A Contract #2- FF on Maaneet (Last part pg 113) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 27

Geet n maan were in car way to office but Maan stops the suddenly
"Maan y did u stop."
Maan then takes the car into a hotel.
"Maan........"
"Geet I'm hungry."
"even I'm"
"lets go."
Maan n Geet walks into the hotel."
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Yash was talking on mobile while walking on the road "Hi mom"

"don't worry I'm fine her."

"sorry mom ,sorry sorry sorry I just forgot to call u."

"ok I'm sorry ma."..................

Then yash had reached a signal where he has to cross the road.yash busy with his call just moved on with out even looking at the road ,then suddenly someone hold his hand and pulled him back,Yash come back with focus n was about to fall but some how controlled n then the peson who pulled him left her hand.With full of anger he turned his face to the side there the person stand n he saw a huge truck on the road passing the place where he was n then realized that if he had cross the road he would have met with the accident n that person saved him.n thinks "O he saved me." look turned towards that person n says "O so she saved me." but she was looking other side n yash could not see her face and she started to move n moved on ,yash was looking at that girl trying to see her face but could not,but as she went 2 steps he notices that her watch which she wore on left hand get stuck in the shirt buttons on right hand so yash just moved along with her and was trying very hard to look at her face all the way. By that time both reached the other side of the road (but Yash did not succeed) but suddenly that girl slipped and was about to fall ,she turned completely towards yash and fall,she caught yash's shoulders and her face was completely facing ground (even then poor yash could not she her) it looked a she was looking down and then Yash hold her on her waist n with hand other side's shoulder ( it looked like there was a straight line (yash) and a cross line about 60' angle for origin which is cutting the straight line (that girl) and Yash keeps looking at her eagerly as to know who is that girl is. Then that girl turned her face but her dupatta just fry and covered her face as soon as she turned her face.n Yash thinks "The entry of this girl is too much than an heroin in a film, since 10 mins I'm trying to look at her face, but no."Then She stood properly and pulled her dupatta down slowly, First we can see her eyes they were very beautiful ,then her nose and then her lips and then finally her complete face(She is the say girl whom yash met in the shopping mall) . then she said to Yash "Thank you".

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Maan n Geet sits at a place.

"Geet feel free n eat whatever u want n how much ever u want."

"Maan think."

"think?"

"yes bcz onces I feel free n start eating ur bank balance....."

"no.....u don't look like that."

"I do eat a lot n if u remember I did not eat anything last night also."

"I remember that is y I got u here."

Geet looks here n there n says "Maan......."

"don't worry about bill."

"how do u know?"

"I have been with u since few day n I would at least understand u that much."

listening to this Geet smile n Maan too smiles, n then waiter comes there.

"sir."

"take order from mam."

"I want puri, masala dosa, rava dosa n ........ get then first."

"Geet all those r for u."

"yes, but y r u asking like that?????"

"just like that." thinking "she was right i would have thought before offering."

"n for me vada." n waiter leaves

"u like vada......."

"no not exactly."

"then,"

"I like puri."

"puri, even I love puri, but y didn't u order it."

"just......"

both smiles n become silent.

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but yash left speechless with her beauty as well as with shock , Yash keeps holding her waist n her shoulder .Then she politely asked yash to leave her but yash does not do that n also didnot reply, he is just lost. then that girl just removes off yash's hands with focus n with irritated face and moved on and yash just kept looking at her and then she gets into a auto and left.Yash then got back to our world and said" oy!"while saying this lifted his left hand and notices her watch (broken and linked with his shir button.) n then notices rest part of watch on the ground he bends n picks it up, he then remembers n says "O this girl is the same girl ....the girl I met in the shopping mall." saying this he looks down n see his cell which fell down while holding her,"my cell," n he bends n picks it up n finds it broken n says "O no every time I meet this girl I'm losing a cell, there is danger to my cell when I meet her, i should be more careful next time i mean if at all I meet her next time." n then call a taxi n leaves.

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Maan n Geet also has their breakfast n leaves to office.

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Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
congratzzzzzz 4r new thread.........
nice update.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it n god how much does geet eat? n poor yash has to open a cell store so can keep using a new one everytime he meets the girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
this part was so short...pls update soon..tx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread 👏

And awe cute update and haha liked the hash and meera part that was so funny espcaily when he said that her entry was worser than a heroines and awe geet ordering so much and maan thinking he should have told her to eat whatever she wants anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
thats awsome one yaar...loved it !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
congrats for new thread
lovely update
but too short


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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for new thread
nice update
thanks for pm
continue soon.
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congrats 4 new thread
nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

nice update................continue soon...............

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