Guddu & Runjhun FF:U R MyWorld, My Love (C)

Hey Guys...this is Nidha here...am rewriting this chapter again as the writing was really awry...it sure takes the pleasure out of reading as Usha has commented...hope youlike it...

awwwwwwwwesum start
Mahadevi iz realyy nice
cant wait for gunjun meet
Update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Nidha, my dear, I do appreciate your attempt at writing a Gunjhun FF and you have started off pretty well !

Thnku @tehzeeb @shreenithi.....i'll update as regularly as possible dears....i hav xams gng on so hav to see....lv u

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Nidha, my dear, I do appreciate your attempt at writing a Gunjhun FF and you have started off pretty well !

But can you plz write the next part using your system and not from the phone ... you know typing in the phone is cumbersome and you tend to use a lot ofabbreviationto make the job easier. This affects the flow of the story, and our pleasure in reading it is lost.😔

I hope you don't mind my saying so, if I've hurt your feelings, I do apologise.😊

Not at all Rusha....but am doing dis frm ma hstl nd no system here.......i hav to go home to type frm system ......till den i thnk u'll hav to bear wid my phn fctn😊

That is the very good start, dear.. 😛
Likes it very much. Honestly.
Thank you for taking your time to do this.

Looking forward to your next one especially GunJun..... 😍

Chapter 2...................................................................................... "Wat else cud a girl lyk me wish for......i am so unlucky that even my parents left me at an early age.....if it was not for my mamas i wud hav starved to death" RJ thought.......but do u actually deserve this jail like life Rhunjun......her inner voice asked....wat have u done to get this hell of a life......."I deserve this.....I am bad news to whichever place i go to"RJ replied back...she had a love-hate relation wid her inner voice....she hated its reasonability its truth,butshe needed the strength it sometimes gave her.......She reached the market and headed directly to the vegetable shop........"Bhaisaab 1/2 kilo bhaingan dijiye"..."ji behenji"....She looked around the market while d sheper got her order.......She noticed a small commotion a little far......."Bhaisaab waha kya ho raha hain"....."Aur kya hoga beta.....Guddu Shukla ka drama".....Guddu Shukla....she hated no loathed that guy......the way he was torturing thepeople to payup the monthly bribe.......people work hard to the money and he takes a portion of it from them by his brute force....RJ found that downright disgusting...........She saw him heading towards her direction and turned her head.......not before he noticed her...Guddu Shukla the local goon....perfect sadak chap.......he took mnthly bribes from local shopowners.....but his favourite job was taunting the Pandey family whose house was opposite his Carom Club.....he knew that the males of that house were hen-pecked and DIL's were perfect devils.......he had respect for the old lady of the house.....but this one standing in front of him...he didnt really knw much about her.....she never stepped out much....except to the market where he occasionally so her..........but now he wanted her....her Mama ji had borrowed an awfully large amount from him...and was showing no signs of returning it.....he needed to sent a sample to them to show wat could happen to them if the....y dont cough up the money.......His bike was parked a littile away from her.........He went near it to keep the money he collected in hi bag....and went towards her.....RJ was in a haste so she didnt notice d stone behind her....she tripped....she shouted as she gell back....but before she hit the ground a pair of strong arms caught her....the bag flew away from her hand....and she was staring into Guddu's eyes....

Originally posted by: Prabhkallu

That is the very good start, dear.. 😛
Likes it very much. Honestly.
Thank you for taking your time to do this.

Looking forward to your next one especially GunJun..... 😍

thnku so much sweets......hnstly u guys r my inspiration😊.....i hav read many ffs in many forums and xeen the support thst people get here...so i thought of starting one....i love reading stories and making them tooo.....hpe i will keep u entertained😊

nidha yaar ...
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx aton for d quick updt .... 🤗
Awwwwwwwwwwwesum prt ..luvd it ..
She fell in his arms .... 😍 ..soooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeee..
Yaar plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make d ff damn romantic plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzt
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx again

that's a great start Nidha and loved your FF....runjhun fell into Guddu's arms wow...loved it....hope to read more of it