Precious Love MG FF Part 11 PG 58 20/06/2011 - Page 3

OMg its totally awesome i love the start,,,
i'll take MAANEET any day any time 😆
kindly add me to the pm list as i cant wait for chapter 2 😉

NOTE

Those of u who have already read chapter one i added a prologue in the first part😳... go read😛...

oh love the concept and MAANEET it is👏...........wooohooo, i'm excited...PM me dear😉

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

NOTE

Those of u who have already read chapter one i added a prologue in the first part😳... go read😛...

Ok.. it will be a Maaneet fic😆 so i decided to change a few things abt the characters so that it will not be absolutely a mis fit but still i do not know if u sweets will realte to this maan😆... coz as far as geet baby is concerned she is more or like similar but maan, well i'll try finding similarities...😆 so i do not want any complains regarding charactersketch... i know you all must be wondering why am i so behind this thing... let me post their first meeting you'll know...😆 so before hand i am already telling you maan may be a bit hard to digest😆

amazing part....plz pm me......nice start....

GUYS i ahve not edited it so plz ignore the mistakes😳... now seriously after reading this part how many of you can digest maan like that... i mean maan n praising a girl on the first meeting it self... so anyway but dont worry i have changed the story a bit so i will get a few traits of the MSK in the coming chapters...

CHAPTER 2

He sat there helpless as he closed his eyes only to see her face again.

A small smile traced his lips as he remembered the first time he saw her...

Flashback

He walked through the night as he reached the periphery of the beach. His lips curved into a small yet content smile as he looked at the waters in front of him. He took off his shoes and strolled bare feet on the cold, wet and soft sand. He could feel the waves wash his feet as he closed his eyes and outstretched his arms to welcome the fresh cold breeze.

As he stood there with his eyes closed listening intently to the gentle sound of waves lapping the sand, he heard soft snivels. His eyes snapped open as his hands fell to his sides and on an impulse he headed in the direction the sound of snivels came from. He stopped in his tracks as he saw a young girl not more than fourteen, sitting near a rock with her face ducked in her knees as she hugged herself.

His legs moved towards her on their own accord like some unknown power was pulling them towards her. He stood there, behind her waiting for her to realise his presence but when there was no reaction from her he unmindfully sat next to her on his knees as he moved his hands over to her shoulders only to pull his hand back the next moment. Instead he cleared his throat to make his presence obvious to her.

Her eyes fluttered open as she lifted her eyes to meet his gaze and almost jolted to stand on her feet. She looked away from him as she wiped her tears.

He was awestruck at her angelic beauty. Her creamy white skin looked even beautiful in the moonlight'an expanse of white purity he thought. Her eyes, oh! So innocent, they sparkled from behind the tear welled eyelids. As the winds ruffled up her hair, blowing them across her face she defined raw beauty. Even in that messed up state, she couldn't be any prettier.

"Hi... uh... you okay" he asked with slight hint of hesitation.

"Yes... I am fine" she replied.

With that said she turned to leave but he caught her arm "you don't have to leave because of me... if i am intruding I am sorry I'll leave"

"No... It's ok... I was going anyway, not because of you" she said looking over her shoulder.

She tried to smile in between her sorrows that she was hiding.

"So... if you don't mind me asking... uh... what are you doing at the beach at this hour" he asked as he left her wrist.

"I do mind" she said as she turned around to stand face to face with him.

"Well that was direct" he said pretending to be offended but he smiled shortly seeing a smile play at her lips.

Her smile, it was like he was seeing someone smile for the first time. Everything about her radiated innocence.

"What do people come at a beach for" she asked back as he moved towards the waters.

"normal people come to beach for having fun, chilling out and all, and in some cases seeking tranquillity but when people come at a beach in the mid of the night there can be only two possible reasons either they are very happy or the opposite and in your case since you were crying I assume the latter" he said as he walked behind her.

She ignored his statement as she asked "why are you here". She kept moving ahead into the water till it feet were completely in water.

"You won't tell me why you here but want to know why I am here" he replied as he kept walking by her side.

"You've already assumed that. I don't need to tell you what you already know" she stopped as the water touched her knees.

"If you have a problem you can share it with me... you'll feel better" he said as he kept walking into the water.

"I don't even know you" she replied as she looked at his back.

"Look... that's the point. We will probably never meet again and I am a stranger to you, you're a stranger to me, so it will do you no harm if you tell me, instead it will only make you feel lighter. But it is up to you" he stopped when the water was above his knees as he turned to face her.

"What if we do meet" she asked as she bent down to pick up a shell.

"I'll consider myself lucky if that be the case" he said confidently.

"Lucky" she raised an eyebrow as she chuckled.

"Yes why not... it's very rare a chance to meet a beautiful girl and if I be privileged enough to meet one twice... I'll consider myself lucky" he said.

"Try something new... beautiful line is old fashioned" she said as she turned to her side and started walking straight.

'well it works with most girls" he replied as he walked towards her.

"Does it" she said as she turned over to look at him but kept walking.

He ran to walk by her side and when he was right by her sides he said "it should. I've heard girls like complements"

"Only when they are genuine and not just plainly said for the heck of it" she replied rather sarcastically as she dropped the shell in water.

"I feel you are beautiful" he replied as he looked ahead.

"Lair" she chuckled.

He moved ahead of her and stood in front of her with his arms crossed across his chest "why would you say so"

"You're asking me that" she said.

"Guess I am" he replied with a small smile.

She was about to reply when her phone started ringing and as she saw the ID she knew she was in big trouble "I got to go... nice talking to you"

She did not wait for a reply as she dashed towards the road.

She heard him shout from behind "at least tell me your name"

She stopped at once, turned around, gave him a warm smile and said "like you said, you're a stranger to me, I'm a stranger to you... and I don't talk to strangers... so goodbye Mr Ajnabee"

His lips curved into a smile as he heard her say that "nice meeting you too... Mishti" he shouted.

"That's not my name" she replied from a distance.

"Well... I found you sweet so Mishti" he said.

"You never give up... do you" she smiled.

"Is it working" he asked.

"Not at all" she replied as she ran from there.

"Bye" she shouted as she disappeared in the night.

He kept staring in the direction she disappeared as a smile played at his lips. He bent down to pick up the shell she'd dropped and kept in his pocket. He had no idea why he did that but he just wanted to keep one thing as a memento. He couldn't stop himself from thinking about her'those tears'those innocent eyes'that smile. Though he hardly knew her he wanted to sooth her pain which was clearly visible in her eyes. He wanted to know the reason behind those tears, strangely enough, he felt bad remembering those sad eyes and felt happy remembering that smile.

He went back home recalling each of her delicate gestures "Mishti" he whispered.

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Present

She sat there at the same place they first met as she cried her heart out. She screamed at the top of her voice as she forced herself to accept her fate that she wrote with her own hands. She had ruined her chance at happiness. She could hear waves crash against the rocks, she could hear distant tweeting of birds, she could hear each and every sound but what her ears could not hear was the cry of her heart'it had no sound. Her heart throbbed against her chest as the pain and guilt ate her inside.

awsome update..

awesome part...the last bit of geets present was vry nice..continue soon..me wanna no wat geet cud have done.......

Originally posted by: simi91

wonder what happen

so they separate

let see how the

mystery story unfold

so cute there first

meeting amazing

update pls cont soonnnnn

thanks pm

yu gonner update

bitter sweet my dear

cant wait to read

that one to

writting is in progres for bittersweet... may be tomorrow😉