Shair For Dev - Repentance Soul

Serenity_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

too good munni.........🤣

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Kitni zabardast shayari likhi sab ne 👏

Aya mazah mujhe sab ki pad ke

A small one from me too(sorry if it's horrible 😆):

Jo kuch Dev ne kiya

Jo dukh Dev ne diya

Ban ke Geet ka miya

Sab kuch us ka le liya

Mange Dev jitni marzi mafi

Lekin woh hai bilkul nahi kafi

Geet ki saath hui itni nainsafi

Milni chahye Geet ko insafi

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sanjh1234
dev ne aakar hai halchal machai

geet ki life mein bahut jayada interfere badhai

maan ke dil or dimaag mein light jagai

woh kar raha hai is baat par bahut gaur

kya yeh cvs ne khail rachai

jab dekho maaneet ke beech doori badhai

😆 😆 😆 Dev ki wajjah se doori badhi
Bas abb uske saamne hai shamat khadi....
bhaag ja KM se warna teri khair nahin...

Muniza

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preet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Muni jawab nahin kamal haiiiiiiii To good 🤣🤣

one from myside i know that Good but koshish karnewalo ki haar naHIN Hoti

Dev aya hai jabse hila di usne Duniya

Kya Maneet , kya Forum , Facebook bhi hai hairan

Bas ab aur nahin jhel sakte usko

Dedo uska pyar NT se milwado use

Vidaa karo saath saath

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe
Kitni zabardast shayari likhi sab ne 👏

Aya mazah mujhe sab ki pad ke

A small one from me too(sorry if it's horrible 😆):

Jo kuch Dev ne kiya

Jo dukh Dev ne diya

Ban ke Geet ka miya

Sab kuch us ka le liya

Mange Dev jitni marzi mafi

Lekin woh hai bilkul nahi kafi

Geet ki saath hui itni nainsafi

Milni chahye Geet ko insafi

Wah wah wah Mona, kya likha hai, bindas 👏...Aur daikho Geet ne bhi diya uska ek chappat.....

Muniza

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

kuch phool meri taraf se bhi

yeh kya cvs ne rang dikhya

jab se dev ko geet mein laya

maaneet ki zindgi se passion bhagaya

or hum sab ko aisi musibat mein paya

sara gf ko boori tarah se hilaya

or hum fans ki neend ko udhaya

or aise fikro mein fasaya

har waqt maan ka kya hoga

jahi khiyaal dimaag mein aaya

agar dev ne aakar padha tumara shair

dhum dhama ke bhaag jayega

or phir hamein bhi chain aa jayega

nahin to hum jagayenge maan

phir dev ko jagah nahin milege bhagne ko

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serendipity2

@serendipity2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

This was really funny munni😆👏...i am not good at reading urdu/hindi...but made the effort and found it really hilarious especially the last line...a bit of light relief on this sometimes tedious forum😉

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