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🥳happy holi🥳
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UPDATE SOON! :D
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Intezaar karte karte bhudhi ho gayi abhi be koi update nahi? Wah wah. Wah wah kya sher tha. I'm a poet and I didn't even know it. :) lol but seriously, I'm waiting.
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~deewangi~
part 85
Arjun - Geet try to understand.
Nahi ..main ne bhi unke saat wohi kiya ..jo sab ne kiya.. I cheated him.. I lied to him.. I didn't trust him. I didn't trust our love. Mujhe jeene ka koi haaq nahi..
she blind jumps in front of a speeding vehicle
Arjun pulls her aside & hugs her tightly - woh tumhara bina mar jayega Geet.. ek bar Maan ke bar main socho.. she sat down crying..
Arjun - he will kill himself
she cried even more
they managed to some how reach arjun's place. Geet's phone rang.. the moment she heard it ring she knew it was him .. even at this point when he was breaking down .. all he could think was her. She put the phone on silent & hugged arohi began to sob.
Arjun - answer the call Geet. Waise woh pareshan hain tum kyun usse pareshan kar rahi ho
arohi - just pick up the phone & tell him tu suki Geet hain
Geet - nahi .. how can I say that now..
Arjun - Geet at least don't torture him like this..
she picked up with a heavy heart
he was about to yell then suddenly he could sense his deewani's heart.. he some how knew she was stressed - kya huwa itni pareshan kyun ho?
She was still quiet
Maan shouted - WAT HAPPENED?
She began to cry..
he began to pace restlessly in the room - where are u? Why r u crying..he yelled & then almost cried.. kya huwa kuch tho bolo!!
Geet - mujhe ghar aana hain
he closed his eyes where r u, just tell me, I will get u home
Geet - mandir
Maan - I will be there in 30mins
Arjun dropped her to the temple
Arjun - u will be ok na?
She nodded weakly
arohi - ek bar usse bolde tu hi Geet hain
she didn't reply.
Arjun & arohi hid behind the pillar seeing Maan running madly towards her. He was there in less than 30mins. He hugged her instantly, he cupped her face..moved the curls away & kissed her longingly.. kanha chali gayen thi.. mujhe chodke?
Main aapko chod ke kaise jaa sakti hoon.. I am sorry.. really sorry..
she cried shaking.. I am sorry for every thing. she meant everything...He was feeling agitated seeing her tears. He wiped it couple of times with his thumbs.. then commanded don't cry. She cried even more, she wanted to be his; hear him, shout, yell, cuddle, pamper, crave, long, the feelings only she shared with him..no one else. How was she to know the name he did place the trust of his heart.. would give him so much of pain, instead of the love & passion that it held for him.. she hated herself..she wanted to end her life..right the moment she realized..she was the reason for his pain.. yet again..wat could she do.. her life was not hers... it was his only his.. it was her beat that pumped blood in his heart.. it was her inhale of air that gave breath to him..she couldn't take that away from him.

He carried her lovingly to the car still commanding not to cry.
Arohi & Arjun had tears in their eyes seeing so much of love.. deewangi.. how much they are crazily love each other then why this destiny testing them. They couldn't dare to tell Maan anything, especially after that call with arohi..he may just not trust them. They felt so helpless at the moment.
He made her sit in the car. She was still having tears running continuously. He stopped the car near a paint shop. She woundered wat was he up to?
Maan - challo paint lethen hain
Geet - kyun..still crying
he wanted to distract her badly he just couldn't see her cry.
Maan - ek tho maintaince walon ko baga diya & u r not even showing interest in doing up ur house. She immediately hugged him & cried. Nahi mujhe karna hain aapna ghar.
Maan - then stop crying ..aur challo
she still weeping followed him. She kept looking falling more deeply in love with him.
He began to select the color. He could barely understand anything. He picked all dark shades.
Geet - yeh kya kar rahen ho? U don't like these shades
Maan - humesha tho tum hi karti hoo
he looked away nahi mera matlab hain she didn't let him complete it ...just placed a soft peck on his lips. Love u.. he blushed.. she was kissing him in the shop.. his cheeks where all red.
They brought the paint home. She immediately changed into more causal dress & tied a scarf on her head. She covered the floor with paper & began to paint. He didn't take his eyes out of her even once. He was reminded of the time when she painted the wall first time.. how she got scared when he suddenly called her from behind..she had accidentally dropped some paint on him..she was so scared & wiping his shirt then with her messed up hands.. her remembered how he placed a dot on her nose.. he unknowingly walked towards her & dipped his hand in the paint..she turned feeling him behind..he put his hand on her nose..her heart filled up.. he rolled her in the paint & laughed. ' happiness filled her heart...tears made there way to the cheeks.. she tried to wipe her tears with back of ur hand..
Maan expected her to play along... but was taken a back when he saw tears in her eyes - tum badal gayen ho he said painfully.

she poured the paint on him.. do u really think so?? she asked innocently.. not any more..he rubbed his cheek on to her & pulled away her dupptta. He passionately kissed her & took her to the washroom. He still stood mesmerized as her curves unfolded with the water droplets.. she instantly blushed & hid herself in his arms.
He teased her ..I thought tumhe sab pata hain
she nodded into his chest. Hiding her face..gulping her saliva .. she was feeling shy..especially the way he made her feel always. He pressed her waist close to him.. unzipping her kurti.
She smiled shakily as she reached up on tiptoe and kissed him passionately on the mouth. He stepped towards her suddenly, his mission was to taste her and find out more about her intensified...
moving carnally to her shoulders slipping the sleeves off her shoulder & in a puddle around her ankle. Next to go was his .. within a minute they were in their bed relishing every second of togetherness. Nothing could interfere in their happiness.
Next day the paper had big announcement that too from Maan himself. Maan Singh Khurana announces his wedding with his childhood love Geet Maan Khurana today. Geet looked at the paper & wondered, he didn't even hide it from her. She didn't question him either.
Maan - main kaun se shervani pehno?
She smiled weakly & selected it for him .
She dressed him up lovingly.. he kept looking into those eyes.. they like always just loved him
unconditionally. Maan kissed her forehead & left.

Arohi & Arjun called Geet.
Arjun - yeh sab kya horaha hain
Geet was quiet
Arjun - u can't be quiet like this
she still didn't say anything
Arjun - Geet please aaj ke din chup nahi rahna
arohi - woh kya kar sakti hain Arjun
Arjun - Geet tere Maan ko jail ho jayen gi.. according to Hindu law 2 marriages not allowed
arohi - that is only when first wife objects
all the while Geet was quiet
Arjun - Geet!!
Geet was still quiet.

PRECAP
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Woohoo First 2 comment
Awesome update
Want geet 2 tell the truth 2 Maan but geet is so crazily in luv wiv him dat she can't see him hurt
Has rimi agreed 2 marry Maan or not...
Now the newspapers hav sed dat Maans marrying Da fake Geet & still Geet doesn't say a word
Cant w8 4 wedding day wer tye big decision will take place...
Precap sounds gr8
Cont soon Xx...
Happy holi 😊
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow now what geet gonna do?
happy holi to every one..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update. Can't wait for more :)
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muskaan hurry up can't wait no more😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
continue soon please
thank u
Happy holi
Edited by MaanKiMishti- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
happy holi

lovely update

please stop marriage

continue soon

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