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Posted: 14 years ago
esi bhi kiya berukhi MUSKAN......😭😭 ik update hi tu manga ha😉
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u rock dalrling amazing wow just amazing muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ab Geet ko aur Mann ko milado muskan ye dooriya nahi sahi jati pls
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Doorriyaaan bhi han, zaroori haan yeh dooriyaan............😊
lakin itni ziyada bhi zarori nahi haan.... 8 years tu ho gaey haan😛😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: iamknown2u

intehan ho gai intzaar ki....😭



Aai naa kuch khabar MAAN KE PYAR (geet) ki 😭

Bewafa Geet nahi😭
Bewafa Maan nahi 😭,

Phir vajah kya hui,
8 yrs apart ki (lol 🤣 aur kuch rhyme nahi kar raha tha)

muski update dear
Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Swaatii



Aai naa kuch khabar MAAN KE PYAR (geet) ki 😭

Bewafa Geet nahi😭
Bewafa Maan nahi 😭,

Phir vajah kya hui,
8 yrs apart ki (lol 🤣 aur kuch rhyme nahi kar raha tha)

muski update dear


Arey wah wah wah👏👏 loved it
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dont scare me!!!!!!😕 plzzz....... oh god i can't take it............😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow great update!!!👍🏼

but u again stopped at a very wrong point..!!!😒

UFFF this kidnapping thing * wondering when will this over*😕

Update soon!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 161 & 162

Maan is in shock after finding that MK is his daughter. Oh no geet is kidnapped.

So sweet that MK wants to go to school even though she is not well. I like maan's aggression when he goes to ayur and khan on where is his wife.

Hope geet is not too hurt and maan and Gautam reach there in time.

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part 163

Most of Geet's consciousness was taken up by her sheer physical misery but on clear cold portion of her brain remained separated & alert. She was not out of the city limits yet. She was still unsure wat was it with Davis. She didn't know where they were taking her, were they taking her for treatment or to kill her & dump her body some where since if they wanted to kill her it would have been easier to do so in the apartment. Looking at the present scenario it seemed like Davis was either dead or dying. Viraat may be trying to find the cause of Davis condition since he respected davis a lot.

POLICE HEAD QUATERS
Gautam
- I had told her to take rest for 2days, but she disobeyed my orders. He smirked she always does But this time she has gone way too far risking her carrier more than anything her life.
Yet again she has gone beyond his imagination with her unconditional love, dose she ever draw lines does the word limit exist in her dictionary. Why is she so bend upon saving his worthless life, but he can't call it worthless now.. it was theirs not his anymore.
Just then ayur knocked the door n panic & barged in scared & tensed.
Gautam - wat is it?
Ayur - Davis is dead
gautam - how?
Ayur - food poisoning thats wat the source say nothing is clear. viraat & his gang is keeping every thing hush.
Maan was horrified, she was with him, when they had their lunch together.
Ayur - he was with some shweeta Kapoor on lunch. He dropped her at her place & then latter at night his health detoriated. Dr were rushed to check him but it was too late.
Gautam ran is hand on his temple - shweeta Kapoor !!!
ayur - clean we don't have any record of this person, just a casual sexy date.
Maan fell on the chair, she planned all this by herself, just to save him. Food poisoning.. he was terrified, wat if she ate the same food, he couldn't even imagine.
Ayur - but we checked her apartment today, it was in a mess & the watchman said that 3men came in the morning & took her away forcefully.
Maan felt the floor was drawn away under his foot.
Gautam - they may be checking if she was involved in his killing.

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The three men in the car didn't converse. They were sorrowful. If they spoke atleast she could eve drop. Viraat was really in grief. He had considered Davis as his Godfather. Though he would have automatically inherited the entire power, but he was not celebrating, instead he had to hunt down the person who was behind the death of the Davis.

The moment the family dr declared it was food poisoning, Viraat had rushed to the restaurant & checked every thing personally, where he discovered he had the lunch with Shweeta. He wanted to know if she was involved, but if she was , then why would she share the meal with him. But he knew some where she could give him some clue of the person behind Davis's death. The moment the car stopped he opened the car dicky & dragged her out. She fell on the floor. He didn't care, he pulled her with a trust making her land on his chest. As he climbed up the steps carrying her ..as if he was wieghtless he called for the family dr who had checked Davis.

He threw her on the bed & waited for the dr. as the dr came in. Viraat paced restlessly to complete the check up.
Dr - it will be not safe to treat her here
viraat - I don't care just tell me if she had that poison.
Dr nodded sadly

POLICE HEAD QUATERS
Maan was mute spectator of wat they where discussing. When the discussion began to go in detail of Davis case, Guatum asked Maan to wait outside. Maan carefully heard to their discussion. He didn't know wat to think or do. Whether to tell them, shweeta kapoor was Geet or not. Will that effect her carrier. Hell with all this..he wants his Geet safe & fine out of all this.
He barged into guatum's cabin - shweeta kapoor is Geet
ayur - how can that be?
Maan - I saw met them in the restaurant.
Guatum was taken by shock to the extend Geet could go.
Maan - where will she be now? Is she safe?
Ayur - gk can't poison any one
guatum sad down hunching his shoulders sadly - she could do anything if it was for Maan
ayur was still confused. Maan
ayur - how r we to get her out of there?
Guatum - we can't
Maan held his collar - why can't u?
Guatam inched backward straightening himself - calm down Mr. Khurana
Maan banged the table in frustration - why can't u?
Guatam - Geet went in all by herself without following any of the protocol, we can't go in now!! wat r we to tell out higher ups, who gave her the permission for all this. If she comes out safe..well & good otherwise it is the risk she took to save u.
Maan - u can't let something like this happen to ur best officer.
Ayur - humare haath bandhe hain.

Maan had lived his life in misery for last 7 odd years, loving her meant everything to him. Even as he thought of everything impossible because he could never have her truly. The sounds of her voice and the smell of her, he always had them with him as he slept and awake. He had buried myself in agony thinking of her, then she came back like an angel to save him from his dead life to sprinkle the joy, the love, the care this time ten ..100 fold more with another little angel of their love with her. No No ways he is going to let any thing happen to her not this time. He can't let anything come between them, not destiny, not his anger, not this world because he will break, he will be torn in to pieces, he may never wake up then. Because this time he won't be able stop crying, he won't be able to stop himself from dying. Because he can't go through this again. No not again.. he will not let anything happen to her he was dead sure of that.
Guatum - as of now we don't even know where she is!!
Maan looked blankly at them. His life was out there, don't know how she was, or wat happened to her, if she was poisoned too, the thought pricked his soul. He tried to persuade them to help him. He tried all the means. He called the higher ups. He put in pressure from all the sides.

Guatum - wat exactly are u trying to do here? We are trying our best here to keep every thing under the wraps. If u involve seniors, then Davis 's people would know for sure that Geet has some hand in his murder. As of now they don't know Gk is shweeta kapoor. Our only hope is that. Geet has been very smart. U don't realize whom she is dealing with.
Maan tried to understand here, calming himself.
Guatum - the person she poisoned is Davis..Davis Raheja, he is been wanted not just by Indian police but other countries too. He is a major underworld Don.
Maan's eyes popped out
Guatum - such a dangerous guy, still has a dignified status in the business world. U urself said he is ur client.
Maan angrily - how is that?
guatum - he has the politician with him. No one could touch him. but gk had planned everything full proof. u won't believe how many of our best officers have died bringing him down. not only did she kill him, she has made it look food poisioning. The more the word spreads, the more sure are we risking Gk's life
Maan - doesn't mean we just keep waiting helplessly
guatum - wat else do u expect us do.
There was complete silence in the room
Guatum - she will manage her way out, this is not the first time she has walked alone into a lion's den bare handed.
Ayur - that is if she still alive he added
he couldn't complete & Maan smashed his face on the wall & punched him ferociously screeming madly she is alive..samjhe tum.. she is alive.. nothing can ever happen to her.. Maan Singh Khurana won't let anything happen to his wife.

A Poem by Rachana
A helpless man, a husband, a father, a lover
A sureheaded wife, a mother, a daughter
Wonder what destiny (Muskan) has in place for them
Us, the fans, the crazy followers
All we can do is sit and wait for the story to unfold
Dreading each moment, minute, hour, day
Waiting...n waiting for the next update
Hoping that the husband can see his wife safely in his arms
The mother go back to her daughter MK as if she never left
The life in her soul can be as intact as 7 years ago
Their love being present in eternity!!
thanxs a lot sweety



Precap
Maan helpless!!!

-PREV PART 162-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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What a power packed action thriller update Muski
Its nail biting with lot of drama and tension.
We have seen Geet going through a lot of pain, mental as well as physical
now high time for Maan to share some of her pain.
I hope nothing happens to Geet.
Muski plz Maneet ko milado
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago

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