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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it di the talk between dev and sarada is suchi gone tell surender everything and if she does wonder wt her reaction gone be lechu is gone be beack and i bet she is gone be excited to see radev update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Radhika- the dreamy girl.... her persona, her charactor, her action and reaction.. a summary by a team of youngsters....
radhika is a simple girl who is protect and pamper by all but she is dreamy ..she grow up with some dreams inside her , she live in that dreamland with her prince whom she can not only see but can feel ..she is attracted to him emotional with all her heart ..he is there in her soul DEV a person whom she never see , till he comes there .. ..
when she see her prince in front of her , she can't believe this and to make her believe it she act differently with him as she dislikes him ..but she want him to realize her presence in his life without her saying and god with passage of time do this dev fall in love with her , she is on nine cloud when her dreams start getting colours of reality ..
she start loving his presence besides her that also in front of world ..than again he leave her for his dreams but she take it as test of her love ..she take that separation period time to understand his prince more but she herself remain in her shell ..she want him to enter in but never ask him to do so ..she get married to that person whom she is waiting since she start thinking ..
she leave her world for his sake enter in new unknown world because he is with her always ..do all that he want even she don't want to ..but she fails to make that person realize how much she loves him ..how badly she is yearning to near him , to live with him ..
..she find her dreamland is shettering ..beautiful world build by her become colourness and meaningless for her , to hide her hurt and pain she become silent , even in her silence she want him to feel and hear what her mind is saying ..how can he when she never allow him to enter her dreamland .she just want impossible to become possible ...than she get suffocated in that relation she want to run and hide herself ..she is not hiding from anyone but from herself ....
..she can't take this that her dreams fall on ground ..she just watch them helplessly can't do anything to save them ...she get biggest happiness of her life but it means none to her as her mind is still in shock ...real world is very bitter for her ( she thinks ) now her prince know something about her dreamland
..he tries to settle in that ..he tries to ensure not his presence but also colour up her faded dreams with his love and concern ..he tries to enter in that unknown world of her to get her back to his world ...which is beautiful mixture of reality and dreams ...he tries to study her silence and her inner mind
.here question arise why she become silent she can talk to other ladies when person who is near to you most fails to get your feelings than its meaningless to talk to any other but she try to talk to mom and sushma with hope they understand and help her but they also don't get that so when hope and dreams strike the reality wall and fall down than life become a big burden ,,,than one can scream in pain and anger or cover pain by silence
..its tuff time where person loose all connections from life and happiness means nothing ..depression overcome the mind and thoughts ..she don't talk to her MIL as she is proud of her kids including her also and radhika don't want her to feel bad that her professionally successful son fails to handle his private life
....she is not at all complex , she is as simple and ordinary as we all ..these are the situations faced by all girls once in their life , difference is just in reaction ..there is nothing to understand but to feel .....
Can anyone tell me what do I suppose to tell this team. All i could do was to
hug, shrug , and gulp them all in one..........
Are you a reader of this FF, do you like this analysis, then can you please click that like button for them... only if you like it.... ok.. why I posted it, because i can't summarise it this way.. they send me Dev's too.. but that I will post after next part... but this is it, this is my RADHIKA... THE DREAMY GIRL......
Edited by Devika. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW!! Devika--love your explanation--the essence of the story and you summarized it for your readers in a beautiful way---and one can feel the emotions running through Radhika's mind

waiting for the next update....
Edited by radhika5 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you ruchibabbly, 5armad, kscjk, sweetfamily, prakri, ashabal, avina_radev48, mich, Nabesa, imissouri, khus1973, udeshi91, imarti_rubi, suwin, sonia122, _Sahra_, DAIRY25, *Maleena*, laxmis, sugarandspice, vinianil, radhika5, radha_bilahari, palak13, gauranitai, radev_forever, anu17, abhilasha_dream, Indiangirl09, nycsweetie, chalhov, for liking part 92. thank you friends for your kind words... ha ha psychiatrist... chalhov ji, me.... i fit inside that cell, not outisde😆,
I had my experience as a student in NIMHANS... seen that side of life too, a girl's face vaguely comes to my mind who is still waiting for SRK to come.. she told us, that he is coming and it is going to her wedding that night... I think she was relating him to BAZZIGER movie.. and as students, we were so much interested to hear her stories, of SRK coming and her marrige.. Poor girl, we listened to her with a smile and few of my friends asked her questions to get that fun answers, and to hear her full story... but now when i think of it, feel so strange about it, but she was liking it too....
ok so now I am feeling a big relief, after part 92. now lets come to present... don't know whether you have any questions, but i do!!!! so the rest of the parts will continue with answering those, maybe filling so many pits that i left behind for the future to settle. so hope you will continue your journey with me, and it is starting form today....
so ready for next part...
its coming soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 93

Dev Was holding onto Radhika's shoulder as they entered into their room.

Dev: how are you feeling radhika?

Radhika: ji, fine

Saying that she went near to the suitcase to take her house coat out.

Dev: Radhikaaa

She stopped , and looked at him

Dev: you need any help?

Radhika: no , I am fine

Dev: I know , you are, but still

She tried to give a corner smile in acknowledgement and tried to open the suitcase that she brought along with her.

Dev coming near, held her shoulder.
Come with me and he guided her to the cupboard. he looked in ,and found the printed loose top and her patyala pant. He gave that to her.

Radhika: vo mei

Dev: I know you have new collections, but for now wear this, you will really feel better.

Radhika just nodded her head.

Dev: Radhikaa, you want me to help you

Radhika suddenly felt awkward in his question, and she said quickly: no , no, I will be fine.

Dev noted that, and a corner smile appeared on his face seeing her unesiness. He let her go but asked her not to put the latch on, to make sure her safety. He went near the window and let the breeze come in. he was rescripting the words of sarada "she needs your mental presence and she should feel that, then she will slowly change, the importance now you both have to give is to your unborn baby, needs lot of attention and extra care, you need to make her to feel that first........ "

Radhika came out from the washroom. Dev smiled at her, and he saw his old Radhika in front of him. holding her hand he brought her near to the window: Radhika, remember, how you used to watch the moon and the stars standing here. Radhika tried to smile but she didn't show any interest.

Dev: you ok na.

Radhika just nodded. : ha, can I go to bed

Dev: um, I am also feeling tired, let's go to bed.

She got into bed. Dev turning the room light off, took his tee shirt off, and then coming near the bed , he turned the bed lamp on.

Radhika was trying hard to adjust in, with the loaded fluid she was feeling much better. She was not feeling sleepy either. Dev rested his head on the head board and put the pillow behind him for support.

Dev : Radhika, come

Radhika looked at him and found his both arms out, spreads to both side, welcoming her into his arms.

Radhika : I am fine

Dev: I know you are, but I am not...

She looked at him curiously

Dev: Ha Radhika, I know you are fine, but I am really feeling sick.

Radhika felt little uneasiness, thinking of facing his questions. She recollected those questions that he asked in the morning. Why didn't I call him?, why didn't I tell him? what will I say? The fear started forming in. her mouth felt dry.

Dev : Radhikaaaa, I am waiting

Radhika crawled up and then slowly , got into the space that he opened for her. In a side laying position, she went near his chest, Dev with a smile, brought his arms to wrap it around her , and then he with a smile made her head to rest on his chest, near to his heart. Her cheek rested on his chest and the exhaled air, fell on his bare chest. She slowly rested her hand on his chest. She felt his warm skin again, she heard his heartbeat........

Dev in a soft tone; how are you feeling now?

Radhika: better . she replied in a normal tone.

Dev smiled thinking at least she said the truth, didn't repeat her 'I am fine' slog.

Dev: I know,....... do you know why you are feeling better?

Radhika didn't say anything

Dev: that is the magic of Dev. See now you are in my arms, and you are feeling better already,.now everything will be fine, ok.

He watched down to see her expression, but her head was hiding down his chin. Rubbing on her upper arm, he asked: tell me something Radhika

Radhika kept her silence

Dev: anything

Radhika with little difficulty: I don't have anything to say

Dev moving back, looking at her face: something na

Radhika tried to give a corner smile: umhum ...she affirmed her words

Dev : really!, I thought you want to talk about your Asram life, Mathaji, the kids , anything?

Radhika nodded her head again in disagremnt...

Dev: ok , if you don't have anything to say, I will tell you something

Radhika just listened

Dev: I will tell you story....

Radhika silently listened

Dev: ready?

Radhika just nodded her head

Dev: ok then, this is a story of a boy who wished to marry the star , that was shining up in the sky. Have you heard about it?

Nodding her head , Radhika tried to listen

Dev : ok this boy , he loves to look at the stars up in the sky, so every night he goes to the terrace, and looked at them amazingly.

His mom asked what are you doing? and the boy replied "I want it mom/"

Mom asked: "what"

Boy: the star that is up in the sky

Mom: which one

Boy pointed his finger at the most shiny one

Mom smiled and said: you need to sleep to get that star

Boy: no, I love to watch her, she blinks her eyes.. i want to see her all the time...

Mom: um, so you want that star to be with you all the time

Boy shaking his head: um, I want it near me all the time, all the time...

Mom in a serious tone: then you need to marry her

Boy: will you get her for me?

Mom: no, if you want to marry that star ; you need to ask her parents

By: where is her parents?

Mom looking up at the sky, pointing blindly up : those ...near to her

Boy: can I go now?

Mom: no, go in the morning, now you come to bed, let the day light bring the brightness for you, then you can go.

This little boy went to bed thinking the next day he can go and ask the stars parents her hand.....

Dev paused for a second and to check on her response.

Suddenly Radhika: then

A relief smile appeared on his face: "then'

Radhika moved back and looked at him enthusiastically: then what happened?

Dev with a childish smile: then, then, with a childish face he said : maybe the boy wake up in the morning and cried loud...

Radhika moving back from his embrace and sitting back, looking at his face, tightened her forehead: what!!!

Dev making that childish caught face: obviously, when he woke up all the stars got disappeared from the sky and he might have cried loud na. what else he will do flaring his hands out.., that is the only possibility na.

Radhika: you just made up this!!!!

Dev: what else I do, you don't have anything to say, but I am in a mood to talk and something should be said na.

Radhika just tried to rest back on the bed.

Dev: Radhika, please, finally I am getting some lonely time with you and you are moving away from me, please don't do that. I know I did not listen to you, but please don't turn away from me, it hurts Radhika.

Radhika looked at him surprisingly, she felt guilty again, now he may ask me all those questions, her gaze fell down on to the bed spread and she sat back unable to give him any answer with his expected questions.

Dev in a disappointed tone : I know my story is not good, you may not like it, you maybe liking all those scholar's stories, the frog in the well and all. then with a frogy tone he continued..After all that frog can only leap inside that well only na. then proudly.. at least my boy can even pack his luggage and set out in search of the shiny stars parents. And we can make that journey beautiful with his little confusion and all He made that kiddish face again: heina.

Rahdika looked at him, seeing him changing the subject.

Dev: see , I know you don't like my story, but I didn't tell the story for you, ok.

Radhika looked at him curiously...

Dev looked at her and then with a smile, he suddenly lay his head on her lap, and then wrapping his arms around her waist line to her back, he said: this is for my baby, my little princess. Then bringing his face more closer to her lower abdomen he said: heina baby, you love to hear your papa's stories , right?. It is so simple. You tell me if you want that little boy to smile or cry, if you want then I can surely bring that stars to shine in day time too. Do you want me too, tell me dear.

Radhika felt a current passing thru her, his sudden action and then his each word was falling on her lower tummy, and she shivered as he tightened his arms around her and bringing his face closer to her skin, in an attempt to get near to his baby.

He kept on mumbling to her lower tummy in a kid's way : did you miss me, what to do beta, your papa was little busy, too bad na, left both of you alone, bad papa na. but not anymore, I am here with you, very close Ok, and ha....., don't give trouble to your mom , ok. You are actually scaring your papa, your mamma is always fine and fine. She doesn't have anything to speak to papa, and your papa is wide awake , are you in a mood to talk to papa?, tell me baby. Then after a silence: are you sleeping, hello, hello, baby, hello, are you sleeping down there?.

Then looked up at Radhika and asked: is she sleeping?

Radhika looked at him confusingly , as if what to say, all she could feel was the heaviness over her tummy, and all that faster beats listening to his talk.

Dev: you don't know?. No problem, maybe she is sleeping. Ok baby, you sleep , I will tell the rest of the story tomorrow Ok, when you wake up , ok. Goodnight, and then he placed his ear to her lower tummy as of listening to something and after moving his head slightly back: oh baby, don't worry, papa heina, , he placed a soft kiss over her lower tummy which was covered inside that loose top.

Then sitting up straight, looking at Radhika: baby is sleeping now

Radhika tried to believe what he was trying to tell her.

Dev: now what will I do, I am not feeling sleepy at all?

Radhika : but you said you are feeling tired?.

Dev: no. actually I am not

Radhika: you look like..

Dev: ok then, I will take rest.

He slipped under that cover and opened his arms for her, and with little nervously went into his arms and rested her face on his chest. Dev felt so good feeling her following his request, and remembered Sarada's talk she may follow you, but she may remin silent..

Dev wrapping his arms around her: Radhikaa

Radhika moved her cheek little bit over his chest as if listening to him

Dev looking at the ceiling then stroking on her hair down: Do you know how old is our baby?

She listened holding on to her breath

Dev: our princess is five month old now

But then tried to force her to the side, he moved to the side and laying sideways, facing her he asked: did you go for check up anytime?

Radhika nodded her head

Dev: when?

Radhika: at asram hospital, when I fainted one day...., and then only...... I came to know.

He felt her words breaking in between

Dev: that's ok, so you just went once

Radhika: and then I went one more time

Dev: what did they say?

Radhika: they told me to eat well and to drink plenty of water

Dev stroking on her upper arm: then

Radhika: then nothing

Dev: um, anyway , today they did complete check up, first and foremost thing is that you need to eat more Radhika, they are saying otherwise it will be bad for the baby. So we need to take care. Tell whatever you want and mom is here na, me too.

Radhika: um

Dev: maybe because of this travel and all, anyway now for few days, no travel or anything ok, you need to take rest and eat well, then we will go to chandenpur. Radhikaa, I told you na, you look more thin, and I was right, i felt that when i lifted you today from that washroom, you know what? I was thinking after coming here, eating all this homely food, you might have gained more weight. But i was wrong na. but now there is no other choice for you, you need to get better Ok.

Radhika just moved her head little bit agreeing

Dev lay back and then again pulled her towards him, holding her closer.

Dev: Radhikaa,

Radhika: Um

Dev looking at the ceiling : Radhika, I am... I am sorry....

She flickered her lashes and tried to lift her head up but he forced her to lay back: I won't be able to talk if you look into my eyes Radhika, I am really sorry. It was my mistake that I didn't listen to you

Radhika interrupted: no, you did, I am the one who didn't

Dev: No Radhika, it is because of me, I was....

Radhika moved from his force and looked up at his face and found his tear filled eyes, her fingers touched his eye corner and she wiped off the trail...

Radhika: because of me na

Dev tried to hold her tight: no Radhika, not you, it was me

Radhika covered his lips, and shook her head sideways, requesting him not to blame himself for it. And finally she said: please

Dev tried to bring a smile: then you talk to me something na

Radhika rested her head back on his chest and unknowingly her arms went around his shoulder and she held him tight as the words did not formed inside her throat.

He felt her arms, that was wrapping around him, that spoke volumes into his nerves. He also just tightened his arm conveying that listening to her silence, as he also preferred that feel of touch sooth their heart for now......
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friends.. if anybody is thinking where I am heading to, yes it is heading towards the settlment... but few pits i left behind, which you might have not noticed, but yes, I did, need to fill those up.. and also it also will see one more phase, which will be related to the next post's highlighted portion.... so, read if you get time. Did you get a chance to read the Radhika's charactor summary..... it is few post above.. weekend is going to be long for me, so few posts for those who interested....
also, now Dev's tries are helping rahdika to adjust with pregnency and then bring her back into her self, how much she willl come back?!!! will answer in upcoming parts... ok... she may smile and nodd with everyhting but that is not Radhika.....not dev's Radhika.. so...
thanks for reading my post dear.. have a good day...
Part 94


Edited by Devika. - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bvs7691

Love Dev/Radhika's talk.... :)

Havuuuuuuuu..... finally I heard from you...........
thanks..😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
This episode was full of feeling--
Yes, Radhika is going to take time to come out of her shell --but with you penning words for Dev, I am sure Radhika will be back to Dev's Radhika---

Loved the story of the boy who wants to marry the pretty star --and Dev talking to his little one--

And the last part was full of feeling--that touch, that sentiment is what is needed most....what both Radhika and Dev needed most---the road to healing may take time but this is a start....
The need to love and be loved is such a vital element..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update........I like how Dev was trying to communicate with the baby........Its was really cute..........Also Radhika is annoying sometimes.......I don't like when she ignores Dev lol.. Anyways Thanks for the pm..........Looking forward to read the next update:)
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Posted: 15 years ago

The update was so beautiful 👏

I loved the story with the boy😳
I just hope radhika comes out of her shell i feel bad for dev she's only answering one word answers
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Posted: 15 years ago
Devika, lovely update. Loved the way Dev made up stories to bring Radhika to her old self and trying to conncect with the baby . Beautiful summarization of Radhika.

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