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Posted: 14 years ago
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OK guys so this is my very firs OS. basically my very first writing piece and I thought i'd like to share it with you guys. please comment feel free to criticize and please comment.
do point out any mistakes you find.OK NOW ENOUGH OF MY BLABBERINGšŸ˜†.
I would like to mention it is a pg 15 part😳 so please kiddos stay ou of it.šŸ˜†
A Little Softness
Geet looked into his eyes as the candlelight flickered. Even though he was built like a commando and definitely wasn't someone you would want against you, he really was sensitive to her needs. He loved her and wanted to show it as often as he could. He knew better. He spoke to her and gently touched her cheek with the backside of his hand. "You've got the most beautiful big hazel eyes I have ever seen." She tilted her head towards his hand. He leaned in for a kiss and she met him halfway. She felt his soft lips embracing hers. It was a very passionate kiss. He added a little bit of tongue to hers, she accepted. He sucked on her bottom lip while he caressed her cheek slowly. She moved her hands up his arms, rubbing her finger tips up to his neck, to behind his ears and began to massage the back of his head. He slowly broke the kiss, opened his eyes to see her do the same. He held her hands in his hand and continued to rub her cheek.

He spoke again. "Geet, you're beautiful, your eyes, your kiss, your soft hands and your sweet aroma. I want you so bad it hurts. "Geet lifted his strong hands up to her lips and gently kissed them both. Maan smiled and reached around the back of her head and took the clip out of her hair. Her soft brown hair came floating down softly as he ran his hands through it. Their lips locked again in a sweet embrace.
Geet let him lift up her shirt and slowly remove it. Her ample breasts sat contently in her silky bra. He was lost at the sight of her beauty. She then helped him take off his shirt. She ran her fingertips from his shoulders and down his muscular chest to the tops of his pants. She laid him down on his back; her body pressed firmly against his and gave him another kiss. She began to kiss down his chin, to his neck, down the centre of his chest very slowly and kissed down to his belly button. She unbuttoned his pants and unzipped them. She looked up at him and gazed into his eyes as she began to remove his jeans.

Geet stood at the edge of the bed, eyes still locked on his, as she started taking off her shorts. She slowly and teasingly slid her shorts down to the floor. On her way back up she allowed her hands to run up the sides of her legs. She crawled up next to him and took her place. Maan wrapped his arms around her and held her close. He slowly brought his hands up to unhook her bra and took it off. He kissed his way down from her cheek to her neck and to her chest. He kissed one breast, then the other. She let out a sigh as he took both of her nipples into his mouth and teased them with his tongue. While sucking on one breast, he rolled the nipple of the other between his fingertips.

Her hands roamed over his body as he caressed her breasts. He slid his hand down to her stomach and reached her lace panties. He could feel her warmth below. Still sucking on her nipples, he slowly started to take off her panties. He slid them down her legs and tossed them onto the floor. He kissed the inside of her thighs and moved closer. She smelled so sweet to him. He moved up towards her, kissed each breast gently, came up to her lips, and kissed her. Maan could tell by the glisten in her eyes that she loved being pleasured.

She was so turned on and wanted to please him as he had her, so she kissed down his rippled chest, took off his boxers, and tossed them on the floor. She ran her fingertips up the inside of his well defined leg, slid her hands up. Geet stroked him slowlyShe smiled as she lowered her wetness onto his hard shaft. Maan pulled her face down to him and kissed her deeply. She began to moan as he started to grind his hips into her, making a circular motion. He placed his hands on her hips, feeling the motion of them. He put his hands on her chest as he continued grinding onto her. Maan's hands moved to her breasts massaging them softly and played with her nipples, pinching them lightly. He moved her hips in a front to back motion. His thrusts became harder and faster. She moaned in a low voice sounding as if she was out of breath. Maan reached for her hands and intertwined their fingers together through this moment of passion. Picking up the pace. She was lightly shaking beneath him. They exchanged soft moans as they made passionate love together. He began to thrust deeper inside of her and picking up the speed.

He leaned down still thrusting into her and kissed her lips. He felt the familiar warmth travel up his shaft as he came inside of her. Both of them slowed their thrusts as they quivered, their climaxes subsiding. Exhausted and content they lay close together, holding each other in a tight embrace as they fought to regain their breath.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahem ahem!!!!
hotty and naughty!!!!!!
beautifully wriiten....
phew!!! at last it ended.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was REALLY good especially it being your first piece of writing! šŸ‘
Very hot n steamy too šŸ˜‰ ..Loved it :) Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I couldn't help but blush when I read this 😳 Extremely romantic, thank you soo much šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG . . . Very hot and sensual.

Ahem Ahem is right . . . But for ur first time u r really very very good! Awesome and nice to meet u! I am Liz . .

Love

Liz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nicely done....keep writing more :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx a lot for your support guyzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..........................
loved your comments.😊

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