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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

Muskaan 1and A half hours
My phone battery is about to die..and my Internet on my phone is getting slower
My eyes are burning and my bed wants me to sleep...
I have to check in the morning sorry x
It's 11pm!!!


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omg she have been 1 hour…. emm… any point of me staking...
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Posted: 14 years ago
egh… i am gn start typing… giving up with sadi
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski..... fast.. please update fast...

my hubby will come now..my son will wake up
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muski v all r waiting...............................
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hey i have noticed one thing.... whenever i log in i see that u r updating😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 135

Ayur - but they need to know who is Delhi's new deputy commissioner
Geet - NO.. I hate media please.
Ayur - wat about the party at khurana's
she laughed.. a cold laugh. She was reminded of Maan telling her, don't come here unless u r invited. & the irony they are hosting a party in her honor.
Ayur - that will be rude gk
Geet - khan hain na, he will handle it.
Ayur - u don't understand, Savitri devi has personally spoken to me. The countries eminent people will be there, it will be an embarrassing situation for me.
Geet - I don't like to socialize.
He closed his eyes - this is not about ur liking or disliking
Geet - well wat can u do, another transfer right. I will be waiting.
She picked Davis file & began to research on him.
Ayur - it is 3am, u can work on it tomorrow.
Geet - tomorrow...she smirked.. I won't be here tomorrow
ayur - where r u going?
Geet - I need to get back to Baramulla kal subha ki flight hain
ayur - narcotics case ke liyen
Geet - umm
ayur - when r u back?
Geet - guess 2 days
ayur - so u won't be here for the party
she had a devilish smirk on her face
ayur - wat about Prithvi
Geet - u will have to depute him.
Ayur - umm
while getting into the details of Davis in file she paused - uske against itna bada case hain, phir kuch action kyun nahi leten?
He sighed in disappointment - politics
she was getting frustrated & wild the more she read researched about him.

HANDA HAWALI
mk had fallen a sleep hearing to the third story half way through. He enjoyed it thoroughly. She was so cute with her doubts & umm..umm... finally steady breathing rhythm he new she was a sleep now. It was 3am & he wondered where Geet was. His heart missed at 4am when he heard some foot steps. Then followed by some soft whispers.
Rano - kya kar rahi ho?
Geet - packing
Rano - kanha ja rahi ho?
Geet - Baramulla
Maan wondered why on earth will she go there.. that too so disturbed area.
Rano almost cried
Geet - just for couple days, kuch kham hain
he sighed in relief.
Geet packs mk's dresses as well
Rano - Mk ke kapde kyun pack kar rahi ho?
Geet rolled her eyes.
Rano - let her be here
Geet - nahi mama she never stays without me
Rano - nahi we will manage.
Maan was worried why was she taking mk to such disturbing part of the world.
Geet - woh bhi nahi hain, aur phir main bhi aise chali gayi tho woh bahut feel karegi
maans heart sunk. all his hopes, tiny ray of hope seemed an illusion now. He mistook her woh!! he couldn't hate himself enough to let her go away. He cursed himself.. his heart felt descending, like the setting sun. thinking of things he had said, and things he had done. He felt like dark clouds surrounded him. He sat there with his heart filled with tears thinking of only yesterdays years. He could only hope that she found kindness and forgiveness within her heart. For the worst pain he had ever felt, was them being apart. Now only one message, that he wanted to let her know no matter what her heart felt, his will always love her.. but wondered if it really mattered any more.
Rano - umm.. kissed her forehead .. good night
She kept the bags aside & slipped next to mk. She noticed the receiver tucked near her ear. She knotted her brows her heart beat became irregular, why did she feel it was him. Her hand shook before she could reach the set. She tried to calm herself, but she was getting excited like a teenager, she just hoped it was him. She slowly held the phone near her ears, she forgot to breath hearing him, his breathing, which was irregular as well. Her eyes were twinkling in joy.
His mouth went dry.. the sound of his gulping the saliva, she let a soft moan that could hardly be heard. He wanted to ask her, say sorry to her, plead sorry.. If he could take back everything he said, he would do it in a heart beat retracting every single thread.. If he could erase the words , his eraser would then dissipate, as he feverishly erase the wrong, he wanted to give a single pleading cry, he wanted to tell her how much he regrets every single word he said, I am sorry jaan.. that's all he could think of but words couldn't be formed. He trembled & feared her reaction, her snap saying, his plead didn't matter any more. He couldn't think, even the thought felt like clinging his heart, he just felt like taking a gun & shooting his heart since the pain was so suffocating. .

When the silence was prevailing, both had so much to pour & cry out. She like always had to step in
Geet - bahut pareshan tho nahi kiya
Maan - nahi, bilkul nahi
Geet - aap soyen nahi
Maan - tum bhi tho nahi soyen
Geet - mujhe aab aadat si hogayen hain.. felt as though tears were ripping her eyes.. but ut was long dried
he closed his eyes.. he knew she couldn't fall sleep without him. He didn't want to hurt her, he didn't want to remind her of anything that ached, he tried to divert.. he knew how much it hurt.
Maan - mk aapni mama ki tarah hain
Geet - nahi woh tho aapne daddy hi beti hain
Maan - mujhe tho mama ki tarah lagi
Geet - aur mujhe daddy ki tarah
mk rolled in her sleep - dono ki
they both smiled
(had it been 7 years ago this discussion would have led her to wonder wat to expect from him, everything seemed so fine.. but as nothing hurts more than waiting since she didn't even know what she was waiting for anymore.)
Maan - tum usse baramulla kyun le ja rahi ho, I mean is it safe there?
She so much loved it when he cared for their baby. She knew he cared ..but to hearing from him was different, it felt so beautiful & warm
Geet - its ok, she will be fine.
He didn't know if he could tell them not to go. He probably just lost all the right on her, her life.
Maan - flight kab ki hain
Geet - 7.15am
Maan - kuch der so javoo
Geet - umm
Maan - good night
she smiled & slept without cutting the call.
He smiled bilkul nahi badli
she cried - kuch bhi tho nahi badla..
he was still no where to let go his ego & anger. He was still not there for her. They were still apart ..sadly.. nights are still dark & lonely..he is never there to hear her, he is never there to hear her cries, he is never there to hear her heart.
Geet - na aap na halat..her voice trailed off in the most disappointed tone. He had never heard her so hopeless, helpless. The tone wretched and etched in pain.
as if she is left confused almost numb inside.

5.30 am she was up & walked to the open terrace of the hawali.. he heard her walk away .. leaving the phone unhooked. She couldn't disconnect his call. But this time of the day is been very painful for her. She worked out madly at the is hour to kill the pain within. She could relive every single moment, when she was the most unforgettable person, when he kissed her forehead and hold her hand whispered in her ear not to let go, when he promised her nothing yet she still was holding on when he kissed her lips and unusually describes the sweetness of it..wondering how memories never faded rather got deeper & intense with time. Hurting more & tearing already wrecked heart.
When Geet got back at 6.30am Mk was giggling & talking on the phone. Geet assumed that was Maan. She went into the shower & got dressed.
Geet - get ready beta we are getting late
mk - main main ...da da da....da......y se baat kar rahi hoon
Geet - we will talk to him on the way.
Mk - nahi..
mk was so scared to lose him..she didn't want to cut the call
Geet hugged her & said in the phone - aap baat main baat karoge na
he spoke to mk - u get ready I am waiting
mk - paka
Maan - paka
she quickly got ready in between ran, picked the phone - d....a......d....a.....d...a....d.....a............
Maan - I am hear beta
he didn't know why he was ready to do anything for her. something he couldn't refuse..he himself couldn't reason it. She got ready completely & sat next to the phone listening to him. Interestingly he did all the talking & she laughed & smiled & giggled. When they were about to leave. Mk began to cry. Geet consoled aacha yeh lo call from ur cell. Geet took her cell from nanny & gave to her.
Mk - da da da '
Maan - haan beta
mk - aaaaaaa............................ppppppppppppppppppp mera call pi pi.pi...pi pi.pi.......kk...
Maan - sweet heart give me ur number I will call u
mk -. nahi.....aaaa...aaaaaaa............................pppppppppppppppppp nahi karogen
he didn't understand
mk cried when he didn't reply
Geet - pick karenge.. jaldi karo we are getting late dear
mk cried & cut the call.. she was so sure Maan won't pick up her call. She called him with broken heart, with least hope...he picked in half a ring
mk tears didn't stop, she couldn't believe he actually picked her call. She started jumping pi pi pi pi pi ck ck ck ck ki ki ki ki ki ya kiya.......she was so happy that she didn't even bother saying a bye to nana - naani. Geet hugged them bye & sat in the car. They reached airport. Mk was still happily talking to Maan.
They whole day she was in phone with Maan while Geet went to office. Ha made sure mk had her food, milk & nap. She won't unless he insisted.

Party at Khurana Mansion
the whole party 's attention was diverted to Gk. They were eagerly waiting.
Daadi thanked Ayur for all his effort.
Daadi - where is gk
ayur didn't know wat to say
khan - gk never socializes
Daadi was little disappointed, she so much wanted to thank gk personally
Ayur - gk prefers to maintains a very low profile.

Maan was still in the call.
Mk - party hain?
Maan - umm
mk - da da da da da da da da da da da da busy
Maan -boring party
mk smiled - mama hates parties
since when was that he wondered. She so much partied, infact the second time they met was in a party he couldn't stop thinking about the night ...how she was trying to run out of his party.... that too with him...
Maan - pata hain I met mama in a party like this
mk - tha tha tha t was the second time u met in the party
he wondered she knew - umm..she looked beautiful in that white saree
mk laughed
Maan - wat happened
mk - mama never wears saree
Maan -
not even for parties
mk - mama never attends parties
Maan was confused about this Geet ..he thought she never changed..but the more he heard from Mk... it seemed they were talking about 2 different person.

precap,
more on Davis
-PREV NEXT PART 136 -
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
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Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Why di.... why did he have to misunderstand her... ok.... fine he did but he can say sorry atleast na... but me sure he will follow her to baramula😆 well i am hoping so😳
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Again 2nd :(
awww MK is soooooo cute. .. lovely update muskan.. love to see the bond btw mk n munda getting stronger...... give us some Maaneet moment na .. we r waiting for 7 years now 😛 Uff Yeh munda aur his ego .. its time Maan .. 7years paa .. wake up Maan !

Edited by Sia89 - 14 years ago
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Aww that was sooo sweet! I hope they make up ASAP!
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome!

loved to see how strong mk and maan's bond is getting!....
ohno!...maan took geet's WOH in a wrong sense!😭
continue soon!
Edited by sweet scorpio - 14 years ago

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