Allured by the Cherub of Love(AR ff)Prt3-Pg10 2/26

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey-ya ppl! I just got back last night with my first attempt at writing One-shots and tonight, I'm back with a new idea. Now talk about people who have nothing better to do! I know I'm in big mess with the delay in updating the other ff, but what can one do about the bozo I have as an excuse for a brain! So here I am with a prologue for the new concept. Read it and let me know what you think of it. Anything from liking it to pointing out any bloopers! And let me know if it's worth continuing, worth your time! For the comments big or small...go a long way as encouragement for newbies like me!Enough with the monologue, already!

Allured by the Cherub of Love

From my Fantasy...


The little girl drifted to sleep, weeping,snuggling into a body pillow, holding her parents' photo close to her heart. Things had changed dramatically in the past one year. She had it all...a mom, a dad, a lovely family...she was the apple of her dad's eyes! And now, all she could hold onto was a tinge of sorrow, as the sands of time slipped through her hands, replacing her once cheerful life with a gush of loneliness... Where was her fairy-godmother if she was her dad's princess once upon a time, in a faraway land, away from her desolate existence?Will she ever find a cherub, a guardian angel who would wipe her tears and get her smile back ...or will she live in solitude forever...


A little boy...looked at the swarm of people running in the race of life...imagining what if he had never let go of his mother's hand for a toy that had caught his attention? He sat still, a lost expression on his face, staring into space as a kind being kept his hand on the little boy's shoulder... Where would this tryst with destiny take him...to the shadows of goodness or the evil of dark? Will he ever find a direction in life or would he spend the rest of his days forlorn and abandoned? Where is his archangel? Or was he meant to be lost...


Stay tuned to know what happens next...Will they ever find a meaning to their lives?...OR...Will they stay deserted like a solitary tree in a lush green meadow?

Will they be lured by the charm of each other or was it destiny to stay lonesome?


Also check out my other works:

Did I whisk your heart away? (AR/ArSh ff)

The Sepulchre of My Love (KaSh/ArSh ff)

The Embrace of Death...In Your Arms (AR one shot)


And remember...your comments would tell me if it's worth giving it a shot!😛
If you wish to get a PM the post below!

Have a nice day, ya'all!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PM List!

If you would like to get a PM for this ff, please this post. Also, if you are not my friend already, please add me to your buddy list. That'd be a lot of help!


























Edited by repercussion - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmmm... after reading the prologue
i m speechless..
even though it was just two paragraphs it left me amazed..
you have written really well..
their pain is reflected sooo nicely..👏
it was superb..
i felt bad for the girl..
but ya i could connect to the boy..
it happened with me once.. but by god's grace my parents found me.. sooo could actually understand the boy's state of mind..
sorry i got emotional..
would really look forward to this story..😊
update soon..
love
pari
Edited by riddhima11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhima11

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hmmmm... after reading the prologue
i m speechless..
even though it was just two paragraphs it left me amazed..
you have written really well.. Thanks a ton, dear! Trust me...the fact that you read it and wrote me a comment is enough appreciation!
their pain is reflected sooo nicely..👏
it was superb..
i felt bad for the girl..
but ya i could connect to the boy..
it happened with me once.. but by god's grace my parents found me.. sooo could actually understand the boy's state of mind.. Yup we have all gone through that moment when we think there's no meaning to life anymore but thankfully...we have all had our saviors! Btw...If I get lost...I'm pretty sure someone at home would throw a party lol!
sorry i got emotional.. Awww...that's okay...btw I'm glad you could emotionally connect to it. What good is writing and reading if it only involves acquiring and no sense of satisfaction!
would really look forward to this story..😊
update soon..
Thanks again! The first comment has given me enough satisfaction to rest in peace...for the night, I meant lol! The first part is all set...would be up in a few hours! Have a good day!
love
pari

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Posted: 14 years ago
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will wait for it..
n it feels good to know ki i was able to give you some peace..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ur style of writing is gud n d prologue reflects d hardwork u hav put into making it ur best....as i said bfor ur writing style is gud so d concept haz a fresh touch to it :) Do pm me - wud luv to read futher n continue superrrr soooooon. Buhbyez :D
Love
~Sakshi~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tht was a fab start... i loved the concept.... waiting to read more frm u... continue soon n thnx for the Pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept
cont. soon
thnx fr da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice pm.
Do pm me whn u update.

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