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Posted: 14 years ago
yipiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee . . . di but when will u update TM . . . sry me greedy . . . i couldnt sleep last night coz of TM . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~deewangi~
part 84

nahi abhi nahi.. friends ke saat hoon teehk nahi lagen ga
he clinched his fist hearing friends
aap unse millen ho na hospital main
he relaxed a bit thinking she was talking about the doctor.
I will come tomorrow
nahi abhi
itni late kaisen
tell me where u r, I will come
she kept quiet not sure how to convince him
her silence was making him more restless
jaanoo please
umm
love u..love u a lot
he smiled weakly.
Mujhe yeh wali smile nahi pasand
he smirked
yeh bhi nahi
ek tho tum mera saat nahi ho & u expect me to smile
she made a baby face
aacha baba kuch nahi kah raha..jaldi aana
she smiled
Arjun & arohi were looking at her making patterns with her legs & twisting turning the curls..all the while turning red & redder..she cut the call & looked at them.. they lifted the eye brows & teasingly looked at her. She covered her face & went to out. They all reached Arjun's place in the early hours of the morning.
Arjun - aab batayegi bhi humen yanha kyun bulaya?
Geet - ok all this sounds little weird
Arjun - wat more weird than ur deewangi for him
she ignored his comment
arohi - usse chod ..tu bata humen kyun bulaya
Geet - mama came to meet me in the flat
arohi - how sweet
Geet rolled her eyes - not like mama mama types, she came to shout at the girl who was in maan's life.
She said main ne unki beti ki zindagi barbad ki han
arohi - wat!!!
Geet continued - she asked me who am I?
Arjun became serious now
Geet - then suddenly she left
Arjun got up & paced around slowly..thinking something deep.
He opened his laptop & saw geets snaps when she had just joined college in London. Then googled to see rimi's snaps.
Arohi & Geet quiet didn't understand wat he was upto.
Arjun - does Maan know u r Geet?
Geet - no but I feel that he loves me like he did before actually more now
arohi - wat about rimi then?
Geet - pata nahi
Arjun - matlab?
Geet - all I understand is he needs me more than anything else.. & he said it too
Arjun - did he have a fight with rimi or something?
Geet - nahi..actually I have never seen him talking to her
arohi - tere samne nahi.. but when u r not around
Geet blushed ..
Arjun - don't tell me u r 24/7 together
she turned pink now
Arjun ok sorry for being blunt is it always just about physical
she was taken a back & embarrassed.
Arohi waked Arjun on his arm
Arjun - please don't get me wrong, but I need to know this
Geet - its seems like it is just about me always for him..
Arjun - wat?
Arohi - how cute..na
Geet - its been always like that..but now he makes it more clearer, mainne khaya ki nahi how am I feeling, my chocolates, my sleep, my work.. he says he just can't bare to see me hurt. He is possessive. He doesn't let me go away from his sight .. even for a sec. If I am not there he gets really restless aur phir jo bhi unke samne hota hain uski band.
Arjun - so basically after u have come he is ignoring rimi, family & staying with u in that flat.
Geet thinks for a while - nahi. Nahi
arohi - tune kaha ki u live in that flat
Geet - haan.. lekin
Arjun - lekin?
Geet - he has been staying in this flat even before I came
Arjun - why is that?
Geet - woh hi tho confusion hain
Arjun - has he been staying there ever since u left
Geet - nahi nahi.. pechle saal taak when I used to speak to mama, she said Maan lived with them
Arjun ...murmured..maan is living in that flat..means.. he wants to be away from his house.. but why!! Rano aunty asked u who are u??? how can a mother ask that!!! why did Maan ask the same question!!! I guess we need to meet this rimi.
MAANEET FLAT
Maan gets a call from Daadi in morning
Maan - good morning Daadi
Daadi - wat is so good about the morning Geet is leaving the house
he was still in his sleep - nahi she said she is coming back
Daadi shouted - Maan .. Rano is always leaving with her.
He woke up at once..wat?
Daadi - Rano & rimi are leaving the house & going to stay in Hawali
Maan - but why?
He couldn't wait for the response, he rushed to the mansion
they were just stepping out of the mansion when Maan stood there crossing his arms on his chest. Rano didn't know where to look
Maan just took the suitcase & walked back into the house
rimi pulled it back
Maan - mama kanhi nahi jaa rahi
rimi - hum yanha kis haaq se rahen.. isse aacha I will stay in my house & take care of my papaji 's business.
he was quiet looking down at the floor. Rimi just turned to leave
Maan couldn't see Rano leaving him .. mama please
Rano helplessly followed rimi
Maan - ok I will get married to rimi!!
Geet, arohi & Arjun just stood numb near the door
rimi - no I don't want u to marry u
Daadi patted rimi's back..geet beta aise nahi bolten..u guys are already married.
Geet immediately turned her back. Arohi & Arjun still stood their wondering why Daadi addressed rimi as Geet.

Before anyone could notice them, they went away.

On their way back
Arjun - main ne kaha tha ..there is something fishy about this rimi
Geet was still in shock..
Arjun - so u didn't lose ur passport ..she actually stole it
Geet began to cry.. she couldn't imagine the pain Maan would have gone through fighting self..not able to believe that is Geet..but every thing else proved she was Geet. Unhe kitni takleeef huwi hogi.. suddenly she became violent & jumped out of the moving car.. the driver stopped it instantly ..
Arjun & arohi ran behind geet, who was aimless, rashly walking in the traffic
mujhe jeena ka koi haaq nahi..
Arjun - tumhari kya galti hain
sab meri galti hain
Arjun held her hand & stopped - rimi cheated him.. not u
main ne kaun sa unse sach bola, I too played with his emotions like she did.. mujhe unse bol dena tha.. ki main unki Geet hoon.. woh meri baat kabhi nahi tal the..
Arjun - Geet try to understand.
Nahi ..main ne bhi unke saat wohi kiya ..jo sab ne kiya.. I cheated him.. I lied to him.. I didn't trust him. I didn't trust our love.

PRECAP
wedding DAY

-PREV PART 83 NEXT PART 85-
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

At last the realisation!

Hope Arjun grasps the situation and brings the truth in front of everyone! I think only Arjun can do it now.... Though the deewangi of Geet and Maan is just too much. If someone can make sense of the situation and help it out it has to be Arjun and arohi... hope they do their best..😭
Edited by Preethi-Premi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all i'm soooooooo upset u didn't pm me 😭

And on top of that u didn't comment on my updates😭

I'm soooooooo sad......aapse katti (shelly shows her pinky geet style)

On the update welllllllllllllll do i hav 2 say sumthing?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wedding!!!!!!!!!
now i am waiting for the truth to come out
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwww muskan i cant wait for next update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update the next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
cant wait for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski .... not fair ... puray 2 days baad update and no Maneet scenes ... "pouts"

why are you doing this to us "makes a baby angry face"


I want another maaneetified update ... "hmph"


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Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on the new thread....

tx for the update

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