! u don't know where ur DCP is?
Gautam taunted - u didn't bother about ur wife until now
Maan clinched his fist, but he was right, absoultly true.
Gautam - tumhara case woh bahut personally le rahi hain. I tried to take her off the case, but I guess Geet is Geet, she won't listen to any one. woh bhi if it is about u she just won't.
He broke down completely now mera case
gautam - Davis!!!
Maan couldn't comprehend the co-relation - he is our client he said thoughtfully
gautam - Davis is the guy behind all ur kidnappings.
Maan gulped his saliva, thats why Geet asked her if he knew davis, thats but wat was she upto any way he wondered.
Maan - why was I not informed about all this?
Gautam - wat I tell u doesn't go outside this 4 walls. Geet definitely upto something with davis, which non of our aware about. Last we know she attended a party with him a 2 days ago. He showed the snaps. Maan was shocked.
Gautam - I had told her to take rest for 2days, but she disobeyed my orders. He smirked she always does But this time she has gone way too far risking her carrier more than anything her life.
Yet again she has gone beyond his imagination with her unconditional love, dose she ever draw lines does the word limit exist in her dictionary. Why is she so bend upon saving his worthless life, but he can't call it worthless now.. it was theirs not his anymore.
Just then ayur knocked the door n panic & barged in scared & tensed.

Precap
Maan horrified!!
-PREV PART 161 NEXT PART 163-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ugh me first ??? 😆 Eeeeks didn't expect that .. wahh seems like its my lucky day today 😆 will comment after reading ..
Edited by Sia89 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

finally you updated

but 😡
now where is Geet?
what is this muskanp
you hell bound to let Mk have only one parent at a time
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ufff......Cliff Hanger Cliff Hanger Cliff Hanger Cliff Hanger!!!!!

Why muskan???
Atleast you could have let us know what was Ayur going to say.?....

Ek toh India ka match itna tension de raha hai....and upar se your FF.....Oh My Lord!!!!


Edited by JayaR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Emmmm..... I dont hav words to explain wat Im feeling after reading the update..... Im like horrified just as Maan is gonna be in the next part.......

Update was superb..... I hope Davis is dead n Maan saves Geet.....

Ghosh!!!!! Geet has bcum more like a dead body who feels nothing...no pain..no fear..no tears.. NOTHING!!! except Maan......
Hopefully she turns into a human after Maan confesses his love to her......Cont soon.....
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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