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Posted: 14 years ago

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-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

Part 7

Music Gali

Kabir and Piya went to the shop to purchase an electric guitar. Misha and Tee were out to the fashion store to get the dresses T had designed. They were all very beautiful. For the first time Misha's eyes sparkled on seeing the 'girly dresses'...

Piya- Haan KB, this one is good...try this out! The sound is also great!!

Kabir- Haan yaar! iske strings bhi comfortable to work with...bhaiyya yehi de dijiye!

Piya- Next stop the piano and cymbals!!

Kabir- Let T and Misha manage them...after all they are the ones who need to use it!

Piya- Lekin ruk to jaate hain...unke saath rahenge for giving opinion!!

Kabir- Theek hai!!!

Kabir was inside the store to pay off the bill while Piya peeped out to see the market. She was wandering over the place admiring the various instruments when a cold stone hand pulled her into the car. She tried to scream but the hand had tightly closed the mouth. When the car had started, she turned around to see Abhay driving the car. He asked her to text Kabir that she was not feeling well and so she had gone home early. There was so much anger in his eyes that Piya obeyed without arguing. His eyes mildened up and he spoke in a very mesmerizing tone-

Abhay- Piya, I am really sorry for my behavior but i couldn't control myself

Piya- Abhi yaad aaya ki you were rude to me!(turned away)

Abhay- I am really very very sorry...I thought that you weren't able to sleep because of mee!! that had made me angry...please sorry

Piya- It's okay...but u know my friends are so angry with you...

Abhay- I really don't care...they didn't invite friendship with me...you did...so its you who matters to me and not them...get it!!!

Piya was so joyous hearing this...but couldn't figure out the reason why...she was so attracted to him his voice his eyes all were so attractive!!

Piya- Okay so tell me about you...your family... everything?

Abhay- In my family theres my mom Haseena, my dad Chand and only them

Piya- Just two people!!

Abhay- Yeah thats it!!! You tell me about your family

Piya- aah! Theres my dad, Arnav, my sisters, Panchi and Misha and my....ummm mom (her expression changes)

Abhay- What about your mom...tell me the truth...i can see your grief...tell me piya!

Piya- My mom Sugandha Jaiswal died when i was 3 years old and she left me all alone in my house. My dad Arnav, he came searching for my mother and saw me near the body of my mother. He took me to his house where i got Panchi and Misha as sisters. They at once welcomed me into their life but my new mom never gave me the place of a daughter... She is oblivious to me and that irks me. My dad had married my mom and then they separared after my birth because of my new mom. My mom had become very gloomy and one day she suicided not even thinking about me...(breaks into a cry). But i forgave my dad for atleast he gave me the place of his daughter although he was the reason of my mother's death. I hate my mom...How could she leave me alone and go away...atleast i am alive because of my dad.

Abhay- Calm down Piya, just calm down...No need to give pain to yourself by thinking about your past...be calm be happy!

Piya- Yaah!! i know...pata nahi kaise yaad aagaya!!! lets talk of something else....haan

tum batao...why did you become angry at me when i told you about the dream!

Abhay- Maine bataya naa, agar tumhe sapne mein main dikhta hoon that means i am troubling you...thats why i was angry at myself...

Piya- gadhe ho tum bilkul!! lol

Piya gets a call from Kabir.

Piya- Hey KB wassup? kya hua any problem

Kabir- Haan bilkul hai...kahaan ho tum...tumhare ghar pe phone kiya to tum thi nahi...kahaa ho yaar.

Piya- KB main Abhay ke saath hoon.. i was walking down the road and he invited to drop me ..

Kabir- Piya i told you naa...stay away from him...pur tum kabhi nahi manogi (cuts the call)

Piya- KB, KB , Kb!! cut kar diya

Abhay- Tumhara best friend hain na Kabir!

Piya- Haan (proudly) Bestest best friend... since i was 5 he has been my friend!!

Abhay- Long term friendship....lovely!

Piya- Ya...it feels proud to have such cool friends...all of them are special in my life...and now to some extent you to are special to me (winks)😉

Abhay- You are really sweet...love!

Piya- Abhay only KB has the authority to call me that! you don't

Abhay- Okay sexy

Piya- Stop it Abhay!! ( beats him naughtily)

Abhay drops her at the Dobriyal House where the entire gang was present...looking tensed...

Piya- Kya hua guys! any problem?

Kabir- Haan tum humse subah keh ke gayi thi and now its almost dusk...itna time lagta hai kya wahaan se yahaan aane mein...Piya when will you be responsible...(hugs her tightly)

Piya- Aww KB...i am really very sorry...main usse baat karne lagi...time ka pata hi nahi chala!

Kabir- Ek minute...show your eyes...you cried isn't it ??? telll me piya!

Piya- I was telling Abhay about my family and tears started welling down my cheeks...thats just nothing...

Kabir- Main use zinda nahi chodunga...har time tumhe rulane ki koshish karta rehta hai...***************

Piya- Stop KB go back home...its late...you need to complete your eco. assignment...get going common....bye Rathod Warrior

Kabir- By love (gets a light slap)

Piya is very very relaxed after the talk she had with Abhay and sleeps a peaceful sleep!!!

Precap- Piya's Lyrics...oops a problem!

PART 8

Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago

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ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

oh!why did pia cut the phone!she should tell him that time only😳

and misha was right she is pia's brother only🤣🤣

aww!kabir is cho chweet.............😳😳

and pia's past????????????😕😕😕

oh! you updated next part also...

poor pia her mom suicided..but goo her dad took her with him....😊

why was abhay angry i mean i think he is lying isn't he?😕

kb and pia are really great freinds..😆😆

update soon..😊😊

Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

hei shivangi,
tat was a lovely update..abhay picked up pia without any of her friends noticing..n pia lying to her friends tat she met abhay on the way n he picked her..y is kabir over protective over pia n is he jealous that pia is having a friendly relation with abhay..wat will he do when he knows its more than friendship?do continue soon..

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wow it was Gr8.. Abhay-Piya's talk in d Car abt their family was Nice.. D way Abhay was calling Piya by names.. Love n Sexy..dat's sweet.. I liked d way d whole gang cares for Piya.. Especially Kabir..he rockss.. U didnt pm me not fair.. Continue soon.. Do pm me as n when u update d next part.. Lol..

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Gals1110
Wow it was Gr8.. Abhay-Piya's talk in d Car abt their family was Nice.. D way Abhay was calling Piya by names.. Love n Sexy..dat's sweet.. I liked d way d whole gang cares for Piya.. Especially Kabir..he rockss.. U didnt pm me not fair.. Continue soon.. Do pm me as n when u update d next part.. Lol..

Hey...actually i didn't pm this time to anybody...my computer crashed as i was sending the pm...i m replying from my laptop...srry!

Wats your name??

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hey its k.. I wasnt knowing abt d promblem wit ur pc.. Nyways M Galvina in short Gals..lol.

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

PART 8

Piya hadn't fallen asleep. Her talks with Abhay had revived her old memories of her late mom. She hated her. She clearly remembered the night her mother had sucidided though children of 3 often forget everything. But contrary to this belief, that incident wasc clearly etched in her memory. Her mother had been crying the entire day, not feeded Piya, and probably she was concerned about Piya's future...She was really worried as to how Piya would grow up in spite of the fact that her father had cheated her mother by being in a dual relationship with kids on both sides. As Sugandha had come to know about this, she filed a divorce. That night Sugandha had swallowed an entire bottle of sleeping pills and told Piya...beta apna khayal rakhna and be a good human bein...foam had started coming out of her mouth. Arnav had not been able to talk to Sugandha and had an inner feeling that something was terribly wrong. He traced Sugandha's house and found her dead. He rang up the police station and took Piya home. Madhu resented as much as she could but finally gave up. All because of efforts of Misha and Panchi who deliberately wanted a sister. Madhu allowed Piya to stay at the Dobriyal House but never accepted Piya in her family. When Piya had met Kabir some 13 years ago, she found a true friend in him. He always looked on Piya as his younger sister. He would fight with the entire world for Piya. He had seen tears in Piya's eyes in the college and thats why he was furious. Kabir had that relation with Piya which Misha and Panchi could have never imagined Piya to have. Thinking about how Kabir cared for her, tears in Piya's eyes were obvious!

Misha- Hey babes why are you crying ?

Piya- Nothing Mish, just reliving all the memories with Kabir!

Misha- Pata hai, woh dude sirf tumhare aur T ke liye achcha hai...tum to uski sister ho and T-dot dot dot

Piya- Haan Haan i understand. wahi feeling na which you have for SHANKAR- you first crush...ha ha ha

Misha blushes. It was amusing for Piya to see Mish blushing

Piya- Oye Hoye!! blushing!!

Misha- Stop it babes, itna tez mat bolo koi sun na le!!

Panchi enters the room with tray in her hand which has milk-glasses for all of them...

Panchi- Kya hua piya...kise crush hai kispe? kahin tumhe to nahi...c'mon..c'mon tell me tell me!!

Misha orders Piya not to open her mouthe but Piya sticks out her tongue!

Piya- Pata hai humari Mish to crush ho gaya hai SHANKAR pe...

Panchi faints...Misha revives her up and starts beating her...

Panchi- Waah yaar...mera bhai bhi ab behen ban gaya

Piya is tickled to laughter while Mish beats Panchi while she blushes... Soon they have their milk. Madhu comes to the room to kiss Panchi and Misha and leaves.. Both Misha and Panchi kiss Piya and they all sleep...

The shadow is very very close... It is advancing towards Piya....it gently kisses her cheeks and fades away. Piya is now wandering over the tufts of olives....

This time Piya does not wake up. On the contrary, It amuses Piya and she smiles in her dreams... she didn't want to get up but her alarm rings- Saturday Morning...time for a morning walk! Piya wears her tracksuit and goes out for the jog. Fog and mist had covered the scene. She keeps to the left quite alert of the sounds of the vehicles. All of a sudden, she hears a skitting sound. She can easily make out that some truck had skitted. She tries to make out the way from which its advancing. The sound loudens...she can hear driver shouting to clear the road. Just when the truck is few metres away, it gets visible... Piya closes her eyes...she cannot face death. Just when the bumper of the truck touches her, cold hard hands pull her out of the way. She faints... when Piya regains consciousness, she finds herself in the forest...Piya looks around to find Abhay smiling at her... She is still scared and clings to Abhay Abhay woh truck...omg it could have killed me...But it didn't Piya...C'mon stop crying...I can't see tears in my friends eyes...Abhay, tum mere itne paas kaise aaye...You were lucky...i was passing by when i saw you .... ab to rona band karo sssh hhh!!He picked her up and dropped her at her house narrating Arnav about the incident...Arnav was furious at Piya for going out in the foggy weather and thanked Abhay heartily...Just when Abhay is leaving Piya again feels dizzy...He carries her to her room and leaves...Piya is given the pills and she goes to sleep. She gets up in the afternoon and sees the entire gang around her bed.. she smiles meekly. Kabir kisses her forehead and asks her leave. He leaves with T.. Misha and Piya exchange looks.

It's 4:00 in the afternoon and Piya is lying lonely in the bed. Misha and Panchi had vacated the room so that she could rest. She calls Abhay

Hi Piya, wassup...How are you?? Feeling good?

Yaah Abhay...I m fine!! Thanxzz Abhay...I owe my life to you!!

Dosti mein no sorry...no thankyou...

Tumhe to bade gun aate hai dosti ke!! Kahaan se seekhe!!!

Ab jahaan se bhi seekhe ho..tumhe kya...!!!

Oye Hoye!! Badi lovely shovely baate karte ho!!

Piya hears footssteps...

Achcha some one is coming ..will call you later bye!!!!

She pretends to sleep. Panchi wakes her up an hour later to give her some food and the pills... She even tells about the program they have for Sunday...They are planning shopping at a complex for her engagement...Panchi blushes numerous time while telling this...Piya asks if they are going alone...i mean...Only Misha Piya and Panchi and that to the answer is yes!! They are planning to take Sid even...but its not confirmed!!!. She blushes again. They hear some thumping sound and realize that Misha is coming to thier room.. She comes to tell them that Shankar was returning back on Monday and she blushes...she jumps from one corner to the other till almost exhausted...Panchi leaves

Piya- Hey Misha KB and T kahaan gaye?

Misha- Pata hai dono the sunset point pe gaye hain!!

Piya- Aww!!!

Misha- ya really aww... he is planning to propose T on her b'day!! Really so romantic...na!!

Piya- Haan yaar....so romantic... i wish someone proposes me one day like that...that would be a dream come true!!

Panchi enters the room and they all sleep!!!

PRECAP-

Panchi and Sid outing together!!

PART 9

Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Wow Gr8 part.. Piya-Kabir r d Best.. Kabir wit T n is gonna propose her.. Dat's Nice.. OMG Misha n Crush on Shankar.. I think m gonna faint.. Seriously I wish 2 kill Madhu.. D morning walk part was nice Abhay is always der 2 save her.. How sweet. Love d way Piya's Gang care for her.. Overall Amazing update.. I lik dat u update everyday.. Keep it up.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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teju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

wow..nice part yaar
nice morning walk...nice help by abhay...nice phone call..nice misha's crush..😉.👏😊⭐️👏
kb proposing t is sooooo romantic😳
waiting for more...😃

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hei shivangi,
its a wonderful update..loved it this way..as abhay need not lie around saying i didnt stop the truck n all things..he even dropped her home informing the incident to arnav..so nice..so pia's wish will come true for sure i hope..continue soon..

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