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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: TinkJia

U roockkkkkk, jaldi jaldi karo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

15 minutes . . . last touch😳
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oh yeaaaaaaaaaaah
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CHAPTER 10

"Who are you?"

Pari and Geet went towards Pari's car or to be more precise Pari dragged Geet towards her car. Everything was happening way too fast for Maan to comprehend. His legs were glued to his spot and he was shocked beyond limits. Geet knew Dr Shergil, but how was that possible. Dr Shergil was one of the best cardiologists in the country and the way she was talking with Geet it appeared she knew her quite well. She called her chutki, were they so close.

Who is this girl?

Why did they have to lie?

What were they lying about?

Questions were jumping up and down in Maan's mind.

And then--

He saw Geet get in the car and he ran. He ran towards the car and pulled Geet out of it. He himself had no idea why he did that but he just did it. His legs ran on their own accord, his reasoning failed him miserably.

It was then Geet realised that Maan had witnessed the entire exchange between her and Dr Shergil. She knew she had to come up with something within seconds otherwise this maintaining low profile thing would go fly in mid air. As Maan dragged her towards the hospital Pari ran behind them. She yelled "what do you think you are doing". She pulled Geet out of his grip as he shouted "who do you think you are"

Maan turned to face her with blood shot eyes and as Pari saw who it was, she was in another world. She gasped as she left Geet's hand. "The Maan Singh Khurana" Pari said out loud. She was drooling over Maan as her mouth formed an 'O'. Geet looked at her like 'what-the-hell'.

Before Maan knew it Pari pounced on him and threw her arms around his neck. He pushed her away with his hands the moment she clung to him.

Pari started shaking uncontrollably. Her hands were trembling as she brought them to her face and she screamed.

She started to breathe heavily as she jumped in excitement "Oh My God . . . am I dreaming"

Geet shook Pari by the shoulders as she said "calm down . . . take it easy . . . he is human . . . calm down"

And Pari collapsed.

Maan sighed "not again"

Maan couldn't help but wonder what is it with girls and passing out.

Geet looked at Maan with a grimace "could you please help me lift her"

Maan looked at her with an expression 'gotta-be-kidding-me'.

Geet tried lifting Pari but she was way too heavy for Geet to handle. Maan had no option but to help her. He lifted Pari in his arms and laid her in the back seat of her car. Geet took a deep breath as she turned towards Maan who was standing with his hands crossed over his chest.

"She is--

Maan looked at her like 'go-on-I-am-listening'

"She is Pari, my childhood friend" Geet said "I have to go now"

Geet tried to escape but little did she know escaping Maan was not that easy. He held her hand and pulled her towards him. She fell backward and hit his chest. Her curly messed up hair touched his face and he moved back with a jerk. This time she literally smelled like a pig. Earlier her scent was intoxicating but at that moment she reeked of rotten junk. He couldn't bear standing near her. Of course she smelt of pig, after all she fell in a ditch and to add to her misery she was also exhausted. The smell of dirt mixed with her sweat was awful. She was literally stinking.

"Go home" Maan said as he really did not have it in him to bear that stink any longer "we'll talk about you in office tomorrow"

"At what time I am supposed to--

Maan understood what she meant and promptly replied "9"

Geet greeted him goodbye though she didn't want to but whatever it be he was her boss and out of courtesy she had to. Moreover she was a bit guilty about the act committed by her so called bodyguards so she was not that rude. Besides, she was already in treble, she felt she better behave coz she knew she would be put in spot the next day. She was happy she got one whole night to think of an excuse.

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Geet was beginning to think what was worse . . . that she was going to be cornered the next day in office or that Pari was eating her head off by continuously blabbering praises about that magambo. When eventually Geet's patience died she screamed. She yelled "Pari I get it you are smitten by that Mr-Anger-On-My-Nose but could you please keep your liking to yourself I am done hearing . . . he is so handsome . . . he is a Greek god . . . his body is so toned . . . he this he that I am fed up"

Realising Geet's anger Pari stopped her talk there. Instead she changed the topic to a more sensible one "aren't you going to ask me why I came here"

"Why did you come here Pari" Geet said as she fluttered her eye lids repeatedly, trying not to sound sarcastic but much to her dislike she sounded horribly sardonic.

"Nahi puchna to mat puch why are you eating footage" Pari said with a scowl.

"Pari come on, what are you doing in Delhi . . . trust me I want to know" Geet tried to sound sincere but in all honesty she was in no mood to know why Pari was there. she really wasn't looking forward to another sleepless night the only difference was this time it would be Pari's nonstop banter that would murder her sleep instead of Yash's endless calls. It was then that Geet wondered why Yash hadn't called her yet. And then Geet realised'

Geet jumped in excitement as she said "Did you--

Pari nodded as she gave a wide grin. For the second time in the day Geet pounced on Pari but this time Pari did not push her away.

The girls started jumping in excitement as they chuckled.

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Maan couldn't sleep that night. He was pre-occupied with her thoughts. That night when she hugged him in the office, today when she hugged him in the car . . . he did not push her away but when that girl whoever she was hugged him he instantly pushed her away. He could not comprehend his own actions, why did he always loose himself to her touch. This girl was mystery for him. Who was she? Everything about her was so complicated. She was so soft hearted that she fainted at the sight of blood. At the time she was so cold hearted that she slapped a random stranger. She wouldn't apologise for her mistake but she would say sorry when she wasn't at fault. She knows one of the best cardiologists in the country but she lies to her. She has a friend who is a model and she--

He was confused; his brain cells had given up thinking. This girl was driving him crazy. He had to find out everything about her. He just had to.

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The next morning Geet tried waking Pari from her slumber but she was one lazy head. Geet was getting really annoyed as Pari did not let her sleep all night and now she was sleeping like a baby. Not that Geet had any problem with staying last night, why would she, after all they were discussing about the success of their plan; well hoping it would succeed.

Geet gave up and asked the servants to inform Pari, whenever she wakes up, that Geet has gone to office. Today was dressed a bit differently.

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Geet entered the office and she was surprised by the unusual silence that prevailed in the office. She went towards her cabin and noticed Maan was already there in the office. It was 8:45, what the hell up. Something told her, she was in big trouble. But she remembered Maan himself asked her to come at 9 didn't him.

As soon as Geet settled in her office Maan barged in and yelled at her "where the hell have you been"

Geet was literally trembling, for the time she was scared of his anger though she didn't know why. Probably his voice, or may be his seething eyes or every about him, she was simply scared. She didn't know what to speak. She was mum.

"Why are you just standing there? Come to my cabin NOW" Maan barked as he banged the door behind him.

Geet felt tears welling up in her eyes. No one has ever raised his voice at her, even when Yash was angry his tone was hundred times milder than this. Geet was quivering in fear, her breathing was alarmingly high and her heart beat abnormally racing. She took a deep breath; assured herself everything was going to be fine and knocked at his cabin door. He asked to come in or to be more precise literally yelled at her. Her fear multiplied two folds as she entered the Loins den.

Maan threw at a file at his deck and asked her to review and prepare the specifications for the unit plan. She took the file in her hands and just when she was about to exit the cabin he barked yet again "did I ask you to leave"

She came back and stood in front of his desk with her knead slumped down. She was on the verge of crying, the only trigger needed was another yell from his mouth and she would be on the floor crying.

Maan looked at her and realised what she was wearing "what the hell are you wearing"

Geet was dressed in a loose fit Black T-shirt and dark grey jeans with sneakers. Her hair was tied in a braid and from no god damn angle was she dressed professionally.

"If I will have to follow you around, you see, this is way more comfortable" she replied trying hard to suppress her irritation.

After listening to her reply Maan really did not have anything else to say on the matter. Did she actually think he would go on a site visit with her ever again?

"I do not care . . . go home and change" Maan yelled yet again.

"Excuse me" Geet was shocked. Did he just ask her to go home and change?

"You heard me . . . NOW" Maan replied.

"But how can I go home" Geet was baffled. How was she supposed to go home, her house was a one hour drive away?

"You live two blocks away, it will hardly take you ten minutes to go and change" Maan said rather calmly.

"I need minimum two hours" Geet replied truthfully.

Maan looked at dumbfounded "are you insane, two hours for changing"

"Whatever it is. . . I need two hours" Geet spat.

"I give a damn, I want you in the office dressed accordingly within half an hour, and you get that. We have a client meeting and you sure as hell will not be dressed like that in front of my clients" Maan retorted.

"But--

"No buts . . . go now, actually wait a minute, Why are you late to office" Maan asked.

"Pardon" again Geet was confused. She was not late; she was in the office 15 minutes prior to office time.

"What time is it" Maan asked as his scowl intensified.

Geet looked at her watch and answered "nine ten"

"So why are you late" Maan said as he suppressed his anger.

"As far i know the office starts at nine and besides I asked you about the time yesterday, you told me nine" Geet replied.

"Shut up, can you at least show some decency and accept your mistake" Maan was surprised at her answer. She was trying to but the blame on him. She was the one who was late, dressed in the most absurd sense for office and to top it all she wasn't ready to accept her mistake.

"But--

"Get out and better be dressed properly when clients arrive" Maan barked.

Geet knew she did not have any option but to listen to what he says. She silently walked out of the office with tears in her eyes.

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Aditya was standing outside Maan's cabin when Maan was yelling at Geet. He closed his eyes when he saw Geet come out with teary eyes. He knew it wasn't her fault. He braced himself as he knew he was voluntarily jumping in a lion's den. But he had to do it; he had to tell MK it wasn't her fault. He summoned all his courage and knocked. Maan asked him to come in as he was engrossed in his work. Aditya started stammering as he knew Maan was in foul mood but he had to do it "ssssssiirrrr . . . I . . . I . . . hhhad--

"What is it Aditya, say it and get going. I am busy" Maan roared as he was already irritated at that cat and now Aditya's stammering made it even worse.

Aditya closed his eyes as he said "it wasn't Geet's fault . . . we did not have her contact number in the records so we could not inform her about coming early today"

"Why is her number not there in the records" Maan asked.

"Savitri ma'am asked me not to add her contact details in the records for some reason she chose not to disclose" Aditya replied.

Maan was shocked. Why would his sweet-sweet dadi ma ask for that? What is it with this girl? The more he tried to understand the more he was puzzled. But right now, he had other job to be done and he would definitely ask Savitri Devi why she asked Aditya not to feed Geet's contact details once he goes home. For the time being the only thing that played in his mind was Geet's scared and teary face.

"Send Geet in" Maan ordered.

After some fifteen minutes Aditya came back to Maan's cabin but he was alone. No Geet.

"Where is Geet" Maan asked.

"Sir she is not in the office" Aditya replied.

"You go I'll manage"

Maan knew where she could have gone, obviously he would know. He was the one who asked her to go home and change. But strangely, he felt something was wrong and he didn't quite know why but he felt like checking on her. So, he left the office. As he came out of the elevator, into the parking lot he saw her walking towards the exit. She was crying and he did not like the sight of her tears.

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Precap: Maan manaofying Geet . . . and office tiffs . . . maan was really angry and hence he did not ask about the hospital incidence . . . that will come.

Ok . . . I know abrubt ending sorry😳 for that but I have a lot of school work pending so sorry but promise next update will not be this dry as I know this one is quite dry but I have school and its exhausting . . . Pari and Geet's plan will come up in the next few updates😃 . . . so if you want you can guess.😉

OK . . . so how was it . . . plz comment😃

Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part!! hahha...geet...came to work dressed like that after having a hell of a day the day before..
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank yu for the wonderful update love it each part poor Geet Maan so mean cant wait when find out who Geet real is pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome

our sweet baby geet😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for giving us an update 🤗
I know its hard to manage with schoolwork and even worse when people pester you for an update (cough cough - not me though!) Hehe
Cant wait the next part now because of all the interesting things that will be revealed and happening :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeee update
loved it
gr8 part
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Thank you for giving us an update 🤗

I know its hard to manage with schoolwork and even worse when people pester you for an update (cough cough - not me though!) Hehe
Cant wait the next part now because of all the interesting things that will be revealed and happening :-)

trust me this pestering is what motivates me to write . . . i just love when i get dhamkis . . . but yes sometimes coz of school it becomes exhuasting😆
🤗 thank u darling
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
lol!....another bad day for geet!
wonder how will maan manofy her!
continue soon!

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