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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

thats awsome one yaar...loved it !!!!! i guess maan's lover might be samerra

thanks mrk. Lets see if your guess is right.
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Posted: 14 years ago
this story is getting better!!
finally the marriage has happend!!
now we will see some romantic scenes between maaneet!!
and them falling in love!!
im so excited!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

hhmmm again wonderful update....
i wonder who that girl is.....???
to whom Maan spoke to ???
so far in all d FF's it has been Sameera , Maan's ex-flame.....
bt in this one i have a doubt if its her.....but given the scene where Sameera calls out to Maan when he comes in search of his sis n ends up seeing Geet.....n Geet asking Sam if she knows him.....that kind of gives me a clue that it is Sam......


nyways.....looking forward to know what Maan's gonna say to Geet when he welcomes her to his life.....
is he gonna tell Geet the truth abt Arjun n the property issues.....n also abt his past....????

thanks for the PM......

So you want to know who is Maan's ex-flame? You'll have to wait for it. As to how Maan welcomes Geet into his life, you'll get to know in the update I'll be posting in a few minutes.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

awesome...........cant wait to read more.........maaneet married 🥳........ it would be interesting to see geet dealing with different problems like living in chawl, doing all work herself, n most importantly understanding maan.........this FF is different n quite unique from others..........n........ i like this concept 👍🏼 .......do PM me (if u do PM readers) 😊

Thanks komlika. You'll get to see this and more but it will be gradual. Send in a buddy request so I can PM you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part VII
The character Manjula Iyer introduced in this part is played by Karishma Randhwa (the actress who plays Naintara in the show) and her husband Venkat is played by Manav Gohil.

After the wedding reception, the two bridegrooms excused themselves and went to one of the rooms at the back of the wedding hall where they were met by Arjun's lawyer. The past month had witnessed frenzied legal activity. First, Arjun dropped the case he had filed against Maan for thrashing him at the pub. Then his lawyer had drawn up an agreement that Maan would hand over to Arjun the inheritance he would get once he becomes the son-in-law of the Handas. Now the lawyer held two sets of documents in his hands - one which gave him the rights over half of the Handa empire and the other which snatched it from him. Maan was prepared for this moment. When the lawyer extended the papers to him, Arjun offered him his pen to sign, a smirk playing on his lips. Maan raised his palm to stop him and instead pulled out his own pen and signed on the dotted lines of both the documents. While Arjun snatched the documents from him and gloated over his victory, Maan turned on his heels and, with his head held high, went back to his wife.

The bidai ceremony was an emotional affair. Anwesha clung to Maan, weeping inconsolably. Maan, who was teary eyed himself, patted her back and kept reassuring her that he was in the same town and will always keep a watch over his beloved sister. Geet hugged her mother and cried silent tears. Rano became emotional too and prayed that Geet would have a happy married life. Rano asked Maan to take care of her precious daughter to which Maan merely gave a grim nod. Soon two bridal cars arrived, one which took its occupants to Handa House and the other, to Maan's chawl.

On reaching Maan's house, the newly weds were welcomed into the house with an aarti taken by Manjula Iyer, his neighbour and Pinky Sharma, Maan's cousin from Lonavla. The small house was flooded with Maan's friends and neighbours. Manju was a teacher at the Government primary school in their locality and her husband,Venkat was a clerk in the local post office. They had two boys, Abhishek, aged six and Anurag, aged four. Both the kids were very fond of Maan, who was equally fond of them. Pinky, Maan's and Anwesha's lone relative to attend their wedding, was their maternal uncle's only child. Her mother died when she was young and her father was afflicted with a paralytic stroke. She had, therefore, come alone to Mumbai, to grace the wedding of her cousins.
Abhishek and Anurag kept tugging at Maan's kurta and giggling at him for they have never seen him so overdressed before. Maan smiled at them indulgently and dipping into his pocket, brought out two bars of chocolate which he handed, one to each of them. Clapping their hands in glee they snatched the chocolate, muttered a hurried thank you and sped away. The two ladies then took Geet into the bedroom which was simply but tastefully decorated. Maan's friends gathered around him, cracking jokes and laughing loudly. Soon the two ladies reappeared. Manju shooed the guys out and excused herself. Having left her father in the care of some neighbours, Pinky expressed her inability to stay back and wanted to be dropped at the bus stand so that she can take the bus back to Lonavla the same night. Maan's friend, Adi volunteered to drop her and she left with him.

Locking the door behind them, Maan stepped into the tiny bedroom. Geet who was sitting on the narrow bed, stood up nervously when she saw her husband. Taking the glass of milk in her shaking hands, she slowly extended it up to him. Muttering that he does not drink milk, Maan proceeded to violently tug at the collar of his kurta till the buttons snapped open. He whisked the offensive piece of garment over his head and threw it on the head of the nearby chair. He then slung a towel around his neck and a pair of pyjamas over his shoulders. Picking up his soap from the nearby shelf, he went out of the room and out of the house. Geet stood there confused as to where he had gone and when he will return, if at all. Sitting before the old mirror which hung on one wall, she slowly removed her jewelry and put them aside in her jewelry case. In ten minutes he was back in his pyjamas and vest, scrubbing his hair dry. Her breath caught in her throat as she ran her eyes over his athletic physique. She quickly lowered her gaze when he turned around to meet her eyes. He informed her that she can have a bath and change her clothes if she wanted to.

As she looked around for the bathroom, he smirked and said sarcastically, "Your highness, lesser mortals like us do not have the privilege of an attached bathroom. Bathrooms and toilets are common for houses in each floor. You will have to go out of the house and turn left. The bathroom is at the extreme end."

So that was where he had gone, she thought, but looked unsure about venturing out in the dark. Looking at her, Maan continued, "Don't worry. Nobody will bite you or kidnap you on the way. Anyway you need to get used to this if you want to have a bath at all, or are you planning to spend the rest of your life without one?" Left with no choice she quickly picked up her night gown, towel and soap and stepped out."By the way, don't expect to share my bed", he shouted behind her, "it is not large enough for the both of us. You can make yourself comfortable anywhere else in the house, though." She did not respond to that.

When she returned, she saw him sprawled on the bed, fast asleep. Emboldened to have a closer look at him in that state, she tiptoed up to his bed and observed his sleeping form under the moonlight which streamed through the room. Not bad, she thought, not bad at all as her eyes moved from the bottom of his face to the top. In fact, the guy was simply gorgeous with his chiseled features- well structured masculine face with an imperial jaw line which was covered by closely trimmed beard; shapely lips which were crowned by neatly trimmed moustache; sharp medium sized nose; long lashes that covered large beautiful closed eyes above which were neatly arched eyebrows; well shaped forehead; dark mop of hair that capped his head - everything was highly appealing to her eyes. In sleep he looked so vulnerable and childlike in the absence of the stern look he sported when he was awake.

With a small smile playing on her lips, she looked around for something to lie on. Noticing a mat rolled up in the corner of the room, she spread it on the floor next to his bed and stretched her aching body. It was a long day indeed and she was waiting for this moment when she could finally rest her tired body. The hard cold floor, however, made it difficult for sleep to take over her immediately. After tossing and turning around for a while, she finally managed to slip into a deep slumber.

He was suddenly awoken in the middle of the night by the sound of continuous sneezing. Rubbing his eyes, he looked around and realised that the sound came from his new bride who was sleeping on the floor. Getting up, he went up to the wooden cupboard and brought out a thick blanket. He shook her awake and spread the blanket on the mat, before letting her lie down again.

"I don't want you to fall sick. I have my hands full without having the added responsibility of taking care of a sick woman," he said gruffly, by way of explanation, and went back to bed.
Turning her back to him she hid a smile. "He cares", she thought, "this is not as bad as I feared it would be".

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
It would be a feisty relationship...interesting. I thought Maan would not sign the paper that easily. Let see what's await for the morning.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww!! i cant wait for them to fall in love and then confess their feelings to one another!! i am loving this story!! update soon please!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh My God. Geet is so understanding. Very nice Opti. These 2 will have a splendid relationship and Maan will do very well in life. Because he has his support system. Very nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice........maaan couldnt u have given her ur bed.....??????
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am happy that maan signed the papers.................though it went into the wrong hands i am sure maan will claim it back in his own accord..........................well their relation is going to one hell to watch out for................both dont know each other and r married due to circumstances.................well hv to watch out for their relationship to blossom first...............pl cont soon

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