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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Sabar kar (Self Talk)....meethaupdate milega 😳


Meethe ke sath sath lamba update milega 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
lamby k sath sath thora LIGHT b hona chahiyeee not bhai bharkum 😛
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-truly magical-
part 159

he shook her couple of times & rested his head on hers - maan kyun nahi lethi
she yet again painfully looks at his sense of belonging, his fearless fears. He is been speaking & she doesn't know what to say, she tries to say something but she constantly stutter. Trying to make sure each word puts him that much closer to her..not pushes him away. She looks into his eyes through the doors of their memory . All she could see was pain of their past & feels strangled by the remembrance. His touch now feels dead, his continuous torture runs through her empty suffocation. She wants more than anything for him to hold her to take her pain away.

Awkward nakedness embarrassment nothing mattered anymore..wondered when did it ever mattered between them. His eyes watched her as she takes his suffering away giving him a new enjoyment in life a simple compromise of her dignity all because she wanted him to hold her to take her pain away - haan..she said it looking in those eyes.

He left the grip instantly & fell back not able to bare the intensity in those eyes. He just wanted to close his eyes & die.. he wanted to see love in those eyes but not with so much of pain with them. his mournful heart didn't want to beat any more. Eternally, he was rest assured the pain he felt was much so deep, it hurted even when he grieve, its intensity just killed him.

She felt so naked suddenly with his moving away. She smirked with those eyes concealing yet again never to open again - how does it matter to u??? she said it sadly how does is change anything between us?? she spat u still r where u always were!! cut was so deep within her still the blood that oozed out there deep surfaced with her tearless cry. He stood there numb looking now blankly at her eyes which burned through him, right to his soul. Every thing just felt dark, endless, meaningless. He was ashamed about his own mere existence.

Nanny came out with mk & bags. Geet held mk's hand & dragged her from there. mk.. kept crying waving at Maan, whose head was lowered in disbelieve. Engines ignites the car moves, almost out of sight one moment she was there, the next she was not. She sat there alone, tired and cold lost in this place without him to hold her like always. No worse than this have she felt in years she thought ..she had cried, though yet, no tears. Still waiting..still waiting not knowing wat was she waiting for.

Maan drops prince & then goes to mansion. He locks himself in the room. His misery grows deep, how can that be?? how could she still love him?? why why why?? this is wat he wanted then why was there so much of pain?? did she still wait for him?? the hatred of the soul was wider than he could believe. Self destruction was bliss, kill his pain, his mind his thought, his regretful heart. Daadi & dev had to stop him he roared in pain that laid deep within. They all were scared to see him in so much of pain.

Daadi immediately inquired with anjali wat happened in farmhouse.
Anjali - we had lots of fun
anni - did sam aunty join u guys?
Anjali - she came with us, phir patanahi kya huwa jab Geet aunty aayen tho she left.
Daadi - did any one say anything to her
anjali - nahi.. lekin mk ne unse gift nahi liya

Daadi was really disturbed. Next day she goes to meet Geet.
Geet was just outside sending mk to school. Geet was delighted to see Daadi. She welcomed her in & offered her tea.
Daadi - hume aap se baat karni hain
Geet was really excited still having some hope some where.
Daadi looked at the house, which was still in unpacking state.
Geet - luggage nahi aayen abhi taak
Daadi took a deep breath in - I see u have moved on & u have done well for ur self.
Geet fluttered her eyes.. trying to make sense.. moved on!!
Daadi - u have a blessed happy family, then why r u not letting Maan move on.
Geet's eyes burned, tears probably formed.
Daadi - I know u both had a past but it is a past, usse bhi tho khus rahene ka haaq hain. I never opposed ur relationship with Maan then but now she paused.
Geet didn't say a word, neither did she cry, the tear that formed, evaporated...dried instantly.
Daadi - I hope u understand wat I am saying.
*****

Later in the after noon Geet tilted her head & smiled at her companion, Davis Raheja as he seated her at the best table in the restaurant. Her smile at least was trying to be genuine though almost nothing else about her was. Her almond color of her eyes was warmed to light greyish blue by colored contact lenses. Her curly dark black hair was now streaked into shades on light & dark brown. To Davis Raheja , she was Sweetha kapoor, which was a common enough surname in delhi. Davis was suspicious by nature that fact that has made him a successful in criminal world & still maintain a great name in the business world. Well today was the day davis have been looking forward to since the very first time he met her in a party. Accidental he thought, but it was a very well planed & a full proof plan laid by her.

She didn't get much time to prepare a full proof background plan though. But it was a chance she took, she had to. She would have shot him if she could, but his protection was excellent. Every time she met up with him she was searched thoroughly. Even the party where they first met all the guests were searched.

This is was his favorite restaurant in the city. The whole place booked for him, it had covered entrance. The owner of the place would take special interest to ensure safety. An army of black cat type men dressed in black suit waited encircling the restaurant, who zealously watched the streets & the neighborhood. Outside the restaurant the street was lined with cars that had bulletproof glass & armored bottoms.

The whole plan was full proof, the poison was in Macallan Fine & rare 1926 that would shortly be served. The poison was so deadly that even one peg would be enough. The owner of the restaurant had gone out of his way to arrange this whiskey for Davis & Geet had gone extraordinary lengths to get her hands on it first & arrange to let the owner know about about the exoctic bottle. Once she knew, Davis had planned to take her here for lunch she got the bottle delivered here through indirect sources. No one was aware of her mission.

She very well knew he may expect her to share the drink with him, but she has been playing smart since the time they met in the party by avoiding drink. He may rather want to share his bed with her but he was destined to be disappointed yet again. Every thing seemed to perfectly in place. Until she saw Maan walking in through the front door of the restaurant. Davis hand rested on her thighs, softly caressing her. Maan was searched thoroughly before reaching him. His guards were made to wait outside. She was not sure wat exactly was going on. It was supposed to be a date with Davis then wat then hell Maan doing here, did davis know about them, she didn't let the fear surface. She looked at davis inquisitively.
Davis - I am sorry darling, he held her hand & kissed them. I had this important business meeting I couldn't postpone.
Maan's eyes hated the sight. He scanned her grey blue eyes, shaded hair, short dress strong shades of lipstick. She looked at him pleasantly pretending to be a complete stranger.
Davis streched his hand from sitting his sofa - this Mr Khurana my business associate, he put his hand around her & squeezed her closer, this is Shweeta kapoor my new ..then he smiled lopsidedly. Maan fumed & looked away with hating smile.
Davis whispered in geets ears - u know the shy types
Geet gave giggle keeping in sync with her character shweeta kapoor
Maan handed few files to davis - I have added our comments, u can look into it & sign.
He dropped the file on the table & turned to leave. He did know this was part of her job, but couldn't stand her this avtar. He hated himself being so helpless, he so much wanted to drag her out & punch the hell out of that davis to even have looked at her.
Davis - won't u like to join us for a drink.
Geet's heart missed a beat.. for once she would be ready to sip the drink herself but Maan, no .. not even over her dead body.

Just then the owner himself walked in with the Macallan Fine & rare 1926 rarest of the whiskey followed two waiters approached, one with the bottle as if a priceless treasure & the other bringing her coffee. She smiled at her thanks as the coffee was placed in front of her, then occupied herself adding sugar & stirring it. As the waiter opened the bottle, Davis smelled the cap.. & nodded his pleased acceptance. The waiter poured the drink in the glass & severed him.

He requested another glass of Maan.
Geet immediately looked at Maan, the look was a clear NO. rather a strict NO!! he gulped his saliva - I don't take hard drink at this hour.
Davis - I insist
just then maan's phone rings, he excuses himself & goes out to take the call. there was an invisble sigh of relief in geet.

Pricipal - I am Mk's principal. Mr. Khurana sorry to bother u, Gk ka phone off aa raha hain, thats why we had to call u.
Maan looked at Geet giggling with Davis, he was not sure wat was she up to. She had no phone on her, just one small purse.
Maan - is every thing alright?
principal - mk has high fever. Could u come & take her.
Maan - umm
principal - gk had told us not to call u unless it is really urgent, hope u don't mind
Maan - umm
He informs the guards that he had to rush. Within minutes he reaches the school. Mk was made to lie in the care room. The dr had checked & reported it was just a fever nothing to worry.
Maan tries to reach nanny her number was not reachable. The moment Mk sees Maan she hugs him & cries madly.
Dr - I think she has been crying, thats why fever.
Maan kisses her - why u have been crying sweetheart
she still continued to cry, she was scared ..scared feared not seeing him last night with her. A fear that she had been living all her life, that will she ever get to be with her father like all other kids do. A fear he didn't know.
He picks mk,anjali & devansh takes them home. Mk sleeps on him through out the drive, while a question played on his head , why did Geet gave his number on the records. Why why???
as they walk in Khurana Mansion mk was fast a sleep.

Daadi - yeh kaun hain
anjali - mk
Daadi - wat happened to her?
Maan - fever hain Daadi.
Maan looked so tensed & vulnerable. They made her lie on the bed in maans room.
Daadi got water & cloth to bring her fever down. - Geet khanha hain? Daadi was getting so worried about the child. Wat will happen if she wakes up & asks for her parents.
Maan continuously tries geets number.

Later at in the evening every one was sitting at the dinning table. Maan carried mk & comes down. Mk smiles looking at the entirely family. She immediately goes & takes turn to kiss every one's cheeks, badi Daadi..ummah
anni aunty ummah
Arjun uncle ummah
dev uncle ummah
nt aunty ummah

every one was shocked then she plonked her self in maan's lap.
Daadi - aap hum sab ko jaanthe ho .. aap ne bataya nahi aapka naam kya hain?
Mk - mk
anjali laughed nahi nahi .. jaise main anni ki anjali
dev says - main dev ka devansh
mk kisses Maan 's cheeks & says aur main Maan ki Maansi

PLASE LEAVE UR COMMENTS ON


Precap
where is Geet???

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski itz 3.00 am here.bt i cant sleep without readng ur update.plz jaldi karona...im dyng to read it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luv u . Thanks for update.
Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago
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thanku 👏 MK is so sweet n truly magicaly she said Maan ki MAANSI😊
Edited by NayabSaher - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Muskan....🤗

Hats off to you....4th update and that too a long one....WOW...Highly appreciated
Comming to the update, you have left me absolutely speechless 😭. I knew something like this will happen....Maan knowing MK...True sence Maan came to know her name....She said it nicely...MAAN KI MAANSI😊😛😉 😳....So, she is MAANSI KHURANA (MK)😉😉...
And As I doubted...MU is not yet cleared.......Still Maan is in a messful thought 😕😕...Its high time for him to find the true answers rather than assuming things 😡😡
Maan's mere doubt is causing him so much pain where Daadi and Dev had to control him....what will happen when Maan comes to know the ULTIMATE TRUTH....what Geet has actually went thro...OMG...what will happen to Maan then? 😭😭
Subsequently, Daadi meeting geet in such a way was very unpleasant...Once again Geet's hopes were ruined when Daadi told her that "As she has moved on....even Maan needs to move on"...Again she has got an answer for what Maan has been thinking about her all this while or atleast would have opened his mouth in front of Daadi about their relationship...again Geet is disappointed...Oops...how she might have felt.....this might have ruined the last bit of emotions within her...No more hopes/desires left....she might have felt that she is waiting for NOTHING...Ab kya hoga??😭🤢.
Oops...didnt expect this to come...Maan caught Geet with Davis at that restaurant...But gr8 that he dint spill the beans...and happy ki kam se kam abhi tho us ne apni akal ka isthemal kiya...😆😆....Now what happens to Geet after Maan left from the restaurant? Hope her plan gets successful...Hope for the best 👍🏼
Precap is again giving way to lot of Questions...Geet had enough of physical and mental torture...ENOUGH IS ENOUGH😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
SPEECHLESS.....ur a fabulous writer.....
Luvd it to da core....MAAN KI MAANSI <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
MK is Maansi Khurana . . . . . Good name . But i thing MUSKAN KHURANA is better . Superb update .
But my expectations was tooooooooooo high .
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i really dont have words to describe hw beautiful d update was....
it was simply superb..
maan ki maan-si was fab..!!!
loved it to the core..
worried about geet...hope she is successful in whatever she planned..

thank u so so much muski 4 giving us these many updates













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