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Posted: 14 years ago















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part 121



Geet - she is been crying for last couple hours... itna pain hota hain tho mujhe baby nahi chahiyen
he smiled & hugged her...waise bhi no baby for 10-15yrs right

he hugged her close to his heart - jaan childbirth is the most beautiful part of women life
she snapped - right.. I can see that..
he smiled cradling her head & looked into her eyes that looked so much in fear
Geet - 10-15 yrs plan cancel.. no babies mujhe se yeh sab nahi hoga
he cupped her face dearly - don't worry every thing will be fine.. I will be always there with u
Geet - labor room main bhi
Maan - every where.. I will hold ur hand & be there every single minute..promise
tears fell from her eyes - hum bina babies ke nahi rah sakte kya
he smiled & shook his head, she tearfully made a baby face.

Maan dehko na kitna pyara hain
Geet smiled very meekly - umm..like she may just run away from there any moment
the baby just then wet his shirts.. Geet jumped back .. oh..no.. he wet u...oh god aab kya hoga
Maan didn't even move a bit.. he smiled like it didn't mean anything.. rather he was enjoying it all.
Maan - aab kuch nahi hoga iska dress change hoga
mukti was too tired to do all that.. Maan offered to do it..
Geet & prem just watched not knowing wat to do... they stood there like small kids watching some thing unbelievable.

Maan - jaan
She hugged him - mujh se yeh sab nahi hoga
Maan - kya sab sweet heart
Geet - nappy change.. carrying the baby ..yeh sab..kitna tiny hain
Maan - tumhe karne ki kya zarorat hain, main hoon, Daadi hain, Rano aunty hain.. we all there with u.. tumhe kuch karne ki zarorat hi nahi
Geet - I can't handle all this.. baby is too small


part 122

Maan

Maan pushed her outside the house in front of every one - why do u come here when u r not accepted in here?? to accept karwana to tumhara kam he ose kya suna rahe ho

he roared - tumhare bina yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti kya? I don't want u to ever come here unless u have been invited. oye teri yeh kya yara koi maan ko kuch thanda pilao nahi to os pe thanda thanda pani dalo yeh to kuch zyada hi garam ho raha he


he turned with fury & pain in his eyes - just leave from my house

Raj called & congratulated her. She was not even knowing wat he was congratulating her for.
Raj - gudiya ..u rocked again..u topped mains too..

geet

Maan barked - because he wants to break our relation
she didn't like that line "break" she was wild her eyes turned red furious like never before - no one can break our relation...unless u want to..
he didn't expect that coming.. he didn't know it was her frustration that made her talk like this..frustration of being away from him, frustration of not getting his love, his care his time.
She held his collar - even if u want to I won't let u.. so stop blaming others..
what did she just say..she thinks he wanted to break.. how could she.. - think wat ever u want to

thanks for the info maan
so

i think u are

Maan - don't forget u r standing in front of Maan Singh Khurana we dont know this MSK
Geet - well then I will never call u.. will not come looking for u.. is k sath esa hi hona chaheye we are with u geet.




Edited by cute-aly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this ff started one a very lighthearted note
and now have become intensely painful
due to separation of maneet due to a mu fem maan side
muski yaar why did u took a leap of 7 yrs
couldnt it be of 2-4 yrs
why 7 yrs
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG so it was geet,,,,
ohh now i cant wait for their meeting please make it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
u wont believe..........since last three updates i m crying n crying n only crying....😭...............pehli baar aisa laga ki maan deserved wat he got after wat he did to geet.......lekin geet ki kya galti thi.... usse 7 yrs kis baatt ki sazaa mili😭..........di plzzz jaldi se mila do dono ko.... cant see them like dat!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update............waiting😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏oh! i just loved it..read the whole 12 threads in two days........kuddos for u dear muskaan👏👏👏

i registered here just to compliment u on ur writing skill.u r too good.keep up ur spirits.😃

nd plzzzzzzz update fast im waiting for the next part eagerly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOWWWWWWWWWWWW I READ THIS IN ONE SHOT FROM 109 PART N I LIKED IT VERY MUCH GK GEET KHURANA WHO HAS BECOME LIKE MAAN N 7 YEARS SO LONG DISTANCE I HOPE THEY PATCH UP SOON BUT IT WAS AWESOME ESPCIALLY THE POEM WHICH SHE WROTE N WENT AWHHH IT WAS TOO GOOD :):):):):):)::)
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Posted: 14 years ago


part 123



yaar i think maan k demagh me chemical locha ho gya he dekho na har waqt gusa har waqt gusa yaar muskan kisi doc ko consult karo yeh kafi buri bemari he jo maan ko lag gaye he

Geet - Maan we need to talk you
he was angry & arrogant -
umm.. so u gave up finally
she didn't care wat he said -
aap meri baat tho suno
his arrogance was wrongly pampered - wat did u say...umm...
he taunted
Geet -
Maan please listen to me first
he smirked...
umm..I go away u won't even be able to find me...so why r u here with out even me calling u or finding u... or did u get fed up of ur stay at the medical camp like u got fed up with ur stay at raj's place..
Geet went blank..he exactly knew where she was & wat she was going through ..still he didn't care to come for her. Weakly she said -
u knew where I was??
Maan -
wat do u think those three clown friends of urs..

dekha baat b baat bharak jata he

jaldi se doc ko consult karo maan nahi to loss k zimedar tum khud ho gae





Armaan Armaan kahan ho tum . tumhari is patient ko zarorat he.


u can go & hide ur self anywhere u want Maan Singh Khurana can find u, when I want



he was irritated at her arrogance - u r nothing ..tumhare naam ke age se handa nikal do & minus ur three friends u r nothing..nothing but a loser

he didn't say a word after that...she just turned & left from there. .. hope u make it before it is too late she prayed. She couldn't bare wat ever spoke, he couldn't be so disturbed that he doesn't realize wat he is saying.

Humne Tumse, Tumne Hamaara Rishta Joda Gham Se
Ek Vafa Ke Siva Kaunsi Khata Hui Thi Humse

Kabhi Bandhan Juda Liya, Kabhi Daaman Chhuda Liya
Kabhi Bandhan Juda Liya, Kabhi Daaman Chhuda Liya

O Saathi Re

Kaisa Sila Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Tere Vaade, Voh Iraade

O Saathi Re

Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Baat Kuch Samajh Na Aayi, Kami Kya Hum Mein Paayi
Ek Tarfa Yeh Mohabbat Humi Ne Sirf Nibhaayi
Jaam Chaahat Ka Dekar Zaher Nafrat Ka Pila Diya
Zaher Nafrat Ka Pila Diya

Tere Vaade, Voh Iraade

O Saathi Re

Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Umr Bhar So Na Sakenge, Kisi Ke Ho Na Sakenge
Ajnabi Tum Ho Jaao, Gair Hum Ho Na Sakenge
Kisi Begaane Ki Khaatir Tumne Apnon Ko Bhoola Diya
Tumne Apnon Ko Bhoola Diya, Haan Apnon Ko Bhoola Diya

Tere Vaade, Voh Iraade

O Saathi Re

Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Ab Mujhe Jeena Nahin Sanam, Yeh Zaher Peena Nahin Sanam
Janam Janmon Ka Naata Chand Lamhon Mein Mita Diya
Chand Lamhon Mein Mita Diya


Tere Vaade, Voh Iraade

O Saathi Re

Sab Kuch Bhoola Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Kabhi Bandhan Juda Liya, Kabhi Daaman Chhuda Liya

O Saathi Re

Kaisa Sila Diya Yeh Vafa Ka Kaisa Sila Diya

Maan - how dare u send an alliance of ur sister for me
Arjun spat - why will I??? when I know ur married already to geet
Maan was shocked.. Geet told him they are married.. she never denied their relation.. he did, he some where couldn't yet tell anything to Daadi.. but she was always true to her every relation.


part 124

he could cry this whole day, every day for last 7years.. but still didn't know wat can he do to make it up to her..she was gone... gone where he didn't know..wat a shame Maan Singh Khurana didn't know where she was. Crashing down like a glass ki hawali in a storm.. all his arrogance, attitude with one act of hers ..just leaving everything that held her identity as Geet Handa on his table.. that day..she just walked away..never to return.. her passport, her driving license, her every thing was left behind in that bag. She didn't go back to her house, not even to her friends.

Every one searched for her madly.. handa family gave up & lunched an missing report in police too. He did wat ever he could as Maan Singh Khurana. Raj came & threatened him..if any thing happens to gudiya I will kill u with my bare hands. 7Years...umm..police even declared her dead...his feet went cold with the thought...his heart felt like sinking.

mohabat meri jo pyaasi huyi

to gehri meri udaasi huyi

zindagi mein hain tumbin

yeh viraaniya


zindagi mein hain tumbin

yeh viraaniya

sune sune sare raste hain
suni manzil hai jaana
suni suni si meri aankhein hai
suna yeh dil hai jaaana
jaana

mujhe ghrre hai sirf tanhaiyaan

mere dil mein hain sirf khaamoshiyan


zindagi mein hain tumbin

yeh viraaniya


jr. cop Khan - sir hum log kal raat se lagen huwen hain.. humne uss sale ki halat kharab kar di hain
head - call gk..then is it geet khurrana

athif - humesha..takes ultimate risk...like doesn't fear death...really isse yanha nahi kargil field main hona tha..
athif & khan split opposite direction with their commandos

gk on the micro phone - I am going in now
walk-ins..straight where there were 5 kidnapper held captive the VVVIIP
cross firing...all the 4 kidnapper were too slow in reacting compared to gk's speed & smartness
last one held the gun against the VVVIIP & hid behind him ..almost shielding himself
athif spoke on the micro phone - gk don't shoot oye chup karo
they just handled the guys who where guarding outside.. all of them..situation was under control
khan - nahi shoot mat karna.. VIP ko lag gayee tho issue ho jayega...
athif - relax we have the situation in control
gk was looked straight .. nothing...nothing disturbed..even the continuous warning ..didn't seem to reach the ears...



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Posted: 14 years ago
di u updating............ thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u............sooooooooooooooooooooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting waiting😕 to see what's coming up

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