-truly magical- MAANEET FF THREAD 19

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: muskanp
started typing..now...
please bare with me

We are waiting.
We don't mind waiting
As looong as you are writing.😍

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

kitnaaa time aur lagay gaa muski .... me waiting kab se 😔

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Muskaan didi waiting ............... make it fast no sis plssssssssss update soon........🤔

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

-truly magical-
part 160

anjali laughed nahi nahi .. jaise main anni ki anjali
dev says - main dev ka devansh
mk kisses Maan 's cheeks & says aur main Maan ki Maansi
every one froze, blank, thoughtless for a brief moment
mk proudly said - maansi khurana, mama kehti hain main aapne da da da
Daadi offered - daddy passing an annoying look to maan
mk smiled & nodded main da da.. ki tarah hoon bilkul Maan si.. issliyen maansi
Daadi came close to mk & kissed her dearly. Maan sat there speechless, suddenly realizing his absence, uncontrolled grief, unspoken beliefs..the belief that took away every thing from geet, even the eternity seemed concealed now. How the years gone unnoticed. blank, thoughtless ..maansi his dream, his life was all the while in his arms, longing craving for him only him. Geet lived his dream, their angel, she was his.. exactly wat he wanted. Their little Pari like Geet. Who loved him more than anything else just like her mother.

The shock of what is not, is more disturbing...than the acceptance of what is! How could he !!!! the reality hit him hard deep he stopped and dropped..as reality delivered, ceasesed attempts nothing wat he thought so far, nothing he did so for ever made sense. Losing his attention, losing the illusion that drove him, to have and behold delusion now the delusion and THE reality ... he hated himself.. even that he couldn't.. their love didn't let him!!! he wanted to bleed himself.. that would be bliss to him but just kill them..he wanted to cry ..cry out loud to free his soul from this caged meaningless life..worthless life.. but it was not his anymore.. it was never his.. she took it with her all to herself, to treasure, to pamper, to cherish to eternity.

Every one kissed maansi & loved her with tears in their eyes. Anni cried & hid her face in arjun's arms, she felt so ashamed of herself. Daadi told Anjali to take them to devansh's room & play until nakul lays the dinner. The moment they left she instantly got up & slapped Maan. Who was in shock, all he could do now was shed tears, with his head dipped - how dare u ? she looked at him in fury & then sighed in disgust actually tumhari galti nahi.. meri parwareshmi koi kami hain, pehle baap aab beta she spat on his face in anger & walked away. He had no answer. He felt low, cheated, betrayed by self. He himself destroyed wat ever he had in his life.

He felt so much of pain, he was losing himself, he was going insane. He wanted to cut himself, tare himself, end every bit of his pride his anger. He was sick of living his life just him.. but he was not him any more.. actually he was never him any more.. he was hers the day she was his.. then how could he even think otherwise..tears just flowed, he felt so suffocated, stuck in a trap of his pride & anger where no one can hear his painful screams, the worst was yet to be known .. if only Geet knew wat he was thinking.. his horrible thoughts!!! his heart didn't want to beat any further.

He put all his wits together & raised his dead body.. walked towards devansh's room. Every thing made so much sense... mk running in the mid to traffic & jumping in to his embrace like she found wat she cherished the most. Mk getting over possessive about him, disturbed the board game because she longed for it through out her life, his eyes burned .. as tears felt like blood then. The pain he gave to his little princess, how could he.. oh!! he shouted at her.. told her she was bad girl.. he immediately lifted her hugged her & cried.. nahi baby... u r very good girl u r very good girl.. u r the best baby in the world..u r sweetest, cutest the thought ..she thought he was gussa !how could he ever be.. that too when he saw her for the first time !!.. he kissed her madly.. nahi daddy gussa nahi.. daddy apani nani Pari se kabhi gussa nahi.. she kissed him back sachi..he kissed her continuously sachi sachi... kabhi nahi kabhi nahi..
he couldn't stop crying dipping his head in her little shoulder. She hugged him softly with her feather like hands & then kissed away his tears.. his pain.. that surfaced..

Daadi took mk from Maan - she needs to have dinner & then her medicine.
Mk looked at Daadi & smiled. mk was so happy with every one around her. Her family. Her daddy, her badi Daadi, chachu, her chachi, uncle her aunty..her cousin.. her family..every one.. her mama was right.. she had every one.. !!! they were a big happy family.

After feeding her, maan put her to sleep. She hugged Maan & rested her head on his chest. His tears didn't stop.. remembering, every incident.. every time, Geet met him; she was just hoping !!! at least now he would be there for her. Thats why she was so delighted to see him on the first day of the school! She expected him to know everything!!.. she expected !!!! she still expected!!!

Daadi to nanny - Geet se baat huwaien?
nanny to Daadi - mam ka phone nahi lag raha hain
Daadi - shayad ghar pur hoon
Daadi & dev went to geets house. As they drew in dev pointed the name plate to Daadi..Geet Khurana! Daadi closed her eyes in misery. Why didn't she see this board in the morning before speaking all those harsh words to her.

Khurana Mansion
Maan got up & tried calling Geet. He didn't know wat he would say, but he had to call her. He wanted to speak to her. He wanted to plead for his mistakes, wanted her to kill him with her bear hands. He was sorry for the words he didn't say and not expressing his love & still expecting her to!! Maybe he should have known, that for him, she can't be had!! but still he had her..all only for him.

When she didn't pick up the call .. he walked out .. mk instantly got up & began to cry. He ran back to her. da..da...mu...mu....jhe.... chooooo.....chooooo.....chooooo.....chooooo.....d nahi....nahi....nahi....
he didn't understand a word... but he knew she didn't want him to leave.
Maan - shoo....shoo....ummah.. daddy aapke paas hi hain...
mk ..softly cried & then dossed off.

Daadi & dev came back. Daadi restlessly waited for Maan to come out.
The moment he came out
Daadi - when did u guys get married???
Maan - london main
anni was shocked.
Daadi - mujhe badana bhi zaroori nahi samjha, u were waiting for me ask u???
wat stopped u from accepting her as ur wife???
he stood quiet looking down, he had no answer.. anything he said would be just an excuse
u r married for last 8-9yrs & I am like a fool trying to fix u with girls. Mera nahi tho kamse kam Geet ke bareme tho socha hota, handa's ke baren main socha hota. Unki beti bin byayen maa!! poor soul suffered every thing alone, when she deserved to be respected & treated like a princess.

Every thing I ever dreamt off.. babaji gave me.. beautiful, elegant, caring loving badi bahu.. & aur uski parchayen.. nanhi Pari.. meri par poti...but u kept them away from us.
maansi fever main thadap rahi thi.. she broke in tears.. aur hum usse dular bhi nahi kar saken. Hum tho phir bhi sambal jayengen..How r u going to make up for these 7 yrs of her life..her hell. Those words tore his already torn heart further. why she looked younger to anjali when she is in same class as anjali, do u know anything ??
He sadly added - pre- term
Geet did try telling him, but he didn't understand then.
Daadi held her heart & fell on the sofa.. jab humsab ko Geet ka khayal rakhna chahiya tha.. usken nakhren sahne the.. usse sarahano pur rakhna tha.. humne usse ignore kiya.. sab aapki wajah se.. why didn't u tell me before. Mana hum naraz then.. but it was because I didn't know u were married.

Precap
Geet & Davis

-PREV PART 159 NEXT PART 161-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
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muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Iram

@SaVni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

😆😛res ***

EDITED****

WELL I'm first jippi ;😃

AWWwww this part was so sad 😭😭 but great yet😆

And now when MK and the hole Khurana family is happy please reunion Maan and Geet.. And sooon!!!!!!😃

Edited by SaVni - 14 years ago

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

MUSKAN..... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I LOVE YOU... I

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You made us wait for this....and its worth the wait....😛😛😛😛😛

Comming to the update....👏👏👏👏👏👏

I am extreemly surprised with the reaction of All family Members when MK revealed her full name....Didnt expect them all to be so happy and feel guilty....Even Annie to that matter. I was never angry at Dadima as she never knew anything aobout Maneet's marriage wayback in London....She is not at fault and she proved it today.

Even Annie felt guilty for her behaviour towards Geet....She is shoked to know that they were already married.

My goodness....everyone are soo happy to know about MK's identity....makes us all happy indeed.😊😛😉

Hah....Maan getting bashed from all four corners...No wonder Daadi was totally upset with him. As she blamed geet and her upbringing where as her own grandson was at fault...😡

Finally, Geet Khurana Name plate was read....atleast by Daadi. But its too late now. What ever destruction had to be done is already done. Daadi cannot take back those words which clearly communicated to Geet what Maan has been thinking about her....that she has moved on.

Maan is upset not because Dadima scolded him...but angry on himself....now the scary picture of those 7 years 6 months and 10 days will be haunting him and he will never be at peace till he knows the truth and even after he knows the truth....And needless to mention...

those 6-8 days after confronting Maan (After 7+ years) were the most painful period for her where in Maan is in front of her but doesnt have an answer for what is he expecting out of her/ MK and their relationship....Each and every second must have pricked her. Maan is ashamed of this fact.😭

I have a strong feeling that Geet will not give in now after she realises what Maan thought about her....how could he even think or dream that Geet has moved on in her life? How could he? This is the biggest ever blow he has given her....Insulting her love her true feelings....My god...Geet will not easily forgive Maan for this.😭....Even if Geet gives in, Its nearly impossible for Maan to bring back those 7+ years of precious life....😭😭

Geet is still with Davis....Your previous precap still unanswered...where is Geet? I am sure this time Geet is intending to trap Davis and she will be successful in her mission.

Precap is scary....for GEET 😕 or For DAVIS....😆....Waiting waiting for the next update....please post it soon.

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago

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kirti_fiji

@kirti_fiji

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

thanks, need to read your updates, i am addicted to them

thanks

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

brilliant part. loved it.
I want to give u a standing ovations .
u just brilliant .
I'm speechless muskan .

love u lots.
precap is scary. but faith on u.
update soon.
I'll give defo long comments.
thanks darling for awesome part.
u r real gem

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

Beautiful part.............loved it!!!
U r truly a magical gem with a magical wand.
I'm short of words to express it,really wonderful!!!
Fabulous update!!!
will give detail com later.

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago