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-truly magical-
part 136

 
mk - mama never attends parties
Maan was confused about this Geet ..he thought she never changed..but the more he heard from Mk... it seemed they were talking about 2 different person.
Daadi calls Maan to speak to the guests, at least thank them.
Maan reluctantly ended the call with his sweetheart promising that he will call back later at night to tell her story. She was very upset now. He didn't know why he was so attached to her. May be because he so much wanted her in his life. She was his dream, the dream of daughter who looked exactly like Geet, his geet..his love..his wife..  the dream he ruined with his own bare hands, now he feels he didn't only ruin it; he just killed himself, his life.. & mk was only his savior. His reason to live... he couldn't think of any other reason why on earth he should be still breathing when his heart was not his any more.
 
He began to live only for her, only to hear her, only to feel that his dream did exist ' atleast it was a reality..not just a dream.. he couldn't thank Geet enough to let him talk to her. If she wanted, she could just deprive him away from his only happiness for wat he has done to her. He doesn't deserve anything.. not even this life. But I guess this his punishment to be alive & repent, regret , cry bleed ..die every second of rest of his life without his heart, without his soul. But still Geet didn't fail to be his angel..with a magical wand to give him Mk.. she was so beautiful, innocent & loved him divinely. Exactly like Geet did..DID... sadly still does...but he doesn't seem to see it.
 
 
Maan met up with Ayur.  They shook hands & had a brief introduction
Maan - thanks for all the timely help
ayur - we were just doing our duty sir.
Maan - call me Maan
ayur smiled
Maan - must say ur officers are really smart
ayur - actually it was nothing about me. It was Gk
Maan re-lived the whole rescue operation... gk '.umm
ayur - our new DCP
Maan - where is gk.. he looked around in the party skimming the crowd
ayur - gk very aloof person. Doesn't like to mingle with people. Actually just hates crowd, media hype
Maan was wanting to thank gk personally - can I gift something to gk
ayur - I don't think gk would appreciate it.
Khan just joined them with a bandage on right side of his forehead
ayur - he is khan, he was part of ur rescue team
Maan immediately extended his right hand - thanks a lot Mr. Khan
khan so much in fear .. because he knew there was something about Maan Singh Khurana that unleashed the unseen side of his boss gk.
Khan - its our duty sir
wondered if it was just duty for gk.  Maan Singh Khurana seemed way too personal by all means. He instantly asked  - are u married?
Maan was caught off guard he almost paused the drink he was sipping, but he didn't he just held the glass ever so steadily & gulped the drink hard.
Ayur was also taken a back with such blunt & offending question
but khan was not, he tried to read Maan directly into his eyes, almost intimidating him.
Ayur tried to lighten the situation - I am sorry he is new to delhi. Other wise who doesn't know about  Maan Singh Khurana.
Ayur eyed khan to leave. Khan excused himself to get another drink.
Maan excused himself as well & went to get some drink for himself. He was disturbed. He wanted to tell the world that Geet was his wife, his life.. but now it was too late. If he did tell anyone, it would cause trouble to her peaceful life. How time is played on him, cheated on him, how it has punished him for his deeds, then he could have said but he was too busy in every thing else..but his life...now even if he wanted  he can't. He drank couple of more drinks & the pain was hurting.
 
He charge in the presence of the guests, pressing to each occasion with a stiff smile forced upon his somber face. Eventually he shut down in his room alone-as he used to it. With a tear formed in the crevice of his eye making its way down his cheek. Knowing he don't belong here..he needed her to love him, he needed her to breath, he needed her as he needed air to live, But alone he was left..alone will be forever, afraid of regret.
 
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Geet finished with the narcotics case & began to research more on Davis.
Davis was in his 40's. Davis has survived several assassination attempts both from his enemies who are no more & the police force. Special investigation team had reported his link in so many of the high profile kidnapping, drug trafficking most of the illegal activities. His organization was huge & ever expanding. Mumbai police had lost lots of their excellent personals in attempts to bringing him down. He had not even tried to hide the fact that he had them killed. He had used the deed to drill in the fear..the lesson that crossing him was not good idea. He was not afraid of police, with his connections he was untouchable on that front. Davis owned so many people in high positions, not just in Mumbai but all across India & middle eastern countries, that he could & did act exactly as he pleased.
 
 
He was ruthless & cold blooded. She felt like shooting in all the 6 bullets on his head. But her research revealed that even a sharpshooter couldn't get a clear shot at him. Killing Davis meant using massive weapon that would also kill any others nearby. Police wouldn't have minded killing him & his organization people but Davis was smart enough to always ensure that there were innocents nearby. They couldn't kill so causally & indiscriminately. Basically there was no way they could reach him. The only way was to protect the victim from him. But yet again he was such a smooth, cruel, mean operator, he could get to an extent of killing his prey if he felt his time was wasted on them.
 
Now that was bothering her. She wondered wat was the amount they were expecting from Khurana's definitely few corers. She didn't mind paying it & keep maan safe. Still would paying him would stop him... Oh God !!! she hated this guy.. wasn't enough tension already !!! she didn't sleep the whole night.. completed her packing, she had already worked on mk's TC from her school in the morning. She decided to be in delhi at the earliest she couldn't effort to risk his security. She exactly knew how the system worked.
 
 
They took the morning 9.15am flight from Jammu to Delhi.
Maan kept trying mk's number since 10 it was switched off. He was worried. Geet noticed mk was in a bad mood since last night. She didn't talk either. Geet tried to kiss her, cuddle her through out the flight but she was not giving in. she was really angry.
Geet - kya huwa sweety
she turned her face & looked away.
Geet placed few kisses all over her cheek - mama love u a lot
she snapped - da da .. da da .. da da .. da da .. doesn't love mk
Geet closed her eyes & opened it back in anger.. she was already worked up with the tension & here mk behaving like this was annoying
Geet to nanny - wat happened to her?
Nanny - woh sahab ne kal raat phone nahi kiya isse liya naraz hain.
The moment the flight landed mk's phone rang, she saw it was daddy, she cut the call. Maan tried again..she cut it again.
Geet - wat are u doing?
Mk took the phone & was about to throw, Geet gave a stern look, mk's hand stopped in mid air & she cried giving the phone to Geet..
Geet answered the call & yelled at Maan - agar promise rak nahi sakten tho promise karten kyun ho?
He didn't know which promise she was talking about..because there ever 100's of promises that he has not kept to her. Actually never kept any of his promise to her..nothing..none at all. Geet realized wat she was saying she calmed herself - aap ne kal raat phne nahi kiya isse liya naraz hain.
Maan - I was drunk last night.. he just blurted
why she asked promptly, authoritative, wife in anger. Oh he just loved when Geet expressed her self like this, how much he missed her, her non stop talking.. bossing over him. Talking everything but never saying wat she really wants. Never saying anything that her heart held.
Maan - woh ..woh woh .. (he was fearing like always) party main
Geet - aab sambalo usse, kal raat se moo banke beti hain
Maan - usse phone do na
Geet - nahi lagi..she was just about to throw the phone
Maan - dehka bilkul aapne mama pe gayen hain
Geet - bematlab ka gussa tho iske papa ka hain na
Maan took a deep breath .. aacha usse phone do
mk - mujhe nahi baat karni & cuts the call
 
 
precap,
😲oops jr mk ka gussa 😳
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Yaaaay im the first to comment mee haapppyy πŸ₯³πŸ˜ƒ
awesome update, why is maan such a idiot, doesn't he understand that he is the Father...
loved it 
thaanks for such a wonderfull updates
luv ya muski
 
Edited by Azmii - 13 years ago
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Luvly update..atlast geet spoke sumthing to him...u absolutly spoil ma mood these days muski di...y..??Iam tired of asking Y Y...ab tho i am luving mk's anger...these days she potrays exactly all ma emotions n feelingss..πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰..hope atleast now truth is  revealed to maan...tht he is a dad actually...ufff....ME CAN'T TAKE IT NEMORE...ROHINI THAK GAYYI HEIN...I CAN'T SEE THEM LYK THIS..REPEATED THIS 1000 TYMS BY NOW..but still muski di's 😈...mind..doesn't understand us..😭😭..continue soon...!!!

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 13 years ago
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awesome, brilliant, beautiful, lovely part. loved it.
 feel really sad for maan,
today my heart is crying for maan also.
he is repenting , aur kitna ,pls make him realize geet is still waiting for him.
 his wife geet.
thank god maan remember he is married and his wife is geet but still in mu that geet is moved on.
oye maan , she is still waiting for u, go take her in ur arms.
both maaneet is suffering lots,. now it's time to their reunion .
Geet is really angel of maan's life and geet is giving another angel ,jr mk to maan.
baas maan have to know about it that jr mk is his daughter, maaneet's daughter.

but I'm really worried, scared, feared about this devis.
he is really ruthless.
but I have faith on muskan and our gk ,
 devis ka kaam hoga khatam jaldi.
aww jr mk is angry on her  daddy, sweet heart aache se dant dena aapne daddy ko. he is so dumb .
aww maan is still scared of geet. geet is asking question with her full right. loved it.
now, at least geet told something to maan.
 aww jr mk ka  gussa toh bilkul aapne parents pe gaya hain .
I still remember geet in lodon in anger throw things and maan ka gussa toh ,
jr mk is mixture of maaneet.
now maan daddy manofy ur darling daughter.
it's ur punishment.
kisne kaha tha drink karne ke liye.manao usse abhi.
precap is interesting.
I'm waiting to see how maan will manaofy his darling daughter.
update soon.
pls muskan, let maan know geet is still waiting for him.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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😑😑 hurry up😑
monika feeling very sleepyπŸ₯±πŸ₯±
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*edit*

hell with tat davis guy!
n mk! shez so adorable!
sachi! bematlab ka gussa papa se liya hai
n maan still didn't understand tat she is his daughter!
Edited by dimpzz - 13 years ago
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Amazing update..!!
MK is soo cute...love her..!!
Please continue soon..!!