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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi bidu this part was soooo nice and I was thinking how vidya will accept him on fb , now waiting for the next 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here's Part 30!!! Enjoy friends!!! And thanks all of you for your sweetest comments!!! :)

Present time
Sahil (to Sagar): Tere honesty ka jawab nahin. Tujhe ek bar bhi yeh nahin lagaa ke agar Vidya ne tujhse dosti karne se manaa kar diya toh!?!
Sagar (determined look): Main Vidya se apni dosti sach ke buniyaat mein karna chahta tha, kyuki mujhe pata tha ke jhoot pe banaya hua rishta jyada der nahi tikta.
Sanju (smiles): Sagar, mujhe khushi hai ke tum mere best friend se dosti jhoot ke buniyaat par nahi karna chahte the.
Sagar (smiles): Thanks!
Sanju (makes a cute look): Aagli bar mujhe thanks pleaseee maat bolna. Mujhe ek word apne dosto se sunna bilkul accha nahin lagta.
Sagar (smiles): Accha theek hai.
Sanju (smiles): Better! Accha so uske baad kya hua? (curious look)
Sagar (smilingly): Uske baad maine bohot der tak Vidya ke message ka intezaar kia. Par mujhe uski taraf se koi jawab nahi aaya.
Sahil (shocked): Iss ka matlab Vidya, tumne Sagar ko reply nahi kia?
Vidya (smilingly): Kaise reply nahi karti! Mujhe reply karna padha!
Sanju (gives a huge smile): How sweet! So.. tune Sagar ko kab reply kia?
Vidya (smiles): Shaam ko. (laughs)
Sagar (to Vidya): Vidya,tum haas rahi ho? Aur main itna nervous ho gaya tha uss din. (to Sanju and Sahil) Ek pal ke liye toh mujhe lagaa tha ke Vidya mujhse dosti nahi karna chahti. Par ussi pal mein....

Flashback - Two Years Back
Sagar waited for Vidya's reply till evening. He was so nervous that can't be even imagined. For a moment, he thought that Vidya don't want to make friendship with him. He was just about to log out his account but just then he saw a message just arrived. His heart pounded in nervous. He folded his hands and began to pray. "Bhagwan ji, I hope yeh message Vidya ki ho. Please!" His hands was shaking. But still with his shaking hands, he touched the mouse and finally opened the message in his facebook. And guess what? It's Vidya's message! He saw the name "Vidya Singhania" on the place of the name of the sender and he gave a broad smile. He felt relaxed! Then he took a deep breath and began to read the message. It says, "Hi! Really sorry for replying so late. Actually after I come back home, I again had to go out for something urgent. Just now, I arrived home, got fresh, logged in and read your message. Well, just want to tell you that, I am very impressed with your honesty. I loved the thing that you told me the truth today itself. For a moment, I thought that I would not add you, but don't know why, my heart did not allow me to remove you from my friend list. May be because God wants us to be friends. So, at last, wanna say that, Okay, I'll be your friend! And one more thing, now I am kinda busy, can chat with you only at 8pm. Till then, see ya! Regards... Vidya :)" Just after reading this, Sagar shouted, "YES!" in joy. He was damn happy. He got up from his chair and jumped in happiness. Then he saw his watch and it's 6pm. "Abhi bhi do ghante hai! Ufff!", he said to himself irritatedly but instantly he smiled and said to himself, "Koi baat nahi! Dopahar se aab tak intezaar kia. Aab yeh do ghante bhi intezaar kar lunga." After that, he folded his hands and said, "Bhagwan ji,thank you soo much! Tumne meri dua kabul karli. Thanks a ton!" After that, he went to get freshen up.

Present Time
Sanju and Sahil smiled!
Sanju (smilingly): Toh finally tum dono ki dosti ki shuruwat ho gayi.
Vidya (smiles): Haan! Uss din se humari dosti ki shuruwat huyi. Hum dono har roz raat 8pm se 11pm baje tak facebook par chat karte the. Aur jaise hi din guzar te gaye, hum dono ki dosti aur strong hoti gayi.
Sagar (smiles): Aur hum dono ne apni apni zindagi ek dusre ke samne khuli kitab ki tarah khol kar rakh diya. Hum log apne daily life ki baate, apne feelings, apne life ki woh ek har choti choti baat share karne lage.
Sahil (smiles teasingly): Great! Toh guys, yeh toh thi tum dono ki dosti ki shuruwat ki kahani par yeh dosti pyaar mein kaise badli?
Vidya (smiles & blushes): Yeh toh hum dono ko bhi nahi pata chala. Samay ke saath saath humari dosti strong hoti gayi, hum ek dusre ke saath apni saare secrets share karne lage, aur dekhte hi dekhte hum dono ki yeh strong friendship pyaar ka rup lene lagaa.
Sagar (smiles shyly): Par kab humari dosti pyaar mein badal gayi, hume pataa hi nahi chala. Hume toh bas itna pataa tha ke hum dono har ek din ek dusre ke bina puri nahi hoti.
Vidya (cheeks turns red): Agar agar kabhi bhi hum ek dusre se chat nahi kar paate the, hum dono bechaain ho jaate the.
Sanju and Sahil (teases): Ohhhoooo!!!! ;-)
Sagar & Vidya smiles and feels shy.
Sanju (confused): Par tum dono ko kabhi toh samajh mein aaya hoga that you both are in love with each other?!?!
Sagar (smiles): Hume ek dusre ke liye apni feelings bohot der baad samajh mein aayi, jab hum dono apni 2 saal ki friendship pure hone par peheli bar mile the.
Sahil (excitedly): Oh wow! So, kaise tum dono apni feelings ke baare mein samajhne lage?
Vidya (smiles but makes a serious look thinking about the worst part of her life): Jab maine Sagar ko apni shaadi fixed hone ke baare mein bataya tha!
Sanju and Sahil (shocked): Shaadi?!?!?!?!
Sanju (angry look): Teri shaadi fixed hui thi aur tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi?!?!?
Vidya (sad look): Kya batati tujhe Sanju! Woh mere life ka sabse worst part tha!
Sagar puts his hand on Vidya's shoulder and consoles her. Then Vidya tells Sahil and Sanju with a sad look and teary eyes about Samrat, how she called him her best friend, how her marriage was fixed with him, how he wanted to kill her(Vidya), how Sagar saved her and how Vidya's voice came back.
Sanju (makes a sad look & puts her hand on Vidya's shoulder): Chal Vidya! Yeh sab bhul jaa! Yeh part teri life ka worst part tha iss liye just flash it out of ur life yaar! Tune mujhe bataya toh tha ke Sagar ke vajar se teri awaaz vapas aayi par yeh sab tune mujhe nahi bataya and i certainly understand the reason.
Sahil (consoles Vidya): Haan Vidya! Yeh chapter apni life se bahar phek do. Jo hua so hua. Aab khushi ki baat yeh hai ke tum aur Sagar ek sath ho aur khush ho. (smiles)
Sanju(smiles): Sahil is right! Aur Sagar, main tumse bhi thanks kehena chahti hoon meri dost ka itna dhyaan rakhne ke liye! Thanks yaar!
Sagar(smiles): Arey iss mein thanks bolne ki zarurat nahi hai. Vidya ka khayal rakhna mera responsibility hai. Aur main yeh responsibility apni aakhri saas tak nibhayunga.
Hearing this, Sanju and Sahil smile and Vidya, with loving way, looked at Sagar! Tears began to roll down her eyes but Sagar wipes away her tears and hugs her. Seeing this, Sanju and Sahil smile again!!! :)

That's the end here!!! Comment soon!!! Sorry for no precap cuz I haven't thought yet about the things in next part!!! Anyways, take care guys!!! Keep smiling!!! Love ya all!!! :)
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was so nice yaar
I love their love sooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifull update!!!!! i love their story very much!!
SV are soo cute and soo nice!!!! Love SV.....
Bidzz u r the best!!!!! love Sana....
Thanks for PM....

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Posted: 14 years ago
One word, wow. I'm really impressed with your writing. It is a fantastic FF. Great job and keep it up.

Take care,
Rina
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Posted: 14 years ago
bidz-another awesum update...
loved it....sorry for posting ma comment so late...as i was busy wid ma exam
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

bidz-another awesum update...

loved it....sorry for posting ma comment so late...as i was busy wid ma exam


Oyee!!! Sorry kaiko?? 😲 Tujhe sorry nahi balki mujhe tereko thank you bolna chahiye!!! Thank you so much diiii!!! 🤗😃
I didn't actually expected that you will get time to read the update!!! 😛
You are really awesome....tumhare exams hai still you took out time to read my ff!!! awww you are the sweetest sis I ever had!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Rayanaa

One word, wow. I'm really impressed with your writing. It is a fantastic FF. Great job and keep it up.

Take care,
Rina


Hey Rina 😊
Glad to get ur comment!!! 😃 Thanks a ton for liking my ff!!! I am really happyyy!!! 😳
Keep reading and commenting!!! 😛
Take care sweetie!!! 😊

And thank you so much fatima, neha and sana!!! love you guys!!! take care!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 31!!! I hope you all will like it!!! Have fun!!! :)

Saying that Vidya is his responsibility, Sagar hugs Vidya. Seeing this, Sahil and Sanju give cute smiles. Vidya's face somehow is expressing that she is finding the greatest peace in her man's arms. Sanju notices the expression of Vidya's face and feels very happy seeing her best friend at peace. She tells God in her mind, "Bhagwan ji! Mere best friend ko Sagar jaisa itna accha partner dene ke liye thank you, thank you so much." Sagar and Vidya move back now. Vidya at last gets to happy mood and says with a cute expression, "Tum logo ko kya saap ne kaat liya? Itna chup chap kyu ho?" Hearing what Vidya said, all smiles and seeing the smiles on their faces, Vidya smiles too. Vidya says, "Yeh hui na baat!" Sagar's eyes spot the wall clock in the cafeteria and he sees it's time for college to end for the day. He says, "Guys, college khatam hone ka waqt ho gaya hai. Hospital nahi chalna kya?" Vidya says with a worried look, "Haan guys! Aab hume hospital chalna chahiye. Papa ka dhyaan rakhne ke liye dadi waha sham se hai." Sahil and Sanju smilingly nods their heads and says, "Okay lets go!" Sagar, Vidya, Sahil and Sanju leaves for hospital to visit Vidya's papa.

**Scene Shifts in the cabin of Vidya's papa in the hospital**
Vidya's papa is lying on bed and watching TV. Vidya arrives there and says with a big smile on her face, "Papaaaaa!" VP turns his head towards the door, sees Vidya, smiles and turns off the TV. He tells, "Beta tum aa gayi!" Vidya smiles and asks, "Aab aap kaise hai papa?" to which her papa replies, "Main aab ekdum theek hoon beta." Hearing this, Vidya smiles. Just then, she notices that dadi is not there and asks her papa, "Papa, dadi kaha hai?" Her papa replies, "Beta, dadi bohot thak gayi thi iss liye maine unhe ghar bhej dia aram karne ko." Vidya smilingly says, "Accha kia jo unhe ghar bhej dia. Woh bhi toh thak gayi hongi." VP smiles and nods his head. Vidya tells her papa, "Papa, aapse kuch log milne aaye hai." VP asks curiously, "Kaun beta?" Vidya smiles, turns her head towards the door and says loudly, "Andar aajao!" Sagar and Sahil enter. Sagar and Sahil are carrying baskets full of fruits in their hands. VP smiles seeing them. Sagar and Sahil come closer and keeps the baskets of fruits on the table. Sagar then asks, "Papa aab aap kaisa mehsus kar rahe hai?" VP replies, "Main aab bohot accha hoon beta!" Then Sagar and Sahil touch VP's feet and VP says putting his hands on their heads, "Khush raho baccho." Vidya asks to Sagar and Sahil, "Woh kaha gayi?" to which Sagar reply that, "Woh inke (points to VP) liye kuch kharid rahi hai!" And then Sahil says that, "bas abhi aa rahi hai!". VP curiously asks, "Woh kaun beta?" Vidya cutely smiles and says, "Papa, aapse milne koi aur bhi aayi hai aur aap usse bohot acchi tarah se jante hai!". VP asks curiously, "Kaun?" Vidya smiles and turns her head towards the door. VP curiously looks at the door, and there he sees a girl standing with a bookie of flower in front of her face. Then hiding her face with the bookie, the girl walks to VP. "Sorry but maine aapko pehechana nahi.", VP says. Still hiding her face with the bookie, the girl replies, "Papa, 6 saal pehele Vidya se aur aap se durr chali gayi thi par sach mein aap dono ki bohot yaad aayi." VP understands who she is, gives a huge smile and says, "Sanju beta?!?!" The girl shows her face and guess what? She is Sanjuu!!! Sanjuu says with a smiley face, "Bilkul sahi pehechana papa!". VP smiles. Sanju says with a caring look, "Papa!!! Bohot miss kia aap ko, bachpan mein aapne mujhe apni beti ke jaisa pyaar diya aur tab se aap mere liye dad se bhi barkar ho gaye." VP says, "Aww so sweet of you beta!!" Then VP invites Sanju for a hug and Sanju hugs him!!! Seeing this, Vidya, Sagar and Sahil smiles. Vidya, then, says with a cute expression, "Papa, aap apne iss beti ko bhul gaye kya?" All smile and VP says, "Arrey nahi mera baccha!!!" Then he invites Vidya too for a hug and Vidya, with a cute smiley face, goes and hugs her papa. Sahil and Sagar are standing, seeing this and is smiling. VP says to Sagar and Sahil, "Tum dono waha khare khare kya dekh rahe ho? Aao mere pas!!". Sagar and Sahil smile, walk to VP and hugs him. Now we see all four hugging VP and everyone is smiling. While the hugging session, fingers of Sagar Vidya and Sahil Sanju get touched unintentionally and both the couples have eye-lock session with each other.

Precap: Vidya and Sanju stay with VP. Sagar and Sahil leave.

That's the end of Part 31!!! Waiting for your comments!!! Take care all!!! Love... Bidz!!! (:
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
bidzy dear-<3 u dearrrrrrrrrrrr.....u r teh best too...
ur update is just gr8....<3 ed it again...the way VP hugged every1 n d eye-lock session was teh highlight of ur update.....cooooooooooooool
Edited by awesumsonia - 14 years ago

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