FF PYAAR KE LIIYE (last ch posted) page 14)

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"PYAAR KE LIYE"

Intro

ANURAG

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- a vry sweet nd handsome boy, possessive caring helpful

TAANI-

- a vry sweet cheerful , caring girl'.nd little hyper

D oder characters will be introduced late'..dis is my first FF

It wud be a vry short nd sweet luv story'

Plzz frndzz do comment shud I continue nd can also seggest better title for d story'thnku

The story begins like dis'

Bahut bearish ho rahi hai'..aur subah subah ek ladka jaldi me jaa rah hota hai'aur achanak se who ek ladki se takrata hai'dono ek dusre ko bahut gusse me dekhta hai'

Plzz frnds do comment I will post d 1st ch by evening'..

thnku


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey a gud start i must say....do continue....i'm gonna be a regular follower of all d updates...btw d character sketches r interesting...taani a bit hyper...cool yaar...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoKafan4eva

hey a gud start i must say....do continue....i'm gonna be a regular follower of all d updates...btw d character sketches r interesting...taani a bit hyper...cool yaar...update soon...


THNKUU SOO MUCH.....i will update d 1st c by evening...thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww rips u actually started with it over here. Ure gr8 man. this story is gonna be rocking i know coz ure the one writing it 😃 😊😳. ure such an awesome writer u must become an author
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Posted: 14 years ago
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1st ch

Anokhi mulakate

Aur fir anurag aur tani ek dusre se takrate hai..

Anurag- sorry

Tani- huh sorry bolne se kya hota hai. Dekhke nai chal sakte kya. Andhe ho gaye ho kya

Anurag-ohh madam vesa galti sirf meri nai hai fir bhi me sorry bol raha hu

Tani- to kya ehsaan kar rahe ho

Anurag- ha muje koi shauk nai hai ladkiuo se takrane ka'huh

Tani(in anger)- huh

Nd den dey both of dem goes in different ways'

Tani(in mind)- all boys r d same'aaj ka to din hee kharab hai

Anurag(in mind)- pata nai aaj kal ki ladkiya apne aap ko samjti kya hai

Dis was der 1st meeting

Laboni ma- taani's mother

Nilu maa-anurag's mother

Riya- tani's close frnd

Raj- anurag's best frnd

Laboni mama- tani kaha jaa rahi he???

Taani- maa me riya ke sath shoping ke liye jaa rahi hu

Laboni ma- theek hai lekin jaldi aa jana

Taani- haa ma aa jaungi..byee

On dat side anurag's frnd raj comes 2 his house

Nilu ma- anurag dekh tera dost raj aya hai

Anurag(towards raj)- aree raj tu yaha

Raj- anurag chalna mera cousin ki shadi hai shopin ke liye chlte he

Anurag- to tu jaa me nai aa raha

Nilu ma- aree onu chala ja na apne liye bhi shopin kar lena

Nurag- acha theek hai

Raj-to chal jaldi kar

On 1 side tani nd riya r goin for shopin nd oder side anurag nd raj obviously in 1 maul'.lol

Riya- tani chalna jake dresses dekhte hai

Tani- acha theek hai chal

Raj- anurag ye shirt mujpe kesa lag raha he

Anurag- a6a cha lab muje bhi shopin karni hai

Raj- haa to karna

(riya ko ek urgent call ata hai from her office)

Riya- tani muje jana padega office se urgent kaam hai

Tani- huh tu aur tera office'theek hai ja

Riya- byee

(after sumtym)

Anurag- chal ab ghar chale

Raj- haa yaar chalet he bahut paise barbad ho gaye

Anurag- ha ha cha lab nautanki

Raj- tu bahar nikal me ata hu

Anurag- theek hia jaldi aa

( on 1 side tani bhi bahar jaa rahi hai aur dusri aur anurag bhi'..aur anurag tani fir se takrate hai aur unki bags gir jati hai)

Tani- dekhke nai chal sakte

Anurag- tumhe bhagwan ne ankhe nai di kya?

(den tani aur anurag ek dusre ko dekhte hai nd dey recognizes each oder)

Tani(gusse me)- tum mera peecha kar rahe ho

Anurag- tum kya priyanka chora ho jo me tera peecha karunga.

Tani- pata nai maul wale pagalo ko entry kaise deta hai

Anurag- jese tumhe entry mil gain a vesa hee

Tani- shut up

(aur wo dono apni bags leka chale jate hai)

Anurag(bahar jake)- ohh no meri ekk bag gayab he

Raj- kya bol raha he dekhna yahi hogi

Anurag- aree nai hai

Raj- to kaha chali gai

Anurag(sochta hai nd den)- aree haa me abhi ek pagal ladki se takray tha shayad usike pas chala gaya hoga'aur uski ek bag mera paas'ohh god

Raj- ohoo ladki se takraya'ahem ahem

Anurag- chup kar

(Anurag inquires abt dat girl from d shopkeeper nd he said he don't know d name bt he gave her d no.)den anurag cums out

Raj- kya hua

Anurag- kuch nai yeh us ladki ka no. mila hai

Raj- ohoo to karna teri us pagal ladki ko fone'.ahem ahem

Anurag- tu chup kar cha lab ghar me badme karlunga

( den after reaching home anurag calls tani)

Tring tring'.tring tring'tring..

tani-hello...

we will continue soon


Hey frndzz plzz post ur comments'..dis is our 1st FF'sorry if ne mistake'.nd we hav 2 write for dis FF'..1 is me(ripal) nd oder is sonatl(shobhna)

Thnkuu soo much'we will write 2nd ch soon

Edited by harshiya_rox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoKafan4eva

amazing part...update soon..

thnku soo much😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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frndzz plzz tell us did u liked our 1st ch....plzz so we get a hint 2 continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aaw I love it so far, can't wait to see what happens! Add more soon girls! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lubz.TaAnu

Aaw I love it so far, can't wait to see what happens! Add more soon girls! 😉

yaa sure we will thnku soo much😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very interesting. Plz. post the next chapter soon.

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