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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Teenage.dream



Daadi slapped Maan!! 😃

main haath dho ke nahi naha dokhe peeche pari hoon . . . he has a lot of make up for . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeyyyy!!!!! Meri pyari pyari Di update kar rahi hai..... Muuuuaaaahhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting......................😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

main haath dho ke nahi naha dokhe peeche pari hoon . . . he has a lot of make up for . . .


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Posted: 14 years ago
-truly magical-
part 161
Daadi held her heart & fell on the sofa.. jab humsab ko Geet ka khayal rakhna chahiya tha.. usken nakhren sahne the.. usse sarahano pur rakhna tha.. humne usse ignore kiya.. sab aapki wajah se.. why didn't u tell me before. Mana hum naraz then.. but it was because I didn't know u were married.

He just stood there lost for words wat could he possibly say. He didn't know mk was his baby, even thinking that words now felt like a sin & past 8 days he had been living in that illusion. Not only did he live in that illusion he again hurt both his loves by leaving them alone again at nights, leaving them with hope in their eyes, questioning their unconditional love which was only for him. Every one understood her except whom she trusted the most. Forget understanding he couldn't even relate to her, while she was being wat she was always, the way she shouted in the tunnel after waking up was so typical her, he closed his eyes, remembering every time she did that. She didn't even change a bit towards him, the way she risked her life for him. Risked her life!!! wat was she doing with Davis!! he is just a business man from mumbai!!
8hrs ago at the Restaurant after Maan left.

Davis looked around for Maan while one of his men in black suit came forward & told him, Maan left, as something came up. Geet sighed in relief. Davis enjoyed her relief.
Davis - some one wants to be alone with me gaving a lopsided smile
she tried to blush, her make up did help.
The waiter got another empty glass, the one he ordered for Maan.
Davis - u must taste this
it would be a waste
she said as she sipped her coffee. I love this. Whiskey...yuck..
davis - this one will change ur mind trust me, he looked into her eyes.
She smiled softly & continued sipping her coffee
davis - just a sip, I want u to taste it for me.
He held her closer cajoling rather bid rudely. For the first time she saw the flare of temper in his eyes. He was the Davis Raheja & he was not used to anyone refusing him, especially not a female whom he had honored with his attention.
She tried to give a nice good look & very sugar coatedly said I don't like the taste of hard drinks
he poured the drink for her in the slender glass - u haven't tried the right one then.
Davis - agar tumhe yeh aacha nahi laga tho I will never ask u to taste any other hard drink, u can have my word on that.
Geet was so sure about his words.. he won't be alive to ask her for another drink..actually ask anything. She shook her head, his anger flared & he set the glass on the table with a thud.
Davis - meri har baat ka jawab tum na main deti ho. Us raat bhi mera saat nahi chali thi tum. He turned his face away. I wonder why r u even here. He rises throwing the napkin, lets call it a day then.

She so much wanted it ; but he had only couple of sips of his whiskey. Had he had more then she would have loved to leave him. Then she looked at the bottle, she did'nt know wat will he do now, if she refused. He may just walk out leaving this exotic expensive poisoned opened bottle here or will he take it with him. If he left it here, then the owner won't hesitate in selling it to other customers, no, that would be too dangerous. Then she thought just a sip won't matter. She knew the drink was super toxic. When she prepared it with at most care & made sure she added the right ingredients, she was scared that even if the drink pours on any ones skin it could be absorbed directly, thats why she had used gloves while preparing it in the lab. So she couldn't probably leave the poisoned bottle here.
Geet - ok..
without hesitation she took the slender stem in her firm hand. He tilted the glass to her sealed lips & lets the drink touch her lips, she suppressed the shudder that rolled through her. She didn't gulp anything but pretended to. She kept the glass down elegantly & took the napkin to pat her wet lips & then placed the napkin on the table without touching the damp part.
Davis very curiously & excited asked as he didn't notice her shuddering - how do u like it
she made a pathetic face - it is so bitter.. isse aacha main karela khaa loon!! yuck!!!
he thought she looked so cutely innocent & sweet .. comparing Macallan Fine & rare 1926 with Karela. He almost smiled. She saw that tinge of smile on his face & immediately put up her price.
Geet - aab khush ho na!! koi aapni date ko karela ka juice pi latha hain!!
she showed anger in her eyes - woh bhi jaberdasti. & turned her face in anger.
Davis - main ne koi jaberdasti nahi ki
Geet - ki
turning her face away from him.
He took another sip from his glass & very thoughtfully moved closer to her putting his hand around her
davis - I am sorry, I am not used to
she snapped not used to being refused, iska matlab yeh tho nahi u will force me.
Geet could do anything to get this threat off from her Maan's life. & wat she just did was nothing less, she was just risking her life yet again. She exactly knew how deadly the drink is. She didn't dare to sip her coffee again, as the cafe could speed up the effect of poison. Well she did wat she could to minimize the effect of the poison.

Davis was a charmer. Any girl could fall for his deadly, sexy looks. His charismatic mannerisms, his magnetic way to please his lady. The pride he gives them when they r beside him..!!! wow.. she knows very well how it feels.. she is been with so many famous personality until her bachan. Strangely both of them being so famous ..Maas Singh Khurana ...Geet Handa they managed to get their private time always alone away from media & public, probably thats wat aided in their relation. They were always themselves, nothing external forced them to be different or show off. It was purely Maan.. as Maan & Geet as Geet... together in their own little paradise they created.

Davis in a very seductive voice accepted yes!! he was not able to accept being refused. How could one not fall for it.. but this was Geet Khurana he was dealing with, whose heart was ruled & driven only by her love, who was off course the most charismatic person she could think about actually the only person she could ever think about.

2 hours latter, they finished a lavish spread in the lunch & the entire bottle in Davis's stomach they rose to leave. He put his hand around her waist & walked her to his car. The driver opened the door for her. He had all the intention to take her to his place & spend the entire week end exploring every seen & unseen parts of her raw skin. As the car moved she felt nauseated, she thought it could be just because of the tension that coiled in her not at all because of the poison. The poison would take more than 2hrs to show its effect.
Geet - I think something I ate didn't suit me
Davis - tumhe mera saat nahi chalna tho sedha bol sakti ho, yeh natak karne ki kya zaro rath hain he turned his head looking outside the window now
Geet - main koi natak nahi kar rahi, she said firmly
hitting her head back on the head rest. This was not tension, because the pressure was spinning her head now. Stop the car she screamed .. I need to puke.
Davis ordered the driver to stop it at once
driver slammed the brakes making them jerk a bit.
she opened the door & puked in the side. He immediately passed on water bottle to her while he stood behind her patting her back . She washed herself & wiped her mouth with the hanky he silently passed.

She almost fell back in the car seat - I am in such a mess.. really sorry
she was taken a back with her own voice sounding so weak & trembling
davis - sorry tho mujhe kahna chahiya tha, I really didn't know u were feeling so sick.
Do u want to go the doctor
Geet - nahi I am better after throwing up.. she just lied, she wanted to get away from him at the earliest. Just drop me home. Home.. the place she pretended to live in. she had hired a 1Bhk flat with all false documents showing she lived there for some time now. It was the same place where he dropped her after the party. By now his men would have done all the back ground check to confirm the same to him, otherwise he wouldn't have called her yesterday.

Davis told the driver to take he to the flat. He dropped her, wanted to kiss her, but she pretended she was conscious about the puke's smell. He smiled weakly - take care .. I will call u tomorrow
which for sure she knew he won't be able to.

She dragged her self to her flat & collapsed into the couch. She was supposed to get back to office & wait for the good news, but she just couldn't. She felt so calm that the threat is not any more lingering around Maan. She just waited for watever would happen to happen.

Precap
😲Geet kidnapped😲
-PREV PART 160 NEXT PART 162-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Full of suspense and thrill. What an evevtful update.
I hope geet is ok. May b the fumes of the poison got her
and she felt sick.
Maan ke hote hoay...... Geet kidnapped.. Hailah ye kaise possible hai.
Can't wait for the nxt update.
Luvd how u made the atmosphere adorable once maansi's identity was revealed.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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For an Awesome update
Geet is again kidnapped .We want Maneet to be reunited[.I am losing my patience gurl.I open the post every day hoping that today I will read maneet's reunion 😭
Muski this update was packed with action and thriller,hope to see some light romance in ur next update.
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Muski luvely update babe, 1 more update plzzzz need to know if Davis died n is Geet alrite,besides dat

Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for the wonderful update.
How much agony will our dear Geet go through.
She made such afool proof plan and that silly guy made her sip the drink.
Hope the drink didnt get into her.
Good thing she puked.Hope she is not pregnant again.
Looks like she is going through the 7 years of Shani phase.
Last year being the worst.
But they say when the shani leaves you he will always do something good.
Hope something miraculous and magical happens in our TM
Our Geet's fate is all in Muskan's hands.
Waiting to see what more is in store for her.

Edited by Ramhari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
What do U mean by Geet kidnapped Dont tell me dat Davis didnot drink the poisoned drink 😕 😕 😕 Thats y he was not feelin ill at all......
Update was superb.... Cont soon... Cant wait for the next part....
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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