My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) # 2 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
wow amazing update.. luved the way geet slapped dev.. Dev is so cheap.. felt a lil bad for NT...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Loved da update
Do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Congrats on yr new thread.
awsome update.
dev is so evil..
my god..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
congrats wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
wow CID is here o balle balle
ab to dev ki chutti tuntana tun congrats for new threadf
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Those are awesome updates as always...loved emmmm

gawd hate devtara.....ewwwwww

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
congrats 4 new thread
great update
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Part 24

warning: do not move to the other update without pressing like tab😡 or else I will not give two back to back updates
The CID team was followed by the security guards Maan has called, he was surprised to see the team, he eyed DM who nodded in turn

DM: hello ACP

ACP: hello Mrs. Khurana, nice to see you
DM asked them to sit and ordered Nakul to brink eatables and then she indicated Maan to go forward with his chores
Maan took Dev and NT to the furthest room along with the Advocate and security guards.
ACP: what happened to that guy?
DM: nothing just a little argument between husband and wife
ACP: do you need any help?
DM: I will certainly tell you when needed.
ACP: sorry for coming in so early, actually we can't move
forward with your dinner invitation
DM: what happened?
ACP: we finished here early and this Dr. Salunke wants to go to Mumbai as early as possible to do the tests
DM: don't they have labs here
ACP: ask him, I tell you these forensics are nerd, they don't feel at home in other labs
Dr. S: mind you ACP, ok will not go from here, and let the case go to hell
Daya: Dr. Cool ACP was just kidding
Dr. S: kidding, you people have sick senses of humor
Abhijeet: don't worry Dr. we will leave as early as possible
ACP: yes, he will definitely accompany you; he has left his heart there in your lab
Abhijeet: Sir, aap bhi
DM: you all will never change
Nakul comes in and serves eatables with Geet's help
ACP: never seen this girl here?
DM: ACP this is not some crime sight
ACP: no just asking, casually
DM: she is Geet, has come in yesterday from HSPur to pursue
further studies
Daya: hello Geet, I am Daya and they are and introduces her to rest of the team
G: nice to see you all
DM: so now you will have to have lunch and then only I will let you leave
ACP: oh! No, will you be able to feed my whole army (laughs)
G: why not? Just give us 30 mins
Dr. S: will you feed us canned food
DM: no, cooked food
ACP: no, Mrs. Khurana we are already getting late, I thought it would not look nice to cancel my dinner program on phone that's why I came in person and as now we will have to leave or we will miss our flight
DM: wait let Maan come and calls Maan on his cell
M: sorry officers, for not entertaining you
ACP: its ok, you were busy and it was we who came unannounced
M: so how are you Daya?
D: you went to HSPur, I told you your bro has been seen there
last
M: yes I went, I brought him in you just saw him all bruised and
hurt
D: what happened?
M: nothing this couple is hell they fight like enemies
D: it's nice that he is not your real bro
M: I am thankful, but he is not Vicky I asked you for he is Dev
my Nanny's son
D: oh! But
G: actually Vicky is not Khurana he is his aunt's son he is Chawala
D: that's it you did not tell me, Maan
G: actually he has been living with them since always
D: sorry Maan, don't worry I will try to find him soon
M: thank you
D: you need help with this guy
M: will tell you when ever needed
After a long chat the CID team who was on a formal visit to Khurana's left
hey did you think they were here to arrest Dev😆
darlings CID is in Mumbai and Khuraan's are in Delhi
how can they arrest Dev & NT?
Dev and NT will be either aressted by Delhi Police or HSPur police😉
now you got it CID team was just on a formal visit
Daya had been Maan's friend from the days when Maan once was approached for some random case as a prime witness
and ACP was in good terms with late Manavedra Khurana
he visited KM when ever he was in Delhi
when Maan said come in he was refering to security guards he did not know that ACP was paying them a visit
DM has told the security to let ACP in as soon as he comes so that is why they did not ask her before letting them in
waiting for your responses write soon
pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations
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part 25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40781118

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Yahoooooooooooooo......................i'm First to comment!!!

Beautiful part.............loved it!!!

now you got it CID team was just on a formal visit - Di,sara mood karab kardiya,actually I was expecting some Dramatic scenes😕

Daya had been Maan's friend from the days when Maan once was approached for some random case as a prime witness
and ACP was in good terms with late Manavedra Khurana
he visited KM when ever he was in Delhi
- Well I thk all this relation will come as help for them once the game is started!!!
Whether do U have something else for us???
when Maan said come in he was refering to security guards he did not know that ACP was paying them a visit
DM has told the security to let ACP in as soon as he comes so that is why they did not ask her before letting them in - But I thought finally its the time for verdict as U are extending it for last four updates!!!
waiting for your responses write soon- waiting for more updates!!!😉
wonderful update!!!
Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awesome part. loved it.
oh God I thought CID team there for take dev.
nice scene with CID team there.
update soon.
Can we get one or two update today
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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