Some NivRen Scenes: Updated Scenes 36 and 37

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone, you may know me, I'm Asma and one of the Krazzy 5!! I originally posted these scenes on the NivRen besharam gang thread (because as u probably know i'm very much a nivrenian!!) I was missing NivRen like crazy this weekend and i just felt the urge to write! I was asked by Ashly to post as a separate thread so thanx for the encouragement jaan🤗

This is the first time i've written anything of length since Uni (and the first thread i've posted on IF so bear with me!) At the moment the scenes follow the current track and follow on from each other but there may be some random scenes too if i write more, will wait on your feedback before i do!! Please let me know what u all think and also send me any ideas you may have. Thank you for reading xx

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Scene 2: Page 1

Scene 3: Page 3

Scene 4: Page 8

Scene 5: Page 8

Scene 6: Page 12

Scene 7: Page 13

Scene 8: Page 14

Scene 9: Page 18

Scene 10: Page 18

Scene 11: Page 21

Scene 12: Page 22

Scene 13: Page 22

Scene 14: Page 26

Scene 15: Page 26

Scene 16: Page 29

Scene 17: Page 29

Scene 18: Page 30

Scene 19: Page 33

Scene 20: Page 34

Scene 21: Page 34

Scene 22: Page 34

Scene 23: Page 39

Scene 24: Page 39

Scene 25: Page 39

Scene 26: Page 45

Scene 27: Page 45

Scene 28: Page 45

Scene 29: Page 51

Scene 30: Page 51

Scene 31: Page 51

Scene 32: Page 51

Scene 33: Page 56

Scene 34: Page 56

Scene 35: Page 56

Scene 36: Page 60

Scene 37: Page 61

PS: If you've just started reading these scenes then they're basically weekend scenes which take place in between the actual story of CCBM and mostly stick to the track with some additions and i started writing them back when Viren was angry at everyone. Thanks!🤗

Scene 1:

Viren was walking past the kitchen when he heard a scraping noise. There was some sort of event happening in the house with everyone rushing around looking really busy and stressed and Viren was extremely annoyed with that and was trying to escape from the house as quick as possible so the noise barely registered but for some unknown reason he stopped at the kitchen door and looked in. There he saw Nivi, alone and with her back to him. She was standing on a stool which anyone could see wasn't for standing on (Viren rolled his eyes), reaching into one of the higher cabinets and he could see she'd never make it. What was with this girl? All she seemed to do was put herself in dangerous situations...he thought again about getting her a warning sign! These thoughts ran though his mind for a few seconds and then he stood there just taking her in, she was wearing a beautiful blue saree, the same colour as the suit she wore at the evening out on their honeymoon and he couldn't keep his eyes off her. In just a few seconds, all his thoughts about leaving vanished from his mind and all he could think of was Nivi. Without being able to stop himself, he silently moved into the kitchen , closer to her, feeling like he was moving towards the centre of his universe with every step...

Nivi was trying very hard to reach a jar of semolina which she needed to make halva. There was so much to do and she had such little time! She knew the stool was placed a bit too far out but she didn't have time to move it closer and was hoping that she could just about reach...Just then she heard a little noise which made her jump slightly and the already rickety stool toppled out from underneath her and she felt the very familiar sensation of falling! She cried out and closed her eyes waiting for the pain but instead she found herself being held in strong arms which were as familiar to her as her own. Even with her eyes closed she knew who her saviour was and she opened her eyes knowing she would be looking into the beautiful eyes of the only person she wanted to be with for the rest of her life...

Viren was still walking towards Nivi, he knew he should stop but he couldn't. His purple Converse trainers made a slight squeaking noise against the floor and he saw Nivi jerk slightly and almost in slow motion, he could see the stupid stool give out from under her...Instantly there was a sharp stabbing pain in his heart at the thought of Nivi getting hurt and without giving it anymore thought he rushed forward and caught her before she could fall.

She had her eyes closed. Ignoring the urge to hide her away from the world, he opened his mouth to yell at her about how accident prone she was and how saving her was becoming a full time job but before he could get any words out she opened her eyes and looked at him. All the angry thoughts flew out of his mind as he looked into her eyes and felt himself falling into them. Some of her hair had fallen over her face so he gently put her down and keeping his right arm under her he slowly brought his left hand up and moved the hair, strand by strand, away from her face and behind her ear as if in a trance.

Nivi couldn't breathe, she couldn't think, all she could do was feel as Viren slowly moved the hair from off her face, brushing her cheek as he did so and sending electric shocks through her with each touch. She looked into his eyes and saw so much love there that her heart felt like it was about to burst with its own answering love. She felt like she was flying and knew that she would not stop Viren today; she wanted this moment to never end.

Viren had moved all the hair away so her face was clear and the way she was looking at him, he knew he should let go of her and run but he couldn't seem to move. His brain was shouting at him, what are you doing, you want her to hate you remember, not look at you like she's melting!! But she did look like she was melting into him and he couldn't stop himself from moving even closer to her. He couldn't think of anything else except how much he loved her and how hard it was for him to be apart from her, pretending to not care. He was tired of it and wanted there to be nothing between them, he brought his face close to hers so that they were only a few millimetres apart and he felt Nivi's heart beating even faster as his own also sped up at the thought of how close they were. Their noses were touching now and he could feel her breath on his face as he closed his eyes. There were no more thoughts in his mind, all he could think of was the girl in his arms, all he could feel was his love for her pouring out of him. He brought his arms down, his hands trailing her shoulders, until they were around her waist and held her to him. He kissed her lightly on her forehead and then trailed kisses down the side of her face to her cheek. He felt Nivi shiver with every kiss and then brushed his nose against hers softly and moved so that their lips could finally meet...

Suddenly there was a loud crashing sound behind them which bought Viren back down to earth and they both jumped apart. CC was standing there and it was obvious she had just knocked some heavy pots off the counter to distract them. She looked furious and also confused at what she'd just walked in on after the last few days events. Nivi had gone bright red and started rushing around again without meeting Viren's eyes. Viren badly wanted Nivi to look at him but then his mind finally won over and he thought, what am I doing?! He was extremely confused, he didn't know what he was doing or how he'd come so close to ruining all of his plans. He thought again of how danger seemed to follow Nivi but now wondered if the sign next to her should read WARNING: Danger of VIREN falling here!!

He shook his head of all these thoughts and with one last long look at Nivi (he couldn't stop himself because he wouldn't be seeing her again all day...) he put his head down and walked out of the kitchen and away from his one reason for being.

Edited by anjaani07 - 14 years ago

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Asma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene 2:

Viren had just walked back into the house and was still thinking about what had almost happened between him and Nivi before he left in the morning! He was annoyed with himself because all day he had tried so many things to get rid of the thought but it was still there, eating away at him and making him weak! Part of his mind was actually trying to think of another way to get close to Nivi again but he pushed it away and tried to get on with where he was going.

He was tired after all day and needed a shower so he went into his room, keeping an eye out for Nivi. He was making sure she wasn't there but then was stupidly disappointed when she wasn't around. Angry at himself, he kicked off his trainers so they went flying and his purple jacket went the same way. After a few moments, the now usual guilt kicked in and he bent down to pick up the jacket. Feeling rebellious he thought he'd leave the shoes as maybe Nivi would trip over them or something...he smirked at the thought and went into the bathroom for his shower.

Nivi came into the bedroom a little later and immediately was disappointed to see Viren wasn't there. Then she noticed his shoes on either side of the room and smiled to herself 'kaisi ajab tareeka hai Viren ka mujhe bata ne ke liye ke woh ghar agaya hai!' she thought! Still smiling, she picked up the purple converse and put them away neatly. Just then she turned towards the door and smacked right into Viren who was rushing in from his shower and was still wet with no shirt on!

Viren was annoyed again. Lost in his thoughts of Nivi, he'd forgotten his towel AND a clean top! 'yeh ladki mujhe poora ka poora pagal bana de gi!' he thought in anger. He rushed back into the room and went straight to towards the wardrobe and ran smack bang into Nivi who was just turning round from doing something by the wardrobe. Nivi moved away from him slightly looking stunned. He could see some water off his hair had spilled onto her cheeks and his hands were itching to wipe them away, they were actually coming up of their own accord but he forced them to stop. Instead he put his hands on her shoulders and angrily said 'kya kar rahi ho tum? Baar baar meri saamne kyu aajati ho?! Mujhe akela kyu nahi chod de thi?!' His expression was pained, he didn't want to say these things but they burst out of him. In his head he was thinking that every time he saw her, he got a little weaker in his aim so he needed to make her stay away. His hands tightened on her shoulders at his thoughts and he heard Nivi make a small sound of pain. He felt that same sharp pain in his heart again at the thought that he'd hurt her and feeling extremely guilty he lightly rubbed her shoulders where he had hurt her and then let her go.

Nivi didn't know where to look! She could feel drops of water from Viren on her face but couldn't look away from him long anought to wipe them away. She wondered what he would do if she reached up and put her arms around his wet body...before she could do anything though, she felt his hands on her shoulders and heard Viren's words. She felt hurt and looked at him wordlessly, then she looked into his eyes and saw how much it was hurting him to say these things. From the pained look in his eyes, she felt like maybe she was finally getting through to him so simply looked at him until he finished speaking. She was about to answer when she felt Viren's hands tighten on her shoulders and involuntarily made a sound of pain. She saw the concern in his eyes at her sound and it warmed her heart to see it. She felt him rub her shoulders and again she felt the electric shocks through her body at his touch. When he let go of her she looked at him challengingly and said 'yeh mera bhi kamra hai Viren, yaad hai tumne mujhe pehle din kaha tha ke yeh kamra ab mera hai....aur tum bhi?' She said the last bit shyly moving closer to him, looking for his reaction.

Viren couldn't believe the words coming out of Nivi's mouth and the way she was coming closer to him, he took a step back but there was a part of him that was singing at the thought of Nivi thinking of him as hers...he pushed that part down hard and said 'mujhe koi farak nahi parta ke tum mujhe apni samaj thi ho ya nahi, main toh sirf apne kapde doondh raha tha!'

With a shock Nivi realised Viren was still only half dressed and blindly turned and gave him a white top from the wardrobe. Viren ignored this and leaned around her to pick out a red top. As he did so, more water from his hair fell on her face and he saw her blink a few times. They stood like this for a while simply looking at each other with Viren fighting himself from touching her wet face. Eventually he gave in and brushed a single drop from her soft cheeks and looked at her wonderingly. Nivi felt the shocks run through her again at his touch and smiled shyly but also knowingly as she knew Viren couldn't help himself from touching her. This angered Viren enough to move away and pull on his top. He was still wet but didn't care, he jumped onto his stupid sofa and hid under his blanket knowing he would dream about Nivi drenched in water all night...

Nivi smiled as she watched Viren, thinking how sweet and innocent her jaan truly was, if only he would just be honest with himself...she wiped off the water and went to get ready for bed.

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FrozenRain

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Posted: 14 years ago

Asma jaan....u r a fabulous writer yaar.....and thanx for putting those scenes in a seperate thread.....i'll waiting for more scenes from u......

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Asma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aww thanks sweetie, i was so nervous about opening a thread cos i still feel new here LOLZ!

I need some more ideas though and to see what people think before i write more. Thanks for ur sweet words jaan🤗

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jafrina

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Posted: 14 years ago

asma ur just great at making these scenes

carry on writin becoz they are just fabulous

i love them soooooooooooo much

ur imagination is just so good

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow Asma wonderfully written scene I just adored the scenes

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dyhardfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey asma you are a great writer. So romantic, I have butterflies in my tummy reading these romantic and passinate scenes. Thank you doll. Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue writing sweetie.

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gmann2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG Asma, Scene 1 was mindblowing. Very Very passionate. CC KMH, kya yaar what she is doing in kitchen anyway. 😆 Loved the sign board dear. Perfect.

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG, Asma, dear!! 🤗 These scenes are beautiful!! So, touching and so romantic!! You have done a fabulous job, my lovely!! 👏 Thanks a ton for sharing this with us. 😊 I am so glad, Ashley encouraged you to post them in a separate thread, so that all of us could read them as well. Awww, Asma, you girls are going to kill me this weekend. First Faiza, then Suchi with her new FF and then now you, with this phenomenally beautiful NivRen love scenes. Gosh, this weekend it seems I have been living in the NivRen dreamland and haven't just immersed out of it. 😍

Okay, so coming back onto your scenes, I absolutely love the way you write, my sweets. Love the way you show and depict both Viren's and Nivedita's thoughts, one after the other, about the same incident. It flows through and assimilates very well, thereby creating a beautifully romantic moment. Nice going!! 👏 Keep it up. And, please do continue writing more scenes, whether in sequence or sporadic random ones, doesn't matter!!

Thanks, once again for sharing these scenes with all of us. 😊