Ghar mein ek char-payi

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A typical night at ArMan's

Its 1 AM. Manav and archana are sleeping on the floor and vaishali on the bed. Manav feels like enough is enough. Its high time he did something meaningful with his wife.

Manav- archana..archana..so gayi kya?

Archana- yeh kya tarika hai puchhne ka ki so gayi kya? Kyun neend se jaga diya..sone do na manav

Manav-roz sote hi to hain hum log..do mahine ho gaye raaton ko bas so hi rahe hain

Archana- manav raat ko hi insaan sota hai ..din mein nahi

Manav-sone ke alawa bhi normal shaadi suda insaan bahut kuch karte hain…

Archana- chhi gande..hamesha gandi baatein.aap ka dhyan bas usi mein rehta hai kya

Manav- kaise nahin rahega bolo..2 saal alag rahe..ab ek sath rehne ke baas muskil se 4-5 baar hi kuch hua hoga

Archana-jhooth mat bolo..kam se 8-10 baar hua hai

Manav- kya fark padta hai 10 baar se…dekha jaye to dhang se 3-4 baar bhi nahi hua...mujh se aur raha nahi jata

Archana-thode pavitra nahin reh sakte kya aap..hamesha gandi soch

Manav-mujhe nahin rehna pavitra

Archana- chillao mat vaishu so rahi hai

Manav- tabhi to keh raha hun jab tak wo jag na jaye hum kuch kar lete hain

Archana-chhi gande..chup chap so jao..mujh se nahin hoga

Manav- koshish to kar sakte hain..10-15 min ki baat hai..chalo na plz

Archana- dekho jyada se jyada aap mera haath pakad ke so sakte ho..

Manav- nahin………….chalo aao na (Manav starts jabardasti)

Archana- oh nahi na..chhodo na….ui maaa..yeh kya karte ho

Manav-dekho bekaar ki awazen mat karo....jahan pe awaz karni chahiye wahan to khamosh padi rehti ho..sukhe hue ped ki tarah

Archana- nahi manav plz chhod do mujhe..dekho kal vaishu ko kahin bahar bhejenge..fir aap jo chahoge waisa hi hoga

Manav- dekho kal ka kal dekhenge..kal char payi aur aaj zameen pe..yahoooooooooo

(BT people start playing..gale mein lal tie..ghar mein ek charpayi. Vaishali gets up and ArMan behave as if they are sleeping)

Vaishu- archu taai uth na

Archana- kya hua meri bachhi

Vaishali-abhi abhi maine gaana suna gale mein lal tie ghar mein ek charpayi..

Manav-haaila aisa gaana to abhi hum ne bhi suna

Vaishali- usse pehle maine sapne mein dekha dharmesh aur madhuri ek kamre mein hain aur ghar mein ek hi bed pada hai

Manav-par wo log lucky hain..varun bechara ghode bech ke sota hoga

Archana- chup karo manav yahan meri vaishu ki raaton ki neend haram ho rahi hai aur tum ajeeb baat karte ho

Vaishali-bol na archu taai kya aisa hua hoga...kya dharmu aur madhuri abhi ek kamre mein honge

Manav-ho sakta hai..dharmesh jaise kismatwale kahan milte hain..punjab se leke maharashtra tak usne har jagah kheton mein beej bo diya

Archana- aap chup karoge..tu so jaa vaishu..dharmesh abhi akela hoga

Vaishali- nahi taai sapne mein maine abhi us kudi punjaban ko dharmu ke sath rang reliya manate hue dekha..wo bhi zameen ke upar

Archana-vaishu maine bola na aisa kuch nahi hua..tu bas so jaa..main lori ga ke sula dun?

Vaishali- haan plz..

Manav-tum dono behenin lagta hai ab puri raat ek doosre ko loriyan sunate rahoge..main chala

Archana-par kahan

Manav- bathroom

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahahaha the last part Manav going to bathroom too good. SD yaar sach bholo Manav bathroom jaane ka aisli reason kuch aur hai na 😆

Good one kash PR ke writers thoda sa ye pad le yaar .You should be one the creatives head!!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one SD bhai🤣

kitne dino baad aap ke story padne ko mile

superb dialogues

Archana-chhi gande.🤣

keep writing more SD bhai

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ha ha ha very nice its amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good one..poor manav..👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆 😆 😆
U never disappoint SD. Keep it coming😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣🤣 Bechara Manav ....
Good job SD..😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣

soo funny. btw i dont think they did it 4-5 times. thy prolly did it once; isliye manav tadap raha hai, archu ki pyar ke liye😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaz

🤣🤣 Bechara Manav ....

Good job SD..😆😆


guruji you like it when manav doesn't get to do that...😆..only lullaby's for manav....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks everybody..
@ tiya i think u missed Manav's dialogue..number of effective sessions is even less than the total number of sessions
@tanya & archanamanav
its true that Manav is liked more when he doesn't get THAT...because only one effective session would make him a father..Ekta can't afford to show the romantic leads as parents so soon
Edited by -SD- - 15 years ago

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