I am liking the serial a lot. The concept is very good and there is no overdrama. However, I think it is going too fast.
Madhav Merchant was killed off too early.
It was not shown in detail how Aditya's mom suffered because of Gautam. It was also not shown how Aditya tried to convince a lot to her but she did not listen to him. Rather, all these were summed up in just three short scenes - Aditya telling her that he cares for her, she calling up Gautam's office and finding out that Gautam has left, and the final phone call from her to Aditya in which she admits that she was wrong in not listening to Aditya.
akhl, the overall pace of the show is just fine. I like that there is not drag and the stuff unfolds in a constant manner. it's just that within each single episode, there seems to be a tad bit of disconnect and I blame the editing and the half hour time slot. they are improving bit by bit on that part though or so it seems lol
The main thing here is that after they introduce and play out certain aspect of plot in the episode, they NEED to give it a closing point before moving to the next scenario. The lack of a proper closing of previous scenario before introducing a new one kinda shows the lack of proper FLOW within the events in the story. Just my opinion..lol
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I do not mind the pace but the screenplay is lacking the character depth and detailing that is needed for epic type stories such as this. They are depicting the characters a certain way without providing much basis to why a certain one behaves a certain way.
I like the pace of the show...it lets you work it out on your own and thats awesome. I do however agree that there is just disconnect in terms of flow. Hopefully they'll get that right.