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Here's part 24, another special part of this ff!!! I'm sure everyone will love this part to the core!!! :) Enjoy!!! And yea, to know more about the character of Vidya's dadi, please check the 1st post!!! Thank you!!! :)

Scene 1 ( SV in Vidya's room )
Vidya brings a cup of coffee for Sagar!!! She enters into the room and sees Sagar looking something at her computer and is smiling!!! She keeps the cup aside on a table and rushes to Sagar!!!
Vidya - Tumhe malum nahi hai ke kisi ke personal computer mein aise taak-jhaak karna acchi baat nahi hoti!!! (makes face in such a way as if she wanna hide something)
Sagar - Pata hai par agar main yeh taak-jhaak nahi karta toh yeh kaise dekhta? (smiling sooo cutely)
Vidya - Kya? (wondering what Sagar is talking about)
Sagar grabs Vidya's hand and shows her what he was looking at in the PC and was smiling!!! Vidya gets shy!!!
Sagar (all in a teasing mood) - Toh tumne mere itne saare photos download karke ek separate folder mein save kiya hai?!?! Aur folder ka title hai "love photos"!!!
Vidya (feels shy) - H-h-haann, hai, toh?
Sagar - Toh kuch nahi... aur tumhare towel pe jo likha hai woh?
Vidya (thinks, "Oh god!!! Main yeh kaise bhul gayi!!!") - Woh... actually... main... (finding no words to say)
Sagar stands up, holds Vidya's waist with his right hand, pull her towards himself!!! Vidya blushes!!!
Sagar - Tumhe peheli bar kab ehsaas hua ke tumhe mujhse pyaar hai?
Vidya - Malum nahi ke kab ehsaas hua!!! Yeh toh bas sirf ho gaya!!! (says it slowly and blushes)
Sagar - Mujhe bhi malum nahi chala ke kab tumse pyaar hua!!! Lekin aab acchi tarah se janta hoon ke mujhe tumse pyaar hai, bohot pyaar hai aur humesha rahega!!! Aur haan, mujhe bohot accha laga ke tumne iss tarah mujhe apne garib rakkha hai!!! I loved it!!! :)
Vidya smiles and blushes!!! Sagar smiles too!!! Then he holds Vidya tightly and looks at her in a warm and loving way!!! Their eyes lock!!! They come closer, Vidya blushes and suddenly she runs to the terrace!!! Sagar runs after her!!!

Scene 2 ( SV on the terrace and then back to Vidya's room )
Sagar reaches the terrace and sees Vidya sitting on the swing!!! He goes to her, sits on the swing and holds her hand!!! Vidya blushes!!! Sagar holds her chin and makes her look at him!!! Then, their eyes lock, both hug each other very tightly and closes their eyes!!! Here starts the rain!!! Sagar and Vidya feel the rain!!! Both move backwards and give huge smiles seeing the rainfall!!! Then Vidya gets up from the swing and starts to enjoy the rain!!! She starts dancing in the rain!!! Sagar is just looking at her and is smiling!!! (Here is a song sequence scene between SV) Vidya starts to sing the song, "Dekho naa from the movie Fanaa"!!! She's dancing and singing!!! Sagar is doing nothing but is just standing there, looking at his beautiful Vidya who is looking even more beautiful in the rains!!! Sagar, then, goes to her and sings with her!!! Both are dancing and singing together!!! They didn't even realize when their dancing changed into their passionate love!!! While dancing, Sagar holds Vidya's cheeks with his palms, comes closer, Vidya closes her eyes and Sagar kisses on the drops of rain on her face!!! Then, Vidya opens her eyes, comes closer to Sagar, Sagar closes his eyes and Vidya also kisses on the drops of rain on his face!!! Then, their eyes lock and they hug each other very tightly!!! Sagar, then, takes Vidya in his arms and goes to the room!!! (The song "Dekho naa" is going on) Then, he keeps his Vidya softly on the bed and sits beside her!!! Vidya smiles and blushes!!! Then, Sagar removes Vidya's ear rings and chain from her ears and neck and keeps those on the side-table!!! After that, Sagar comes closer to Vidya, Vidya closes her eyes, Sagar kisses Vidya on her cheeks, then he removes her hairs from her shoulders and kisses on her shoulders!!! Then, Vidya also comes closer to Sagar, Sagar closes his eyes and Vidya kisses on both of his cheeks softly!!! Sagar holds Vidya's dupatta and removes it from her body!!! Then, he delicately holds Vidya and makes her lie down on bed slowly!!! Sagar also lie down on her, turns off the light, in the darkness, their lips locked and their souls became one (the scene was shifted to the the window at the side of the bed where we see the beautiful rainfall)!!! <3 <3

Scene 3 ( Next morning, in Vidya' room )
It's morning, a pleasant morning for both Sagar and Vidya!!! :) Then we see both Sagar and Vidya sleeping on Vidya's bed, Vidya's head is on Sagar's chest, her hand is on his (Sagar) body and Sagar is holding Vidya with both of his hands!!! Sagar wakes up, sees Vidya innocently sleeping with him and smiles cutely!!! Suddenly, his face expression changes into sad!!! He starts thinking, "Kal raat jo kuch bhi hua uske baad kahi Vidya mujhse naraz toh nahi hai?!?! Oh god!!! Kal raat mujhse yeh kya ho gaya? Kyu khud ko rok nahi paya?!? I'm sure Vidya mujhse naraz hogi aur main uski narazgi kaise bardasht karunga!?!?! No, I can't tolerate her anger!!!" Thinking this, Sagar keeps Vidya on the other side of the bed and gets up!!! He, then, writes a note for Vidya and leaves from there!!! After a while, Vidya, in her sleepiness, puts her hand on the other side of the bed thinking Sagar over there!!! But then, she realizes that Sagar is not there!!! She wakes up!!! Her eyes searches for Sagar!!! Vidya tells, "Sagar, Sagar!!!" She finds her Sagar no where!!! Then, Vidya gets up from bed and on the side-table, she finds a note!!! She takes it on her hand and starts reading it!!! There's written, "Vidya, I'm sorry for whatever happened last night!!! And I know ke kal raat jo kuch bhi hua uske baad tum mujhse bohot gussa ho, aur hona bhi chahiye, kyuki saara galti mera tha!!! Tumhara gussa karna hi natural hai!!! Aur main tumhara gussa tolerate nahi kar sakta!!! Iss liye tumhe bina bataye main yaha se jaa raha hoon!!! I'm sorry once again!!! Love... Tumhara Sagar!!!" Reading this, Vidya gets sad!!! She tells to herself, "Tumhe galat fami ho rahi hai Sagar!!! Main tumse gussa nahi hoon!!! Kaise samjhayu tumhe!!! Uff!!!" Just then she remembers, "Oh yeah!!! Sagar toh iss waqt college mein hoga aur main bhi toh wahi jaa rahi hoon!!! Waha jaake usse ko samjha dungi!!!" :) Vidya calls Sahil!!! Sahil picks up the call!!!
Sahil - Hello, Vidya!!! Yaar kaha ho tum? Abhi tak college kyu nahi aayi? Sagar bohot pehele yaha aa chuka hai!!! Aur woh kuch udaas dikh raha tha!!! Tum dono ke bich kuch jhagra hua kya?
Vidya (thinks, "Oh toh Sagar college mein hi hai!!!") - Sahil, main ghar par hoon!!! College ke liye nikal rahi hoon!!! Tum college ke gate ke samne mera intezaar karna!!! Aur mere aur Sagar ke bich sab theek hai!!! Sagar ki udaasi ki vajah kuch aur hai!!! Don't worry!!! Main aa rahi hoon naa!!! Sab theek ho jayega!!! (Smiles)
Sahil (smiles) - Acchi theek hai!!! Jaldi ajao!!! Bye!!!
Vidya - Bye!!! (smiles)
Vidya starts getting ready for college very fast!!! She takes shower, and then wears a red colored top and black long skirt!!! Then she wears ear rings, applies perfume on her and combs her hair!!! Then, she wears the silver chain which was gifted by Sagar on the Valentine's night!!! Then, she looks at herself in the mirror, smiles and rushes to the college!!! :)

Scene 4 ( Vidya arrives at her new college, St. Martin's )
Vidya arrives at the college!!! She gets out of the car!!! Sahil sees Vidya, smiles and then he goes to her!!!
Sahil - Welcome to St. Martin's, Ms. Vidya Singhania!!! (gives a huge smile)
Vidya - Thank you!!! (smiles)
Sahil - Toh kaisa laga humara college?
Vidya - Accha hai!!! :)
Sahil - Okay!!! So now, Plan "surprise for Sagar" starts!!! Ek minute, main usse call karta hoon!!!
Vidya (laughs) - Theek hai!!!
Sahil calls Sagar!!!
Sagar - Haan Sahil, bol!!! (sad mood)
Sahil - Yaar, jaldi se college gate ke samne aaja!!! Tujhe ek nayi student se milwana hai!!! (happy mood)
Sagar - Nayi student se milkar main kya karunga? (sad)
Sahil - Ek baar mil toh sahi!!! Please, mere khatir!!!
Sagar - Yaar please mera mood bohot kharab hai, disturb maat kar!!!
Sahil - Tujhe Vidya ki kasam, aaja jaldi se yaha!!!
Sagar - Kya yaar tu bhi!!! Iss stupid baat ke liye Vidya ki kasam dedi!!!
Sahil - Yaha aa uske baad pata chalega ke yeh stupid baat hai ke nahi!!!
Sagar - Accha theek hai, aata hoon!!! (disconnects the call)
Sagar then walks towards the college gate!!!!
Sahil (to Vidya) - Kam toh ho gaya!!! Aab main jata hoon!!! Good luck for your surprise!!!
Vidya (smiles) - Thanks a lot!!!
Sahil - Dost ke liye kuch bhi!!! (smiles)
Sahil leaves from there!!! Vidya turns back and stands near her car!!! Sagar comes in front of the college gate!!! He thinks, "Kaha hai Sahil aur woh nayi student?" Then he sees Vidya's car and thinks, "Vidya ki gari yaha?" Vidya, then, turns to Sagar, smiles and tells, "Sahil toh yaha nahi hai par woh nayi student yaha hai, tumhare samne"!!! Sagar sees her and is shocked!!! After a few moments of shock, he gives a hugeee smile!!! :) Then he walks to Vidya and Vidya is standing there smiling!!! Suddenly, Sagar's face expression changes into sorrow, he stops his foot-steps!!! Then he walks away very fast from there!!! Vidya sees this and is worried!!! She starts walking fast to Sagar and couldn't talk with him!!! Sagar goes inside the boy's locker room and Vidya also goes there following Sagar!!!

Scene 5 ( SV in the college boys' locker room )
Sagar is pretending to take out something from his locker!!! Vidya enters into the boys' locker room!!!
Sagar - Vidya, tum yaha kyu aayi? Yeh boys' locker room hai!!!
Vidya - Tum mujhse aise dur dur kyu jaa rahe ho?
Sagar - Main? Nahi toh!!! (pretends to smile)
Vidya - Jhoot maat bolo, Sagar!!! (gets angry) Maine tumhara note padha tha subhe!!! Aur haan, main tumse bohot naraz hoon, lekin kal raat jo kuch bhi hua uske vajar se nahi!!! Main tumse iss liye naraz hoon, kyuki tumne kal raat humare bich huye pyaar ko galti ka naam de diya!!! Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho, Sagar?
Sagar remains silent!!! Vidya continues...
Vidya - Kal raat jo bhi hua, woh humara pyaar tha, koi galti nahi!! Par tumne... Accha theek hai, agar kal raat humare bich jo hua woh galti hi thi, toh woh galti hum dono ki thi, sirf tumhari nahi!!! Phir tumne aisa kaise soch liya ke main tumse naraz hongi!!! How can you even think of that?
Sagar - I'm sorry Vidya!!! Kal raat humare bich jo bhi hua uske baad maine socha ke tum mujhse gussa hogi!!! Aur main yeh gussa hi bardasht nahi kar sakta tha!!! Iss liye tumhe bina bataye waha se chala aaya!!!
Vidya comes closer to Sagar and holds his cheeks!!!
Vidya - Main tumse naraz nahi hoon Sagar!!! Kaise tumse naraz ho sakti hoon jaan? Don't you know that I love you a lot?!
Sagar looks at Vidya's eyes very deeply!!! After a few moments...
Sagar - I know and I love you too jaan!!!!! <3 <3 Main hi pagal tha ke maine aisa soch liya!!! I'm sorry!!!
Saying this, Sagar hugs Vidya tight and Vidya hugs him back!!! *Lagi tumse maan ki lagan song playing in the background*
Vidya - Kal raat ke baad hum dono ka pyaar aur bhi mazbut ho gaya!!! (smiles)
Sagar - Haan, aur humara pyaar humesha aisa hi rahega!!! (smiles)
After hugging for long...
Sagar - Vidya, class ka time ho gaya hai!!! Baki students yaha aate hi honge books lene ke liye!!! Tumhe abhi yaha se jana hoga!!!
Vidya - Kyu kyu... darr lag raha hai? (naughty smile)
Sagar - Darr lag raha hai par khud ke liye nahi balki tumhare liye!!! Agar kisi ne tumhe yaha dekh liya toh problem ho sakti hai tumhare liye!!!
Vidya (smiles) - Achcha theek hai, main jaati hoon!!! :)
Sagar - Ruko, main pehele dekhta hoon bahar, aas paas koi hai toh nahi!!!
Vidya - Theek hai!!! :)
Sagar goes near the door of the locker room, opens the door a little bit and sees if anyone is there nearby!!! He sees no one around!!!
Sagar - Vidya, koi nahi hai aas paas!!! Nikal lo abhi!!!
Vidya comes near the door!!!
Sagar - Bye!! Class mein milte hai!! :)
Vidya (smiles) - Bye!!
Both smile at each other, give each other a tight fast hug and Vidya leaves from there!!!

Precap : Sagar and Vidya are sitting together in the class, professor's lecture is going on and Sagar holds Vidya's hands!!! <3 <3

Part 24 ends!!! Do tell me about your likes and dislikes in this part!!! Waiting for your comments!!! Take care!!! Love ya all!!! :) <3
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was sooooo good yaar , I like all the part really , but I don't know I feel that there is something is missing and I don't know what it is but as I said it was tooooo good

i like when he told her about his photos , when they danced in the rain , their romance and I like her surprize soooooooo much it was amaizing and I like what happend after that , it was so nice yaar
Edited by khulh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khulh

It was sooooo good yaar , I like all the part really , but I don't know I feel that there is something is missing and I don't know what it is but as I said it was tooooo good

i like when he told her about his photos , when they danced in the rain , their romance and I like her surprize soooooooo much it was amaizing and I like what happend after that , it was so nice yaar


Thanks!!! 😃 Something is missing?? What's that and in which scene did you feel something is missing?? 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
maybe when he was telling her about the towel and his photos , if he told her that he like that toooo much and soooo cute and how much his love for her is
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khulh

maybe when he was telling her about the towel and his photos , if he told her that he like that toooo much and soooo cute and how much his love for her is


Arey waahh.. u gave me a nice idea!!! mere dimag mein toh yeh aaya hi nahi!!! thanks for the suggestion!!! :) and ek minute ruko, main abhi edit kar deti hoon!!! :)
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EDITED!!!! Check the last part of Scene 1 and 2!!! And tell me if you like the editing or not!!! 😃
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb yaar 👍🏼 it is soooooo beautiful , I like it soooooo much (and if you wrote in the end of scene 1 he looked in her eyes with a warm and love look it will be more beautiful 😳 😳 )
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khulh

superb yaar 👍🏼 it is soooooo beautiful , I like it soooooo much (and if you wrote in the end of scene 1 he looked in her eyes with a warm and love look it will be more beautiful 😳 😳 )


Thanks!!! and yeh lo, maine yeh bhi likh diya!!! aab khush? hehe!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya hai yeh yaar ekdum superb and fantastic I love it sooooooooo much and this for you 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi bidzz it's amazing yaar!!! this update is sooooooooooo romantic and beautifulll I loved it!!!! I'm sooorrry ke mene do din se comment nahi kiya!!!!waiting for your next update....
Love U Bidzzz....
Edited by baloSD - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !!!

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